Yukinoshita's Correction Method
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In this way, Yukinoshita Yukino can take her time to choose.
"I didn't bother to look at it more last time..." Dong Yunshan marveled, "I didn't know there were so many types."
"Even without counting the patterns and colors, the functions and materials are different." Yukinoshita Yukino took off two pieces. "This ordinary one is for daily wear, and this one is for sleeping."
"The difference is quite big." Dong Yunshan touched it, "It feels softer for sleeping... I see."
No wonder Yukinoshita Yukino came here, it turns out she wanted to sleep more comfortably.
Because it was troublesome to go home, I went directly to the shopping mall to buy one.
"It seems thinner too..." Dong Yunshan twisted it with his fingers, "Do you want to buy this one?"
"...No." Yukinoshita Yukino slapped Azuma Yunshan's hand away, "I...will take a look at the others."
"This area should be full of sleeping places." Dong Yunshan glanced around. "How about that one?"
I didn't ask you to help me choose... Yukinoshita Yukino pursed her lips, looked in the direction of Azuma Yunshan's finger, and prepared to find a random reason to refuse.
However, the moment I saw the set, this idea was dispelled.
It was a set of pink and white underwear. The top was designed like a tube top with fluttering ruffles on the edge. The shoulder straps were replaced with adjustable strings, and the bottoms also had laces on both sides.
What caught Yukinoshita Yukino's eyes was the cat-head-shaped cutout in the middle of her top.
Even the ends of the ties on the bottoms are decorated with cute kitten paws.
This design... is so foul.
Yukinoshita Yukino opened her mouth, but couldn't say no.
Dong Yunshan took it off and said, "I think it fits well..."
He wanted to make a move on Yukinoshita Yukino, but as soon as he reached out his hand, he immediately realized something was wrong.
This isn't the type of piece you can match on your body like a coat or skirt.
Thinking of this, he pulled his hand back... That's not right, it looks like he's trying to compare it with himself.
Yukinoshita Yukino took the hanger from his hand: "I don't think it suits you."
After telling the salesperson the correct size, Yukinoshita Yukino got the corresponding set and chose a nightgown, which she then took to the counter to check out.
Dong Yunshan remembered the formal suit that Yukinoshita Yukino had bought for him before and stopped her from paying: "Let me do it."
Yukinoshita Yukino pursed her lips and said, "I can do it myself."
"This is what I chose." Dong Yunshan finally had the chance to repeat what Yukinoshita Yukino had said before. He completed the payment, took the shopping bag and shook it, "If you want to buy something, go ahead and choose it yourself."
Volume 6: Chapter 276 Triggering Combos
For newlyweds who are about to enter the marriage hall, how to live a good life together for the many and long days to come is a question that requires long-term consideration.
The wedding that is just around the corner is a romantic epitome of future married life.
Just as many people look forward to a happy married life but also worry about a life that might not be happy after marriage, many people have beautiful expectations for their wedding but also worry about various situations that may occur during the wedding...
Wedding consulting companies came into being.
After years of development, today's wedding consulting companies are no longer simple wedding planners, but important connecting points for almost all wedding-related content, such as wedding dress companies and wedding venues.
At a wedding consulting company, you can experience different types of weddings and learn about every aspect of the ceremony...
A wedding is the beginning of a marriage, and marriage is the continuation of the wedding.
A happy marriage deserves a beautiful wedding as a start, and a beautiful wedding starts with choosing the right wedding consultant company.
The future is still far away, but happiness is just around the corner.
Give me a trust, and I will make everything perfect for you.
Make an appointment by calling...
"Wait a moment." Yukinoshita Yukino shoved the Coke can at Azuma Yunshan unhappily. "Isn't this a complete commercial?"
"Really?" Dong Yunshan glanced at Yukinoshita Yukino beside him, then turned to look at the computer screen, "Really? I was wondering why the more I write, the smoother it gets. I've even triggered a combo..."
"Although the details are well written, the foundation is crooked and must be revised..." Yukinoshita Yukino put down her teacup and moved closer, sliding her finger on the touchpad to adjust the position of the mouse arrow, "Delete the following, and then change this... Hmm? This place can't be moved, then this side..."
Azuma Yunshan originally thought that Yukinoshita Yukino was just going to give her some simple instructions, so he raised his hand while drinking Coke so as not to disturb her.
As a result, she started to make changes right away.
Azuma Yunshan thought about getting up to make room for Yukinoshita Yukino so that she could sit down and revise slowly.
But it was a step too late.
Before he could move aside, Yukinoshita Yukino sat down first.
"Hmm?" Yukinoshita Yukino frowned slightly, staring at the article written by Azuma Yunshan, repeatedly adjusting the position of the mouse arrow, deleting, revising and undoing, "How could it be..."
She originally thought that she just needed to delete the content that looked like an advertisement and replace it with other content.
As a result, when I really started to delete and revise, I immediately felt a strong sense of disharmony.
It was so awkward that I could hardly sneeze.
First, a problem that all newlyweds will face is raised, and then the example of the unexpected situation that happened during the wedding that Miho Mizuno mentioned before is brought up. A sense of anxiety begins to be created around this issue, and a wedding consulting company that can solve the problem is introduced.
By using specific scenarios to enhance the sense of reality, people can begin to put themselves in the shoes of the wedding consultants and think about how much trouble they can solve for themselves.
Then use the various authoritative organizations mentioned in the promotional materials to strengthen the professionalism of the wedding consulting company.
Finally…something felt missing without the appointment call.
The emotions progress layer by layer, the structure is complete, and the transitions are natural.
Nothing feels right after deletion or modification.
The chair under her was a little uncomfortable. Yukinoshita Yukino twisted it slightly, but it didn't make much difference.
With her fingers resting on the keyboard and the fingers of her other hand resting on her chin, Yukinoshita Yukino stared at the screen, thinking about a better modification plan.
How should it be changed?...It can't be changed.
Previously, Yukinoshita Yukino felt that this article was well written, so she thought it could be used after some modifications.
Now it seems that the problem with this article is not how to revise it, but...
"It's fundamentally wrong." Yukinoshita Yukino turned her head, "It must be deleted and rewritten..."
"...Gurgle." Dong Yunshan's Adam's apple moved as he swallowed the bubbling Coke. "Then, let's rewrite it... I'll go cook."
"Hmm...hmm?" Yukinoshita Yukino just stood up, frowned, and sat down again, "Didn't you say I'd do it?"
"Isn't that a lunch box?" Dong Yunshan's expression froze. "And if you need to rewrite it, I can't help much. I might even make things worse."
"...That's right." Yukinoshita Yukino stood up. "Then I'll call you when I'm done writing it."
"Yeah." Dong Yunshan responded and walked towards the kitchen with stiff steps.
Yukinoshita Yukino touched her cheek with the back of her hand and tucked her hair behind her ear as if nothing had happened.
Her tender white hands gently fanned her cheeks, creating a breeze to dispel the heat.
With a sigh of relief, Yukinoshita Yukino created a new document and calmed down to write.
Humans are not slices of bread that will jump out of the toaster when the time comes. Even when they reach the legal age to get married, there are many people who have never thought about getting married.
Getting married is the choice of many people, but that doesn’t mean not getting married is a mistake.
Everyone has different experiences, personalities, and ideas.
Whether or not marriage is the right choice is impossible to determine based on hearsay alone.
However, as a major event in life, marriage cannot be attempted lightly and is also difficult to attempt.
Experiencing a wedding is a relatively suitable attempt.
Whether you want to get married or not, you should think carefully about the issue of marriage.
Experiencing a wedding in person can make this kind of thinking more in-depth and objective.
In wedding consulting companies, you can experience various types of weddings.
Just like different lives, every wedding has different attire and process, and also different meanings.
Taking the Shinto wedding ceremony as an example...
Yukinoshita Yukino wrote here and took a look at what Azuma Yunshan had written.
It's well written.
Although it is for advertising purposes, there are no major problems with the content.
Especially the immersive feeling of happiness...
Yukinoshita Yukino pursed her cherry lips and continued writing the following content.
In the process of experiencing a wedding, efforts aimed at happiness will inevitably bring about bad experiences.
Complicated attire, tedious procedures, strict rules... Faced with all of this, negative emotions occasionally arise.
And this may be the norm in marriage.
Two people who live together happily will also have different emotions one day in the future.
A wedding is a silhouette of marriage, and marriage is the concrete form of a wedding.
The problems that need to be faced at a wedding cannot be avoided in marriage either.
Although it is not a real marriage, in the process of experiencing the wedding, you can at least experience what marriage is really like.
What you think after the experience is the meaning of this experience...
Volume 6: Chapter 277: Go to sleep
What Yukinoshita Yukino wanted to express has been written.
But I still feel like something is missing.
"The future is still far away..." Yukinoshita Yukino looked at the Azuma Yunshan manuscript and murmured softly, "Happiness is just around the corner... right?"
Turning her head to look at the figure busy in the kitchen, Yukinoshita Yukino's white and tender fingertips tapped lightly on the keyboard.
The future may not be as far away as we imagine. The happiness that is right before our eyes can only be reached by reaching out.
Yukinoshita Yukino called out, "Spruce."
"hold head high?"
"I'm done."
"Then let's eat first." Dong Yunshan brought the prepared dishes to the table, "We'll see after we finish eating."
Yukinoshita Yukino proofread it, washed her hands and ate.
By the time Dong Yunshan finished eating and Yukinoshita Yukino cleaned up the table, Dong Yunshan had just finished watching.
After wiping the water stains off her hands, Yukinoshita Yukino walked over and asked, "How is it?"
Dong Yunshan: "Very good."
Yukinoshita Yukino stared at him intently.
Dong Yunshan: "Uh... there's still room for improvement."
Yukinoshita Yukino narrowed her eyes slightly.
Dong Yunshan: "Not very good, I think it's not as good as the advertisement."
Yukinoshita Yukino nodded with satisfaction: "What's the reason?"
"Look at what I wrote," Dong Yunshan said, controlling the mouse. "Emotional resonance, awakening needs, solutions, and conversion guidance—all done in one go."
Yukinoshita Yukino glanced at him sideways: "Isn't it about creating anxiety, generating demand, leading to plans, and then product placement?"
"You could say that," Dong Yunshan pointed out the key point. "In short, my theme and purpose are clear, and the ultimate goal is to promote our partners."
Yukinoshita Yukino looked at her manuscript: "Is my theme unclear?"
"To put it simply..." Dong Yunshan spread his hands, "It's just someone who hasn't achieved success yet promoting his own theory of success."
In essence, it is still advertising, but what is being promoted is not the partner, but Yukinoshita Yukino's own ideas.
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