Tokyo underground city

Today, I finally revised the previous content completely. Considering the reading experience of old readers, I will roughly write down the previous revisions and confirm with you.

Because the first volume is mostly public chapters and was revised relatively early, I won’t mention it for now. Old readers basically know it (those who don’t know have already run away).

The main modification in the second volume is the part about "The Reincarnation of Original Nightmare", which is basically all cut off; in addition, the branch content of the movie part, including "Marilla's small climax", has been removed. The purpose is Highlight the main line and strengthen the sense of rhythm.

There are also some shaping of the opening part of Hara Yumu, mainly the [Maid Maid’s Upload Channel].

The main modifications in the third volume are the shaping of the "Werewolf Kingdom's Culture", and the main changes are those of "Saint King Wu Wang Wen Wang".

The fourth volume is similar to the first two volumes [details on sword theory, psychic powers, etc.], and there is also [the small dungeon of Tianshui Pavilion]. This was originally intended to highlight that "small dungeons are not just "The protagonist has", so it was conceived, but the pacing was so bad that it was deleted.

Now the opening content of the fourth volume should become very concise. The colorful deer and the following part are temporarily modified because the pace is too tight. We will make adjustments after seeing the complete completion of the fourth volume.

After streamlining most of the settings and rhythm, I will try my best to shift the creative focus back to the characters and storyline.

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In addition to the above plot deletions, there are also some hidden settings.

Mainly the following points:

[Professional settings], including planeswalkers, cursed swordsmen, etc., have been deleted. From now on, there will only be professional constructs and no professional characteristics.

This is considered the most heavily and thoroughly deleted part of the main plot.

The level settings of "Abnormal Body", that is, those of "Music", "Geometry" and the Yeleway (No. 1) forward base, these parts still exist, but they are hidden. Similar ones include London Underground and Blue The Bridge Expedition and the rest were deleted relatively early and became background stories.

Regarding [Infected Person No. 3] related to dirty species, I feel that the way of expressing it is not very good, so I have deleted it.

[Yaksha Armor], the main plot is too redundant, so I hid it.

The last thing is [Login to the Mysterious Log], which is also hidden, hidden under the astrological platform.

This should be the main deleted content. Since it is hidden, it will probably not be fully displayed.

It will probably seep out later.