How to raise a passer-by wife

"That should be tomorrow."

"The fridge is empty and I don't want to go out."

This is the real reason.

Kobayashi Kongqing shoveled the poop for the rice cake, changed the water, added food, and then went out to find another lazy cat.

Unlike Kobayashi Kongqing's expected laziness, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu is busy at home at the moment.

"This is too revealing, it seems like it will be seen..." The senior sister in pajamas twisted the suspenders of the pajamas in front of the mirror, "But if you wear too much, the effect will not be good..."

Looking around in the closet, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu thought about it.

Pick up the thin 60D black pantyhose, roll up the pantyhose to the toe position, put your white and tender feet into it, start from the toe, let go a little bit, wear the pantyhose to the ankle, and simply adjust the toe and heel , Kasumigaoka Shiwa pulled the pantyhose again, letting the thin fabric cover her calf.

With both feet on the floor, Kasumigaoka Shiwa stood up and pulled the pantyhose skillfully alternately. The plump white thighs were gradually covered by the black pantyhose, and the luster of the skin was revealed under the pantyhose.

Stretching the body of the trousers with both hands, Kasumigaoka Shiwa put her legs together, pulled the pantyhose to her waist, and moved her hands on her legs to smooth out the wrinkles.

The pajamas were separated from the girl's pretty body, and replaced by a wide T-shirt with the hem hanging down to the thighs, covering the short hot pants.

The lower body disappears.

Through the covering of the upper body with large clothes, it presents the illusion that the lower body is not wearing anything.

Although it looks dangerous, it is actually very safe.

perhaps.

Chapter 29 The Bathroom Incident

"Come on." Kasumigaoka Shiyu pressed the button, and the glass door in front of Kobayashi Kongqing slid open to both sides.

Kobayashi Kongqing walked through the hall and walked into the elevator. Kasumigaoka Shiyu opened the door of the house, revealing a small head with a white headband, "It's so slow."

"You're still not hungry." Xiao Lin Kongqing glanced at her, "If you were really hungry, you would have gone out and bought it by yourself, that would be faster."

"Pineapple Bun?"

"Have."

"Strawberry milk?"

"Have."

"Pocky?"

"Chocolate."

"come in."

"Write the outline when you're full." Kobayashi Kongqing handed the bag to Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu, "I won't go in."

"I need someone to help me find inspiration."

"...Excuse me." Kobayashi Kongqing entered the room and put on slippers.

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu was sitting on the sofa with a bag in her hand. The loose T-shirt couldn't cover her seductive curves. The plump chest propped up the clothes, and the hem of the T-shirt was almost hanging in the air, unable to touch her lower abdomen.

In sharp contrast to the loose upper body are the legs wrapped in tight pantyhose, the perfect arc with the faint color of the skin, the light travels on the thin pantyhose, rippling a blurred halo.

Kasumigaoka Shiwa's legs overlapped, and the subtle elastic deformation brought about changes in luster, showing the beauty of elasticity and softness.

Opening the bag, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu wanted Kobayashi Kongqing to help him open it, but remembering his previous speech, he decided to do it himself.

Raising her white and tender chin, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu at the home court took the initiative and resumed her former Gao Leng Yujie Fan, "Those are written."

Some printing paper was scattered on the coffee table.

"It's already quite a lot." Xiaolin Kongqing picked up the printing paper and flipped through it briefly, "It should be enough to hand it in, but I didn't hand it in... Are you not satisfied with the content?"

Xiazhiqiu Shiyufen's cheeks puffed slightly, sucking on the strawberry milk in the carton.

It was actually seen through.

Red eyes half-closed, looking at Kobayashi Kongqing's face, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu was waiting for his next words.

Although he has the intention to cooperate with him, Kobayashi Kongqing also needs to show the value of cooperation.

At least... have basic appreciation.

"The scenes and lines are a bit exaggerated, and it doesn't seem exciting. Although there are reasons for the lack of details in the outline, this is obviously not your real level." Kobayashi Kongqing looked away from the draft paper, "If you have to say it, just It feels like shouting [This is a college harem comedy], is it too vain?"

"That's right, it's as vain as someone's plan." Kasumigaoka Shiyu took a hard bite of the pineapple bun.

Kobayashi Kongqing is right.

unhappy.

"I don't deny this, but the current problem is your outline." Kobayashi Kongqing made a guess, "Is it because it doesn't match your experience and feeling?"

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's eyes were cold, "What do you want to say?"

"You're too sensitive." Kobayashi Kongqing didn't bring up her thoughts about the relationship that ended before it even started, "To be precise, it should be because you have already designed the ending, that is, the female characters are heartbroken The heart-wrenching scenes of exiting one after another, thinking about the subsequent development and tragic ending in my mind, so I can't immerse myself in the happy comedy unfolding in the early stage."

Newcomers who are new to long novels often have big brains, write what they think of, lack of control over the development of the story, and often start out quickly and then collapse quickly.

People who have experience in ending long stories will often be immersed in the later development, making the early story a boring foreshadowing. No matter how interesting the later stage is, it is meaningless if it is cut in half.

This is the problem with Kasumigaoka Shiwa.

What she wanted to write was the losers in the later stage, but she looked too far away, so she couldn't write well at the beginning.

"Anyone can find fault," Kasumigaoka Shiyu turned her head to one side, "The editor's job should be more than that, right?"

"So?" Kobayashi Kongqing looked at Xiazhiqiu Shiyu, "Is there anything I can do to help?"

Kasumigaoka Shiyu waited for this sentence, and replied solemnly, "In order to be more real, from now on I have to experience the plot in person and get closer to the characters."

"The smile is about to overflow from your eyes." Xiao Lin Kongqing said helplessly, "At least restrain yourself a little."

"How about using your imagination ability to help me create?" Xiazhiqiu Shiyu was at home, adding three points to his momentum, "Primary school brother?"

"If it can help." Kobayashi Kongqing calmed down, "As I said before, as long as the senior can create excellent content."

"Then start here..." Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu pointed to the manuscript paper and explained the plot.

The sudden appearance of a transfer student, a beautiful girl with blond hair and twin ponytails, caused panic around the protagonist, and the protagonist who was teased by her returned home very tired and wanted to take a bath to change his mood. The moment he opened the bathroom door, the transfer student was actually at his home in the bathroom.

Two people candidly meet each other in the bathroom, such a royal scene has never appeared in Kasumigaoka Shiwa's works.

It can be seen that she is indeed trying to break through herself.

the question is that......

Kobayashi Kongqing looked at Kasumigaoka Shiwa holding the camera, "Why am I the one taking a bath?"

"Oh?" Xiazhiqiu Shiyu raised her eyebrows, "Do you want to watch me take a shower? That's workplace harassment."

"You see me too." Kobayashi Kongqing waved his hand, "Besides, there is something wrong with your plot."

"You are looking for faults on purpose, aren't you?" Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu's expression was not good, "Are you going to act or not?"

"If there is no problem with your plot, I will definitely play it," Xiao Lin Kongqing spread his hands, "Then what should we do if there is a problem with this plot?"

"If there is a problem, I will delete it myself, are you satisfied?"

Kobayashi Kongqing turned around and walked into the bathroom, turned on the shower, walked out again, and closed the bathroom door, "Sound of water."

The clear sound of water came from the bathroom.

As long as you are not deaf, you will know that there is someone in it.

"...When the protagonist came back, the heroine happened to be applying body wash." Xiazhiqiu Shiyu found an excuse.

Kobayashi Kongqing re-entered the bathroom, turned off the shower, turned on the bathroom light, walked out again, closed the bathroom door, "light."

Bright lights filtered through the frosted glass of the bathroom.

As long as you are not blind, you will know that there is someone inside.

"The lamp...the lamp is out."

"In a quiet environment and in the dark, will the people inside not be able to hear the sound outside?"

"..." Xiazhiqiu Shiyu tightened her five fingers, and the manuscript paper in her hand was deformed, "Change to another plot."

For various reasons, the transfer student boarded at the hero's house, and the two had conflicts.

"A-what are you kidding! Why do I have to live under the same roof as someone like you!"

"By the way, this is my home, it's better to say that I should..."

"Stop." Kobayashi Kongqing raised his hand, "I have a question."

"Ok?"

"Obviously a man and a woman," Kobayashi Kongqing pointed to the manuscript paper, "Why do you play the man and I play the woman?"

Chapter 30

"You write or I write?"

"you write."

"So I want to play the leading role." Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu spread her hands, "Otherwise, how can I find the feeling?"

One thing to say, indeed.

"Miss Machida will cooperate with me." Kasumigaoka Shiwa muttered.

Sora Kobayashi sighed, "Miss Machida is a woman, just like you wouldn't feel it if you didn't bring in the protagonist, and I wouldn't feel it if I replaced the heroine."

"Sex reassignment surgery..."

"It's not that far." Xiaolin Kongqing raised his forehead, "How about I help you find a girl?"

"Do you have friends?"

"..." Xiaolin Kongqing opened his mouth, and a figure appeared in his mind, "...act like I didn't say anything."

"Forget it," Xiazhiqiu Shiyu exchanged manuscript papers, "Then try switching roles."

"Wait for me!" She entered the scene in a second, "What the hell is going on?!"

"No, it's not," Kobayashi Kongqing read the lines, "This is a misunderstanding."

"Are you saying that it's not uncommon to do such things when uncles and aunts are away?"

"No," Xiaolin Kongqing frowned slightly, "but it was a coincidence, and I didn't know that my parents were not at home."

"So you do that when they're home?!"

"So it's a misunderstanding..." Kobayashi Kongqing frowned more and more.

"The next thing is here," Kasumigaoka Shiyu began the following plot, "You...you saw it!? In this way, you can only have children and get married?!"

Covering her face with her hands, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu's body twisted slightly, her chest was soft and swaying, and the waves were choppy.

"I didn't see it, I didn't see it." Xiao Lin Kongqing stared at the manuscript paper, "Besides, why did it become like that just by seeing it?"

"Ah~~~ Quit it!" Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu threw away the manuscript paper with a cold face, "No matter which plot it is, it will make people angry. Even if the protagonist is a waste, I have to have a limit..... .”

"I have the same feeling." Kobayashi Kongqing quite agreed.

"Your excellent reading is also one of the reasons!" Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu stared at Kobayashi Kongqing, "It's already good enough, but being interpreted by your excellent reading is even more irritating!"

"If it doesn't go on like this, the plot can't be advanced," Kobayashi Kongqing flicked the manuscript paper, "If the protagonist is not good enough, there will be no subsequent plot."

"Such coincidental plots...will continue to happen..." Kasumigaoka Shiyu gritted his teeth, "Tsk."

"You just killed a whole harem romance comedy with one sentence."

"So, I said, this doesn't match the style of my work!"

"Didn't you decide to write it?"

"Miss Machida, you explained many advantages to me, and pointed out many directions...that's why I'm motivated."

Kobayashi Kongqing looked at Xiazhiqiu Shiyu, her eyes were slightly lowered, her hands were clutching the hem of her T-shirt, her face was obviously frustrated.

Like a wet dog.

The first successful work is often devoted to everything the author has.

And when that work ends, it is also when the author burns out.

It is not impossible to repeat previous works and replicate your own success.