Republic of China: I am a great warlord, many children, many blessings

"Yes, I feel the same way. I can even imagine this scene. The writing style and conception are amazing."

“There are a lot of Western writing styles here, with a lot of prepositions.”

"This novel is amazing. Everything is so reasonable. It's the first time I've seen a novel written in this way. It really opened my eyes."

Shen Hao was not surprised to see the girls’ admiration.

Novels of this era have no sense of immersion at all.

Of course, it is also due to the limitations of the times. Without TV movies, there would be no sense of immersion.

Jin Yong's novels have a strong sense of language and camera. This is because he used to be a screenwriter and is very good at describing the sense of language and picture. He uses one or two shots to portray the atmosphere and even arranges the actions of characters according to the freedom of the shots.

This is incomparable to any other novel of this era. This kind of novel is a blast as soon as it appears.

The girls were instantly attracted to the novel; its writing style, structure, and plot were all masterpieces.

Lu Bicheng couldn't help but exclaimed: "I have been an editor for so many years, and this is the first time I have seen a book with this structure. It is so shocking.

It’s amazing, it’s like opening the door to a new world.”

Seeing the girls watching, Shen Hao left. Shen Hao had watched Jin Yong's martial arts dramas countless times. Jin Yong's writing style and plot can be described in two words: silky smooth.

It was just too boring. Shen Hao didn't like watching plays at that time, and he had no entertainment options, so he could only continue to read novels.

Shen Hao discovered that having a photographic memory also has its disadvantages, which is that it is boring.

After reading a novel, every word is imprinted in my mind.

When I wanted to open the book again, I found that the content of the next chapter was exactly the same. The fun of reading was gone, and I no longer had the mood to review the old content and learn new things.

When the girls saw Yang Guo appearing in the book, they felt particularly sympathetic towards his experience.

I was fascinated by the book's descriptions of the environment, characters and events, as if there really were martial arts heroes in the Southern Song Dynasty.

For a moment, Lu Bicheng, Zhou Di and Jin Ruizhi were actually fascinated by the show.

They read it very carefully, for more than an hour, and the three girls also read the chapter where Xiaolongnu was defiled by Yi Zhiping.

Suddenly, he was furious and wanted to settle the score with Shen Hao.

But when he looked up, there was no sign of Shen Hao. He had disappeared.

In anger, Lu Bicheng, Zhou Di, Jin Ruizhi, Bai Xiuzhu and Leng Qingqiu all came to Shen Hao's study with unhappy faces, wanting to ask Shen Hao for an explanation.

Shen Hao also didn't expect that the women's strong sense of involvement would arouse public anger.

Shouldn't this dragon rider be the most immersive among men?

How come women are crazier than men?

Lu Bicheng said: "Xiao Long Nu is so good, why do you want to destroy her.

This paragraph is too well written, my husband. You have tarnished the image of Little Dragon Girl in my mind. You should change it.

If you don’t change, I won’t be able to sleep today.”

Zhou Di said: "Yes, this period is too painful (cgbc), my heart is full of anger, and I feel humiliated.

The Confucianism of the Southern Song Dynasty was very serious, and women were bound by etiquette. If Xiao Longnu was defiled, wouldn't she just die?"

Shen Hao said: "You think too much, Xiao Longnu is from the Ancient Tomb Sect, she is not familiar with the ways of the world, she doesn't understand Zhu Xi's Neo-Confucianism and doesn't care about it.

Besides, a novel must have regrets to be a classic and memorable.

What is a classic? A classic is a tragedy.

Tragedy is the destruction of beautiful things.

This is the only way to leave a deep impression on readers.

But once you remove this part about Xiao Long Nu, the soul of the book will be gone.

Life is full of suffering, just like novels, there is no such thing as perfection.

Look at the country today. It is being bullied and colonized. Isn’t that painful?

So it can’t be changed, because if it is changed it will be meaningless.”

Of course, what Shen Hao said was a bit nonsense.

Looking at the book The Return of the Condor Heroes as a whole, it doesn’t matter whether there is a section about the dragon knight or not, it does not affect the rhythm of the whole book.

But if Shen Hao is unhappy, he has to make other people unhappy too.

Shen Hao only feels happy when other people are unhappy. Maybe this is what is called being mean.

Shen Hao refused to agree to make any changes. The girls were so angry that they could do nothing. They looked at Shen Hao with grievance. Shen Hao couldn't stand their crying expressions.

So, in order to change the subject, Shen Hao said, "Didn't you three say that the newspaper office couldn't run anymore?

No one buys newspapers?

That's easy. Just publish the novel in the newspaper and that's it.

One chapter is released every day, and those who have read it will definitely be thinking about the next episode, so there is a sense of anticipation.

In order to keep up with the novels, they will continue to buy newspapers.

Your newspaper can also survive."

Shen Hao's words made the eyes of Lu Bicheng, Jin Ruizhi and Zhou Di light up.

"That's a good idea, why didn't I think of it?"

"The Return of the Condor Heroes is so perfect in both plot and narrative structure, and it is very immersive. It is definitely a top choice and I'm sure many people will like it."

Jin Ruizhi exclaimed:

"What a genius idea. You are worthy of being my husband. You have a smart mind."

When it comes to the newspaper, Lu Bicheng, Jin Ruizhi and Zhou Di forgot about changing the plot.

I also forgot that this time I came to settle accounts with Shen Hao.

Bai Xiuzhu on the side pouted angrily, looking very dissatisfied. "Three stupid teammates, I don't know why you are here. You can hang a soy sauce bottle from your little mouths."

But she didn't dare to vent her anger on Shen Hao alone, so she could only sulk.

Seeing this, Shen Hao held him in his arms and said with a smile: "Be good, it's just a novel, why are you angry?"

"Brother Hao is really annoying. He only knows how to bully me. Writing this kind of stuff makes me uncomfortable," Bai Xiuzhu said;

Shen Hao kissed her delicate cheeks hard a few times.

In an instant, Bai Xiuzhu's expression changed from gloomy to bright, and a bright smile appeared on her cheeks.

Leng Qingqiu rolled his eyes and said with some disdain: "Look at what you have accomplished."

"Hmph, why do you care? You're just jealous," Bai Xiuzhu pouted;

Lu Bicheng looked at the novel and said excitedly: "Okay, I will publish this novel chapter by chapter now."

Shen Hao said: "This novel of The Return of the Condor Heroes is a sequel, and there is also a prequel.

I think it will be more attractive if the prequel is released first.”

This is true. If the middle part of The Return of the Condor Heroes was released first in the Condor Heroes trilogy, it would not feel right.

So the appeal of the first part is not as great as the second part.

Hearing this, the girls' beautiful eyes lit up.

"Husband, where is the prequel to this book? We want to read it."

"Yeah, if the second part is so good, then the first part must not be bad either."

Shen Hao said: "The first one tells the story of Guo Jing and Huang Rong, I call it The Legend of the Condor Heroes.

As for where it is, it's in my mind, I just didn't write it down.

I will give you the story outline and details as well as the characters, highlighting the key points, and you can describe the rest yourself.”

These girls are all talented and their writing skills are definitely impeccable.

As Shen Hao had already mentioned the key details, there would naturally be no problem for them.

Lu Bicheng, Jin Ruizhi and Zhou Di also nodded in approval and understood.

Shen Hao is the Inspector General and has so many things to do every day, so it is indeed inappropriate for him to write a novel himself.

Soon, as Shen Hao told the story, vivid characters appeared on the screen.

Huang Rong, Guo Jing, Zhou Botong, the Five Great Masters.

The Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms, the Nine Yin Scriptures, and other such magical martial arts also appeared one by one.

Huang Qiying and Ding Lianshan, who were standing outside the door, also pricked up their ears and listened carefully.

"Old Huang, have you heard of the Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms?"

“No, I want to read this novel.”

"Well, I'll have to read it when it's finished. I want to read it just by listening to it."

For more than two hours, Shen Hao recounted all the details.

The girls were having a heated discussion about the plot.

Shenyang smiled and stopped talking.

In this era of lack of entertainment, a martial arts novel like this is simply spiritual food and will definitely attract everyone's attention.

What's more, Shen Hao was talking about the TV version of the plot, which is much more reasonable than Jin Yong's early dramas.

All of Jin Yong's published novels have been re-edited by more than a dozen screenwriters, and the original manuscripts also have many problems. After all, one person's ability is limited.

As the novel's conception became more complete, the women breathed a sigh of relief.

Lu Bicheng was pleasantly surprised: "This novel is much more comfortable than the Return of the Condor Heroes"

“That’s right, especially the kind of chivalrous person like Guo Jing, who serves his country and his people.

It makes people's blood boil. Once this novel comes out, it will definitely make our newspaper popular."

Guo Jing's spirit is absolutely in line with the needs of today's society.

After the girls discussed this, Shen Hao still felt it was real.

In today's society, with foreign powers rampant, everyone hopes to see a hero emerge.

The great man is the country and the people.

Guo Jing's image is more likable. Compared with Yang Guo and Xiaolongnu, Guo Jing is more attractive.

Shen Hao was too lazy to care about these things.

It's okay to have some fun occasionally.

At the same time, Bai Xiuzhu's cousin Wang Yufen and Jin Ruizhi's elder sister Jin Daozhi.

The two women hurriedly found Shen Hao.

This made Shen Hao very curious.

"What's wrong? Why are you in such a hurry?"

Jin Daozhidao: "Meili's mother, my second aunt, had an accident last night"

Shen Hao was stunned and asked, "What's going on?"

Jin Daozhi said: "My second aunt is usually very weak and has no opinion. She doesn't fight or compete, and she doesn't talk much.

But no one expected that she committed suicide by taking opium last night.

It seems that he missed my father too much, so he wanted to commit suicide for love."

Shen Hao asked doubtfully: "Is the person gone?"

Jin Daozhi shook his head and said: "The person was rescued, but his health is very poor now."

Having said that, Jin Meili suddenly ran over, knelt down in front of Shen Hao, and burst into tears.

"Master, please save my mother"

Shen Hao said: "She is in the capital and not by my side, there is nothing I can do."

Jin Daozhi said: “The second concubine came to Guangzhou last month.