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After making up his mind, Shi Lei locked the warehouse.

Everyone followed Texas to the commercial center and found the Shangshu hot pot restaurant she mentioned.

When the waiter sees the guests entering, he greets them with a smile:

"Four? Please come inside."

"Correct."

When everyone passed through the hall, Shi Lei noticed on the right side a lady Yu with dragon horns, white hair, and a white embroidered cheongsam, eating hot pot by herself.

This is not because Shi Lei is lustful, but mainly because he rarely sees people with dragon horns.So when passing by, I took a little extra look.

"Boss, why don't you add more peppercorns! It's not comfortable to drop a little bit of your hot pot base."

The waiter waited for the four to be seated, poured a cup of tea for each of them, handed over the menu and asked:

"Which one will eat red or white? Or a mandarin duck pot with half red and half white."

"I also can."

"Me too."

"me too."

Shi Lei couldn't confirm the tastes of the three of them from the answer of 'all is possible', so he said calmly:

"Then let's have a mandarin duck pot."

"Okay, the bottom of the pot will be served soon. The menu is here, you can choose what you want to eat."

Not far away, the white-haired woman with long horns heard the mandarin duck pot here, and she showed a look of disgust and muttered in a low voice:

"Eat a hot pot and order mandarin ducks? Will you eat it?"

……

089 Movie Talk ([-] in [-])

It is more convenient to use the menu to check the dishes.

You can check whatever you want to eat, and when you are finished, pass the menu to the next person.In the future, add weight on the original basis, regardless of other people's taboos.

The menu went around and returned to Shi Lei, and handed it to the waiter next to him.After the waiter left, he took a sip of tea to moisten his throat.

Can Angel is a restless person, even when waiting for food, he will find an opportunity to chat with everyone:

"Have you seen Starlight Swordsman? It's a martial arts movie released recently. I heard it looks quite popular."

Shi Lei put down his teacup upon hearing this, and responded casually:

"I just watched it this afternoon, and the plot is just like that."

When he said this, he didn't look at Lin Yuxia.afternoon

Accompanied by eating, playing and shopping is a serious commission, and there is no need to disclose information about the employer to colleagues.

"Hey, is that so? I'm still looking forward to it. I said that I would invite everyone to watch it together in a few days."

"If you want to see it, go there, don't care about other people's evaluation. I just think the plot setting is not good enough from my personal viewing point of view. If the story is more twists and turns, add some settings, the box office will definitely be higher. It's a pity, If the full score is 10, I will give it a maximum of 6 points."

The tables and chairs in the hot pot restaurant are not very far apart, and the conversations of the neighbors can be heard basically.There was a male customer who was eating next to him. Hearing this, he took the initiative to join the topic:

"Sir, you said that the story can be twisted a little more. I don't know how to twist it? Can you share your experience, I am very interested in this."

Seeing that the other party didn't pick up the quarrel, the male customer smiled awkwardly, and reported himself:

"To be honest, I am the screenwriter of the movie "Starlight Swordsman". I have never written a martial arts script before, and I just figured it out on my own. I just heard from you that there are still things that can be improved, so I take the liberty to ask for advice."

Good guy, Shi Lei called him a good guy.Chatting about a new movie at a hot pot restaurant, and unexpectedly meeting the screenwriter of the movie.

Seeing that the other party's attitude is sincere, it doesn't seem like someone who is full and has nothing to do to find fault.He took the initiative to move to the left side of the long bench, reached out and patted the bench surface, and issued an invitation:

"My friend, sit down first."

Shi Lei had watched many types of movies and TV shows before time travelling, so he would like to share his experiences:

"At the beginning of your movie, all the families were destroyed, and only the protagonist and a child escaped. This is not considered brilliant, it can only be said to be quite satisfactory. When he learns martial arts and grows up, he goes back to take revenge, and the movie will end. I feel that there are no ups and downs in the plot. Did not explain clearly."

The man who claimed to be a screenwriter seemed to be seriously reflecting on it:

"Then how can there be ups and downs?"

Not far away, the woman with long horns shouting for adding peppercorns was leaning over here, as if she was eavesdropping.

Shi Lei hasn't watched a few films from the Terra Continent, so he can only analyze them based on the number of films he read in his previous life:

"The line of revenge alone is not enough for the audience. If I were to film it, the drama of the massacre would still be kept at the beginning. In addition to the original content, a new setting of twins was added. The servant of the protagonist's family desperately killed his brother. The murderer saw that there was another baby, so he took it back to raise him. He wanted to incite the two brothers to kill each other when the younger brother grew up.

In this way, not only revenge, but also the possibility of brotherly killing in the future, greatly increases the attractiveness.In order to improve the viewability of the story, the setting can be changed again.

For example, the murderer is a well-known and upright martial artist, and he shot for a peerless treasure or martial arts cheats.They don't want their deeds to be exposed, so they want to destroy everyone.The motivation for the behavior at the beginning of this article makes perfect sense.

On the elder brother's side, it can be set to be raised by many treacherous and evil people.They are cruel to outsiders, but they care about their elder brother very much and teach them various martial arts.When my elder brother grows up and comes out of the mountains, he is a witty and intelligent image who will not be easily deceived. (monthly fee group 694936135)

The younger brother was instilled with wrong information by the murderer since he was a child, and he wanted to kill his brother to avenge his family with all his heart in martial arts.

If you don't think that's attractive enough, add emotional entanglements.For example, the woman my brother likes likes my brother, and the woman my brother likes likes my brother.With these elements added, a movie cannot be finished. "

After all, the screenwriter is eating this bowl of rice, after Shi Lei dialed it, he suddenly realized:

"So that's what I learned. If Starlight Swordsman is filmed as you said, the box office will definitely be higher than it is now. If you decide to make a sequel, the first part only needs to solve the little villain and leave suspense for the rest."

Shi Lei smiled politely, nodded in approval and said:

"That's right, it's already possible to infer other things from one instance."

"Everywhere, you taught me well. The next martial arts script should be written like this, and I already have a prototype in my mind. Come on, sir, I must toast you. I will pay for the meal at this table today. !"

When Lin Yuxia heard this, she was a little unhappy.Why come out for a meal, the treats are always snatched up?

Seeing Shi Lei talking and laughing happily with the screenwriter, she quickly gave up the idea of ​​fighting to pay the bill.Anyway, I will often come to bother you in the future, and it will be the same as a treat when the time comes.

A white-haired woman with dragon horns came to the side at some point.She moved to the table with a folded paper fan in her hand, and spoke Shangshu dialect with a smile:

"Yeah~ I can't tell, you still have two talents in movies."

The editor looked back and asked suspiciously:

"Could it be that you are also a colleague?"

"Well, not much difference."

She squeezed between the two and introduced herself:

"I'm also a filmmaker. I'm a director. I passed by Longmen recently and stayed here temporarily for a few days."

The editor's eyes lit up, and he stepped forward to shake hands:

"I never thought that a beautiful woman like you would be a director, so I need to get to know you. My name is Xiaoxing, and I'm a screenwriter. I don't know what your name is, the director?"

The white-haired woman held a fan in her right hand and did not shake hands with him:

"Oh, you don't have to be so polite, you can just call me Nian. I have been preparing a script for several years, and today I want to ask this little brother for advice."

Seeing that Nian was about to squeeze a long bench with him, Texas moved to the side and greeted Shi Lei:

"Squeeze over there, come and sit."

Shi Lei also felt that it was a bit cramped for three people, so he moved to

Texas side.Immediately, she reached out to bring the bowls and chopsticks to her, and sat on the same long bench with her.

"The mandarin duck pot is here, be careful it's hot!"

The waiter covered it with a towel, brought the cauldron by the handle, and placed it in the center of the boiler.Immediately squatted down and unscrewed the gas stove to ignite it.The various dishes ordered by the four of them were served on trays.

Just wait for the water to boil, and you can serve the dishes.

Nian glanced at the bottom of the mandarin duck pot in disgust, and resisted the urge to speak viciously.For her, unless it is hot pea tips, eating red hot pot has soul.

"That year, director, what kind of movie do you want to make?"

"I'm planning to shoot a theme about Year Beasts. The script is being polished, and I haven't filmed it yet."

Shi Lei saw that the water hadn't boiled yet, so he looked away:

"You can talk about the summary of the plot. I only offer some suggestions on behalf of my personal point of view."

Nian grinned, showing his clean teeth:

"Okay, speaking of Le, a long time ago, there was a creature called Sui that ravaged the earth. Yan Kingdom paid a huge price to seal it. The Sui beast split into twelve pieces, and each piece had its own will. Rumors The Nian Beast will attack human cities on New Year's Eve, but because it has not appeared for many years, it has gradually become a legend.

In such a year, a fragment of a certain year-old beast came to Longmen.Using special abilities, summoned many mirror images to attack the major strongholds in the city.During the period, a clever human being figured out a way to track down the body hidden behind the scenes, but unfortunately it didn't help.

The fragments turned into huge Nian beasts, completely destroying the defense line built by humans.In the end, because he was afraid of the sound of firecrackers, he turned and fled the scene, which also reminded the people of Longmen to recall the long-standing legend. "

[PS: The timeline has not been changed. The oven showing the age is the version discussed with Yan Rong after 1095. Here is a simplified version prepared in the early days of [-], which belongs to the author's second creation. 】

After Nian finished speaking, he looked smug and proudly puffed out his chest, wanting to hear what the other party had to say:

"I haven't polished this script yet, the general plot is like this, how do you feel?"

Shi Lei doesn't know how to blow rainbow farts, so he said bluntly:

"Honestly, I don't think so."

The script that was painstakingly prepared was rejected, making Nian feel that he was not understood, trying to restore word of mouth:

"Hey, it's the Year Beast, and there's a big Nian Beast, don't you think it's very interesting?"

Shi Lei still retained his original opinion and shook his head:

"I don't quite understand, what core do you want to express in this movie? Do you want to show the strength and invincibility of the Nian Beast, and the powerlessness of human beings in front of the Nian Beast? Or do you want to express that even in the face of a powerful Nian Beast, can humans still hold on to hope?"

The kernel or something, I never thought about it at all.If she can think about these things, she won't make a bad movie.

"I want to embody the invincibility of the Nian Beast, and leave humans with a reverie and warning. Is it not enough for them to pay attention to the legend of firecrackers driving away the Nian Beast?"

"Of course it's not enough. It's like you're giving a simple and rude lecture. You portrayed how powerful the Nian Beast is, but in the end it escaped because of the firecrackers. The connection between the two is not strong enough, and the audience will be confused."

The screenwriter next to him also wanted to chime in to agree, but considering that Nian is the director, there might be cooperation in the future.Then he swallowed the words that came to his mouth abruptly.

Nian crossed his arms, feeling very unconvinced:

"Then what do you think, which one is better?"

She said just now that the Year Beast is a huge beast in mythology, and the twelve fragments that are separated will turn into Year Beasts.In terms of genre, it belongs to monster movies.

Shi Lei recalled the movies of the same type before time travel, and King Kong and Godzilla are absolutely unavoidable milestones.

But King Kong's size is obviously not compelling enough for Nian Beast.You can try to apply the plot of Godzilla, and then adapt it appropriately;

"If it was me, I would revise the settings. For example, the Sui Beast is a fierce beast in ancient times, with the ability to destroy the country. It was defeated by the Yan Kingdom with all the power of the whole country, but there was no way to kill it. So the Sui Beast The seal was divided into twelve fragments with different abilities.

Thousands of years later, human beings abused the energy of origin stones excessively.As a result, the ecology was severely polluted, and a very large and powerful Originium worm was produced.

The armor of this giant Originium worm is very thick, and ordinary attacks can't hurt it at all.Moreover, it will also spray origin stone bombs like magma, and carry out long-range coverage strikes, destroying several blocks in an instant.

Since people watch movies, the protagonist should focus on people.In order to increase the connection with Nian Beast, the protagonist's ancestors are the family that researched and sealed Nian Beast.

Giant origin stone worms are raging in Longmen, constantly destroying the city and laying eggs.The Guards Bureau invested all their troops, but they were still helpless.The giant origin stone worms began to march into the inland cities because they were getting bigger and bigger.

At the time when Yan Kingdom is alive and dead, the protagonist thinks of a plan to drive away wolves and tigers, and prepares to release a fragment of the old beast to fight against the giant Originium worm.But before the execution, the protagonist did a lot of homework.It is confirmed that Nian Beast, who is incarnated by fragments, is very afraid of firecrackers.So I asked someone to help and made a lot of firecrackers.

When the giant origin stone worm hits, the protagonist releases one of the fragments.The transformed Nian Beast pinned the giant Originium worm to the ground and beat it violently.A giant Originium worm can be crushed with a single fragment, reflecting the strength of the Year Beast.

Human beings were rescued and began to cheer.They thought that the huge Nian Beast was the hero who saved them.Unexpectedly, after the Nian Beast wiped out the giant Originium worms and eggs, it would start to be incapacitated.

Differential attacks on human cities.

Humans can't even wipe out giant Originium worms, and they can't even deal with Nian beasts.

At this time, the captured protagonist publicly exposed Nian Beast's weakness, saying that it was very afraid of the sound of firecrackers.Humans didn't believe it at first, but after using the firecrackers stored by the protagonist, they actually drove the Nian beast into the deep mountains and old forests.

The highlight of the later stage of the plot is the firecrackers.In the form of movie stories, myths and legends are given a certain degree of authenticity.And instill ideas in the viewers, remember to use firecrackers and firecrackers to deal with Nian Beast.In this way of filming, there are conflicts, suspense, big scenes, and cores are all reflected.If you want to know the relevant details, I'm afraid you have to..."

Speaking of this, Shi Lei rubbed his fingers.Indicate that you need to give money to listen to the following.

The screenwriter thought the plot was very good and appreciated it.As long as the budget is sufficient, it should be able to sell well.

Although Nian had a thoughtful expression on his face, he fully agreed in his heart that this story was better than his own version.