Ninja school teacher, I can become stronger by teaching...

But as a protagonist of Xiaoju who likes happy endings, can Mu Yue always be this kind of person?

Obviously, no.

In the plot I designed, Mu Yue initially came into contact with the disciples just to covet the rewards from them. He wanted to get the rewards to earn gold coins and then become stronger to save his life.

But as they got along, Mu Yue was moved by the sincere feelings of the disciples. Her mentality gradually changed, and she wanted to protect these disciples from the bottom of her heart.

Mutual redemption is the theme I set for my disciples and the protagonist.

Mu Yue changed the miserable lives of his disciples, and the disciples used sincerity to heal a lonely traverser who was about to close his heart.

Although Xiaoju thought his idea was good, it was very difficult to actually write it down.

In the early days, because the protagonist only acted for profit, many people commented that he was not worthy of being a teacher, that he was too selfish, or that he was too dark.

It was the first time that Xiaoju was criticized for writing a book about a protagonist, and she was completely stunned. In addition, the performance was not good at the time, so Xiaoju could only try to downplay this aspect of the characterization.

Then something went wrong with the character transformation, and problems arose in the plot of the Rain Country Ninja Master.

In the Xiaoju outline, Mu Yue's change of mentality is a very important thing. After completing the mutual redemption with his disciples, Mu Yue no longer looks at the ninja world from the perspective of a time traveler, and no longer looks down on the ninja world from the perspective of an outsider.

Only in this way can Mu Yue feel the cruelty of the ninja world more deeply, recall the education he received, recall the great men he respected, and finally decide to change the ninja world and make it peaceful.

One wrong step leads to another, which results in the failure of the Rain Country Ninja Master arc. However, this is an important plot that runs through the main storyline. Xiaoju can only delete the Rain Country plot as much as possible to keep the reader reading.

It is for this reason that Xiaoju has always had the idea of ​​writing a sequel to Mu Yue without the cheat code, so as to make Mu Yue's image more full.

Instead of some disciple's grandfather, there are emotionless work machines and cameras.

The problem of beating Uchiha Madara is not as serious as that of the ninja master, it is just not that good, not bad.

The reason why it is so impressive is that Uchiha Madara is the core BOSS of the main world. He was laid out for a long time, but was killed in only 2.7 words.

Many readers said that it was sloppy, that the death was too easy, that the content was not rich enough, and that the emotions were not fully released.

Xiaoju reflected on it afterwards and realized that this was indeed the case. The content could be richer.

The reason for this, apart from problems with my writing, is actually because I am easily influenced by comments.

When most of the comments are saying that the villain should be killed quickly, Xiaoju will subconsciously speed up the process.

This has both advantages and disadvantages. The advantage is that it is easy to know what readers want to read, but the disadvantage is that problems can easily arise. After all, readers are not professional authors, and if they are not firm in their own ideas, they are prone to misjudgment.

I hope that in the future Xiaoju can become an author who can both absorb opinions and stick to his own ideas.

As for the four parallel world wars, in my opinion, it is as regrettable as the Ninja Master of the Rain Country, or even greater.

Unlike Ninja Master, which runs through the main storyline, the original intention of the four wars in the parallel world is to have fun and feel good about defeating the BOSS that you haven't defeated yet, and it is more operational.

Moreover, unlike the Rain Country plot that was criticized from the beginning, the parallel world started off very well. Everyone praised it for being more interesting than they had imagined. There is absolutely nothing wrong with saying that it started off well.

However, because Xiaoju was in a bad mental state at that time, and the outline he had written previously was not carefully checked, a major problem that Xiaoju had not expected arose, and the market eventually opened high and closed low.

The biggest conflict in the existing parallel worlds lies mainly in the strength of the protagonist.

If the protagonist and Obito and the others arrived together, then Six Paths Obito and Six Paths Madara would not be able to escape and would be taken care of in a few moves.

But according to the outline, coming to the parallel world is to fight bosses that do not exist in the main world, such as Kaguya Otsutsuki and Six Paths Madara.

Therefore, the protagonist can only appear at the end, otherwise the outline will be announced and sent out directly.

If it was just a matter of changing the outline, Xiaoju would be willing to spend more time on it, but the problem was that when Xiaoju realized this, the progress of the parallel world had already reached nearly one-third, and it was impossible to make major changes.

Xiaoju had no choice but to continue writing.

At that time, every time I finished writing

At that time, Xiaoju, who had poor psychological endurance, really wanted to uninstall both Qidian and Writer Assistant.

But you can't not read it. There are already problems, and if you continue to write blindly, bigger problems will be more likely to occur.

After finishing writing the parallel world, Xiaoju thought a lot, and what he thought about most was how to write a more fun and exciting four-war.

In the end, Xiaoju felt that it might be better not to write about those six-path levels.

Because the battles are so intense, the characters can't even chat.

But this is the scene of a brutal war. We can't just stop the war and take a break to chat.

If I were to do it again, Xiaoju would focus on the interactions between the two Obitos and the big and small Kakashi.

As for the bosses, just don't fight them. There is actually not much point in fighting them. There is no need to sacrifice the plot just to fight a boss.

In addition, although the main storyline is completed, this book will not end for the time being. Xiaoju will write some extra stories next.

In addition to the extras that supplement the main storyline, there are also some extras that are independent of the main storyline. Here is a rough list.

Extra:

1. No systematic if line Mu Yue

This time, Mu Yue doesn't have any cheats. Will he still have any interactions with Obito and the others, and what actions will he take?

2. Obito travels to the original world.

When Obito woke up, he suddenly found himself traveling to a parallel world alone.

"Since there is no Mu Yue Immortal in the parallel world, then I will become the Mu Yue Immortal here!"

3. If line where Mu Yue was killed

Due to unknown reasons, Mu Yue died in the battle with Uchiha Madara, and Nohara Rin was also taken away by Uchiha Madara.

The disciples gradually developed differences in their ideas and eventually went their separate ways.

Some people want to revive Mu Yue at all costs and return to the good old days, while others believe that they should inherit Mu Yue's will and move on with Mu Yue's expectations.

(Will not return to the original storyline)

4. Supplementary chapters to the main storyline.

This is quite a lot and very diverse. It will include the future life of the protagonists, as well as the content about the next generation like Naruto and Sasuke growing up.

Basically all the extra chapters that Xiaoju mentioned before will be written.

If you have any interesting inspiration or extra chapters you want to see, please leave a message and Xiaoju will consider them.

Chapter 815 Obito: What are you doing to me?

"Why do you feel dizzy?"

As the sunlight pierced his eyelids, a sharp pain shot through his spine. Obito squinted his eyes and sat up from the grass.

He supported himself on the ground with his palms, and the broken grass roots made a crisp "pop" sound. The lingering grassy smell rushed into Obito's nostrils.

"What the hell, wasn't I sleeping at home?"

Obito looked at the extremely empty surroundings in confusion.

He didn't have the habit of sleepwalking, and he was sleepwalking too far. Obito didn't even see where his home was.

"Forget it, let's find a place to eat first."

Obito touched his stomach and felt a little hungry, so he decided to eat before going home.

He brushed off the dust and grass on his body, looked around, and found that this was a small park he had never been to.

As Obito walked towards the exit, he passed by an area with two swings.

There were four children there who looked to be around six or seven years old.

Obito's attention was drawn to one of the children with dazzling blonde hair.

"Haha, I, Uzumaki Naruto-sama, am the king of pranks. Do you want to learn how to play pranks from me? If you beg me, I will reluctantly teach you."

Uzumaki Naruto laughed while standing on the swing with his hands on his hips.

One of the children said speechlessly:

"Who wants to learn this kind of thing? You'll only get scolded."

A tall and thin child looked up at the sky and said:

"Let's go. Our family will be worried if we don't go home."

The other two children nodded in agreement and turned to leave with the tall and thin child.

"You will regret it if you don't learn the skills of Uzumaki Naruto-sama."

Uzumaki Naruto continued to shout.

However, none of the three children looked back at him. They just walked away talking and laughing.

Naruto Uzumaki looked at the three figures gradually moving away, fell silent, and sat on the swing with a lonely look on his face.

I failed again. It turns out that getting recognition is not that easy.

"Are you Uzumaki Naruto?"

"Hey."

Naruto didn't notice Obito walking over. He was startled when he suddenly heard the stranger's voice. If Obito hadn't supported him, he would have almost fallen to the ground.

"It seems that I have become famous. I am not far from being recognized by everyone."

Naruto said with a smug look on his face as he looked at Obito and realized that this was a stranger he had never seen before.

After making sure he had heard correctly, Obito fell into deep thought.

If he had not slept for several years, and during that time the Minato couple had divorced, which caused Naruto to lose his memory and not remember his surname.

Then he must have traveled to a parallel world that he didn't know about.

"Who are you? Why are you in a daze?"

Naruto looked at Obito who was inexplicably silent and asked.

"Do you know Hanyu Muyue?"

Obito didn't answer Naruto's question, but asked Naruto a question.

He believed that if it was Immortal Mu Yue, even if it was a homologue, he would definitely be an extremely reliable and good person who could help him return to his original world.

"Hanyu Muyue, who is this? Is he a famous person?"

Naruto didn't mind Obito answering a question with a question, and asked blankly after trying to recall it carefully.

Obito held his forehead with his right hand, thinking to himself that something was wrong. Not only had he traveled to a parallel world, but it was also a parallel world where Mu Yue did not exist.

"Maybe the Mu Yue teacher in this world is more low-key, and Naruto is young, so he doesn't recognize him."

Obito still had a glimmer of hope in his heart.

If it weren't for Mu Yue, he really didn't know how to go back.

The dragon veins run through randomly, and it is not certain whether they can be passed through.

"It's so late, why don't you go home?"

Obito thought about it and tried.

"It doesn't matter when I go back. There's no one waiting for me at home anyway."

Naruto replied with a nonchalant attitude.

Obito's heart sank to the bottom in an instant. His last name was Uzumaki and he was an orphan. Isn't this exactly the same as his brother Naruto in the parallel world No. 1?

Could it be that Obito did this again? We don’t want this kind of thing.

"No, maybe this is the past of Parallel World Number One!"

Obito suddenly became excited.

If this is the past of Parallel World No. 1, then Obito only needs to wait for ten years or so, and Mu Yue and the others will travel here to save the world.

When the time comes, he can ask Mu Yue to send him back to his own time.

"Big brother, why are you daydreaming again? You're such a nerd."

Naruto couldn't help but complain when he saw that Obito suddenly stopped talking again.

"Is that so? I was thinking of treating you to a meal of Ichiraku Ramen because I like you."

Obito touched his chin and said with a look of regret.

"Ichiraku Ramen!"