Normally I update every other day at the very least, but I've found a major flaw with this as I'm trying to transition to the war. I need to think further ahead instead of just 1 or 2 chapters because I keep going back to change little details to match the current chapters. (Many of which I know I'll miss)

One of the bigger mistakes I've made was Caleb's personality, which I decided to chalk up to his own personal reflections and decision to change on his own. Another was the generals from the Alliance, they make an appearance, 1 of them seems to be important, then nothing. Where did they go?

In a nutshell, gonna need a day or two to flowchart everything as right now I have like 5 different documents of notes, characters, and plot lines. I think if I work off of one it will help me maintain a better plot pace as right now it feels like it's still warming up even though we're already halfway through the 3rd volume.

On a side note: I rejected the offer to go premium, this is my first baby and I want everyone to see it. Halo Master Chief Collection sucks with just Halo Reach so I won't be distracted until Halo 1,2, or 3 gets released. (Every single official matchmaking game is just DMR vs. DMR, boring as heck)

I'll remove this chapter once I post a new one, I'll be trying to bundle them more now since I found if I keep writing when I'm on a roll it's better than stopping because I finished a chapter.

@GD_Cruz, you never told me yet which side you want your team on, Dean seems like he'd be from the Hegemony so I might just put them there. (Will have to age them a few years since enlistment age is 18)