The treasure thieves of Teyvat rob Shenhe

"Big Experience Book*15"

"Mysterious item - the gift from Quan Tai."

"Detecting that the host has the power of Rock God and [Boundary], activating the active skill [Ghost God State]."

The system squeaked.

Lin Ye took note of it secretly.

"By the way, Mr. Zhongli, didn't you say you would give me two things? Where's the other one?"

Zhongli took out another rock bead.

"The consciousness that is sleeping in here."

"??"

"Just before the explosion, Quan Tai pushed Su's consciousness out and gave it to me. In the near future, it will gradually wake up. You can give it to your mother."

Lin Ye took the rock bead with mixed feelings.

"You two, your order is here."

At this time, Zhiruo, the waitress who was always on duty, brought the dishes ordered by Zhongli and placed them on the table.

"Now that things have come to this, let's eat first." Zhongli said with a smile, "I'm sure you've heard of the food here."

"Yeah." Lin Ye nodded.

Zhongli raised the wine jug and wanted to pour wine for Linye.

Lin Ye was so scared that he quickly snatched it away and said that he could do it.

He poured another glass for Zhongli.

Zhongli smiled helplessly and raised his glass, "Now that things have been settled, I'm here to welcome you and celebrate."

Zhongli raised his wine glass and it collided with Linye's.

After they both drank it down in one gulp, Zhongli turned his head to look at the bustling streets and bustling crowds of Liyue Harbor, and he spoke gently.

"I didn't do much this time. It's probably because you and your companions worked together."

"No way, if it weren't for the ring you gave me, Mr. Zhongli, I wouldn't be able to defeat Quan Tai, and you also protected Dihuazhou... ahem."

Zhongli seemed not to have heard Lin Ye's slip of the tongue. In fact, after he stated that he had met Quan Tai, he hinted at Lin Ye's identity. Lin Ye's reaction was as if it was a matter of course.

Lin Ye and Zhongli have always understood each other tacitly.

"Actually, I should thank you. You made me see a new possibility." Zhongli said.

"What's the meaning?"

Zhongli turned his head and stared at the forest and said.

"The possibility of being a mortal. Even if you, Lin Ye, are special, you can still represent the people of Liyue. Liyue has no shortage of talented people, and no shortage of smart and courageous people. You, Master Hu, Shen He, Ye Lan..."

At this time, Zhongli asked Lin Ye meaningfully.

"Lin Ye, do you think that Liyue, which is ruled by gods, is capable of welcoming human rule?"

When Lin Ye heard this, his pupils trembled.

The first volume of Yunchi Longyuan is completed

summary

Strike while the iron is hot and write a summary.

If you ask me what I feel most right now, it’s: Oh my god! I can finally take a break.

but!

The second volume will still be updated tomorrow.

Author:……

As for the summary, it is to review the plot of the first volume, summarize the experience and lessons, and try to avoid making the same mistakes in the next volume.

The biggest lesson I learned from the first volume is that it was too long.

That’s right, the first volume has 400,000 words, and it was written by a novice writer. There wasn’t much content to begin with, but it took so long to write.

If it were a big shot or a great writer, they would write very brilliantly, but I am not like that. I am just a rookie, and the subscriptions are dropping at an alarming rate every day, not to mention the average subscriptions.

I can’t even say what the subscription situation is like right now.

It has been a month since it was put on the shelves. Others are rising more or less, but mine has been falling. I was originally very stable, but I couldn't stand the continuous decline. I felt a little disappointed.

I lost a lot of chapters in the Ao Zang Mountain plot, more than 500 or 600 of them, and my grades have been in a slump since then.

I am afraid that the market will continue to be sluggish in the future.

After it was put on the shelves, except for the first day, I never asked for monthly tickets or subscriptions again. The main reason was that I thought my writing was not good enough and I was embarrassed to ask for everyone's support.

In fact, you can already know your situation by looking at the recommendation votes, monthly tickets and rewards.

But I still want to thank the readers who have been subscribing. Thank you, it makes me feel that I am not completely ruined yet.

In the summary, I actually have a lot to say, but I am afraid that if I talk too much about the previous plot, it will spoil the plot and the subscription will drop again. I feel that the summary I wrote earlier will discourage some people. But the problem does exist, so it is better to talk about it.

The introduction says that there is a hidden plot that I created. The story of the first volume is very simple, which is about Gu Yunyou Chi and Jingshi Jiuzhu. When I was going through the plot at the beginning, I was confused and always felt that there were a lot of content that was not shown, so when I wrote it myself, I made a little re-creation.

For me, the greatest sense of accomplishment in writing Genshin Impact fan fiction is that when you are playing the Fire Book in the future, you will remember the character Quan Tai, and that makes me happy.

Speaking of Quan Tai, as the BOSS of the first volume, his characterization is not very good.

I personally think that I should have done three things well in the first volume. One is the oppressive feeling of the villain, one is the character of the heroine, and the last one is the upgrade mechanism.

I didn't do any of them well, and this is what I will correct in the next volume.

Quan Tai has been idle for a long time and has not appeared many times. Although many previous plots have hinted at a connection with Quan Tai, it is still not smooth enough.

In terms of the female protagonist, I found that the titles with Shen He had significantly higher subscriptions. Do people really want to see Shen He? It's hard to write a cool character.

In terms of the upgrade mechanism, I feel that the upgrade is just a small pleasure, but there are not many exciting points in the first volume.

I calculated it myself. I have updated for four consecutive days after the book was put on the shelves, and I still owe four chapters. Then I updated one chapter today, so there are three chapters left. Hmm.

The following analysis is very spoiler-like.

The story of the first volume can be divided into returning to Liyue Harbor, the Tianheng Mountain incident, the Cheno Factory incident, Ao Zang Mountain, the Yanshang Teahouse, Qingce Manor, and Wuwang Slope.

The original outline did not include the plots of Yanshang Teahouse and Qingce Manor. After Aozang Mountain, the next part was Wuwangpo. At that time, the word count was about 200,000 words, and Wuwangpo was the climax, which felt just right.

But as I said before, the outline has been changed.

For the next volume, my initial plan is to make the story shorter and more compact. It will definitely not be as lengthy as the first volume. The scene of the second volume will mainly be Mond, but it will not be like the first volume, where the action is limited to one country.

Judging from the first volume, I wanted to use Genshin Impact as the theme and write an epic and tragic story, but the first volume was too messy, so I will learn to change this in the second volume.

This is my first novel that has been signed and put on the shelves. I don’t know what its future will be like. Based on the current situation, whether it will be a failure or it will slowly recover and the story will gradually become more exciting, I have no experience and cannot make a prediction.

Anyway, let's see how the plot of the second volume improves. If you like it, please subscribe. The author has been very negative recently.

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Hey, why are 500 points gone?

I don't know how to name it and I don't know how to give it 300 points

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100 points of coins for the non-African among the European emperors

Thank you.

Chapter 158: Steal half a day’s leisure

"It is said that the Chilong has a body like a winding mountain, and it is like a world-destroying demon. It sits on the sea of clouds in the sky, spews out a mouthful of ambergris, and sprinkles a bean-sized rain of fire, which can burn the people of a village to death!"

Three bowls are enough to pass the border. Tian Tiezui, holding a folding fan, spoke passionately and spitting at his mouth as he talked about the story of Prince Yan's battle against the evil dragon. His expression was so enthusiastic and his description was so detailed that it didn't sound like he was telling a story, but rather like he had seen it with his own eyes.

These days, if foreign travelers come to Liyue Harbor, they will ask about the hot spots that are popular recently.

Hey, it must be the Chilong that took off in Dihuazhou, Liyue half a month ago!

Many people in Liyue Harbor, thousands of miles away, testified that they did look to the north that day and saw the shadow of a giant dragon with bared fangs and claws!

The residents of Guiliyuan near Dihuazhou said in a mysterious way that if it didn't rain on a sunny day and they heard thunder in the air, it was the anger of the Chilong.

As for the residents of Dihuazhou and travelers from various countries staying in Wangshu Inn, they all guaranteed that they had seen the dragon of Liyue with their own eyes. They were so excited that if the proprietress had not stopped them, they would have rolled up their sleeves to fight the dragon to show their style and become famous in foreign countries!

The owner of the Wangshu Inn who did not want to be named said that at that time there were indeed many guests who wanted to check out, and they were not running to the north, but to the south.

Fortunately, the Chilong appeared from Wuwangpo and crashed into Dihuazhou, which was far away and was not affected. Otherwise, the boss would have been in tears and would have returned to the time before liberation.

In any case, the appearance of a demon dragon in Liyue is an established fact that cannot be denied.

So why did the evil dragon appear out of nowhere and then suddenly disappear?

Based on this, there are many different opinions.

Some people said that it was an evil dragon that failed in its tribulation and its soul returned to heaven – it died.

Others said that it must be an immortal who lived in seclusion near Dihua Island who took action and subdued the evil dragon.

However, the most common and reliable version is that it was our Liyue's Lord Rock who took action. Everyone has seen the stone wall rising from the ground in Dihua Island.

Along the entire west coast of Dihuazhou, stone walls as high as a building were erected to withstand the overwhelming flood.

In all of Liyue, the only person who has this ability is the Emperor.

In fact, some people even went to Dihuazhou specifically to retrieve the stone fragments that fell into the river. After all, it was the "miracle" of the Emperor. The Emperor was the god of rock, so if you rounded it off, the stone was part of the Emperor's body!

Can sell for a good price!

Liyue Harbor has a long history, and there is no shortage of old scholars who have conducted research. They found out from ancient books and documents that Lord Rock once suppressed the evil Chi. The direction in which the Chi dragon rose into the sky half a month ago was almost the same as the place where Lord Rock fought.

Hey!

The evidence is conclusive!

As a result, those lazy and useless people who only care about the emperor became more rampant, boasting that we have the protection of Prince Yan, so we can be worry-free and sleep soundly at night.

Especially the Zhudian Boat, which became even more lively after this incident, which made Zhongli a little unbearable. Even if he was invited, he would find a reason to politely refuse.

As the saying goes, nothing is absolute. Everyone is still waiting for the official final decision and to post an announcement to praise the greatness of the Emperor.

It is precisely because the official answer has not yet been given. Of course, even if it is given, not all opinions will be the same.

Now of course some people have other opinions in private. The most minority one is a girl from Ogihua Island. She insisted that she was at the scene that day...near it. In short, she was very close to the Chilong. She saw the Chilong transformed into a human form, and it looked very scary.

The one who stopped Chilong was not Prince Yan, but a young man wearing an equally scary ghost mask. The two men started fighting, and in a blink of an eye, they disappeared. Then a huge explosion was heard from the riverside.