And this is what I want to explain in advance when writing the final battle.
I want to write about the final battle as exciting as possible and make it the biggest climax of this article so far!
(If the writing is not good, please forgive me. After all, even a mature author cannot guarantee that he can write war scenes and plots well, let alone a new author like me. This is my first attempt to write these, so I just I can try my best, that’s all.)
This plot of the Mountain and Sea Team is strictly a plot of Machiavellian war.Therefore, it is best to write in a group portrait style.
But there is a disadvantage in writing this way, it requires a lot of words.
As a fanfic, this book already has a lot of words. If I were to write it using group portraits, I would probably have written more than 220 million words at this point.
As a fanfic, it's too slow.
So in order to reduce the number of words, I can only write in a way that puts the perspective entirely on the protagonist. I will write whatever the protagonist sees.
I even cut some branches for this purpose, such as the part about attacking the water fleet base. The original plan was to write the attack on the third base as a small climax, but in order to end the plot as soon as possible, I finally chose to delete it.
However, through the dialogue between the protagonist and Kodera, you should be able to see that I dug a lot of holes, laid a lot of foreshadowings, and designed many lines.
All of these will be completely detonated in the final battle, which is also the basis for what I want to write about.
I’m not sure how many words I can write this plot in, but it should be quite a few.
Please don't worry, I will try my best to finish it during the extra update period. (If it’s not finished…it’s not finished ( ̄▽ ̄))
Among many authors, many try to add as much water as possible in order to increase the number of words.Authors like me who not only do not add water, but also find ways to reduce the number of words, even at the expense of deleting the plot and sacrificing the brilliance, are certainly very rare.
In fact, if it weren't for the fact that I was writing a fanfic, I definitely wouldn't do this.You can’t write too many words in fan fiction like you would in fantasy, otherwise people will think it’s very watery before they even click on it.
This is a stereotype that is hard to change.
Of course, I feel proud that I have never had any trouble writing this. (Although there is no water, there are already some negative reviews due to too many words, and there will definitely be more and more in the future. The reality is so helpless.)
Another thing I am more proud of is naturally the construction of the elf world.
I dare to say that the setting of this book, the underlying operating structure of the world, and the development logic of the story are not flawed at all. At least they are smooth and not broken.
In terms of setting and world structure, I am confident that I can say that it exceeds more than 9% of elf writing.
The story may not be written well enough, but there is no useless writing along the way and it is very smooth.
The protagonist of some books may be doing this today and doing that tomorrow. Readers may look a little confused. This is actually because the author has no outline.
The outline of this book has been very clear until now.
In order to design the outline, supplement settings, and statistics, I have used 2/3 of a thick notebook as big as a laptop keyboard, and it is densely filled with words.
These are proof of my hard work along the way.
Sweat may not necessarily water beautiful flowers, but it can help you appreciate the scenery you have never seen before and reap the growth you deserve in the process of persistence.
This is just a gift to me and to everyone who is working hard for something.
Chapter 857
Miss Ju stood on the most important high platform, behind her were Yang Yan and Yoshino on the left and right.
As soon as the three of them appeared, the noisy crowd immediately became silent.
"Everyone, I think everyone has a certain understanding of the current situation. It is a last resort to gather everyone here this time. After this battle is won, I guarantee that everyone will benefit from it!"
"Will win, win!"
As soon as Ms. Ju finished speaking, there was a uniform shout from below, which shows that in the face of the overall interests of the Shanhai team, every member has the same belief.
"This is the Shanhai team. They use brainwashing to control all members. The Shanhai team has not betrayed anyone so far. It really deserves to be the enemy that Koji always wanted to get rid of!" Yang Yan was calm on the surface, but he was deeply shocked in his heart. arrive.
"In the next period of time, the person behind me will be the highest person in charge of this base. I hope everyone can treat him like me!" Saying this, Miss Ju pulled Yang Yan to her side.
"who is this?"
"I don't know, do you know?"
"I don't know either..."
Miss Ju's sudden words made the originally orderly crowd lower their voices and start discussing in low voices.
Yang Yan knew that it was his turn to play at this time, so he didn't care about the comments below, and said calmly: "My name is Siwu, and you may not know me. With your qualifications and abilities, you may not necessarily convince me." , but it doesn’t matter, I always like to speak with strength, if anyone thinks that strength is stronger than me, just go forward and give it a try!”
After finishing speaking, Yang Yan walked to the side and threw 6 elf balls directly. In an instant, 6 elite-level monsters appeared on the stage, including Mayula, Electric Shock Beast, Smelly Mud, Double Bomb Gas, Desert Dragonfly, and Devourer.
Swallowing Beast is one of Takeshi's two surviving Pokémon, and the other is a circle bear.
During his return to Qinglian Island, Yang Yan finally had time to take them both for his own use.
Feeling the powerful aura of Yangyan Pokémon, everyone below unconsciously gasped.
You must know that almost all combatants have been transferred to the battlefield, and their strength is not enough at all, so it is impossible for anyone who can fight Yang Yan.
He just wanted to use such a simple and rude way to shut up the people below.
Seeing that everyone was afraid to speak again, Miss Ju smiled softly: "Since everyone has no objection, please remember what I just said!"
After finishing speaking, Miss Ju took Yang Yan and Fang Ye and left together.
Go back to the door of Miss Ju's room.
Miss Ju pointed to the side and said, "Yang Yan, that's your room over there, you can live there when you come to the base."
Yang Yan nodded: "Yes!"
Before entering the door, she looked at Fangye and said, "Let's take a rest today, and we will set off tomorrow morning!"
"Yes!"
After Miss Ju entered, Yoshino left without looking at Yang Yan, and went back to her own room.
Yang Yan did not go back, but left again, preparing to go to the warehouse below.
When I came to the hall, there were still many people who were still there.
Seeing Yang Yan's sudden return, everyone got up and stood aside respectfully.
This is the benefit of great power.
"Big... lord!"
Some people saluted Yang Yan nervously.
Because they didn't know Yang Yan and Yang Yan's temper before, so they didn't dare to speak casually, fearing that if they accidentally said something wrong, it would arouse Yang Yan's anger.
Yang Yan doesn't care how these people treat him, after all, it won't take long for these people to have nothing to do with him.
He waved his hand: "You don't have to be afraid of me, as long as you behave peacefully and don't cause trouble, let's go!"
Leaving here, Yang Yan went straight down.
Soon, he came to the 4th floor.
"The last time I left, this was still a laboratory with many people. I never wanted to come back, but no one was there."
Of course, people left, but some research equipment stayed.
Yang Yan knew that it was specially reserved for him by Miss Ju, which Ju Xiao had told him just now.
Now the entire 4th floor belongs to his own laboratory.
And the lower warehouse, besides Miss Ju, only he has the authority to open it.
Continuing to go down, Yang Yan came to a heavy metal gate.
After taking out the ID card of the Shanhai team and swiping it on the groove, and entering a series of passwords, the door slowly opened with a creak.
As far as the eye can see, there are various living materials piled up like a mountain.
After all, there are so many people in the base who need to live, how can we not prepare more?
However, Yang Yan could still see that there were metal shelves in the innermost part of the warehouse, and every row on them was neatly filled with Poké Balls.
"Those should be fairies!"
Yang Yan walked over quickly, picked up one at random, and clicked on the data panel.
【Elf: Pippi】
……
"really!"
Yang Yan looked over excitedly, and picked out a few more for confirmation, and finally confirmed that they were all fairies.
"10, 20, 30..."
Yang Yan began to count, and finally found that there are not too many, a total of 2400 fairies of various types!
"It's amazing!"
This number far exceeded Yang Yan's expectations, so he couldn't help but be surprised.
"The Shanhai team can collect so many Pokémon, largely because I gave the information earlier, so that they can go ahead of others!"
Yang Yan smiled "shamelessly" and attributed the credit to himself.
At this moment, he was extremely excited, because in his eyes, these fairies already belonged to him!top novel
"They will fill in the last missing piece of their fairy breeding house!"
"Hold on, hold on!"
Yang Yan kept taking deep breaths, trying to suppress his urge to pack up and take away these goblins as much as possible.
He kept telling himself that Miss Ju didn't leave, and the time hadn't come yet.
After finally recovering his emotions, Yang Yan closed the door and left.
……
Just as Yang Yan was lying on the bed, waiting with great anticipation for the arrival of the next day, an unexpected guest suddenly came outside the base.
After this person came, he was immediately called into his room by Miss Ju who received the news.
About half an hour later, the person hurriedly disappeared into the sea under the darkness of night.
In the room, Miss Ju was completely sleepless at the moment.
She frowned and walked back and forth in the room.
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