If that's the case, then he really needs to be careful.

"It seems that the passage to the spirit world cannot be opened for the time being. It will take at least a few days until Daisuke stops to check."

Regardless of whether this guess is correct or not, in order to ensure safety, not opening the channel is the most appropriate choice.

"You guys are not allowed to come out these few days, did you hear that?" Yang Yan ordered to the ghosts in his shadow.

Yang Yan knew they could hear them.

After speaking, he was ready to change clothes.

Even if he didn't have a good rest, Yang Yan still had to hold on through the day, otherwise his abnormal behavior might be noticed by those who cared about him.

More than 30 minutes later, Yang Yan appeared on the training ground.

Today his main thoughts will be on Ibrahimovic.

Because the energy loss in the other Pokémon's bodies is too serious, although there are energy cubes to supplement them, they can't fully recover so quickly.

The way to release energy is much more complicated than using skills, and it is also more difficult to recover.

"Yang Yan, the weather is fine today, do you want to go fishing together?"

As soon as Yohiko arrived, Kumi spotted him.

"Everyone else will go too."

The meaning of this sentence is obviously to tell Yang Yan that it is best not to refuse.

"Okay, I'll be there on time."

Two days ago, Yang Yan had just gone fishing with them, but that time no one caught their favorite Pokémon.

But this is not the purpose of fishing.

Fishing, enjoy the process, it doesn't matter if you catch it or not.

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ps: The following is a million-word testimonial, and there is a skirt number at the end.

Before I knew it, it was a million words. As a newcomer's first book, it is definitely not too much to write a million words.

I created this book on April 4st, April Fool's Day, and officially started updating it on April 1nd, and it has been more than half a year now.

As a newcomer, I really started to start the book as soon as my head was hot, which led to the poor design of the opening chapter of the novel, so the data after the first show was very poor.

Especially to subdue Ba Dadie, from the data point of view, only about 10 out of 4 people can continue to watch it after seeing it. Many people don't like this elf very much, I don't understand why.

Maybe replace Butterfly with Big Needle Bee, my current data will be much better than now.

However, I do think that at the beginning, Ba Dadie is much easier to use than Big Needle Bee.I do like Ba Dadie a bit more.The data is not good, so I can only accept it.

As a newcomer, I overlooked the frontmost plot which was my problem.

Because when I read the book myself, I don't pay much attention to the beginning part.

The main reason is that I start with 300 million characters when reading books. I subconsciously don’t think it’s important at the beginning, as long as the writing is good later on.

As a result, reality taught me hard.

Tomato is indeed a place that pays attention to the beginning. If the beginning is well written, even if the writing is bad and watery, there will be a steady stream of recommendations. If the beginning is not good, it will directly declare death.

During the period of writing the book, I also often looked at the data of other elves. I saw that there were too many books with better data than mine. Pity.

I have also seen several books, and only a few thousand have been read. Even if only a few people have read them, they are still insisting on updating. I admire this.

The sea of ​​books is ups and downs, probably so.

About the data, I will tell you about it before, but now I think it’s better to forget it. The data in my book does not change much every day. It can be said that it is on the verge of being forgotten by the system. It is symbolic every day. It's all about giving so much meaning.

I'm reading it, and I don't expect it for a long time. My only expectation now is that when the book is finished, the score will be close to 9 points, and I will be very satisfied.

Of course, there are still regrets, 100 million words, but I haven’t broken 2 in reading, and no one will believe me when I say it...

Regardless of the other books, the data has at least reached a peak, but I have never had it...

Feelings or something, let's stop here.

Next I want to talk about the part about the plot.

Many people in the comments said that this book is about the Holy Mother, because the protagonist let Huang Mao and them go.

When I was writing about them, I actually wrote a lot, just to show that they are not the kind of people who will make money and kill.It made a certain foreshadowing for the protagonist not to kill them later.

Killing people is easy to say on the lips, and easy to comment on book reviews, but the protagonist is in reality, killing people is not so easy to pass in the heart.

Unless it's a pervert, then pretend I didn't say it.

Especially since the main character just killed one.

If he didn't do it himself, he would hand them over to Heiye.

How dangerous it is in the woods at night, needless to say.

As for them being alive, that is their luck.

Mainly, of course, I, the author, need them alive.

Because the protagonist would have visited the black market before going to Kanto, and those two people still have a relatively important role in it.

At the same time, that episode was also used to pave the way for the destruction of Yijiang Town later.

I think this kind of plot arrangement will be better and less abrupt.

However, I was a little anxious because I was making my first show and my grades were not good, so I accelerated the process of the main line and went directly to Kanto, and I cut off this branch line.

Thinking about it now, I feel a little regretful.

This is my immature lesson as a newcomer.

As for the other plots, I think they are well designed.

I always feel that what I write is not fanfiction, because if I strip off the skin of Pokémon and replace it with fantasy, it can be said that this is a pure animal-mongering novel.

Because of this, I need to spend a lot of time thinking about the plot.

Other elves and humanities, casually follow the anime's travel route, as long as they make a little change, they don't need to use their brains, and they can still get a lot of praise.

This kind of book, I thought it was interesting the first time I read it, but I couldn't read it at all after reading the second one.

So I don't allow myself to write this kind of things that I don't want to read again after reading it. If I want to write something of my own, it's like I'm practicing for writing the next book.

Along the way, I have received encouragement and abuse. At the beginning, I might have been affected by these things, but now I can face it calmly.

Where it is written well or not, I know for myself.

Whether those bad reviews are right or wrong, I don't bother to explain anything.

It can only be said that the author and the reader see things differently.

Just stay as you like.

Of course, those who like this book, I also thank you for your support.

Finally, following everyone's suggestions, I built a skirt, 574634039.

I think those who can see the million words here are the ones who really like this book, and it is interesting for everyone to be in a group.

By the way, I also want to see how many loyal readers of this book there are (? ̄▽ ̄)?

Chapter 457 Unusual fishing incident

At 2 o'clock in the afternoon, Yang Yan came to the deck on time.

"Yang Yan, this way!"

Before he saw anyone, Yang Yan heard Gao Liu's high-pitched shouts.

"How is it, Yang Yan, are you awake? Do you want to lie down and rest?"

After Yang Yan walked over, Gao Liu started joking again.

Gao Liu and the others already knew that he didn't have a good rest last night. After all, Yang Yan's condition in the morning was really not good.

"Thank you for your concern. I just finished my rest, and I am very sober now." Yang Yan took out his fishing rod and said with a smile, "Why don't we compete later to see who catches more."

"Compare, compare, who is afraid of whom!" Gao Liu was not afraid at all.

"What is the comparison between the two of you who are the least skilled people? No matter how you compare, it's just the difference between the last one and the second last one."

Kumi, who was on the side, interrupted with a smile.

"Compare with me if you have the ability, and see who is stronger today!"

"Okay, I'll compete with you, Yang Yan, you too!"

Gao Liu's own promise was not enough, and he unceremoniously dragged Yang Yan along.

"You might as well add me, I also want to see how my luck is today."

It was Yaki who spoke.

After that dinner, the relationship between them eased a lot.

Yaki did not give Yang Yan any feeling against him, and Yaki was always polite, everything was as he promised, and everything was based on their opinions, so everyone gradually accepted him.

As for Rina, after this period of contact, Yang Yan felt that she was just a shy girl.

Apart from being different in training and in battle, she's really like a shy and shy girl next door at other times.

This kind of girl is easy to gain the favor of people around her.

Therefore, Kumi told Yang Yan in private that she suspected that what happened that day was all caused by Yaki and had nothing to do with Rina.

Even Rina himself was tricked by Yaki's "self-assertion" behavior.

So Kumi has sympathy for Rina.

Of course, it may be that there are only three girls among them, so they are naturally closer.

This can be seen from the positions of several of them.

Girls on the left and boys on the right.

Although Yang Yan came last, he was between Takayanagi and Yaki.

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