This Plug-in is Too Middle School

I've seen everyone's comments...sorry.

In fact, I wrote 1,900 words at 12:10 in the second chapter, but after reading the comments, I thought about it, and I feel that the second chapter may still be considered boring. I haven't gotten it out yet, so sorry.

For a long time, I felt that I couldn't control the story. The most important thing is that I didn't seem to know which parts of the writing were interesting and which parts were not very interesting. .

In the recent nine-month update, I have often pondered carefully and the response has been mediocre, but the occasional part has been evaluated... Slowly, I began to lack confidence in the route and content I chose, and then there was infinite hesitation and deletion. The outline is regularly trimmed, and in order to speed up, the entire story line that has been buried has been deleted, and the speed of coding has dropped again and again.

But... it seems that the result is even worse...

Especially the part of the gate of the dead country that dragged on for a long time... At the beginning of this book, I was inexperienced. It was supposed to be the first small dungeon, but it designed a problem that can only be solved by high basic combat power, so I had to go into it infinitely. Stuff things, draw power to complete the story.

As a result, the design framework is too many and too messy, and I have the habit of digging holes as much as possible. As a result, the things I want to explain are too complicated. I always feel that I need to explain it completely, and I often cannot control the rhythm and detail, so… …

I'm sorry, my ability is not enough... But I really don't, and I can't mean to deliberately disgust everyone. I definitely hope to be able to tell this story better than anyone else. I can only say... Sorry, it's a problem of 鱻.

I'm sorry, but the story I wrote was not good enough to disappoint everyone. As for today's second chapter... I'll try my best to make up the last 100 words. Anyway, I'll post it first, so don't let the waiter wait in vain, but... it may be difficult to satisfy everyone... sorry.

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