The Forbidden World

First of all, thanks to Bubble (later omitted) book review.

In this single chapter, let’s talk about the main issues mentioned in the book review.

The number of female owners.

At first, it was a bit too greedy, so I didn’t control it in quantity. With the idea of ​​not letting go of it, I collected a lot of female protagonists. When I realized this problem, I was already a sword. There is only one.

However, it is too late.

Later, in the Oriental article, it was a broken jar. Since it was no longer possible to look back, the forced breaking was in vain, but instead looked awkward, so he could only continue on this road.

Even if it is a dead end.

Although there are reasons for being too fond of many roles in the East.

The problem of portraying the heroine.

As the book friend said, I have made many attempts to portray the heroine's image, including Lola's self-struggle between the two identities and other content.

But obviously these attempts ended in failure, and I am sorry that this has not been done well.

Among them is the impact caused by the excessive number of female hosts, but unfortunately this point can no longer be reversed.

Other protagonist shaping issues.

This is my problem.

Perhaps because of the over-emphasis on the plot, there are also too many characters. In terms of shaping the character of their respective characters, there are indeed very few pens and inks.

As for the issue of offending people... Don't worry about this, not many people read the book on the street.

Recent play issues.

The recent situation is really bad, I will adjust as soon as possible. If the status adjustment does not come back, I will finish and prepare a new book as the book friend said.

Thanks to the readers who can see this single chapter, for their continuous support.

Many thanks.