Poverty story after Tokyo actress

Jiang Bai couldn't help but look at the heroine of the color flower painting a few more times, the black straight hair over the shoulders, comparable to the heroine of the book, the tall figure, the dream of becoming an actor...

Apart from Caihua's setting of the heroine's character as silly, white and sweet, this character has basically written the words "prototype Jiang Bai" on the link!

"...Okay, then your sister will be the prototype of the character..."

Jiang Bai glanced at Caihua who was restless, and now he seemed to understand why this girl didn't want him to read comics.

"Well... old lady, didn't you say that the most important thing about a role is the character? But I don't care much about character creation, and it's very difficult to make up a character... So, I will use your image, old lady, as a reference..."

Caihua’s answer is also well-founded. For a junior high school student who lacks life experience, it is indeed a bit difficult for her to create a lifelike character out of thin air. It is indeed a good way to create a prototype based on people that exist in life. point.

Seeing Caihua's nervous appearance, Jiang Bai smirked and said, "Khan, I thought what made you cringe so much, it's not something shameful, you can use my image as you like~"

"However... I am really surprised that you actually set my character as silly, white and sweet... Is this the image of my sister in your heart?"

Facing Jiang Bai's question, Caihua's body trembled slightly, and she rubbed her hands together involuntarily, showing her uneasiness: "Well... that's because, I think the girl comics on the market now like to use this kind of heroine Character setting...so..."

Well, follow the big trend, right? Jiang Bai shook his head helplessly. Just now she agreed with Caihua's idea of ​​choosing people around her as prototypes, but now she is a little speechless again.

"Then your creation is a bit inexplicable. You can't think of a suitable character design, and you choose to use me as a prototype, but on the most critical character, you fill it with the most routine silly, white and sweet... You are not the same as me. Is there any difference in designing a kawaii silly white sweet character yourself?"

"Well……"

"The most important thing about character design is not the appearance, but the personality! You only refer to my appearance to design characters, which is putting the cart before the horse. Besides your sister's high-quality skin, haven't you discovered the interesting soul inside?"

It was rare for Jiang Bai to be smug to herself, but her warning did not make Caihua suddenly enlightened. On the contrary, Caihua curled her lips and muttered in a low voice: "Who knows why you have changed so much... I don't know what your character is It looks like..."

In Caihua's view, Jiang Bai's personality has changed too much during this time. The old lady who used to be stupid, seems to have changed in recent months, her IQ has become higher, and her handling of things has changed. You are polite, you are mature, and you have unbelievably mastered superb acting and cooking skills...

It's not without reason that Caihua set her heroine as silly and sweet, because, in Caihua's previous impression, her sister was not very sweet, but Chunchun was a complete fool!

And the current elder sister is an elder who can't understand at all, and can't see through. She suddenly realized the supreme wisdom and majesty. She herself can't understand Jiang Bai's current character. How can she refer to Jiang Bai's now Character Creation Characters?

So for Jiang Bai's guidance, Caihua can only say, ah, yes, yes, you are right.

And Jiang Bai looked at her younger sister's obviously aggrieved expression, thought for a while, and seemed to understand the reason behind it, she glanced at the silly heroine in the manga, then glanced at her sister, and smiled lightly , asked: "Is this how I used to be in your heart?"

"Hmm..." Caihua was slightly startled, then scratched her cheeks in embarrassment, and finally bit the bullet and nodded...

"Well... well, forget it, a little flaw, it's not even a flaw, after all, routines, although they are clichés, can become routines, which in itself represents the greatest common denominator in the hearts of readers... If you can put the stupid If the element of Baitian is well formed, it is also a good work.”

Jiang Bai finally expressed his affirmation to Caihua, and then he stopped entangled in this topic and continued to read.

Well, it's really... a complete copy... The heroine's father died early, and the mother raised the heroine and her younger sister on her own. It is the Two-dimensional replica of the Miyano family.

Except that the heroine is very different from the current Jiang Bai, the rest are basically portrayed vividly. It seems that this girl's observation of the family environment is quite good.

For now, Jiang Bai's evaluation of this comic is still good, but as the perspective shifts from home to campus... the smile on Jiang Bai's face gradually begins to dissipate...

Because, this girl actually messed up her mandarin ducks in the comics!

Although...Jiang Bai knows that as a young girl, falling in love is essential, but you are too pretentious!

In less than a minute, Jiang Bai looked at the tortuous feelings of the heroine based on himself among the five men, saying that the feelings were flattered.

Caihua and Jiutiao, the two hairless little guys, obviously can't do this kind of multi-cornered reverse harem plot at all. If the description of the family in the first half is so detailed, then the second half is filled with the heroine's emotional scene Just how sloppy.

Ya'er, you two little hairy kids are already thankful for being able to write down their one-on-one relationship. Why do you have to challenge yourself to have a polyamorous relationship?And get entangled with five people at once!

After reading the painted content of Caihua, Jiang Bai closed the picture book with a headache. The front is fine, but the plot of the campus scene in the back really needs to be more ridiculous. It reminds Jiang Bai of a certain Jiang in his previous life Early Ancient Marie Soleil Humanities.

Now she really wants to ask her sister, where did you learn these inexplicable plots! ?

Caihua looked at Jiang Bai's darkened expression, and immediately realized that her creation had already pissed off her elder sister. In order to save her life, she quickly sacrificed the agreement that she had made at the beginning, and said with a smile: "Hey... that, old sister Ah, what you said, no matter how poor my painting is, I won’t be beaten or scolded. If a gentleman says it, it’s hard to catch up~”

"..."

a man of his words……

It’s okay if Caihua doesn’t talk about it, when it comes to this matter, Jiang Bai’s forehead immediately burst into a few wells, okay, no wonder you are timid, after a long time, you set your sister as a silly white sweet picture Mary Sue world fooling around!

Moreover, the most important thing is that you still know that this thing is not easy to see, so you dare to draw it.

"Hehe... yes, a gentleman...but your sister is not a gentleman, your sister is a woman! What are you drawing in your little girl's pictures! If you don't learn well at a young age, learn from Mary Su Leiwen, today I Just let you have a long memory!"

Said, Jiang Bai grabbed Caihua who was about to run away, hugged her by the waist, pressed her on the bed, then hugged Caihua's waist backwards, and turned her butt forward. This shameful action immediately made Caihua guess that the old man Sister's things to do!

"Ah! Sister, don't hit me! I'm a junior high school student! Give me some face!"

"Huh? When you were drawing comics, why didn't you give your sister some face~ You actually arranged your sister like this, I must teach you a lesson today!"

After finishing speaking, Jiang Bai slapped and played against the colored flower card Ansai waist drum!

"Clap! Clap! Clap!..."

Slapping on Caihua's buttocks like thunder, Caihua just felt insulted by her sister's big buttocks at such a big size. She didn't understand until Jiang Bai's Hercules palm slapped her buttocks. Humiliation, and death!

"Hmm! Take it easy! Old lady! Don't hit me! It hurts so much! Oh! Help! My sister is going to murder my own sister!!! Mom! Help me!"

Caihua's cry was so shrill and sharp that it easily passed through the door to the living room downstairs. Liuli and Makoto looked surprised at each other, and immediately rushed to the second floor to open the door of Caihua's room.

I saw Jiang Bai sitting on the bed and slapping Caihua's buttocks, and Caihua was like a piglet being picked up by a farmer, her body was arching crazily, crying and crying while arching, so miserable.

"What... what's wrong? Jiang Bai? Did Caihua do something bad?"

Liuli asked some distressed questions. They were all her daughters. Anyone who was beaten felt distressed, but she also believed that Jiang Bai would not punish Caihua casually. It should be that Caihua did something that should not be done.

Seeing that her mother was still leaning towards her, Caihua immediately asked for help: "Mom! Save Caihua quickly! My sister is crazy! I'm just a role model for that sister in the manga, and she will hit me after reading it! Woooooo ..."

But Jiang Bai stopped, sighed, and did not directly refute Caihua, but said to Liuli: "Mom, the drawing is there, you can see for yourself..."

"Oh Amount……"

Although Liuli was still very puzzled, she still followed Jiang Bai's suggestion and picked up the sketches on the ground and read them. At first, the expression on Liuli's face was quite bright, but as the number of pages read increased, The rather gratified expression at the beginning gradually subsided, and the usual gentle expression became more and more indifferent...

"Hmm...Jiang Bai as the heroine? Auntie, let me see too?"

Makoto on the side wanted to come over to take a look, but before he could, Liuli immediately closed the picture book, smiled awkwardly and said to her future son-in-law: "Ah~hahaha, it's okay, it's just a child messing around There is nothing to look at...Jiang Bai, remember to cover Caihua's mouth when you are playing for a while, this child has a loud voice, and it is not good for our family's image to let the neighbors hear..."

"?!!!No!!!"

Chapter 340 Five I Admit That I Had a Bad Attitude Before

"Well……"

Caihua pouted and looked aggrieved, clutching her little butt and sitting on the bed as if on pins and needles, while Jiang Bai was sitting on the ground, and began to revise Caihua's comics.

However, what happened to the plot... Jiang Bai fell into deep thought...

To be honest, this character who takes himself as the prototype makes Jiang Bai have a subtle impression no matter how you look at it, tsk, or...incorporate my own story as a prototype?

Admired, Jiang Bai's thoughts suddenly flashed, and his thoughts sprang up for a while, combined with his own experience, a comic outline was quickly constructed in his mind.

The heroine's existing silly, white and sweet character setting is naturally not easy to change. After all, the first chapter has already been published, so it is not suitable for changes, but the subsequent campus content is still a draft, and there is room for Jiang Bai to change it.

So, in the story after this, Jiang Bai began to make drastic changes.

The silly, white and sweet heroine who dreamed of being an actress was possessed by a late top international actor in an accident. From then on, she began a wonderful career of one body and two souls.

And the possession of this top international actor also brought strange changes to the heroine's campus life...

With his own personal experience, Jiang Bai described the details of the new body of the foreign soul very richly. For example, the aunt who experienced a girl for the first time was in pain. She chose to let the heroine change back and return to her mind to rest.

Confused by the pile of unnamed cosmetics on the dressing table, I don't know where to start. Although I want to occupy the magpie's nest, but I don't know how to be a girl at all, so I can only shut myself again and again back to the brain.

These are the real troubles that Jiang Bai experienced when he was just getting used to this body, so there is no obstacle in writing, and it can be said that he writes like a god.

And Caihua was also very surprised at what her elder sister was writing, so she held her skin and leaned over to take a look.

At first glance, she was attracted by Jiang Bai's setting, huh?One body with two souls?The heroine is possessed by a male ghost?Is this male ghost still a top actor?There are also these strange little daily routines that are not used to after the male ghost possesses the female body...

Woohaha~ It's too funny, isn't it!

And the character of this male ghost is also very pleasing, and a little inexplicably familiar, feeling... feeling... ah, just like my sister now!

A good setting, even if it’s just a beginning, does not require the author to write it, and it will make a lot of readers unable to help but make up various plots. This is how the second creation came about. A high-quality setting plus a bunch of Fans who like brainstorming.

And now such a setting thrown out by Jiang Bai made Caihua's mind, which was exhausted, immediately burst into a flood of ideas!

In fact, the setting of ghost possession is not uncommon in comics, and even a bunch of classic works have emerged, such as the pinnacle of chess competition comics, "Soul of Chess", which is a very classic ghost possession style.

However, sometimes, creation is like this, the elements are all there, it depends on whether you, the author, can think of combining them together to form a wonderful chemical reaction.

At least, so far, in Dongying's comics, there is no such setting as Jiang Bai.

Girl comics + actor themes + ghost possession + male and female twin souls, Jiang Bai's outline is a good demonstration for Caihua how to set the settings.

"Ayaka, I've laid out the setting for you just like this. What kind of outline can you come up with for this setting?"

Jiang Bai stopped writing, and sent the written background setting to Caihua, and Caihua looked at Jiang Baiqi's head, and said that it was difficult to finish the beginning, and her sister had already made a wonderful beginning for her comics. It can be said that this book The manga is already halfway there.

The general savings are based on how to steadily advance from this beginning.

"Hmm... let the male lead... and the female lead learn to act and talk about... love?"

"..."

Sure enough, he was still just a child, and he didn't have a mature arrangement for the plot. It felt too much for Caihua, a junior high school student with no hair to get started, to get started with long-form manga.

Jiang Bai sighed slightly, although Jiang Bai didn't fully think about the plot, but from the moment she wrote the setting, she already had a rough outline in her heart.

Jiang Bai intends to set a tone for this comic, which is growth and pursuit. Even as a girl comic, the subject matter cannot be completely limited to love.

There are so many things that can be written in a work, and love is just one of the ingredients, not less, but certainly not all of them.

According to Jiang Bai's own conception, the first acquaintance between the male lead and the female lead was contradictory. As a silly, sweet female lead, she didn't get the male lead's love from the very beginning. The male lead, as a successful actor, Has its own arrogance and edges and corners.

Although he has a good impression of the heroine who is too silly and sweet, he still doesn't like the character of the heroine who is too weak. Therefore, in the first stage of the plot, Jiang Bai's idea is to let the hero and the heroine gradually understand each other over time. each other, and accept each other.

At the same time, let the male and female protagonists change each other because of each other, and the female protagonist gradually becomes mature and stable, no longer a simple silly white sweet, and the male protagonist also begins to face up to the female protagonist, and truly regards her as an outstanding actor.

Of course, Jiang Bai just thought about the first part, and the ending between the male and female protagonists. She hasn't figured out how to fill in the rest of the content. As for the ending... Ah, yes, Jiang Bai decided not to be a human being and let the male protagonist In the end, the soul returned to heaven and earth, separated from the heroine.

Letting the most attractive character lunch or something is really addictive, Jiang Bai somewhat understands why so many screenwriters like to write high-popular characters to death~

In fact, this ending also has the intention of learning from "Soul of Go". In the soul of chess, Zuo Wei's departure allows the protagonist Xiaoguang to face himself, walk out of Zuo Wei's shelter, and move towards the highest point of Go with his own consciousness.

The same is true of Jiang Bai's thoughts. Jiang Bai is going to make a change in the heroine's awareness of performance. At first, the heroine loves acting because she likes it.But with the contact with the male lead, the motivation generated by this love gradually changed into love or pursuit of the male lead.

With the disappearance of the hero, the heroine slowly got out of the influence of the hero after being hit, and let her goal return to her original goal, which is the love of acting.

Although, in her heart, she still has the desire to pursue the achievements of the male lead, but with her hard work and maturity, she finally found that she fell in love with not only the male lead, but also the self who worked hard to chase her dreams...

That's right, in the final ending, Jiang Bai also wanted to pay tribute to Jin Min's millennium girl, ah, no, this world has not yet produced his own works, and the millennium girl does not exist yet, so it is not a tribute , hey~

Jiang Bai told his sister about his thoughts, and Caihua became more and more dumbfounded after listening to Jiang Bai's opinion.

What does it mean to compare goods and throw them away? Jiang Bai's story is based on growth and pursuit, and tells the story of the acquaintance, acquaintance, and separation between the male and female protagonists. It must have connotations, characters, and plots.The sentence in the final ending "I have fallen in love with the self who chased him..."

Even if she hasn't drawn it yet, Caihua can imagine how much this line will move and shock the readers when it is paired with the picture.

Compared with this, my cliché plot that only wants the heroine to fall in love with a ghost is really not worth mentioning. It really is a 360-degree explosion with no dead ends!

She can't wait to discuss with Jiutiao now. With the outline proposed by Jiang Bai, she believes that after drawing this manga, she will definitely make her famous!Maybe even win an award!

My older sister had become a talented treasure girl before I knew it!Caihua is more and more impressed by her sister's amazing talent, I'm sorry, sister, I admit that I treated you badly before, now, I want to give you a little padded jacket~

"Sister, why don't you write more~ If you feel uncomfortable, I'll give you a shoulder massage~"

Caihua has already made up her mind that she must dig out more electrons from her treasured sister. For this reason, she will only follow her sister's lead from now on!

Even my sister is right to spank myself!

"..."

Seeing Caihua change her attitude and become more attentive, Jiang Bai couldn't help but the corners of her mouth twitched. I remember... If you have to grope forward by yourself, it doesn't matter even if you are wrong, you said it yourself, right?

"Why do you start to be courteous now and ask me to write a script for you? Didn't you say that the script is not good, and it doesn't matter? Even if it is wrong, you have to go on by yourself~"

"Hehehe~ Sister, you are young and frivolous~ I admit that I spoke too loudly before, from now on, you can just read our comics! If there is something wrong, just tell me! We will change it immediately!"

"..."

Well, the difference in attitude between the front and the back is really big, and I have seen the cheekiness of my younger sister who is a big kid, but, after all, it is my younger sister, so I can't treat her badly.

So, under Caihua's massage and back massage, Jiang Bai comfortably wrote down the plot outline of a few comics for Caihua.

"Send the Buddha to the west, I'll give you the first plot, and the rest depends on how you and Jiu Tiao polish the lines and storyboards, don't let me pave the way for you, the rest of you all Something is going to go wrong, if you can't draw well like this, don't expect me to write plots for you in the future."

After all, Jiang Bai still won't give Caihua and the others everything. If they do that, it will not be Caihua and Jiujo's manga, but Miyano Ebai's manga.

Caihua took Jiang Bai's manuscript like a treasure, her trembling body could not conceal the ecstasy she had been enduring, her first published manga... it's stable!