Under One Person, Mountain and Sea Painting Demon

"Sure enough, I was right. Someone really succeeded in entering the crack..." A deep and hoarse voice suddenly sounded, echoing throughout the world!

"You are……"

"what?!"

Seeing the person in front of him, You Fang's eyes widened, and he immediately showed surprise...

A guy with a baseball cap, a mustache, and a vertical scar on the left side of his mouth, isn't this the man who has always been at odds with Wang Ye and is suspected of mastering the "Daluo Dongguan"?

"Scar Man"!

The most mysterious guy in the plot of "Under One Person", who comes and goes without a trace, can possess puppets, crack Fenghou Qimen's chaotic golden watch, and set ambushes in the sea. His methods are extremely strange.

Almost everyone suspected that he was Gu Jiting, one of the thirty-six thieves. After realizing the "Daluo Cave Observation", he disappeared due to some "side effects".

What is the "gap" he is talking about?

Could it be this "Ruins of Time"?

So he really mastered the "Daluo Dongguan"?

How can you come in here at will?

Just as You Fang was stunned and had countless questions in his mind, the scarred man suddenly narrowed his eyes and leaned forward:

"Hey, it seems like you don't have much time left, so I'll make it short. You're the first person I've met in all these years who can get into the gap, which proves that you're gifted..."

"If you want to learn 'Daluo Dongguan', come here again. I need a successor and a helper. I will wait for you here for the next period of time!"

As soon as the scarred man finished speaking, everything began to blur. The sun and the moon in Youfang's eyes gradually dimmed, and he also withdrew from the "Ruins of Time" and returned to reality.

"Daluo Cave View..."

Looking at the empty space in front of him, You Fang murmured to himself. He didn't expect that he would meet the scarred man at this time and experience such an adventure.

However, now was not the time to think about these things. He shook his head and cheered himself up. Although his body was extremely weak at this moment, his eyes were bright.

Then, he opened the "cave heaven" again, took out a scroll, and with the help of the only remaining reserve of Qi in the "cave heaven", he printed the scroll on his back and then disappeared.

This is the new trump card he got a few days ago...

It was also a surprise he prepared for Qu Tong!

(End of this chapter)

Chapter 77 Remarks on the launch

2023-10-23

This week's follow-up was almost successful and I didn't PK Sanjiang, which was quite sudden. It will be on the shelves tomorrow.

The release time is 12 noon tomorrow, so you don’t have to wait tonight, it will be updated tomorrow at noon.

It's just that, according to reason, I should have updated the book on the day it goes online, but since time is really tight and I'm not prepared, I will first update two chapters tomorrow, and I will try my best to update more frequently starting from the day after tomorrow.

Whether it's 6000 a day, 8000 a day or a day, I will do my best to make sure I'm well fed. However, I do have tendonitis recently, and my hands are not very strong. If I make less someday, I hope you can forgive me.

……

……

After talking about the update, let’s talk about this book.

To be honest, this is the best book I have read so far, and it is also the book that best suits my preferences and personality.

I am very clear that this book is not a pleasant one and the pace is certainly not fast. It is not that I don't know how to write. I have written fast-paced pleasant stories with an average of 1400 words, so I have some experience. But I did not choose that for this book.

the reason is simple……

The "Under One Person" that I know is not a "fast-paced and refreshing comic"!

Of course, this doesn’t mean that the pace of fan fiction has to be the same as the original work. After all, this is online literature. For example, many of the successful fan fictions of Dead Sea of ​​Fire are fast-paced and exciting.

I have also read quite a few of the fan fictions of "Under One Person" on Tomato and QQ Reading. Basically, without exception, they are all templates of fast-paced and exciting novels.

Regarding this issue, I have also discussed with a big name in fan fiction. His experience is that the originality of fan fiction should stick to the story line of the original work, being close yet not close, intertwining with each other, and taking into account both rhythm and excitement.

I totally agree!

But there is a big problem with the fan fiction of "Under One Person", and that is that the story of the original work is very short and the length is too small. If it is written in a fast-paced and refreshing way and directly follows the main line, the main line can be completed in a hundred chapters at most!

This is also why most of the successful one-person fan fictions are Zhutian, because there is no way to go after the main line, and many fan fiction authors are not good at originality, and without the support of the main line, they will soon collapse.

Therefore, it is necessary to change the map, change the story, and find a new main line!

But in that case, would it still be considered a fan fiction of "Under One Person"?

For me personally, it's a mixed bag.

To be honest, I have watched a lot of Chinese comics, but so far, I only like "Under One Person" and only want to write about "Under One Person"...

Because for me, "Under One Person" satisfies all my imaginations about Chinese comics. The core contained in it is the folk customs, traditions, and culture of our entire nation, which is very much in line with my own preferences, and there are so many things to explore!

With this mood, I opened this book and chose a slow pace...

A perspective that is not limited to the protagonist...

Each of these stories needs space to be laid, turned, and analyzed in order to be told well...

Each character needs camera resources, needs to express oneself, and needs writing to shape.

Not because of anything else...

Because this is the "Under One Person" in my heart!

Moreover, as I said in the introduction, this book focuses on "digging", digging into the gaps in the world of "Under One Person", those places where one can use imagination and explore in depth.

I am very curious about what is beyond the content of comics, and I believe there are people who are the same as me, so I hope to take you to explore.

At the same time, I believe that everyone who has read this can see that I like to create a "comic feel" or "anime feel", whether it is the plot design or the description.

From the beginning to now, every plot I have written has been questioned. Some people say that "accidentally entering Tangmen" was forced, some people cannot understand "Hong Bin protecting Feng Yunxin", some people say that "fighting against the Burmese senior brother" the fight lasted too long and the boss was too strong, "facing Qu Tong's threat", some people think that the protagonist is not tough enough and should be exposed directly.

I know that everyone has different preferences and I can't satisfy everyone, but please believe me, every way you think of has appeared in my mind, and my final choice has only one criterion:

"Interesting and reasonable."

"It's more interesting than reasonable, but it can't be unreasonable."

This is also the reason why I will patiently respond to most rational comments. I understand why people find a certain point unreasonable, and I am willing to explain it patiently. Most of the problems will be revealed in the following chapters.

I understand those readers who don't have the patience to read on, and I'm deeply sorry that my book has wasted your precious time.

You can scold me, you have the right to vent.

I can delete comments. I have also set the criteria for deleting comments in the opinion forum. I will strictly abide by them. This is also my right.

I think there is a good saying:

The author's work is like a bus.

Passengers who can accept the scenery along the way will continue to sit on the bus, and those who cannot accept it will choose to get off. However, new passengers will also get on the bus at the same time until the bus reaches the terminal...

Or fall into a ditch halfway.

This is destined.

But if a passenger spits when getting off the bus, I, as the driver, always have to clean up the spit for the sake of other passengers.

If a passenger tries to grab the steering wheel, I always have to stop him. Countless news reports have proven that this will lead to accidents.

If there are passengers shouting loudly or swearing on the bus, I always have to remind them that the bus belongs to everyone and it is a public environment.

As a driver, my biggest responsibility is to control the steering wheel well, so that the car can pass through each scenic spot smoothly and successfully, and finally reach the destination, so that all passengers still in the car can land safely.

of course……

No one is perfect. I am not a great author or an experienced person. I still lack experience and ability.

I will make mistakes and fall asleep, and when that happens I hope the passengers who are still on the bus will be willing to give me guidance and wake me up.

Let’s encourage you all.

I will work hard!

Please subscribe and vote for me. I hope those who like this train can support it to the end!

(End of this chapter)

Chapter 78: Forced landing with life, the dust has settled? (Please subscribe first, please vote for the monthly ticket!)

2023-10-23

at the same time.

In Biyou Village.

Qu Tong couldn't help but marvel at the sight of Wang Zhenqiu fighting against the eight superior beings.

Compared with before, Wang Zhenqiu at this time has undergone a lot of changes. His long golden hair has turned silver, and his momentum and strength are no longer the same as before!

Bang!

Facing the charging Hari Chagai, Wang Zhenqiu forced him back with one punch. The power of his punch was so great that even Hari, who had mastered some skills, could not match it.

At this time, a large number of flower-like and finger-twisting Qi bombs and sharp sword energy also attacked him, but they were all blocked by his "Tongbi Vajra" move and defeated with one blow!

Although Wang Zhenqiu is playful and unruly on weekdays, he is actually a temporary worker with high skills, so it is impossible for him to surrender.

At this moment, when the "Mask of Divinity" could not be used and was in a completely passive position, he used his best weapon and unleashed his true strength!

"Five-Stone Powder"!

A biological weapon that can change human genes is in the shape of a capsule. It was smuggled in by the jelly man from outer space called "Puling Star" beside him and has been buried in his body.

When needed, he can use Qi to activate it and temporarily obtain its energy, while at the same time stimulating the fighting instinct deep in his body and gaining a powerful force to match it!

"Magic trick: A thousand pounds of corn"!

The next moment, facing Qiu Rang who was rushing towards him holding the "Gilded Ruyi", Wang Zhen threw out a handful of corn and cast a spell, directly immobilizing Qiu Rang's magic weapon and clothes, causing him to fall down.

At the same time, he turned around and punched Liu Wukui directly. At the moment of knocking him back, he raised his hand and gave him a "love massage"!

at this time……

Swish!

A pair of hands suddenly emerged from the ground, grabbed his ankles and were about to drag him underground, but he pushed off the ground in advance and jumped up with him.

Taking advantage of this opportunity, Bi Yuan on the side aimed at his acupoints and shot out several silver needles, but they were dissolved by the "Tongbi Vajra" halfway through their flight, and the silver needles scattered to the ground.

Ding ding ding ding!

At the moment the silver needle fell to the ground, Wang Zhenqiu raised his hand, put it in front of his mouth, puffed up his cheeks, and a mouthful of flames gushed out, extremely fierce...

call--! ! !

At the same time, he kicked Zhang Kun to the ground. The raging flames swept through all the upper-level weapons, leaving them with no choice but to use Qi to defend themselves and unable to attack anymore.

Taking advantage of this opportunity...

pat!

Wang Zhen's ball floated down to the ground, his feet moved, and his whole body turned into a flowing shadow, so fast that it was difficult to see clearly.

Bang bang bang bang bang bang bang bang!

Afterwards, seven muffled sounds were heard one after another, and the "Love Massage" hit the remaining upper organs. After the muffled sounds, the eight upper organs all fell to the ground.

"Hey, sister, your thugs are not very good." After doing all this, Wang Zhenqiu clapped his hands and smiled playfully.

Then, he didn't plan to get entangled with Qu Tong anymore, and he was ready to leave. His mission here had nothing to do with this village, so naturally he wanted to get away with it.

however……

"Walk?"

Qu Tong smiled slightly, with an expression of nonchalance, and just moved her eyes, and several villagers stood in front of Wang Zhen's ball and intercepted it.

As for these rookies, Wang Zhenqiu naturally didn't bother to pay attention to them, so he bent his knees and jumped up, ready to escape from the roof.

But the next second, his pupils shocked, because he saw that these villagers took out sharp blades and put them against their necks!

"What are they going to do?!"