The Injured Teenager Refused the Love of the Blackening Fairy

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A few days later, Yun Hao Yujian stood high in the sky.The breeze came slightly, caressing his snow-white hair.

He looked at the crowds of kneeling figures in the city, his eyes sank slightly, and his mood was slightly bitter and complicated.

After realizing his true intention that day, he did not leave, but returned to the village.

But the villagers who had treated him wonderfully, after seeing him again, were full of fear and alienation.

Even the closest brother, Li Dun, was extremely nervous, and his words were full of suspicion and strangeness.

He was stunned, with unreasonable loneliness and bitterness lingering in his heart, the young man slowly realized one thing.

He is a fairy...and the young man is a man of the secular world.

They... are different after all...

In the end, he took the rest of the villagers and found a town.

The fire burned their houses and destroyed their food. If you don't help them... those villagers may really die...

He found the city lord of this town, and when the city lord saw him, he quickly knelt down and refused to get up for a long time.

With an indifferent face, he explained his reason for coming.Find a place for this group of people in the mountains.

They should not be oppressed as long as they do not do evil.They are under his protection.

For the first time, he used his identity to put pressure on the city lord.

In the end, the city lord nodded repeatedly, expressing that he would definitely make these people live well.

"call........."

Yun Hao raised his eyes slightly, and stopped looking at Li Dun and the others.He has done his best, and the rest is up to them.

Thinking of this, he no longer hesitated, and flew towards the direction of the Proud Sword Sect while controlling the spirit sword.

(Yu'er...wait for me!)

One volume finished

Comments at the end of a volume

The story of a volume probably comes to an end here.To be honest, I have been very tired and exhausted in writing these days.

Tell me what I think.

I used a lot of pen and ink to describe Ling'er is very rainy.Judging by everyone's reactions, the two of them probably managed to shape up successfully.

Then I plan to use the rest of the pen and ink to shape the hero.

Grandpas, do you still remember the 2w words I said at the beginning to finish a volume? I'm sorry I couldn't do it.

The reason why I said this at the beginning was actually because I planned to cut this part of the plot.He planned to let Yu'er find the male lead directly, and then bring the male lead back to the sect.

It was decided at the beginning, so I wrote it like this.

But the next day, when I actually took the pen and wrote more than 1000 words, I was really uncomfortable and felt that I couldn't do it.

In doing so, the male protagonist is always in the situation of being helped before he regains his strength.

In his heart, at most, he has changed his feelings for his senior sister.A really weak temperament cannot be changed.This is not the hero I want to portray.

What I want to do is to overthrow Yun Hao's inferiority complex and cowardice that have been deeply rooted in his bones for 18 years, and let him understand responsibility and strength.And the responsibilities of being a man.

Because this is the realm of comprehension, a world where the weak prey on the strong.With his character, let alone protecting others, it is even difficult for him to survive himself.

So I thought about it and decided to keep this plot again.

I have always believed that real growth is accomplished by oneself.Only by being alone, through suffering and suffering, and coming out of that predicament, can you truly be reborn.

That's the real thing, changing yourself from the bottom of your heart.

Yun Hao's character is inseparable from his childhood experience, and also inseparable from Li Yue's teaching.

In such a high-pressure environment, he should have grown into a vicious, snobbish villain.

But he has a good mother. Li Yue planted the seeds of kindness in his young heart, and guided him continuously for 12 years, making him grow into a normal person.

But in this environment, Li Yue alone is not enough.

Yun Hao is still somewhat crooked.He is kind, but weak, he is grateful, but indecisive.

Let's talk about Yun Hao's feelings for Ling'er.

The 16 years of tragic experience made him yearn for that ray of redemption.That's why he humbled Ling'er to that extent in the early stage.

For him at this time, Ling'er was like his second mother.Children are born with a sense of closeness to their mothers, let alone a child who lacks love since childhood.

His feelings for Ling'er are extremely complicated.There is the longing for the mother, the admiration for the powerful opposite sex, and the incomparable gratitude to the benefactor.

These feelings are intertwined in his heart, they are very distinct, but they are closely intertwined.

That's why he tolerated it again and again, and retreated again and again, until he retreated to the end, to the point where there was no way to retreat.

His real heartbreak for Ling'er was after he was caught by Moxiu.At that time, he begged extremely, hoping that Ling'er would deny what Zhou Juan said.

He is not afraid of death, but he is afraid that what he has done for two years is meaningless.

That's why when he met Ling'er's cold eyes (pretending) his heart gradually became desperate.It turns out that he is really just a tool man who can be discarded casually

Thus, Yun Hao, who loved Luo Shuiling deeply, died.

Since then, his feelings for Ling'er have come to an end.

Let's talk about his feelings for Yu'er.

To be honest, Yun Hao really treated Yu'er as his younger sister from the beginning.

Even if Mr. Lin was stubborn and asked him to enter into a marriage contract with Yu'er, he still didn't treat Yu'er as the opposite sex.He agreed to Mr. Lin only because Mr. Lin had treated him as much as a mountain.

So why did Yu'er gradually enter Yun Hao's heart?

In fact, in the past two years, as Yu'er and Yun Hao have gradually matured, Yun Hao has already treated Yu'er as the opposite sex a little bit.

But it's not enough, the proportion of the younger sister has always overwhelmingly suppressed the proportion of the opposite sex.

The first time Yu'er walked into Yun Hao's heart was at the moment when Yun Hao was driven out by Ling'er, she held Yun Hao's hand and said that she would never let go.

This sentence almost broke Yun Hao's defense.At that time, Yun Hao needed support too much, and Yu'er just walked in and told him that she was by his side.

However, the real lore was on that snowy night.When Yun Hao felt the most helpless and lonely, when he least wanted others to see him in distress.

Yu'er came, and she confessed to Yun Hao with her tenderness and the most straightforward words (but Yun Hao was so stupid that he didn't understand).

She didn't ask Yun Hao why he became like this, but used her small arms to shield her sweetheart from the wind and rain, and promised her sweetheart the home he wanted most.

It was at this moment that she succeeded, and she walked into Yun Hao's heart.For the next month, he worked steadily and steadily, slowly imprinting his shadow in the deepest part of Yun Hao's heart.

But at this time, although Ling'er was hurt in Yun Hao's heart, it still accounted for more than half of it, so Yun Hao didn't realize for a while that he was actually attracted by this smiling girl.

Therefore, when Yun Hao was killed, when he was most desperate and painful, the last thing that flashed in his mind was the face of his junior sister.

Alright, finally let me talk about how I want to change Yun Hao.

I divided Yun Hao's change into two stages.One is a change in emotion and the other is a change in personality.

These two changes complement each other, but the most important thing is character. Yun Hao's current character has changed to be strong and responsible.

He faced up to all the experiences of the past two years, whether sad or happy.He faced it bravely.

So, he slowly discovered that the girl who had been silently supporting him behind his back.

The tenderness of the girl in the past surged, which inspired Yu'er's imprint in his heart. He fully understood how much he owed that girl.

Having experienced the cruelty of the world of cultivating immortals, he is no longer a child.He understands the truth of the law of the jungle, and the silly white sweetness he used to be is gone forever.

This kind of him can barely afford the prerequisite for protecting a family.

That's why he in the second volume is a real man.

.............

Tell me about myself.Writing these past few days is really uncomfortable. I have cried countless times in the author group, how should I write the autistic hero, this change is so difficult.

Then under the fear of this mentality and the difficulties in reality.Ushered in my first real defense break.

I wrote Chapter 84 "A Quiet Life" in order to transition to the last barrel of gunpowder.Then in this seemingly peaceful chapter, I was inexplicably overwhelmed.

This really caught me off guard, because at the time I really couldn't understand why the grandpas saw junior sisters as toys and spare tires.

Just this wave, compared to scolding me for licking the dog, scolding Yun Hao for licking the dog, is even more defenseless.Because I had the corresponding psychological preparations before, but I didn't have this chapter, and I still don't understand it.

So at that time, I was cracked... I can only say that I am still immature, facing unexpected situations, I am not as calm as I imagined.

Then I didn't read the comments for the next few days, because I was afraid of being hit and lost my confidence.So I didn't reply to many grandpa's comments, even monthly ticket rewards, so I'm really sorry.

Then I also put the corresponding explanation on this in the first long comment.Grandpas, if you are interested, you can go and have a look.

And one last bit. Now that "Youth" is written, I will give it a score of 7.Generally speaking, at least I have no regrets, and I have written everything that should be written and expressed.

Although the expression may not be very good, but at least according to my meaning, it is completely written out, which is very good.

And about the rhythm issue, I actually think it’s okay? I analyzed it, and grandpas think it’s watery and rubbish.Most of the reason should be that my update is too slow. (Because the editor-in-chief has been urging me to code quickly!)

After all, one chapter a day does seem uncomfortable.

But I can't help it. I'm overwhelmed by my studies (eight in the morning and six dogs in the evening, my hand is still disabled), and there may be some unexpected situations on Saturdays and Sundays (meetings at the dang branch, and completion of exams and homework). Do my best.

Another reason is that this week, Ling'er and Yu'er didn't make an appearance. I think this is also an important factor.

But I can't help it, because I have to use all the remaining plots in the first volume to shape the male protagonist, otherwise the male protagonist will not be able to stand up in the second volume, and the change of character will appear abrupt.

Last but not least, I want to say something (important).

The emotions of each character in this book are very complex and changeable. When you are reading, please turn off the perspective of God.

Substituting the character, experience, and environment of the character to look at the behavior of the character, and find out a reasonable reason from it, so that you can probably understand it gradually.Although it is more brain-intensive.

But after trying to understand the logic, isn't it also very cool.

Then tomorrow, the day after tomorrow, I should update a few extra chapters.I know that the grandparents are looking forward to the story of Yun Hao returning to the sect, but there is no way, for the sake of the whole, please bear with it for now.

The plot outside the episode is also very important. I plan to write three chapters, which will be used to tell respectively what happened to Ling'er, Yu'er, and the third heroine during the hundred days.

Make a foreshadowing transition for the second volume.

The long road is long and the sword is the company. At 01:30 in the middle of the night, good night everyone.

Title of the second volume: If you ask what love is in the world, it will teach you how to live and die (no knife, no death, don't be nervous)

Also, don't keep thinking about the plot as be, do grandpas like eating knives that much? Our book is he, don't panic.

episode one lonely

Proud Sword Sect, somewhere deep...

Gululu......

The flaming magma, under the infusion of spiritual veins, exudes a burning feeling that is soul-stirring.

In this dark environment, layer after layer of flame waves would be set off every once in a while.The magma slapped fiercely on the surrounding rock walls, cutting off all life in this place.

However, in such a seemingly annihilated Jedi.A woman, however, seemed to be walking through the air, standing on top of the tumbling waves of flames.

But if you take a closer look, you will find that this woman seems a little weird.Her dress, which was supposed to be neat, was a little tattered, revealing a lot of spring.The three thousand blue silk also lost its support, casually draped over her shoulders, looking slightly embarrassed.

She didn't seem to be standing in the air, but was trapped by something, hanging in the midair, being punished by the tyrannical magma...

A "rope" hangs down from the top of the invisible end, tightly binding one of the woman's jade hands.

It exudes a faint brilliance, suppressing the spiritual power in the woman's body, leaving only an extremely rare part for her to supply her body's needs.

Gulululu......

Another burst of waves surged, and the burning magma, with unbearable heat, stuck to the woman's snow-white skin.

hiss hiss~~

White smoke floated from the place covered with fiery red paste, it corroded the delicate skin like a blood-sucking fly.

The flesh and blood quickly dissipated and shriveled, and the white bones were exposed to the air.The magma in this depth has special spiritual power, and even a cultivator will feel unbearable pain if he gets a drop of it.

Under the unbearable torture even a monk in the distraction period, the woman only twitched her limbs slightly, but then became unresponsive, as if the devoured flesh and blood had nothing to do with her.