After finishing the second volume, I thought a lot and decided to write down what I wanted to say here.
A lot of things happened to me this month, and my mentality went through several ups and downs.
So at the beginning I wrote a lot of things that I wanted to say to everyone, but the more I read it later, the more it felt like a meaningless complaint, and I was so embarrassed that I deleted most of it.
Compared to the joyful review section for the first volume, when I was writing the second volume, I was actually a little afraid to click on the pineapple bun to read the comments. I think everyone can also feel the hasty ending of this volume.
About the plot
1. Regarding the issue of Senior Sister Long, this character was originally just an ordinary female supporting role, but because of the problem of the Riddler getting sick in the middle of the story, the protagonist was also scolded (bitter smile)
In order to make up for it, I unknowingly devoted more and more space to Long Lianxue, causing her presence in the later period to even surpass that of the little mute, and stealing the role from the heroine. This can also be regarded as a sequelae of the disrupted rhythm.
2. The story of the little mute has not ended. Later, Xiao Jinyun will reunite with the protagonist before other heroines.
I will try my best to redesign a separate chapter for the gentle and virtuous little mute to make up for the missing role in the second volume.
As for the heroine of the next volume, "The Yandere Sword Fairy with White Hair and Red Eyes", I already have a more complete outline, and I believe it will bring you a more anticipated emotional line.
As for the heroine of the next volume, "The Yandere Sword Fairy with White Hair and Red Eyes", I already have a more complete outline, and I believe it will bring you a more anticipated emotional line.
As for the heroine of the next volume, "The Yandere Sword Fairy with White Hair and Red Eyes", I already have a more complete outline, and I believe it will bring you a more anticipated emotional line.
Important things should be said three times~
Thank you for your company along the way, please look forward to it~
I will read both criticism and encouragement. Sometimes I don’t reply because I am reviewing.
Readership:946546219
false note
I'm taking a day off today to adjust my schedule. Happy New Year, everyone?
false note
I'm sorry, Feichang, the update time has been getting slower and slower recently. For the sake of everyone and my own health, I will take half a day off to rest.
Everyone should go to bed early tonight, and you should be able to see the update tomorrow afternoon~
false note
Someone in my family has a fever, so I'm taking half a day off today to take care of him. I'll try to keep updating on the evening of the 26th. Love you guys.
Chapter 65: Stop biting, she feels bad
She felt that two different thoughts were affecting her alternately, one was full of anticipation, and the other seemed to be filled with grief and shame.
Xiao Jinyun stared at Ye Xun's clean and fair shoulders, and inevitably felt like taking a bite.
Then, the girl instinctively raised her little butt and moved closer to Ye Xun's neck.
Really bit it!
Xiao Jinyun was a little flustered. She had never expected that she would bite so hard. Her little fangs even broke Ye Xun's skin, and some blood came out.
No matter how small the wound was, Xiao Jinyun felt heartbroken. She licked the wound like a puppy. Ye Xun just frowned slightly, still thinking about how to wake up Long Lianxue.
Long Lianxue's delicate body seemed to calm down suddenly, but Ye Xun could feel her breathing quickening and her heartbeat speeding up.
This was a sign that she was about to wake up. Xiao Jinyun's bite, coupled with the continuous stimulation before, if Ye Xun had a stethoscope to listen to her heartbeat...
Well, I probably can’t hear it clearly.
In short, Ye Xun could feel that she was about to wake up.
As for the little mute, she could only use her clumsy little tongue to stop the bleeding for him.
She blamed herself a little, wondering why she couldn't control her strength. It would have been enough to just bite it gently...
Long Lianxue also breathed a sigh of relief reluctantly. When the little mute took that bite, she inexplicably felt a sense of distress and panic in her heart.
After all, Ye Xun has helped me so many times, it’s normal that I don’t want to see him get hurt.
The red-haired girl's soul comforted herself in this way, but she refused to admit the fleeting feeling of heartache.
【continue】
Xiao Jinyun suddenly heard Ye Xun's voice transmission.
The little mute blinked, not quite understanding what Ye Xun wanted to do.
However, his eyes were clear and he did not look panicked, just as always.
This is the tacit understanding that has been developed over the past few days, which makes her choose to follow Ye Xun's words unconditionally.
Even though she is very strong now, even stronger than Ye Xun, and may hurt him accidentally, her essence is still the little mute that Ye Xun picked up.
Xiao Jinyun blinked his eyes, then looked at Senior Sister Long's delicate body lying flat on the side, and suddenly he had a guess in his mind.
She deliberately opened her mouth, revealing a pair of sharp fangs, but she leaned over very slowly, deliberately leaving Long Lianxue a chance to stop her.
The girl lying next to him had her eyelids twitching constantly, and her pair of soft breasts, which seemed to be about to burst out, began to rise and fall violently and uncontrollably.
Long Lianxue's mind was nervously watching Xiao Jinyun's actions. She could feel that something was not right with the little mute, but she felt that she had no right to interfere.
She didn't want to look, but she couldn't close her eyes because of her distraction.
She wanted to stop him, but her body couldn't move.
Long Lianxue hooked her fingers and watched the little mute's fangs about to touch Ye Xun's skin. An indescribable feeling of suffocation flashed through her, and her mind felt blurred.
No!
When he opened his eyes again, he was already staring at the ceiling, lying next to Ye Xun.
After the red-haired girl woke up, she didn't even have time to check her injuries. Instead, she stood up panting and stopped Xiao Jinyun who was about to attack.
"Wait, don't bite him..."
Having been unconscious for too long, Long Lianxue's words were not clear, as if she had bitten her tongue, and her eyes were filled with panic and regret.
She is distressed.
The little mute raised his head and looked at his senior sister who had woken up, a smile appearing on his little face.
That smile was pure and innocent, but it made Long Lianxue feel guilty.
Xiao Jinyun knew that he had been watching him, so he probably knew how confused he was just now.
I really am a bad senior sister. I promised to take responsibility for my actions, but now I start to feel guilty.
"Ms. Lianxue, you woke up at the right time."
After waking up Long Lianxue, Ye Xun's plan can continue.
Xiao Jinyun obediently let go of Ye Xun, and he sat up next to Long Lianxue. The Taoist robe had just been half-unbuttoned by the little mute, revealing one shoulder that was not very wide but extremely reassuring.
"I know, I'll leave now..."
Long Lianxue's pretty face turned slightly red, and she struggled to climb out of the bed, somewhat afraid to look at Ye Xun's current appearance.
Her sense of guilt had never been as strong as it was at this moment. Like a little girl who had made a mistake, she just wanted to escape quickly and leave them alone.
As for myself, it is better not to be an eyesore for the time being.
"No, I need your help."
Ye Xun took the opportunity to grab the girl's wrist.
"help……"
It was just a brief contact of skin, but it made her face flush instantly. Before she fainted, the urge to touch Ye Xun emerged uncontrollably, but she quickly suppressed it.
Judging from the atmosphere, she thought she was an unnecessary burden, but he said he needed her.
"You said."
She understood his mental struggle very well, but suddenly realized that this was the first time Ye Xun asked her for help.
And the reason I helped him was no longer because I wanted to atone for my sins, but because he "needed" me.
Long Lianxue must consider whether this is her only chance in this life.
"I need your help. Contact Senior Du to help us break out of the city..."
Ye Xun's eyes were firm, but there was always a kind of attraction that could infect people, causing Long Lianxue to gradually forget the messy thoughts in her mind and just stare at his face quietly.
Maybe after helping him this time, we no longer owe each other anything, and next time I see Ye Xun, I won’t have those strange thoughts.
As Long Lianxue thought about this, she gradually calmed down.
After all, he was the little mute's man, and he could never belong to her...
"How to do?"
…………
At the Star Falling Land, an old man with white eyebrows was standing in the thunderstorm.
Long Lianxue disappeared here. She had completely lost contact with her granddaughter half a month ago.
His searches over the past few days have yielded nothing, and he hasn't even found a way to enter the entrance to the ruins. He also has no idea of Long Lianxue's current situation.
It seemed like someone was deliberately preventing him from entering.
But something must have gone wrong. After reaching the fusion state, he could have a vague sense of his bloodline descendants, but he could only feel that Long Lianxue was nearby, but there was no sight of the girl.
Du Xiuming looked much older all of a sudden. Although he was a powerful warrior, he looked a little shabby at this moment. The rain slid down his white eyebrows, which used to be elegant and refined, and his Taoist robe was completely soaked by the cold rain.
Now, the only thing on his mind was the safety of his granddaughter. As long as he could save Long Lianxue, he would even give up everything. Even the rolling thunderclouds in the sky that seemed to be angered by something seemed insignificant.
But he could find nothing. The topography of the Starfall Land had changed drastically, and the intelligence and maps collected in advance had become waste paper. It was as if someone was deliberately trying to stop him from moving forward.
The weather was bad, and the thunderclouds contained the power of the laws of heaven. Even for a cultivator in a combined state, being struck by lightning was no less than another heavenly calamity.
Due to the bad weather, the Liuying Sect's team had to temporarily give up the search, leaving only the destitute old man.
In the sect's roster, Long Lianxue and Xiao Jinyun were both marked as missing. As a member of the outsider sect, no one even cared about Ye Xun from the beginning.
Chapter 66 The Reason Why Du Xiuming Became a Combined Being
In the ruins.
After getting Long Lianxue's promise, Ye Xun immediately grabbed her hand in front of the girl's shocked eyes and clasped their fingers together tightly.
Blood calling was not difficult for him, but if Ye Xun wanted to have a direct conversation with Du Xiuming, he still needed to have as much physical contact with Long Lianxue as possible.
"Woo..."
Didn't he say he wanted to help me? Why did he suddenly grab my hand?
Long Lianxue's pretty face flushed instantly.
She had been deceived by Chang Dong before, and after figuring out the situation, she beat him up without hesitation. However, when what Ye Xun said and what he did did not match, Long Lianxue couldn't bear to shake off his hand.
She herself didn't know why, but the red-haired girl's determination, which had just been made, began to waver in the blink of an eye.
…………
Outside the ruins, there was a thunderstorm.
Du Xiuming only has Long Lianxue as his relative in this world. Even at the risk of being struck by lightning, he is unwilling to give up the possibility of searching.
He used to be just an ordinary cultivator who was used to studying formations, and he never thought that he would become a fusion cultivator one day.
At that time, Du Xiuming's daughter was seriously ill and bedridden. She had less than a hundred years left to live. He searched for medical treatment and medicine everywhere for a long time but could not find a solution.
Until someone told him that as long as he could break through the great catastrophe of fusion, he would be recognized by the Heaven, and as his own flesh and blood daughter, her physique would have the opportunity to be purified.
Du Xiuming's talent was not top-notch, so he could only work harder than a genius. He left the sect at the peak of the Return to Void Realm and traveled around. He went deep into the most dangerous demon caves alone several times, just to pursue a chance of breakthrough.
But this round trip took a hundred years.
Even if a monk is seriously ill, how many hundreds of years will it take for him to survive?
Du Xiuming clearly did not waste any time. After successfully breaking through the fusion, he did not even have time to wait for the immortal boat. He flew across the dangerous ocean in the middle alone and flew all the way back to Borneo.
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