Zongman: Evolution Paradise

The visual novel proposal, intertwined with Aki Tomoya's life and soul, ultimately led to its conclusion.

[A bad ending is also a type of ending in a visual novel.]

[I will forsake my own destiny, activate effect 4 - Miracle, and exchange my destiny with the male protagonist Jolyne.]

The blood-red handwriting appeared, and time seemed to stand still.

Aki Tomoya is opposite Jolyne.

Shiina Mahiru is asking the black sun something.

The online novelist who is currently engaged in a heated battle with the official organization.

Kasumigaoka Utaha is on her way to the battlefield.

A gust of wind blew by, and the stagnant waves surged again, while time continued to flow.

The last thing Aki Tomoya saw was the player panel with a red glow.

[ID B-444444, you are out of control]

Chapter 124 Tianqing

Endless steam erupted from the flesh and blood, and power awakened within this pool of flesh and blood.

Sensing something was wrong, Jolyne used the dead water shuriken she had thrown earlier to instantly teleport to Jorogumo's battlefield, leaving Aki Tomoya's vicinity.

"Why don't you run?"

Jorogumo called out to the officials in their bodysuits, then shrunk into a small spider and returned to Jolyne's shoulder.

Steam, flames, and explosions swept across an area of ​​hundreds of meters, completely ploughing up the concrete ground.

Aki Tomoya's pile of minced flesh transformed into a giant nearly two hundred meters tall in the steam.

"out of control!"

Reika Shimohira, dressed in a black, tight-fitting combat suit, exclaimed in shock.

Attack on Titan, goblins, parasitic beasts, Kabane Iron Fortress, Naruto... these characteristics together form the out-of-control creation named Aki Tomoya!

Beast Giant - Goblin Form - Kabane Full Body Armor - Parasite Limbs!

After seeing the completely mutated Aki Tomoya, Jolyne exclaimed, "No wonder his physique is so outrageous."

This official player squad consists of four people, all dressed in full-body black combat suits and wearing high-tech helmets with a futuristic feel.

The accumulated anger has merged again, and Jolyne, relying on the bloodline of the Demon King, has changed her appearance, transforming into the face of the scoundrel.

"Hey, you guys say he's lost control, right?"

Commander Kurohi led Shiina Mahiru away from the vicinity. Jolyne asked the woman who had spoken earlier, whose curves beneath her combat suit were quite alluring.

Shimohira Reika glanced at Jorin's shoulder, wondering why their team couldn't even handle this spirit pet in such a short time, as they had never seen such a powerful creature lose control.

He explained, "His aptitude was insufficient, and his evolution went completely out of control, which is why he was able to unleash such terrifying destructive power. All his forces were stitched together to form this form."

Jolyne nodded in agreement; it was the first time he had ever seen someone without the trouble of losing control.

"Oh dear, I just got here and the problem was solved before I could even contribute a single point."

A voice reached their ears. Kasumigaoka Utaha, her entire body covered by a white robe, glanced around and guessed that the only person on the scene not wearing a uniform was Jolyne.

Jolyne also realized Kasumigaoka Utaha's identity and thought that this girl wasn't too stupid. After giving her a hint, she came over.

From the moment Jolyne was affected in the stairwell, realized the existence of Aki Tomoya, found Aki Tomoya, and during the battle Aki Tomoya completely lost control, this period of time did not exceed ten minutes.

Kasumigaoka Utaha is at least not like some stick figure who is still on her way even after the battle is over.

"Isn't now the perfect time for you to contribute?" Jolyne said to Aki Tomoya.

The goblin giant had lowered its head, its saliva dripping onto the ground and corroding deep pits, while it kept emitting roars such as "Hungry" and "Eat people"...

Jolyne glanced at them strangely. In such a scene, not a single person seemed to be making any attempt to escape. Instead, they were all looking up at the sky, waiting expectantly for something. Could it be that someone was going to send a rocket?

Faced with Jolyne's words, Kasumigaoka Utaha's eyes, hidden beneath her robes, showed a hint of interest. With a flick of her finger, a funnel pattern appeared in the air, from which sand began to fall.

She looked at Jolyne playfully and said, "It's a real shame I can't take revenge myself. After all, five seconds is just too short a time. It's hard to kill such a big guy."

"What do you mean?"

"He'll die in five seconds... oh, it's four seconds now..."

-

Tokyo Skytree, also known as Tokyo Sky Tree.

The Tokyo Skytree is cylindrical and built on a triangular base. As it rises in height, the tower gradually tapers. It is a 634-meter-tall radio tower.

The stated purpose of the construction was to reduce radio wave transmission obstacles caused by the high-rise buildings in downtown Tokyo. As for the deeper purpose?

Why do I have to buy a ticket too?

A middle-aged man with a receding hairline and a typical office worker look was stopped at the door while carrying a bag.

"Dear customer, everyone needs to buy a ticket for the area above."

"Are you sure?"

"I'm sure."

The middle-aged man squatted down helplessly and opened his briefcase. As the waitress began to wonder if he had stopped someone he shouldn't have, he pulled out a crumpled piece of paper, unfolded it, and found several crumpled banknotes inside.

"Is this enough?" The middle-aged man handed over the banknotes, his face full of heartache.

The waitress suppressed a laugh and, with a professional expression, informed him: "Sir, the area you are going to is the inner tower. You need to book your tickets in advance."

"Why did no one tell me this? They only gave me this."

The middle-aged man scratched his head and took out a black card from his briefcase.

The moment she saw the card, the waitress's expression changed rapidly, her professional smile instantly softening. "Sir, that's enough. Let me personally escort you in."

As the waitress lowered her neckline, the middle-aged man swallowed hard and looked away.

Looking around, the middle-aged man put the business card in his pocket before heading towards a restroom. He subconsciously pulled down his pants, then realized what he was doing, awkwardly pulled them up again, and sat down on the toilet.

His gaze shifted, and he found himself in a room where people were coming and going. A handsome older man turned around on his chair and said with a smile, "The commissioner has come at the right time. We have discovered that the ocean of collective consciousness is in turmoil."

"On my first day in Japan, how about trying out what it's like to be 009?"

With a flick of his finger, a virtual button appeared in front of the man.

"I just started working here, and workplace bullying has already begun? I know that you have to write a report after using the Level 0 designation."

The man found a seat, touched his thinning hair, and looked somewhat sad.

The handsome older man turned around, looked at the instrument display, and complained, "The verdict started a long time ago, and 009's activation couldn't possibly be some kind of button. That was just a welcome ceremony for you, you unromantic middle-aged bald man..."

"They insulted me for being bald and said it wasn't workplace bullying."

-

"When the worldview of more than a thousand ordinary people changes drastically within a certain time and a certain range, that is, when they realize the existence of the extraordinary, the warning at Tokyo Skytree will sound. The executioner will then determine how to deal with the situation. This guy has lost control, and the only outcome is death."

The man leading the four-person team explained it to Jolyne in this way.

Given the port's passenger flow, this guy, nearly 200 meters tall, was practically like Godzilla, and in a moment, he achieved the warning they had mentioned.

Shimohira Reika took out her phone and pointed it at Aki Tomoya, finding the best angle, and said, "To be able to see the trial up close is quite a rare experience."

Kasumigaoka Utaha glanced at the hourglass and added, "There are three seconds left."

Jolyne looked at Aki Tomoya and suddenly started massaging her right arm, removing the Yinluo Banner equipment. The temporary +5 to Intelligence that hadn't disappeared was also dispelled by Jolyne.

"What are you doing?" Kasumigaoka Utaha looked at Jolyne in surprise, only to see him calmly say, "This guy has caused me so much trouble, I really can't feel right if I don't kill him myself."

"Huh?" Kasumigaoka Utaha wondered if she had misheard something. In three seconds, Jolyne was deciding how to deal with this out-of-control creature.

Oh no... it's two seconds now.

Jolyne raised his fist, removing the effects. Due to the bloodline's bonus to Intelligence, his Intelligence was now 27, and his Strength, further enhanced by the bloodline, reached 23, which was just enough to unlock one skill.

[The difference between your Intelligence and Strength attributes is 5]

[Your skill - Black Flash has been unlocked]

Effect: When the physical body and energy erupt one after the other with a delay of 0.00001 seconds, it will generate 2.5 times the critical damage!

The usage method is very abstract. Even if you learn it through Paradise and reach the maximum level, Black Flash is not a skill that you can use by simply raising your hand.

Jolyne's intelligence and strength are just barely enough to be used, making it even more difficult to seize the right moment to unleash them.

Without considering whether it was possible, Jorogumo activated her spatial teleportation, and Jolyne appeared at the back of the out-of-control creature's neck, throwing a normal punch at the colossal goblin.

"I've said before that I'm a genius."

Time has come to the last second.

Utaha Kasumigaoka, her eyes hidden beneath her hood, saw the out-of-control entity that had collapsed and exploded at the port.

The next moment, a tiny crack appeared in the sky, and the judgment arrived as promised.

A drop of water slid down from the sky, and the out-of-control body, its flesh and blood disintegrating, turned into dust and vanished.

Number 009, Tianqiao.

Chapter 125 Afterwards

The official response couldn't just be to kill the troublemaking player; too many ordinary people witnessed that scene, so they also needed to rewrite those memories.

The official four-person team handled everything without mentioning that Jolyne should report her identity.

Kasumigaoka Utaha glanced at Jolyne, clutching her pounding heart, and left as well.

Beneath the dust, Jolyne picked up the book.

Props - galgame proposal

Description: Here's your proposal, go work overtime and rewrite it!

Effect 1 - Script: An excellent proposal will help you create an excellent script.

Effect 2 - Characters: In a traditional galgame, the characters can only be a male protagonist paired with multiple female characters. The more distinct the characteristics of the characters, the more powerful the items can be.

Effect 3 - Reasonable: The more reasonable the plot created in the script, the more powerful the props can be and make them a reality, which is reasonable.

Effect 4 - Miracle: When a perfect visual novel is successfully created, you can swap your fate with that of a character in the game.

Bonus: None

Usage requirements: Have an unparalleled love for visual novels, activate effect 4, and be willing to give up your own destiny.

"Exchange of fate?"

After reading the introduction, Joren was somewhat relieved that this guy was about to lose control. If he were Sima Yi, hiding in the shadows and handling the plot step by step, who would have thought that the harem he built was actually doing the work for someone else?

However, considering that Aki Tomo was willing to do anything to exchange fates with Jolyne and then immediately lost control, it's possible that even if he had created a perfect ending, he wouldn't have been able to do all of this.

Jolyne opened the proposal and read through the part that Aki Tomoya had written earlier, which was roughly as follows.

On Monday, Aki Tomoya took the props and began observing Shiina Mahiru, trying to create the perfect galgame with her as the heroine.

On Tuesday, Shiina Mahiru appeared at the Service Club and posted the request.

Today, Jolyne has been targeted by Aki Tomoya, who has made her the male protagonist of a visual novel.

Multiple side stories involving Yukino Yukinoshita, Eriri Sawamura, and Utaha Kasumigaoka launch their attacks under the influence of the items.

Shiina Mahiru is the backup main storyline left by Aki Tomoya. According to the reasonable judgment in the proposal, as long as Shiina Mahiru confesses, she will definitely succeed.

The reason for his urgency was twofold: first, he was already close to losing control, and once he received the item on Monday, there was no time to wait; second, he didn't know Jolyne was a player, nor did he understand her personality, and he never expected that such a proactive woman pursuing a man would fail.

During lunch break, ten minutes after Jolyne rejected Shiina Mahiru's confession, Aki Tomo was also discovered by Jolyne and a battle ensued. After failing to complete the Angel route again, Aki Tomo, who was desperate, completely lost control.

"Besides this item with such strange usage conditions, all I got was the color of Sawamura Eriri's panties. It's such a waste."

Jolyne was a little sad.

The Jorogumo whispered in her ear, pretending to be a narrator: "Collection +1!"