This wizard only wants to take students
Sorry, failed
I hesitated for several days, but I still made this decision, and I feel sorry for the dozens of brothers who are still pursuing my studies. However, the increasingly serious CAV and the increasingly urgent schedule made me finally make this decision.
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Let’s summarize some of the problems in this book (I hope to use them in the next book)
This book... should be a model of traffic that has not been caught. On the one hand, it is because it is my first time to write a book, and my grasp of the rhythm is really a bit slow. The opening 30 chapters were polished repeatedly before starting the book. I can still keep it, but after I finish the work and save the manuscript, I gradually have no time to polish it due to the daily coding.
Another issue is the outline. Before I started the book, I wrote an outline for myself. However, after I tore it down and rebuilt it several times during the process, the outline gradually became very fragmented and loose. By the time I wrote the dream mezzanine plot, the outline was completely useless. Dropped...it felt like the story was directly out of my control.
I feel that the outline may not be as simple as I imagined. Although the outline of the story line looks relatively clear, I can feel the paleness of the outline when using it. Some plots or climaxes that are very good in my mind, I write It came out turned into very crumbly stuff...
In addition, this book also has some problems in terms of character description. When describing the characters, I didn't make any preparations, which resulted in the character template being relatively pale and not very likable. In the final analysis, I didn't make sufficient preparations.
Take your time... I still like to write something, but next time I open a book, I will be more calm. At least I will sort out the outline and other things before starting the book, and then check the information. At least Figure out the details of the world view and the outline clearly.
When I was looking for information for this book, I read some social science books about wizards and occult books. Although I didn't use them in this book, I felt that there were a lot of interesting things in them.
For example, the relationship between witches (witch sacrifices), horned gods and devils, as well as the religious invasion relationship between the witch-horned god system and Catholicism. The horned gods were stigmatized as devils, and the invading gods became orthodox; and The "potion" cooked by witches is actually dark cuisine, as well as their elf companions and the sacredness of salt...
However, I don’t know much about these things yet. I am still taking the time to read medieval history. Let me study more and maybe some of the ideas in this book can be reproduced in another form.
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