I, Tomoya Aki, am not a bootlicker

Mr. Tsubota walked behind Aki and placed the article on the table.

"By the way, this sentence comes from the Book of Songs, right?"

There is no beginning, and there is no end.

Mr. Tsubota has the impression that this sentence seems to have come from China.

"When An Yi was writing before, he often used many ideas from ancient Chinese literature to explain his writings."

Mr. Tsubota sighed like this.

Aki Tomoya nodded and did not deny it.

In the article he handed over to Mr. Tsubota, the sentence "Everything has a beginning, but few can have an end" not only corresponds to the theme of his article, but was also a reminder to himself to have a good beginning and a good end when he started writing.

"This is a good write-up, but in terms of writing style, it would be better if An Yi-san could be more concise. Some parts are too implicit and a bit unclear."

Mr. Tsubota said this, pointing to the paragraph he had annotated with a red pen.

"This is a bad habit of An Yi. After all, the teacher who grades the papers won't remind you like I do."

He pointed out the bad flaws in Tomoya Aki's article in a tactful tone. Although Mr. Tsubota seemed to be lenient in this regard, he did not give Tomoya Aki any time to breathe afterwards.

This is just the first problem. The writing is a bit subtle and some parts are unclear. To put it bluntly, you yourself cannot express your meaning clearly, but it makes people who read it feel annoyed.

Mr. Tsubota can accommodate and give Tomoya Aki more opportunities, but the teacher who marks the papers will not give him a second chance. The most important thing is to discover bad habits early and improve them early.

Mr. Tsubota would praise the good parts without hesitation, but he would also point out the bad parts bluntly and constantly criticize Aki Tomoya.

"However, the essay does not carry a large proportion in the national exam. But if you want to make a difference in the Tokyo University entrance exam, you don't have to rely on math and science. Those who take the exam are all people who are confident in math. If you want to make a difference there, you must ensure that you have good math and science skills, and you must not fall behind in Chinese and English. English is Aki's strong point, but your vocabulary must be further expanded!"

Although he criticized Tomoya Aki's article harshly again, Mr. Tsubota knew that if Tomoya Aki was hit hard by such an incident, he would have collapsed in the past month.

What needs to be done with Tomoya Aki is to find out his problems. If it were him, he would improve it quickly.

Mr. Tsubota already had a rough idea in his mind about how to teach Tomoya Aki.

His weaknesses are Chinese, Japanese history, and short essays. English is his strong point. Mathematics and science did okay in the initial test. He mainly reviews his weak points so that he can get a foothold in the national exam, but he can't let Aki Tomoya be too biased.

In Mr. Tsubota's opinion, Aki Tomoya's biggest enemy in getting admitted to the University of Tokyo is not himself, but time.

If repeating a grade is not considered, the main issue is how to make the most of the limited time.

"Regarding the writing of the essay, I have a reference here. You can take a look at it, but you don't need to focus too much on writing. Just follow the progress you have been making."

Mr. Tsubota took out the packed document bag.

"Here are some nice articles I collected, and some newspapers."

"newspaper?"

Mr. Tsubota gave him some good articles as references, which Tomoya Aki could understand, but what about the newspapers?

The former pushed his glasses after hearing Aki Tomoya's question and replied helplessly: "Of course, we are discussing some popular topics in the past, which can also be regarded as a connection in writing."

If that's the case, Aki Tomoya can still understand.

After all, if you have a goal, you don't have to think of it on the spur of the moment when practicing writing, using a certain event as a theme and then starting a discussion.

"Among the articles I collected, there is one written by a student from Ichinose Academy. What that person wrote is for reference only. Don't learn from it. After all, that level is indeed beyond the scope of students..."

Mr. Tsubota said this as he picked out a copy of the excellent articles he had collected with great effort.

"Ichinose's talent in the arts is amazing, judging from her writing alone. Her level is extremely high. Aki-san just needs to take a look at it. You don't need to reach that level. If you can reach half of her level, I think we don't need to continue practicing writing."

He sighed like this, and then placed the article in front of Aki Tomoya.

"Of course you don't have to watch it now. You can watch it when you get back. I have arranged a new intensive training for you. It will start in ten minutes."

……

At 11 o'clock in the evening, when Tomoya Aki returned home, the house was also pitch dark.

April is almost over, and I don’t have to go to school for the last two days of April because the Golden Week holidays have arrived.

As the Golden Week approaches, Aki Tomoya has no intention of relaxing. Unlike previous Golden Weeks, this year will definitely be busier than before.

After a month of preparing for seven subjects, Akitomo didn't feel exhausted at all. The only thing he felt was that time passed faster than he had imagined.

Holding the file bag containing the articles, he opened the door and walked into the entrance hall, moving quietly so as not to wake up the people at home.

"Ichinose Academy, I seem to have some impression of it..."

After returning to the room, Tomoya Aki took out the file bag that Mr. Tsubota had given him, which contained the articles he had collected for reference. He suddenly remembered what Mr. Tsubota had said in the school before.

The liberal arts genius of Ichinose Academy, this title sounds a bit similar to the title of the literary talent of their Toyogasaki Academy.

Aki Tomoya had some impression of this school. When he was investigating the high schools for further studies, he seemed to have seen information about Ichinose Academy.

While thinking about this, he took out all the articles in the file bag.

Mr. Tsubota had already made all the comments and classifications on the manuscript paper, so there was no need for Aki Tomoya to sort it out a second time.

"Ichinose Academy, Fumino Furuhashi?"

Judging from the name, she is a girl, and Mr. Tsubota was also referring to her as "she" at the time.

In Japanese, there is a clear distinction between "he" and "she" for men and women.

Aki Tomoya wanted to see what the real strength of this Furuno Fumino was.

Liberal arts genius?

Moreover, in Mr. Tsubota's evaluation, he described it as exceeding the student's level.

When Tomoya Aki picked up the article written by Fumino Furuhashi, a liberal arts genius from Ichinose Academy, his eyes lit up at the first second, and soon he was immersed in the article.

For a student to write such an article is truly extraordinary.

Deserves the praise of being awesome!

"Gudong..."

Tomoya Aki's throat moved slightly and he couldn't help swallowing.

His hands were shaking, or rather his brain was shaking.

What words should be used to describe it?

Shocked?

It’s a bit exaggerated, but I do have a lot of feelings in my heart.

Surprised that a student could have such a solid foundation in writing, Aki Tomoya felt a little shocked.

At this time, Tomoya Aki already understood why Mr. Tsubota warned him not to worry too much and not to think about reaching this man's level.

If they were half as good as Furuno Furuno in writing, as Mr. Tsubota said, they wouldn't need to practice anymore.

"It's just..."

It's so annoying to compare people to each other!

Hey!

After two lifetimes, my writing skills are not even as good as a student's. How shameful!

Amaki Tomoya sighed and thought so in his heart, but he didn't study literature in his previous life, so there must be a reason why he is not good at writing!

But considering that the other party is still a student, it is indeed a bit discouraging.

Although Tomoya Aki admitted that his writing was not as delicate as that girl's, he was also aware of the gap between them.

Perhaps choosing to read the articles of Fumino Furuhashi in the first place was a wrong choice.

"The liberal arts genius is indeed worthy of his reputation!"

Aki Tomoya sighed.

He had already figured out why Mr. Tsubota included Furuno Furuhashi in many of his articles. This was specifically to warn him, but it also gave him a kind of confidence.

Because if he read other people's articles, Aki Tomoya would find out -

Huh?

It turns out that it’s not that I’m too weak, but that my opponent is too strong!

Although there is a gap compared with other excellent articles, it is not as shocking as reading Fumino Furuhashi's articles.

Fumino Furuhashi is indeed a person who has surpassed the level of ordinary students.

Using her as a standard of comparison is somewhat biased.

Fumino Furuhashi, a girl from Ichinose Academy, truly deserves the description of a liberal arts genius.

"I don't know which university this Fumino Furuhashi plans to apply to?"

This is what Tomoya Aki thought in his heart.

If this person were to engage in literary creation and develop well, there might be an extraordinary woman in the literary world of Japan in the future.

Of course, it's just a thought, and Akitomo can't make any arbitrary judgment.

And this has nothing to do with Akitomo.

From an appreciation perspective, Fumino Furuhashi's articles are indeed pleasing to the eye and a good refresher for the brain. Tomoya Aki's overall sense of her articles is still very good.

But when it comes to learning, you can’t learn it. You really can’t learn it!

If you only read what Fumino Furuhashi wrote, it's a complete blow!

The articles written by other people that Mr. Tsubota thoughtfully prepared for him contain many things that Tomoya Aki could use.

Different from him, most of Aki Tomoya's quotations came from ancient Chinese literature and poetry from the Celestial Empire.

Because Japanese Chinese is indeed a difficult subject for him.

Without having come into contact with ancient Japanese works, there is nothing you can say about Akitomo Ren.

Apart from Fumino Furuhashi's articles, there are many good points in what other people wrote.

As we are all in the Confucian circle, we have a lot in common and it is not difficult to understand.

By the time I finished reading the article that Mr. Tsubota gave me, it was already early morning.

But Aki Tomoya was not sleepy at all. Instead, he felt a little excited because he was still thinking about the article written by Furuno Furuhashi.

“I saw something nice!”

At this moment, Tomoya Aki felt that liberal arts was not so boring.

As a student, it is really amazing to be able to write such vivid words.

Furuno Furuhashi's words are still fresh in the memory of Tomoya Aki, and it also saw him in a different direction.

As for the fact that there is a literary talent in their school, Tomoya Aki has never read any of Kasumigaoka Utaha's articles.

But if we have to make a comparison, knowing the true face of Kasumigaoka Utaha as a otaku, Tomoya Aki still feels that Furuno Furuno is more in line with the image of this literary talent.

There is no special reason. It's just that after reading the well-written article, my brain was stimulated and became somewhat active.

It seems that traveling in the ocean of words is a unique enjoyment.

Amaki Tomoyuki did not compare his article with Furuhashi Fumino's, as they were not on the same level and there was no point in comparing them. However, because Furuhashi Fumino was among them, his confidence suddenly increased when compared with others. It is not known whether this was intentional on the part of Mr. Tsubota, or whether it was simply the result of him accidentally recommending a good article to him.

However, now, through comparing himself with others and learning from Furuno Furuma's articles, Tomoya Aki has gained some insights into writing.

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Thank you all for your tips and props. I can't thank you enough. I can't afford women's clothing. I can only kowtow. Bang bang bang

There is also the issue of reward. It is not easy to reward if it is not on the shelf. Why don’t you come to my room to supervise me? 417548317

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Originality is not easy, I have a lot of experience with this, let me start supporting originality!

Chapter 29 Golden Week