The fifth volume is finished.
Summary at the end of the volume (actually just mumbling)~~~
The fifth volume ends.
As for the direction of the plot, I am generally satisfied.
But when I really break down the content of each chapter, I am actually not satisfied with many aspects.
For example, the length of the chapter on the ancient battlefield.
In fact, it is quite different from what I wanted to write at the beginning, such as the escape of the Star-Breaking General, or the appearance of Murong Zun. The original big boss of the fifth volume was the Second Palace Master Chongshuo.
but.
I am a complete mess when it comes to writing a book outline, so even if I have decided on the general direction, when I start writing, the content will start to go off track as I write.
For example, the second palace master Chongshuo.
This is an insignificant role.
Even for his ending, I didn't want him to die at first, but I had many ideas, such as defecting, or continuing to be his second hall master, and being eliminated by Feng Yan'er one day...
Dying at the hands of the Evil Sun God was actually a "spur-of-the-moment" idea.
Because what Chongshuo wants to do is "cooperate with evil", he has the confidence to do so, because he is in the Manifestation Realm, and the Manifestation Realm is actually ranked in the top three in the entire system, which is very powerful, and it has been demonstrated at the end of the second volume.
But the Evil Sun God, or the entire "Extraterrestrial Magic Machinery", does not follow this system.
Their strength cannot be measured simply by the level of their realm. Even two of the "Four Great Generals" who have appeared now have different levels of strength, and the difference is extreme (mainly depending on their positioning and division of labor).
Chongshuo didn't understand this, or he didn't care at all. He was very confident in his own abilities, so he failed.
The death was very sudden.
And in the end, I wrote the ending where Chongshuo died suddenly, and a large number of the backbone forces of the Thousand Demons Hall were poached.
This was actually a spur-of-the-moment decision, just like the evil sun god killing Chongshuo, it was also a "spur-of-the-moment decision". He killed him for no other reason than that he wanted to do it and then did it.
There are also some differences in the original setting of Yue Lian Huang.
Originally, she would die, and the Southern Region would be in chaos, and Feng Yan'er would climb to the top step by step on the corpses in the chaos.
Then I rejected this general direction.
Because the character of Yue Lianhuang was improved later, I realized that her life experience could actually be used to make a big fuss and introduce the power of the Gu Yue Yulong clan.
Then, the "key point" of this book is actually that "the original direction of the plot did not follow the protagonist's original cognition at all." If all the plots are set and do not change no matter what is done, wouldn't that be very meaningless?
In this case, keeping the character of Yue Lian Huang alive might lead to better development (although I am not sure myself).
Then Murong Zun appears in this volume.
In fact, his only role is to introduce the content at the end of the fifth volume and serve as a prelude to the drastic changes in the entire Murong clan.
This character should have been completely eliminated in the third volume, and I have given him enough space.
But since there was a foreshadowing that he was not completely dead, if we don’t accept it now, he will actually be an insignificant character later on.
So why not collect it now? He must be allowed to crawl.
Of course, it was also an idea that I came up with on the spur of the moment.
Because in the next two or three volumes, I might forget about this guy, so I might as well give him some clown plots now while I still remember him, and then get out of here.
Now he is completely sent.
All in all, the content of the fifth volume comes to an end here. Of course, the same goes for Feng Yaner's story. Her days from now on will actually be very simple. With Yue Lianhuang's support, all she has to do is concentrate on becoming stronger.
Next time we meet, she will be very different.
Of course, at my typing speed, the next time we meet might be next year (lazy dogs are like that, plus work is tiring, and I don’t know what’s good for me and keep two accounts open at the same time)
The next plot will start to accelerate.
The reason I sped up is that I felt I should write faster. The protagonist's strength changes too slowly, and the monsters he faces are all stronger than him. If it weren't for the many BUFFs, he would have been smashed to pieces long ago.
So in the fifth volume, the span of his cultivation is extremely huge, so huge that it is not as great as the previous four volumes combined, and even I feel a little overwhelmed when I watch it.
But it doesn’t matter, the story will continue to collapse later, because starting from the sixth volume, the development of the story is no longer limited to the South Region, North Region, and Central Region.
The protagonist's identity has changed from a disciple of Shura Palace to an elder of Shura Palace. He is not far away from the "Five Realms of Creation" and will soon reach the level of "Creation Realm Monk".
If he were to appear as a disciple or young master again, it would no longer fit the plot I wanted to write.
Moreover, I only used a small amount of space to render the story from the first volume to the fifth volume, and the real big boss behind the scenes of this book - the Extraterrestrial Magic Machine - has also appeared.
There is no doubt that they will fight the protagonist to the end.
Judging from their strength, the hero is too weak now, and the speed of becoming stronger must be accelerated! Accelerate!
We must keep accelerating like the protector of the country, Antonin Artaud, and establish a virtual country! (Digression)
The following plot is not limited to a certain female character.
Starting from the sixth volume, it will be a mixture.
The more characters there are, the easier it is to write love scenes between them.
Of course, the Snow Sword Fairy, who has been out for two volumes, should also reappear. I wrote this character very carefully, and I still think the plot I wrote is the best in the whole five volumes (in the second volume). It’s just that my level is limited. Some people think it’s good and some people think it’s embarrassing. I think there may be more people who think it’s embarrassing (because I feel the same way).
This book is my practice work in fantasy writing. No matter what it turns out to be, I will not have any regrets.
Thank you for your support over the past five volumes. Love?(^_-)
Chapter 1: Exit
As the third of the seven sects in the universal world, the most talked-about thing about "Wanjian Qianshan" has changed.
What once struck the world as absurd and hilarious was that this great sword-cultivating sect did not have any sect leader, but only fifteen sword masters, and they even formed cliques among themselves, resulting in numerous factions on the mountains, just like a crude and crude village gang.
compare to.
No matter what, the other six sects were all running well. If nothing else, at least the sects were well-organized and they were as solid as a rock with each other.
But this is not the case with Wanjian Qianshan.
The great sword-cultivating sect that was once secretly mocked as "a pile of loose sand" now has something that concerns the world more.
There are two.
The first one is the return of "Yin Sword" Wushang, the junior brother of the First Sword Peak's Sword Master "Yang Sword Saint".
Of course, even though the foundation of the First Sword Peak is very weak, and even though the number of disciples has fallen to the bottom among the fifteen sword peaks, the old madman Yang Sword Saint is still very capable of fighting.
He is so powerful that all sword masters know how powerful he is.
I absolutely don’t dare to challenge him now because he is a madman.
Although Yang Jian Shengzun was not crazy sometimes, what if he didn't meet him? That guy didn't even drink the wine, but he didn't hold back.
What is now adding to the pressure on all sword masters is that Wushang, who left Wanjian Qianshan hundreds of years ago, has also returned.
The "Yin Sword" has not yet reached the holy realm.
But he has gone further on the path of swordsmanship than any other sword practitioner!
He had already comprehended the "Sword Realm" - the last thousand-foot-high peak among the Three Dragon Gates of Sword Cultivation, and he also jumped over it.
The most important thing is, if the grudges between these two brothers can be resolved... then the "Yin Yang Double Swords" of the First Sword Peak can be combined again, maybe it is not just empty talk.
And the second thing.
Luo Shuangning went deep into the forbidden area of the Sword Burial Mountains.
This "Snow Sword Fairy", who had already been designated as the next Sword Master, returned to Wanjian Qianshan with her uncle Wushang half a year ago.
Then, she walked alone with a sword into the Sword Burial Mountains, which were listed as "forbidden areas"... The Sword Burial Mountains were filled with sword evil left over from long ago. The civil war among sword cultivators had once made this lineage lose the chance to turn things around, and they never recovered.
But that doesn’t mean that no “legacy” was left behind.
The Sword Burial Mountains are their heritage. If you walk into them and undergo the training of the sword evil, you can also become stronger.
However, whether or not you can obtain these precious "blessings" depends on your luck.
As powerful as the Saint Yang Sword was, with the courage to walk into the depths of the forbidden land filled with the ancient sword evil, didn't he still end up with brain damage in the end?
As for Luo Shuangning...
He is indeed very courageous, and courageous people usually have unexpected surprises.
……
Deep in the Sword Burial Mountains, the sky was calm, but there was a sense of tearing that permeated the air.
There aren't even mosquitoes in this place.
Because any living creature who wants to enter it will have to endure the erosion of the sword.
At this moment, there were three figures standing on the edge of this sword evil, and here, there stood a stone tablet with the words "Cold Evil Forbidden Land" written on it.
Looking inside, all the grass and trees, even the bluestone and dead trees, were covered with frost and snow crystals, as if the entire mountain was frozen.
In their eyes, this place was like purgatory.
Moreover, this place happens to be one of the most forbidden areas of the Sword Evil. Of course, if you want to undergo the training of the Sword Evil, you naturally have to take risks.
However, for two of the three disciples, this place was still too creepy.
"Brother Leng, Senior Sister...are you really coming out of seclusion today?"
The younger disciple was holding a sword in his hand, shivering, as if he was standing outside this forbidden area, and he could also feel the cold and piercing sword intent penetrating into his bones.
Of course, in their impression, Senior Sister Luo Shuangning was a very cold but very elegant beauty. For a white-frost beauty like that to walk into such a dangerous place was really... worrying.
As people from the same school, no one wants to see someone die.
"…be patient."
Leng Wenxu leaned against the tree, his face still looking a little sharp, but compared to his past, he was much more resolute and calm.
After all, I have suffered too many blows.
Everyone has to grow up. Leng Wenxu is just the one who has suffered more and transformed more slowly. However, if he cannot make himself more mature and stable after suffering all kinds of changes both physically and mentally, then he would be too ashamed of his identity and cultivation.
His sword was across his waist.
The "Yan Gu Sword" was cut off by Luo Shuangning.
Now Leng Wenxu was using a very ordinary black iron sword that he had forged himself.
But it is more convenient to use than before.
"Big Brother, Big Sister has been here for half a year. Is it true that nothing will happen?"
Leng Wenxu raised his eyes and glanced at his junior brother who had a questioning look on his face and seemed particularly agitated, but did not answer.
As long as her soul lamp is still burning, her life is safe.
Leng Wenxu's daily routine is to check whether Luo Shuangning's soul lamp is still on. If there is even the slightest sign of the light fading, he will not be as calm as he is now.
Although, he was also very clear that the only relationship between him and Luo Shuangning was that of fellow disciples.
She had already become someone else's woman.
However, after Leng Wenxu thought about it for a long time, he was able to figure it out a little bit, but he still couldn't understand why Lu Mu could take her away.
Maybe I will never understand it in this lifetime.
"Whoosh..."
The cold wind in the forbidden area began to weaken.
The original biting cold gradually faded away, but as the cold wind became weaker, the strong sword aura also became thinner.
"what……"
"It seems that the sword evil in this mountain range will not become weaker, right?"
The two disciples whispered.
But soon, the changes came even faster. In the blink of an eye, a fierce wind seemed to blow in the forbidden area that was originally covered with frost and snow, and countless ice and snow melted away. This change stunned the two of them. Even Leng Wenxu raised his eyes and stared at this "forbidden area" where the power of the sword was rapidly weakening.
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