Tears slowly flowed down his cheeks, the young man was in great pain and grievance.Obviously, I was by my senior sister's side and accompanied her for two years.Senior sister still doesn't believe his behavior?
As early as when his senior sister led him into the fairyland, he regarded his senior sister as the only salvation in this life, no matter how insignificant the things he did, he would do his best to repay her kindness.
Whether it is the sweet-scented osmanthus cake full of his own heart, or the Qinglan flower that is extremely precious to women, he is willing to make and get it, no matter how dangerous it is, he is willing to do it for the sake of his senior sister.
The senior sister didn't let her use Broken Star anymore, so she didn't need it anymore, and used Gu Hong as her special skill instead.
But Broken Star was taught by Mr. Lin. In his own heart, Mr. Lin is no different from his grandfather, and he also taught him his master... Abandoning Broken Star is also equivalent to discarding what the master taught him, and more importantly Yes, it is also equivalent to discarding the memories between him and Mr. Lin...
I am so obedient, I am not disobedient to my senior sister, and I am a good and well-behaved junior.
But why, why did she refuse to listen when I begged my senior sister to believe in me? He didn't do anything wrong to his senior sister. This is a fact, and he has a clear conscience.
But the senior sister didn't believe him, which negated everything about him.So what is the significance of his doing these things here for two years?What's the point of embarking on a fairy road by yourself...?
The young man was in a daze, and fell into the quagmire of self-doubt. Luo Shuiling's sharp words at that time pierced the young man's heart like a sharp knife, and it was extremely painful.It also destroys his world.
The howling cold wind hit his face, which was a little painful, as if the senior sister's slap hadn't finished yet, and the touch still remained on his cheek.
He felt a little tired, so he just lay in the snow, dissipating all the spiritual energy in his body, and letting the cold erode his body.
Even if this is just a simple torture of the body, it seems that only in this way can slightly relieve the pain in the heart
He really wanted to just lose consciousness like this, never wake up again, never have to face these things again.
...........
The young man was in a daze, feeling like he was about to fall into endless darkness.He has no home, he has been abandoned, and he is alone, without any care.
Leaving like this seems to be the best choice.
(no worries, no worries....?)
Yun Hao was thinking chaotically in his mind, and the surroundings seemed to be plunged into darkness. He was sitting alone, was he really carefree?
A piece of cinnabar red paper suddenly appeared in front of him, the black writing on it was so beautiful.What's this?His consciousness is too chaotic to distinguish clearly.
But when he looked at the paper, it seemed that an old man's entrustment sounded in his ears, and his appearance was so sincere and loving.
"Hao'er, I entrust Yu'er to you, you must treat her well."
Yu'er...?Who is Yu'er...?
He tried his best to remember, who is this old man?Who is Yu'er in his mouth?Why did he give her to himself?These questions are constantly erratic in the darkness, but they exist all the time.
Yun Hao thought for a long time, but still couldn't remember.He was distressed and didn't know what to do.After a while, he looked at the scarlet paper and picked it up gently. Although the handwriting on it was beautiful, he couldn't read it clearly.
He turned one side, and there were not many handwritings on the other side, only two, and the writing was very large.The handwriting is not beautiful, but solemn and regular.
He looked at it carefully, and after an unknown period of time, he saw the two words, which were "Marriage Letter"...
Marriage letter....?
Yun Hao suddenly remembered, the surrounding darkness disappeared, replaced by scenes of warm memories.The old man taught himself patiently, and the young girl once called her senior brother sweetly.
That kind old man is Mr. Lin, who taught him as his master, and that Yu'er is his junior sister, and also the fiancée that Mr. Lin made for him.
I am not alone, I still have concerns.He can't just leave like this, if he leaves, what will my junior sister do?
Elder Lin said that in this world of cultivating immortals where the weak prey on the strong, a female junior sister is very dangerous, and she needs someone to protect her.
Yun Hao opened his eyes, and it snowed outside at some point, he was covered by a thick layer of snow, and he slept for an unknown period of time.He resisted the cold and soreness in his body and sat up.
He remembered that he hadn't gone to see his junior sister today. No matter what the situation was, he would go to see his junior sister every day.So many things happened today, and the impact on him was so great that he almost forgot.
Yun Hao recalled for a while, and temporarily buried the void in his heart, he didn't want his junior sister to find out the abnormality.I accompany my junior sister to make her happy, not to cause trouble to her.
He tried to pull a smile on his face, hoping to be as usual, but found that it was extremely stiff.
Yun Hao looked up at the sky, and it was about to dim. He was a little anxious in his heart, and kept rubbing his face, hoping to be more natural.
After a while, he took out another set of clothes from the Zongmen Token.Looking at the white clothes, Yun Hao was a little dazed.The pain came from the heart again and spread all over the body.
This is the shirt that his senior sister gave him. He has grown up a lot in the past two years and it no longer fits him well, but he did not throw it away, but put it in a token and treasured it.
Holding back his tears, he gently put the white clothes back, and went to look for another one.After a while, Yun Hao no longer looked embarrassed before, and his clothes became tidy again.
It's just that his handsome face is stiff, and if you look carefully, you can still see that his eyes are slightly red and swollen.
"call......."
Yun Hao took a deep breath, and tried to say hello to the surrounding air with a smile.
"Sister-in-law."
After he confirmed that he had covered up well, he walked towards the west peak step by step with heavy steps.
.............
The familiar cave was right in front of his eyes, but the young man seemed blind and at a loss at the moment. He tried his best to calm down and knocked on the gate of the cave calmly.
Obviously I came here yesterday... but now the mood is completely different.His nose was sore, and he felt that after only one day, everything changed.
crunch......
The door was slowly opened, and instead of the happy tone of the junior sister that I imagined, a girl with a bit of resentment asked softly in a voice full of complaints.
"Brother, you didn't come to see me yesterday, but you are willing to come today."
Testimonials on shelves (please watch carefully!)
Oops, it's about to be put on the shelves, hehehe.
I feel like I have a lot to say, but I really don't know what to say at this time, so I'm on the right track anyway.
How should I put it, it feels like time flies. I was planning "Youth" in January, but I actually started writing it on March 1st.
Let me first talk about why I wrote the book "Youth". In fact, this stems from a dream of mine in high school, which was to write a novel that only belonged to me before the age of 20. Later, I grew up slowly and reached the age of 19. .But this dream never came true.
Then in the second half of 21, I came into contact with pineapple buns. I felt that this platform was very suitable for me to read, and I gradually became addicted to it.Later, after reading a lot of sick novels, I wondered if I should write one too?At that time, I remembered the wish I wrote when I graduated from high school, and I was only half a year away from the age of 28, so the prototype of this book was gradually born.
The theme of the book is Xianxia, and the genre is love.There is a reason why this is the case.
I have read many books about chasing husbands and crematoriums, and many of the heroines failed to get together with the hero in the end. This made me very sad. Why can't the two be together?Why can't we explain each other clearly?Even if you leave in the end, you have to say goodbye.
With this inexplicable sadness, I set the tone of this article.The process of chasing a husband is very bumpy, but the ending is the best.Every character can have the best love and all of their wishes will come true.In the end everyone was happy.
Chinese people always like happy endings in their bones. Although people have complained about the old-fashioned, I just like it if I can't bear it.
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Then let’s summarize the slots of “Youth” so far.
In fact, I have worked very hard to grasp the plot and the emotions of the characters. Every time I write, I always think, what kind of mood will the characters feel at this time?How would he handle this situation?
I grind it finely, but the phenomenon of Cavin still appears.What is more criticized now is the chapter "Seed" and the chapter "Misunderstanding". "Seed" jumped the time too abruptly, and then acted as a riddle, confusing everyone, which I didn't notice.Later, I read it carefully and found that it was indeed the case.
"Misunderstanding" is not enough foreshadowing. I am a little anxious and want to rush to promote the plot, which makes this chapter seem to have mixed reviews and polarized reviews.Later, I studied carefully and found that I did not explain many things clearly.
For example, Ling'er's Yuan Yin, and Ling'er's feelings towards Yun Hao.Especially in terms of feelings, I only focused on Ling'er's anger. I couldn't express her pain and despair well.There are reasons for this.That's why Grandpa Yinxuan made a lot of complaints in the comment area.
Now it seems that I did not handle it very well.About "Misunderstanding"
I will probably revise it as appropriate before next week. I hope that if you are patient, you can go back and look at it to understand Ling'er's mood at that time.
I'm a person who pursues perfection, but I can't be perfect, so I want to do everything well, hehe.
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Next, let’s talk about my feelings for the characters in the book.
Everyone seems to think that Mr. Lin's portrayal is very good?In fact, there is a prototype. It was a great-grandfather in my mother's family. His grandson, my uncle, was physically disabled.
When he was alive, he always did a lot of farm work in order to save more grains. After he left, my uncle could not work hard for rice. He is really a good elder!
As for Ling'er and Yu'er, I created them myself.They represent my two ideal types.One has a cold and arrogant personality, and the other is gentle and elegant.They are both my favorite children.
But if you have to say who is my favorite?Hehehe, please guess this grandpa. (dog head)
I really have a deep preference for that character, and poured all my sympathy into her. (But don’t worry everyone, my preference will not affect the direction of the plot. What should be or what should be.)
Let’s talk about Ling’er first.Her setting is a lonely, indifferent genius woman.But she lacks the ability to love others, and she doesn't know how to face up to her own feelings. She is similar to Aojiao, but more serious than Aojiao.
She is used to dividing the relationship between people into upper and lower, and she must be on the top, because only in this way can she have enough sense of security.She doesn't trust anyone except Master, she only trusts herself.As for why it is like this, there will be some revelations in the following chapters.
The environment of Ao Jianzong shaped her habits, which also caused her love to be deformed.But this is not the reason for her to hurt someone, so she will pay the price for this deformed love.
If the grandparents can bring her into the environment in which she grew up and experience her behavior, maybe they will change Ling'er to a certain extent.
After that is Yu'er, who is set up as a sister next door, with a quirky personality, but also has a gentle and elegant side.
In terms of relationship, she is the most mature and resourceful of the three.Don't think that Yu'er is insidious, in fact, I support Yu'er's approach the most.
Love is inherently selfish, and it can be earned by oneself, so why rely on others?As long as the means are aboveboard, I think it is reasonable.
At the same time, Yuer is also the most emotional.She has identified Yun Hao, and has followed her all her life. She has already identified herself as the unmarried daughter-in-law of the Yun family.
Finally, there is the third heroine who has not yet appeared. Here is a reminder that she and Yun Hao are close relatives, and they are Yun Hao's only relatives in this world in a certain sense.
I mentioned her a little bit in the previous chapters, but I don’t think you can find it, grandpa, because it’s too small, hehehe.
Then her appearance is also the most explosive, it can only be said that it is not good for women to tear up (save life later)
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Next, let me talk about my feelings about writing a book in January.It's really not as easy as it seems in the symbol. I often encounter the phenomenon of Cavin, and every sentence of the reader's grandfather's comments touches my heart.
I always feel that as an author, I should accept everyone's criticism openly, which is my duty.
I always feel embarrassed to praise my comments, but I feel very honored to be affirmed by my grandparents.
Criticizing my comments would make me sad, but I still accepted it with a smile. Thinking from another angle, grandpa’s criticism of me is also an area where I should improve. Thinking about it this way, I feel that the next chapter should be written better.
"Youth" has been written so far, I have only deleted three comments.Two of them were personal attacks, such as scolding me directly.There is another one that I accidentally deleted by mistake, and then I replied to the grandpa in time. I don’t know if the grandpa saw it, I was very flustered. (I don't rule out the possibility that my grandpa will be deleted. In fact, I just want to reply.)
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Next, I would like to thank a grandpa in particular.Temper.He tipped me some gifts and words of encouragement when I was at my lowest and most difficult, which made me so flattered and felt affirmed for the first time! (No other meaning, simply thank you!)
Obviously at that time, I could hardly write any more, and I looked at the collection with anxiety every day.A little bit rises, a little bit falls.At that time, there were only about a hundred grandpas who collected my books. Hehe, there are many, many, many of them now.
Sending charcoal in the snow makes my heart feel warm.It also strengthened my belief that I want to write it down. For this, I am really grateful to him.
There are other grandpas, like (I forgot what his name is, just bring the name of the qq group), Qingyang, Baiying, Fanxing, and Cixiong (grandpa told me at the time that I was a potential stock, Now I can always see my grandpa, you read my book, I’m so happy), YBQ, a cat, Xingli (your full name is too difficult for me to type, so I will just replace it) Jiaomao (talk more in the group , I want to hear your opinion, dog head) sick love, white clothes, dull, big teacher kll, and other grandparents whose names I can’t remember, but who have always supported me, thank you for your support all the way, with you , I can get to the present step by step.Thank you so much!
Finally, I would like to thank my editor-in-charge, aunt.As a newcomer writing a book for the first time, I have been recommending it to me constantly. I am really grateful for believing in me so much.Also, can you tell me in the group whether you are a man or a woman? (I hope you are a sullen middle-aged man)
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Finally, it's about to hit the shelves.
It is inevitable that I will say goodbye to some grandpas, but I still thank you for your support and company along the way. If one day, you can remember that there was a book you read and felt that it brought you joy, this is mine. pleasure.
I have been saving manuscripts for the past few days, and I have not been able to take a good rest.After writing this chapter and posting a testimonial, I will be able to sleep well after coding the last chapter.
In the following chapters, there is Yu’er’s big counterattack. To be honest, I cried while writing, and it resonated. Yu’er is such a good child, where can I find it. (I'm really touched, it turns out that writing a book can also write and cry)
Then there will also be the revelation of the senior sister's life experience, and her state of mind after knowing the truth, and why she can't detect Yuanyin, there will be corresponding explanations.
Then I would like to thank my grandparents who are still willing to continue to accompany me. It is a very happy thing to be able to go forward with you all the way.
The final statement, "Youth" is my first book and also my dream. I will do my best to complete it, and I will not hold any idea of just bad money.
I have grown up slowly, I am not young, and I will start work in a year and a half. It turns out that the fairy world is getting farther and farther away from me. An account of myself.
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