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Mrs. Song came back in the afternoon, helped Han Yuerong grab some medicine, and hurriedly cooked half a pot of porridge.

During the following period, the courtyard became completely deserted. In order to retaliate against Han Yuerong, the owner of the cooked meat shop across the street spread rumors that Han Yuerong had contracted a heart disease, causing her business to completely disappear.

However, this was barely good news for Han Yuerong, whose body had not recovered yet.

Finally, Mrs. Song no longer has to force her to pick up guests.

Another half month passed, and Han Yuerong's illness became more and more serious. She had stopped taking medicine for several days because she had no money to take medicine.

It was Mrs. Song who showed more anxiety during this period.

She exchanged the furniture, clothes and jewelry in the hospital for a little money, and exchanged them for cigarettes. She had gradually given up on Han Yuerong's symptoms.

In these days, even if a wealthy family gets this disease, they have to spend all their wealth to be cured. It is said that some imported medicines are needed, which are very expensive. Ordinary people can only wait to die if they get this disease, blaming themselves for their bad luck.

Han Yuerong almost gave up.

Mrs. Song still adhered to her bottom line. No matter how long she went out, she would come back to spend the night. By the way, she would bring back two steamed buns and a bowl of water for Han Yuerong.

Sometimes when she stood by the bed and called Han Yuerong, the latter said nothing, so she put her fingers under the tip of Han Yuerong's nose. As long as Han Yuerong was still breathing, she would put the steamed buns and the porcelain bowl filled with water beside the bed.

With only a trace of hope left in her heart, hoping that Han Yuerong would miraculously get better, the two continued their previous cooperation model, with Han Yuerong receiving guests in the house, and she helping with cooking, laundry, and housekeeping.

When you make enough money, move to a new place and start a new life.

When the time comes, help Han Yuerong find a good family, and she can follow him to provide for her retirement.

Unfortunately, this expectation has become increasingly distant.

Become out of reach.

Another night, there was no one in the courtyard. Han Yuerong was still lying on the bed. She tried her best to raise her arms and push open the window next to the bed, looking out of the window through the gap.

It's finally sunny today.

A crescent moon hung on the horizon, and the cold moonlight fell on the courtyard again.

Only at this time was her heart at peace.

Han Yu'er reached out to touch the porcelain bowl next to her, smashed it hard, fumbled for a while, grabbed a piece of tile, hesitated for a moment, and cut her wrist severely.

One, two, three.

Until the blood flows out.

Han Yuerong lay back on the bed again, with two lines of clear tears falling from his numb eyes.

She knew she would never get better. Her lower body had become rotten in the past few days, and there was a faint smell floating in the air in the house. Her only relative had probably given up on her.

In this case, it is better to get rid of it completely.

For some reason, Han Yuerong could clearly recall in her mind the scene when she was seven or eight years old, when she was still living near Liuxiang, Huajie Street, in the city, and she was squatting on the doorstep in a short coat to help her father cook medicine.

At that time, she was ignorant and had no idea what her father's death meant.

If her biological father was still alive, he would definitely not give up on her, right?

"I hate it so much."

"Why is the world like this?"

"I really want to see the outside world. It must be better than this city, right?"

"Dad, we'll see you soon."

Han Yuerongyuan stared at her eyes, and reluctantly let out the last few thoughts in her mouth. In fact, death is not terrible, but it is a bit cold.

After a long time, Han Yuerong opened his eyes and made no sound.

The next morning, Mrs. Song returned to the courtyard again. She first called Yuerong twice. Seeing that the latter had no response, she placed her finger under Han Yuerong's pen tip and paused for a moment. Soon her body trembled and she shook him desperately. , until her eyes fell on Han Yuerong's scarred wrist.

Mrs. Song cried loudly for a while, then got up and covered Han Yuerong's body with a quilt, and then wiped off Han Yuerong's eyelids.

Finally, he wrapped the buns in his hands, found a wooden stick in the courtyard, and staggered out.

Just after she left, Han Yuerong's originally closed eyes slowly opened again.

A few days later, an idle man suddenly appeared in the courtyard. He walked around and finally found Han Yuerong lying on the bed in the room. He was surprised for a moment before finally realizing that he was a dead person.

In these days, dead people were not uncommon. Dead people were carried out of the shacks in the slums outside the city every day.

Taking advantage of the cold weather and before the body smelled bad, he boldly pulled up the quilt on the body, found some other worthless but accessible trinkets, and left.

In the evening, the idle man appeared in the courtyard again, this time with a few helpers.

After the owner of this courtyard died, the things became ownerless. Although the valuable ones were pawned by Mrs. Song, there were still some worthless belongings that were of some use.

For example, the wooden bed and desk in the bedroom are worth a few copper coins even if they are chopped up and used as firewood.

A group of people quickly began their final search.

In the end, I don't know who picked up the coat on Han Yuerong's body. Although there was a faint smell coming from the body, it could still be sold as second-hand clothes after washing.

What scene have you never seen with this group of people?

As long as you can survive.

He boldly helped Han Yuerong up, pinched his nose to unbutton his coat, and suddenly his wrist tightened, as if he was caught by something.

A moment later, a miserable scream came from the house, "Ghost, there is a ghost."

Summary of April: Why is this the first copy?

Although tomorrow is the last day of this month, because I just finished writing the copy today, I sent this summary out by the way.

To be honest, I felt a little uncomfortable writing it, feeling very depressed and sad. Anyway, I brought my own emotions into it, especially the last two chapters.

Some readers said it was difficult to calm down, and so did I.

……

The current book has 63 words.

The backend collection is 7400, and all orders are 370. I tried it for two rounds before it was put on the shelves. After it was put on the shelves, it has basically been running naked until now.

The updated word count in April shows 4 words in the background (including tomorrow’s 12.6 words).

Among them, I took one day off each on the 2nd and 8th, and the rest of the time was basically a single update. The average number of words in a single chapter is about 4500.

A large part of the reason for the lack of improvement in performance is the update of the crotch lift.

Slow updates have caused some people to keep books, resulting in a very small number of smart recommendations, with an increase of about 30 per day. There are also few new collections and new readers, and the number of subscriptions has not increased.

That's basically the reason.

The estimated number of words to be updated in May is 5 words, but there is no guarantee that it will be completed. It is very difficult to comment on it now. The editors are too dissatisfied with my poor grades and are unwilling to respond to me, and they keep urging me to write a new book.

Let’s talk about the issues related to the first copy.

The prototype of this copy is an old movie "Crescent Moon", starring the young version of Song Dandan (Song Dandan was very beautiful when she was young). When I was looking for materials, Station B accidentally saw it. It made me burst into tears. It was a A tragic movie.

After reading it, I wanted to write.

Because there is one thing I want in this drama, and that is emotion.

The second reason is that I have previously written a supernatural novel, The Secret of Maoshan, and I used some of the materials I had. I don’t want to rewrite the materials I have written. Unless I can write something different and new, the author himself will If you vomit, you will lose your desire to create.

In addition, in the past ten years, I have basically not watched many horror movies, and all I have watched are foreign ones, so I actually don’t have much material to choose from.

Everyone is welcome to post here to provide me with materials. I will basically watch it, or at least watch the film and television commentary.

These were the two reasons before writing. Then when I officially started writing, I suddenly realized a very serious problem, that is, what should I do if I don’t like this copy?

Tragic scripts usually arrange for the protagonist to go in and change the ending. Otherwise, why choose tragic material?Readers all like to read things that are a little more cheerful, and the author can't do anything wrong with his grades.

Therefore, in the end, the fate of the protagonist Yue Yaer, that is, the fate of Han Yuerong, has changed, but what I changed was not her person, but the ending after she died and became a ghost.

Because this is a supernatural film, it does not mean that it ends when a person dies, but it may be a new beginning.

The reason for her tragedy lies in this era. Because I was worried about touching the sensitive elements of this time period, I did not write down the specific time in detail. The background of the story is actually between 1930 and 1940 in the Republic of China, in Tianjin.

I didn't want to ruin this tragic story that moved me in the first place, but at the same time I wanted the protagonist to change Han Yuerong's fate and his fate after death. To match this, I created a setting where only the protagonist's soul could travel through.

It would be too fucked up to just let the protagonist watch the Han Yuerong family suffer, so I set up an original main line of Dog King Temple for the protagonist alone, hoping to slightly dilute the tragic main line in Yue Yaer, and finally combined the two merged together to form a new copy.

Among them, Han Yuerong and the Five Northeastern Immortals who appeared in the Dog King Temple will appear in the second copy.

In other words, after writing hundreds of thousands of words about ghosts and police, I began to introduce elements of demons.

I never dig holes without filling them.

I will fill in all the holes.

Han Yuerong's tragedy was caused by that unique era. She felt unfair, unwilling, sad and angry, wronged and confused, etc. Therefore, I want to take her to reincarnate and see modern society. In other words, this copy of Yue Ya'er is still There is a second half that takes place in the main world, and the only person who follows is Han Yuerong.

There is another reason why we chose this copy. Let’s sort out the general plot of this book to 60 words.

Before it was released, I wrote "The First Ring" and "Hong Kong Secret Records" in detail, which had a bit of tension and compactness. After it was released, I wrote "The Exorcist" in detail, especially some plots involving Huang Yongfa. They are all mined and original by me.

At the same time, I also wrote in detail an original branch line about Tan Zuo Chen. The fact is that the follow-up effect of the branch line Tan Zuo Chen is not very good. I considered cutting this branch line, so the result of my subsequent design is Let Tan Zuochen die.

In other words, in February and the first half of March, there were detailed writing points. From March 2th to April, there are no detailed writing support points. The next plot in my plan is "Return to the Soul" "Night" and "The Ghost Mission", and then the plot wants to advance to this point, but it is still a little bit in the middle, that is, there is still some connection work that has not been completed.

But there must be a point of detailed writing. Otherwise, if all the branch plots or daily routines are written in the middle, the content will be too flat and readers will not be able to remember anything after reading it. The result will be a continuous decline in subscriptions.

I temporarily pushed out the prepared copy of Crescent Moon and let it serve as the detailed writing point.

Judging from the data, the follow-up subscription before writing the copy was 70-80, and the follow-up subscription after writing was 40-50, which was cut in half. The data shows that this copy was a failure.

Gods, go away and change the map and you will lose the follow-up subscription. Don't talk about my small level 3 rush. I am mentally prepared to lose the follow-up subscription when I write a dungeon, but half of it must be a problem with the plot.

I analyzed the reasons.

First, this dungeon appeared too suddenly. I originally wanted the dungeon to serve as a support point for detailed writing and dilute the recent problem of the plot being too peaceful, so entering the dungeon was very abrupt.

Second, the content is a tragic story. Although the protagonist finally changed Han Yuerong’s ending, that was something that happened later. In this copy, the protagonist really can’t do much. He only laid out the foreshadowing of the branch plot of the Northeast Ma Xian and the protagonist’s gains. With the judge's pen, he has taken another big step towards his ultimate identity as the ghost-catching master.

Sad stories can make people remember the content and serve as a supporting point for this detailed writing, but they are definitely not pleasing to the eye.

In addition to the two reasons I mentioned above, insufficient foreshadowing and the tragic nature of the content, the other reason is that the setting is not very good. The protagonist enters the dungeon alone, which will make readers lack a sense of substitution.

It's like watching a new story.

This is the reason I summarized, please see if it is correct.

In the next second copy, I will 100% avoid the above flaws.

It must be exciting content, the protagonist must interact with familiar characters, new elements must be introduced, and preparations must be sufficient.

It can be regarded as a lesson learned.

Let me reveal a little bit about the content of the second dungeon. The elements involve soul-changing + suspenseful case of thrilling revenge + a fairy from the Northeast + a lot of pretentiousness by the protagonist.

The story takes place in the main world, around 2008, in the north of the mainland.

Tianjin + 2 locations in Northeast China.

If the first dungeon is depressing and tragic, then the second dungeon is full of fun and intense revenge, plus the foreshadowing of changing Han Yuerong's ending. There are two foreshadowings in the early stage, the death of Tan Zuchen + the plot of seizing the body.

After writing these two, we will officially start the second copy, which is expected to be in June.

Finally, let me make a comprehensive evaluation of the copy of Yue Yaer.

This copy is composed of the old movie material of "Crescent Moon" and the original plot of Temple of the Dog King. It is very complete, has a beginning and a tail, and has an ending. It incorporates several elements such as "Helter Skelter" and "The Fairy from the Northeast" (demon and exorcist). )inside.

The shortcomings are also obvious, including sadness, unhappiness, and lack of sense of agency.

I personally give this copy a 6.5.

The full score is 10 points.

At least it serves as a supporting point for the detailed description and a supporting point that people can remember. I think it barely achieves its purpose. It is better than continuing on the main world water branch and daily life.

In fact, when the author conceives or writes the replica world, he spends much more energy than the main world.

My personal evaluation of the copy of "Crescent Moon" is worse than the two branch content of Wuying in the main world and Boge Yuanjia Village, and slightly lower than the branch content of Tan Zuochen, but the sense of substitution is definitely not as good as these two branches.

I wrote a total of 15 chapters, totaling about [-] words, and wrote two relatively complete stories of Yue Ya'er and Dog King Temple. It also laid a hook for Han Yuerong's future destiny and paved the way for the branch line of Chu Ma Xian.

The first copy is [Pressure], the second copy is [Release], and the emotions are suppressed and released. The common core between the two copies is [Unable to calm down]. My plan is to use this core to adjust it. The content of the main world is too bland.

Anyway, this is how the plan was planned. Whether the author's purpose was achieved during the implementation process, or how much was completed, is another matter.

Every time the protagonist catches a ghost, a big mouth will pop up in his stomach, which is very strange. After coming out of the dungeon, he will directly use the judge pen in the future. He is both handsome and powerful. The soul beads have been upgraded twice in a row in the Yue Yaer dungeon. The many rewards released this time also pave the way for the content that follows.

That's about it.