I also know that you don't like to read these, so try to simplify and delete the words after coding.
So in fact, I am really not afraid of scolding, let alone criticism, which instead makes me think about whether I have problems in this area.
But what I'm most afraid of is repeated uninterrupted doubts from the same person.
As far as my current situation is concerned, I can’t write anymore. I don’t know how to write. Every time I write a paragraph, I will think about it. It doesn’t look good. Will it be said again?
It felt like no matter how I wrote it, it was wrong, and my state was getting worse and worse. I just sat in front of the computer, coded and deleted, and I didn’t know what I was writing.
It's not an exaggeration, it can be seen from my later and later updates.
Maybe it's because I'm really not suitable for this kind of subject matter. I can't grasp the rhythm well, and I'm too busy writing the stories I want to write, but I can't grasp the reader's mind.
It’s not bad, and it’s not targeted. My bad writing is a fact, so suggestions and criticisms are welcome, but if you think that the author doesn’t seem to have improved after you criticize and suggest, then curse in the comment area and delete it. Book it, or you will feel bad, and it just happens that it hasn't been put on the shelves yet, so you can stop the loss in time.
I understand that this is all caused by my own writing skills and insufficient plot, so I will not blame any readers, it is all my problem, there is no yin and yang, it is true, including posting this PS.
So I don't shy away from suggestions and criticisms, and I don't mean that I am the best in the world, and the books I write are not allowed to be sprayed.
After all, it is unrealistic for a book to have no bad reviews. If there are really no bad reviews, then it is a good novel that exploded to shock the world!Or it was almost sent and no one read it.
It's just that I'm really afraid of facing continuous criticism from the same person. I don't know why, but it's true, so it's very difficult, too difficult.
Because when I saw it for the first time, I would think about changing it, and when I saw it for the second time, I would think about whether it was correct and readjust. Shit.
And once I fell into this state, I was really tormented, probably because I wanted to change it but I didn’t know how to change it, I didn’t know how to write it, and I couldn’t write that feeling of ease.
Of course I knew that everyone wanted to see the slap in the face, so I slapped Long Aotian hard on the face, so I was really trying to adjust the narrative rhythm, just like Ouyang Shaoye, who had to spend tens of thousands of words before he had nothing.
But I deleted it directly, cut the mess with a quick knife, and sent him in. When he came out in the next two chapters, he found that the company was gone. He went to beg the protagonist for mercy and slapped him in the face, but in order to turn around, he could only please the protagonist. And Shen Shuxue also saw his true face, so naturally she gave up completely, and in the end Ouyang Shaoye also had a tragic ending.
But it seems to be counterproductive. I can only say that I don't have the writing skills to write cool essays, but I have the disease of cool essays.
I feel like I have written too much. In fact, I don’t want to post it, but I can’t stand it anymore. I feel that the more I write, the more difficult it is. Even when I wrote this chapter, I froze. I didn’t have any ideas at all. I don’t know. How to write, so I posted this as half a single chapter, because I still want to get rid of this state and continue to write.
I really don't have any ambiguity, I really don't complain, I really don't blame me, I really have nothing to tell you not to criticize me or don't suggest me, just criticize if you need to criticize, suggest if you want to suggest, and scold if you want to criticize, but if you feel that the criticism is over, you can make suggestions It's over, and the scolding is over, if the author still doesn't seem to be improving, then delete the book, don't worry about reading it, it's not worth it for an author like me!
So even if you don't scold me, I will scold you for you. This author writes without a brain, pure cerebral palsy.
I hope to see 99 people scolding me for hypocritical cerebral palsy in the post of this sentence, don’t think about what to say for me, otherwise I’m afraid that the post will be ripped off, so I will feel guilty and post a single chapter with me The original intentions are different, so just scold me in unison, so that I can sleep with peace of mind.
45. Did I let you go?
If it wasn't for his status, Jingcheng would almost have taken the initiative to fight.
After all, wouldn't it be a pleasure to see the hero and heroine of the original plot pinching each other!
And how could Jingcheng not know that Mo Qingzhu must be angry at this time. With her character, even if she has become a community of destiny with the hero in the future, she is still indifferent, let alone the hero is still in her eyes. just a kid
Definitely sentenced to death!
After much deliberation, Jingcheng still decided to fight the fire, after all, it was so interesting.
"Miss Mo, so this is your subordinate?"
At this time, Ye Li was still standing where he was, while Mo Qingzhu looked at him coldly.
He knew that Ye Li's character was a bit presumptuous, so he also considered that if he was in a hurry, he would create some farce here, so he didn't rush to ask the security guards to drive him away, but used forms to force him to leave voluntarily.
After all, it's fine if I'm alone today, but the key is that there is Jing Cheng by my side. If any farce happens, it will not only be a slap in the face to myself, but it will also affect my rating in her heart.
So listening to Jingcheng's words, Mo Qingzhu sighed inwardly, as expected.
Jingcheng slowly picked up the teacup and took a sip, his posture was so elegant that no one could pick out any faults, but the eyes he looked at Mo Qingzhu, apart from his own desertedness, seemed to be slightly questioning and thinking.
It was as if she was hesitating whether she was too arbitrary in choosing to win over Mo Qingzhu.
After all, from the performance of subordinates, we can actually see part of the abilities of their bosses.
Mo Qingzhu also understood this very well.
As a subordinate, Ye Li's performance this time will definitely reduce his points, not to mention that this is only the initial stage of communication between the two, and they have encountered such a problem, which will also affect the development below.
"Miss Jing, I am very sorry for this farce. I will deal with this matter and give you an explanation."
Since the matter has already happened, there is no need to explain it forcefully, the rest is to fix it, and Mo Qingzhu understands this very well.
When Jingcheng heard the words, he slowly turned the teacup, his eyes were lowered, and the aura of the superior was displayed to the fullest at this moment, making it impossible for people to figure out her thoughts.
See it!Ye Li was angry from the bottom of his heart, as expected, Mo Qingzhu's anomaly today had something to do with Jingcheng!
this woman!I didn't bother him!She even took the initiative to embarrass herself!
And in his heart, he also believes that Mo Qingzhu has something to hide, so now Mo Qingzhu's apologetic appearance, which seems to be a little humiliating, has automatically become coerced and threatened to him!
"What's coming at me! What's the point of threatening Mo?"
But before he could finish his words, a cup of hot tea was poured on his head.
The steaming brown tea trickled down his temples, and he was stunned. Even though his skin felt pain, there was no anger in his eyes, but disbelief.
Mo Qingzhu took back the teacup that was leaning forward, and when he got up, his perfect curves and tall figure were fully revealed.
"Go now, or leave a leg behind."
When Mo Qingzhu said this, even the coldness disappeared from her face at this moment, and what was left was only calm, and it just so happened that this was the most terrifying time for her.
After all, she is not a good character. Since she can speak, she will definitely do what she says.
Ye Li's nonsense really made her lose any patience.
Ye Li was stunned. He didn't understand why Mo Qingzhu suddenly became so ruthless. He had paid so much to her, and even cooked for her with his own hands. This is Shura's own cooking, and it is not easy to change it abroad. Things, in exchange for her treating herself like this?
Ye Li felt a little cold, even if Mo Qingzhu had other reasons, it was not the reason for her to treat herself like this!
"You'll regret it later!"
Ye Li wiped the tea off his face, his face was livid and gloomy, and he walked out of the office after speaking.
You have no idea what you're missing!Originally, I wanted to lead the Mo family to rise again, but it seems that you, Mo Qingzhu, have no luck!
He also planned to throw away the bento in the bag in his hand, after all, Mo Qingzhu is not worthy of eating!
But at this moment, another voice came out.
Compared with Mo Qingzhu's clear and clear voice, this voice is even more hoarse and magnetic, indescribably charming.
"Did I let you go?"
Jing Cheng lowered his eyes, still turning the delicate teacup slowly, and said indifferently without raising his head.
She didn't forget that she came here for another purpose besides meeting the conditions for checking the protagonist's destiny.
Yes, Ye Li arranged for the playful assassination that seemed to be just to scare Jingcheng some time ago.
The euphemistic name is that this is a meeting ceremony, announcing that I, Ye Li, have returned to the Celestial Dynasty, and all enemies will welcome the meeting ceremony of Shivering Bar.
She called from the bottom of her heart.
"system."
【Active life!Enjoy a healthy life! 】
"Check Ye Li's destiny."
[The strongest murderous hero Ye Li's life value: 100%]
Jingcheng said again.
"You once said that although the protagonist has the protection of destiny, it's not like I can't resist, right?"
【Yes, if the Destiny Point falls below 70%, it will cause serious damage to the protagonist, if the Destiny Point falls below 40%, it will cause fatal damage, and if it drops to 0%, it will cause death. 】
"Then you mean, even if Ye Li's destiny is 100% now, as long as I don't kill him or cause serious damage to him, I can do whatever I want, right?"
[In theory, this is the case, it only depends on the extent to which the host understands to do whatever he wants. 】
Jingcheng nodded secretly, since the only possible trouble has been clarified, there is nothing to think about.
It's okay, it's polite to meet, right? It's also rude to come but not to go.
"Why do you think that after breaking in and making a big fuss, and after treating me frivolously and disregarding my words, you can still leave gracefully. Is the so-called fearlessness because of ignorance?"
As soon as the words fell, Ye Li, who turned around and turned around, suddenly felt a chill that shot straight to the top of the sky before he could speak.
He lowered his head abruptly, and suddenly saw an extremely tiny red dot with weak light appearing on his chest.
He was targeted by a long-range sniper.
Anyone who thinks that Jing Cheng doesn't bring a bodyguard when he goes out is an idiot, and even if he doesn't, it's obvious that he doesn't.
"What do you want!"
His face turned ugly, this feeling of being threatened made him very uncomfortable, after all, he is the Shura of the underground world!
Although he was quite sure that even if the long-range sniper shot, he would be able to dodge, but he couldn't be sure how many points were holding him.
Seeing this, Mo Qingzhu didn't say a word, after all, it gave Ye Li a chance from the beginning.
Hearing that Jingcheng sipped the slightly sweet tea with a special taste, he thought about it and said.
"You seem to be good at fighting, right?"
After she finished speaking, she seemed to have thought of something interesting, and said to Mo Qingzhu with some teasing in her eyes.
"Call the security guard at the door in."
Mo Qingzhu probably vaguely guessed what Jingcheng wanted to do.
Soon, the security guard at the door came in.
He was forcibly twisted by the arm of the uniform just now, and it is still very painful now, so there is even more resentment in the eyes that dare not speak out when looking at Ye Li.
At this moment, Jing Cheng said.
"Fight with him, and if I win, I will let you go, and I will also give you a bright future and recommend you to my family."
Hearing this, Ye Li was shocked!
how come!Have you exposed yourself?Otherwise why would she say that?
After all, I only came in after subduing this bodyguard just now, so the battle was decided before it even started!It is impossible for her not to know!
Then why do you still have to say that if you win, you will send yourself to her family to find a job?What is her family?That was his life and death enemy, the Jing family!What's the difference between this and going deep into the tiger's den!If his identity is exposed, he will undoubtedly die!
So has Jingcheng already seen through himself? ?impossible!
In short, whether she is interested in talking casually or probing, I can't agree!This fight cannot happen!
He gritted his teeth, resisted the humiliation and lowered his head.
"I'm sorry... I hope you don't remember the villain's mistakes! Forgive me this time!"
If this matter gets out, everyone who is familiar with him will definitely be extremely shocked!Because that war-loving Shura would voluntarily avoid the battle someday!
For some reason, Jing Cheng waved his finger, and immediately two faint red lights appeared on Ye Li's chest.
"I don't like repetition."
The smile on the corner of her mouth was a little teasing.
"And you better hope I don't repeat myself."
Hearing this, Ye Li's face was extremely ugly, and even started to look gloomy.
If the current situation is close to Jingcheng subduing her in an instant and taking her as a hostage, he can still leave here.
After all, according to the investigation data, Jing Cheng is powerless, and the bodyguards who just came in can be completely ignored.
But the key point is that if this is done, revenge will be hopeless!
Because if he attracts the attention of the Jing family and finds out that he is the orphan of that incident, he will definitely kill him!At that time, we can only flee abroad, and no matter how strong the foreign power is, it will not be able to affect the country at all!
So I can only continue to pretend!As a security guard, even though he is a little capable in the face of this situation, it is impossible not to be afraid!
But even if he knew this, for the sake of self-esteem, Ye Li couldn't pretend to be a dick like he used to!
But he stood still, which didn't mean the bodyguard didn't move either.
After all, even though he was a little afraid of Ye Li, he obviously didn't dare to defy Jing Cheng, who made his boss, Boss Mo, stand by and say nothing.
He stepped forward, gritted his teeth, still made a fighting style, and punched Ye Li's stomach fiercely.
Originally, the bodyguards were ready to be subdued by the backhand, but unexpectedly... hit?
Ye Li endured it without saying a word.
After all, he absolutely cannot win this battle!It's okay for Jingcheng to vent his anger out of interest, but what if it's a deliberate temptation?Wouldn't he jump into the pit of fire if he won?
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