Open the door, there is another world

Page 217

Li Qing and Yuigahama Yui walked over and sat down, and Yuigahama Yui started talking to Yukinoshita Yukino, talking about the interesting things that happened in the class. Originally, Yukinoshita Yukino didn't care about this, but because today Yuigahama Yui was talking about what happened after Li Qing came to the class, Yukinoshita Yukino listened carefully and asked some questions from time to time. It was also the first time that Yuigahama Yui received so much feedback, so she spoke more vigorously.

The two of them were chatting there, and ended up ignoring Li Qing, who was the center of their topic.

Li Qing shook his head in amusement, not caring much about it. He went to the cabinet on the wall and found the cup and black tea in it. There was also a kettle on the table next to it, which contained freshly boiled water. It was just boiled when Yukinoshita Yukino came. Li Qing put the black tea bag in the cup and brewed it with boiling water. Soon the aroma of black tea filled the air. He brewed three cups in one go, brought two cups in front of the two people sitting there, and drank one cup himself slowly.

"Thank you." Yuigahama Yui thanked.

Li Qing smiled and shook his head: "You're welcome."

"The materials are all Yukino's, so if anyone should be thanked, it should be Yukino." Li Qing said again.

Yukinoshita Yukino took a sip and said, "It's a good brew."

"Thank you for the compliment." Li Qing smiled.

Yuigahama Yui blinked her eyes, looked at Li Qing and then at Yukinoshita Yukino, are they already just calling each other by name? Are they already in that kind of relationship? Her eyes became bright, and her searching gaze kept going towards Li Qing and Yukinoshita Yukino, trying to find the red thread entangled between the two. She was ready to try it, but after looking around, she couldn't see it, and then she couldn't help but sigh.

Are you overthinking it?

"Yukino, is there anything fun?" Li Qing asked.

Yukinoshita Yukino: “No.”

"Boring school life." Li Qing sighed.

Yukinoshita Yukino said calmly: "School life is like this, basically you experience the same things every day."

Li Qing laughed: "This reminds me of a saying."

"What?" Yukinoshita Yukino asked casually.

Li Qing smiled and said: "Perhaps every day we go through is a series of miracles."

These words made Yukinoshita Yukino stunned for a moment, and then she pondered over them in her mind. Suddenly, she felt that these words were a bit lingering. These daily experiences every day are taken for granted, but sometimes they are unexpected. It is indeed a bit like a series of miracles.

"Where did you hear this?" asked Yukinoshita Yukino.

Li Qing replied: "I saw it in anime."

Yukinoshita Yukino: "..."

She didn't know what to say, and she felt a little stupid for thinking like that.

"Don't be speechless. Who says there can't be great truths in anime?" Li Qing shook his head and said, "Any work that wants to be recognized by people needs to have its own spiritual connotation. I think what you said makes a lot of sense. Although daily life does look the same, it is something we have experienced, and everyone's daily life is different. The combination of things experienced every day is the product of miracles."

"Miracles are not so cheap." Yukinoshita Yukino said unhappily.

Li Qing shrugged. "It's a miracle that I can live peacefully every day. I saw a news report before. A college student was waiting for the bus quietly at the bus stop. Then an air conditioner unit fell from the sky and killed him. So it's a miracle that we can live our daily lives as usual day after day!"

"He was crushed to death?" Yuigahama Yui exclaimed: "Really?"

"Of course." Li Qing said.

Yuigahama Yui blinked her eyes and said, "So unlucky?"

"I'm just so unlucky." Li Qing nodded.

Yukinoshita Yukino sighed, "These are only a minority."

"I know, so I also find it absurd." Li Qing shook his head and said, "There was also a news report about a man who went out to eat barbecue and boasted, but then the barbecue restaurant exploded with a bang and everyone was killed. I also find this kind of thing absurd. I just feel that there are too many inexplicable deaths in this world."

"That was all caused by the irresponsibility of the person in charge." said Yukinoshita Yukino.

Li Qing nodded: "So they all got punished."

Then he sighed again: "But it's useless to be punished. The dead cannot be resurrected."

"So don't be irresponsible." said Yukinoshita Yukino.

Li Qing nodded and said "hmm".

Then he laughed again: "But I think we've gone off topic."

It has indeed gone off topic. We were clearly discussing whether our daily lives are a series of miracles, but now we are discussing those tragedies in society that were caused by the irresponsibility of those in charge. I don't know how far this topic has gone off topic.

"You were the one who brought it up first." said Yukinoshita Yukino.

Li Qing nodded and laughed: "It seems so!"

At this moment, there was a sudden knock on the door. The three people in the room looked towards the door, and Yukinoshita Yukino said, "Come in."

A fat man wearing a windbreaker and with long silver-gray hair tied into a ponytail walked in.

"General Swordsman appears!" The fat guy posed as soon as he came in.

As a result, none of the three people in the room expressed their opinions, and the air fell into silence. General Jianhao couldn't pose any more, so he clenched his fist and coughed in front of his mouth, and then he made a pose of drawing his sword again: "General Jianhao! Come on!"

"that……"

Yuigahama Yui raised her hand, and the Swordsman General turned around and said, "Hmm?"

"Is there anything I can help you with?" Yuigahama Yui asked.

General Jianhao laughed wildly: "Good question!"

"It's too noisy." Yukinoshita Yukino said, and looked over with cold eyes.

The swordsman general trembled like a quail, and then Yukinoshita Yukino's cold voice sounded again: "It's polite to introduce yourself first."

"Yes." General Jianhao nodded quickly, his voice as quiet as it could be.

Yukinoshita Yukino: "The voice is too quiet."

"Yes!" He responded quickly and loudly, but the tone suddenly became smaller halfway through and turned into a suitable pitch.

Then he started pointing his finger, and after a while he said, "Um... my name is... my name is Zaimokuza Yoshiki..."

"Yes, Zaimokuza-san." Yukinoshita Yukino nodded: "What are you doing here?"

Zaimokuza no longer had the high-spirited feeling he had when he pushed open the door just now. Now he has completely become a socially anxious person, staring at his toes. However, a fat man like this doesn't look cute at all. However, he still said the reason why he came here: "I heard that people's wishes can be fulfilled here..."

"Let me correct you. It's not about fulfilling people's wishes, it's about giving people the ability to fulfill their own wishes." said Yukinoshita Yukino.

Although she had said before that she didn't intend to continue with this matter, now that the person had come to her for help, Yukinoshita Yukino still didn't drive him out.

Zaimokuza nodded quickly: "That's what I want!"

"So what is your commission?" asked Yukinoshita Yukino.

Zaimokuza quickly said, "I want you to help give me advice on my novel so that I can write a novel that can be published."

"A novel?" Yukinoshita Yukino nodded.

Yuigahama Yui also asked curiously: "What novel is it?"

Zaimokuza: "It's a light novel."

"Light novels? I read light novels too!" Yuigahama Yui said with a smile, and then asked with a smile: "Where is the novel you wrote? Didn't you bring it with you?"

"I brought it!" Zaimokuza nodded quickly and ran out the door.

Soon a large pile of novel manuscripts was brought in and placed on the table in front of him: "That's it!"

"Is it still printed out these days?" Li Qing complained.

Zaimokuza bowed: "Thank you for your help!"

"Yeah." Yukinoshita Yukino nodded and picked up a chapter of the manuscript to read.

The same goes for Yuigahama Yui. Li Qing also picked up a chapter at random and read it. Although it was not coherent, some aspects of the writing style could be seen.

For example, the choice of words and sentence structure.

Li Qing read it sentence by sentence, but didn't understand the plot, because there was no plot in it, and all the settings were the same. He only saw the person who should be the protagonist in front say something about the Dragon Flame Burst Greatsword, and then there were paragraphs of introductions, introducing what the function of this move was, when the protagonist obtained it, and what the formation principle of this move was. An entire page was written before the introduction even started.

"..."

Li Qing has read Oregairu, so he knows the shortcomings of Zaimokuza's novels, because they are all mentioned in the original work, but he didn't know that Zaimokuza's novels would be so headache-inducing. The plot direction is too abstract, even worse than a diary. It should be a climax where the protagonist shows his power and defeats the enemy to let the readers vent their emotions, but instead a long section of settings comes here. It is really impossible to read.

But there are still two points, that is, be very serious.

You can feel Zaimokuza's enthusiasm from between the lines. Although I haven't read much, but from the detailed settings we can know that Zaimokuza has thought a lot about the setting of this move, and the setting is very complete, which is enough to prove that Zaimokuza is serious about this novel. But to be honest, his seriousness is in the wrong place. He is too serious in places that do not need to be serious, so his novel seems very long and there is no attraction, which makes people unable to read it at all.

Li Qing randomly checked other pages and found that it was indeed the case.

Yuigahama Yui has stopped reading the novel, because it is completely different from the light novels she has read before. She can get into the light novels she has read before and can feel sad or happy about the plots, but the one written by Zaimokuza is completely different. She only felt pain in it, not from the plot, but from the words between the lines. She could not read a single word. This novel is completely unattractive.

Yukinoshita Yukino also frowned and looked up at Zaimokuza: "Zaimokuza-san, first of all, your grammar is fine."

"Grammar?" Zaimokuza asked.

Yukinoshita Yukino nodded: "I failed Chinese."

Zaimokuza felt like he was stabbed in the chest.

"There's also the problem of English. The way of using English is completely wrong." Yukinoshita Yukino said again.

Zaimokuza felt like he was stabbed in the back again, because those English names were his confidence, he lacked a lot of information to give his moves those cool English names, so he felt very cool, but now he was told that he was completely wrong, you can imagine how much of a blow this was to him.

"There are also various long introductions, which give people a headache when reading them." Yukinoshita Yukino said again.

Zaimokuza was stabbed again, because this was also where he was confident. He felt that telling readers about his own settings was a plus, but now it was rejected.

"Yeah, it gives people a headache." Yuigahama Yui also nodded.

Zaimokuza no longer wanted to talk. What he thought were plus points turned out to be minus points. This was really frustrating.

Li Qing watched this scene with a smile, and then said: "But it also has its advantages."

"What are the advantages?" Zaimokuza asked quickly.

He was so devastated that he couldn't even raise his head. At this moment, he needed an advantage to boost his morale, so Li Qing's words came at the right time.

"At least he's serious." Li Qing said.

Zaimokuza was stunned for a moment: "Seriously?"

Is this an advantage?

Li Qing nodded: "I can feel your enthusiasm. You must have been very serious when writing this novel, which is why you wrote so many things and these settings are so detailed. So as long as you keep this serious attitude, you will definitely be able to write a novel that can be published in the future."

"Really?" Zaimokuza's eyes lit up.

Yukinoshita Yukino also nodded thoughtfully. From these words, one can indeed see Zaimokuza's seriousness.

So Yukinoshita Yukino also said: "If you work harder, you will succeed."

"I will definitely work hard!" Zaimokuza said quickly.

Li Qing smiled and said, "But before that, go buy some best-selling light novels and see how others write them. Otherwise, if you work hard in the wrong direction, it will all be in vain. This is your most important task at this stage!"

Zaimokuza nodded quickly: "I will."

Zaimokuza left with his long work in his arms.

"Another commission has been completed." Yuigahama Yui said with a smile.

Yukinoshita Yukino hummed, and Li Qing asked, "Do you have many commissions?"

Yuigahama Yui: "Not often! This is the first commission I've ever received."

"Then what do you say?" Li Qing said helplessly.

Yuigahama Yui chuckled and said, "Slip of the tongue! Slip of the tongue!"

Li Qing shook his head helplessly, and suddenly the door was knocked again.

"Please come in." Yukinoshita Yukino said.

Then a cute boy walked in: "Um... is this the service club?"

"This is the Service Club." Yukinoshita Yukino nodded.

Just when I wanted to say something else, Yuigahama Yui's voice rang out again: "Ayaka? Why are you here?"