AI copywriting?All copied wrong!

But after watching the end.

His expression that was about to feel happy, and his mood that was about to laugh out loud, turned into a look of confusion.

"Huh? What then? Is it gone?"

The bald colleague scrolled the mouse wheel in disbelief.

But there was nothing more for him to read.

"Where's down there??!!"

Chapter 17 Conspiracy theory?

The bottom is gone.

When the bald colleague fully realized this, he suddenly understood why Yan Yao's expression was so strange just now.

He could even see behind Yan Yao's seemingly ordinary compliment, the next sentence that should have followed Tang Ping's reply:

"So what about the rest of the story?"

But maybe Tang Ping was busy, and Yan Yao didn't wait for a reply.

"Brother Chen, why are you so angry after reading a fairy tale?" the colleague next to him asked in confusion.

Don’t fairy tales make children sleep happily?

If parents read this and their eyes widen with anger, and they shout "Boom!" and yell "Beast!" they may have great psychological shadow in their children, and they may cry all night long and be unable to sleep!

It's okay not to mention this issue, but when it comes to mentioning it, bald Chen Xiao's blood pressure rises again.

He has a daughter, who is cute and well-behaved. She is like an angel who came to him from heaven to heal him from the fatigue of running around in the world.

As soon as he saw Cinderella, who was also well-behaved and sensible, he immediately thought of his most adorable daughter.

I saw how pitiful Cinderella was in the story. She was bullied unscrupulously by her stepmother and her family. The cute little girl who was fair and tender when she was a child, grew up to be earthy, dark, and has low self-esteem. She was also mocked and called "Cinderella" with contempt...

Chen Xiao felt a surge of anger in his heart. He wished he could wield a watermelon knife and take over his stepmother's whole family!

He couldn't imagine that if one day he died unexpectedly or got divorced, and his baby daughter was left to his wife. After his wife married for the second time, would his daughter also have such a tragic experience and live such a miserable life with his stepfather?

Chen Xiao let go of the mouse, straightened up, clenched his fists and took a deep breath.

He whispered:

"I feel like this is not a fairy tale for children."

"That is?" Colleagues were puzzled.

Aren’t fairy tales just for children?

If it’s not for children, who else can it be for?

"This is a fairy tale for parents of young children."

After Chen Xiao finished speaking, he looked at Yan Yao:

"Sister Yan Yao, if you want to publish it, I suggest that in addition to the full version, you also publish a condensed version.

"The full version is normally for parents to read, while the condensed version simplifies the tragic experience of gray love as much as possible, so that parents will not become emotionally unstable and scare their children when reading the fairy tale."

Yan Yao said "hmm" and nodded slightly.

She looked around at her curious colleagues and said calmly:

"I'll send the manuscript to you, and you can read it on your computer."

It's 10:[-], and it's time for the magazine to start working normally.

Other colleagues said "Hello", went back to their seats, and started working.

After a few minutes.

"boom!"

"Depend on!"

"Fuck you-"

Many people at the Dove of Peace Magazine had their blood pressure raised. They banged on the table, their hand rests, their thighs, and even said "Ah!" and almost hit the monitor with a punch.

Seeing this situation, Yan Yao thought for a few seconds, picked up her mobile phone and called the pharmacy downstairs:

"Hello, please send two boxes of antihypertensive medicine to the Dove of Peace magazine."

The colleague next to him heard it and shouted:

"Sister Yan Yao, help me add a box of liver-protecting tablets, my liver hurts from anger!"

"There is also a box of stomach medicine. Oops, my stomach hurts!"

Yan Yao: "..."

It's the same anger, but the position of pain is quite different.

After communicating with the drugstore, she hung up the phone and continued to watch "Cinderella" again.

After looking at it, I suddenly said "Huh?" and found a place that might be a BUG:

In order to sign up for the party show, Cinderella showed her ID card to the show crew.

It stands to reason that having an ID card can identify the person immediately, but the prince claimed that he was face-blind and pretended not to know that Cinderella was the little lolita.

why?

Did Teacher Guan Ai forget it when she wrote the following article?

Yan Yao's first reaction was this.

When the author writes a story, there will sometimes be inconsistencies. One possibility is foreshadowing, and another, more likely, is that the author simply forgot.

But when she thought about it carefully, she felt it was impossible.

When she read, she could clearly feel the logic between the lines.

The improvement in this area is so obvious. Whether it is due to the help of literary experts, proofreading by other editors, or for any reason, it is unlikely that there will be a sudden lack in this area.

Yan Yao frowned slightly and thought carefully.

His eyes scanned the text line by line.

Suddenly my heart was shocked.

suddenly see the light!

"I understand, it's revenge!"

After the prince fell in love with Cinderella, he must have immediately used his power and connections to investigate Cinderella and her stepmother's family.

He was so angry that he was thinking about how to avenge Cinderella.

He lied about being blind and pretending to be looking for someone, but in fact he wanted to lure his two stepmothers and their family who had a crush on him into a trap.

Neither daughter could fit into the glass slippers, so the cruel stepmother cut off their toes and heels in order to climb high branches.

Even though the glass slippers had turned into red high heels, the prince pretended not to notice, just to make them suffer in hope, hope in pain, and then crush their hope, causing them to fall into the abyss of despair!

Wanting to clear her veins, Yan Yao opened her lips slightly and took a breath of air.

Black, so damn dark!

Some people are black on the surface, but the prince's blackness is black in heart, belly, and deep in his bones.

But as for why the stepmother and her family take it for granted that as long as they can wear glass slippers, they will definitely join the royal family, so they would not hesitate to cut off their feet to fit the shoes...

Yan Yao feels that you should not think too much about fairy tale creation.

"It's really dark...but it fits the temperament of this story."

Yan Yao picked up the burning grass jelly milk tea with mixed emotions, took a small sip and chewed it carefully.

She saw the ending of "Cinderella" again, moved her mouse to the upper right corner, and was about to click the "minimize" icon when the chewing speed of her cheeks suddenly slowed down.

and many more.

If the ID card issue is not a BUG, ​​it is a deliberate design.

Then why is the ending of the story not the clichéd but useful "Cinderella and the prince left and lived a happy and joyful life"...

And it was specifically written that Cinderella tilted half of her mouth and smiled?

Yan Yao's chewing speed gradually stopped.

laugh……

on purpose……

This scene is within Cinderella's grasp...

Cinderella and the prince colluded to take revenge on their stepmother and family.

When... on the party show?

Suddenly, some doubts in the previous story appeared in Yan Yao's mind like a reflection.

When the prince picked up the pill, why did he let others try it?Isn't he afraid of eating people to death?

Why does the prince chase the escaped Cinderella?Obviously I ran away in this episode, but I will see you in the next episode...

The prince should be full of etiquette, so why would he only surround Cinderella in the show's camera and firmly reject other women, especially his stepmother's two daughters?

Yan Yao quickly replayed the scenes in her mind, finally fixing on Cinderella contacting the program team to sign up and showing her ID card.

A chill went up my spine.

In an instant, Yan Yao understood everything.

medicine.

What they want is APEX4369, this rejuvenating drug!

Chapter 18 Cheers to our friendship

After the program team received Cinderella's application, they investigated and found clues.

Cinderella used the APEX4369 pills left by her parents to reach an agreement with them.

From the moment she opened the safe and took out the pills, all her subsequent actions were to take revenge on her stepmother's family...

Yan Yao shuddered suddenly, shook her head, and stopped thinking about it.

Chen Xiao is right, this is not a fairy tale for children.

To be precise, children can only see the first layer superficially, while parents can clearly see the second layer.

And the author’s intention when writing has three levels, four levels...five levels?

“The deeper intention hidden in the multiple layers is the author’s pursuit of the artistry of the article itself when writing.

"But we only make fairy tale magazines. As long as the first and second layers that parents and children can see are interesting and beautiful, that's enough."

Yan Yao said to herself.

As for the author's pursuit of higher artistic expression, that is a matter for literati to ponder, and has nothing to do with them, merchants selling fairy tales.

I left and couldn’t chat with Wenqing.jpg.

Yan Yao closed the "Cinderella" document and clicked on Tang Ping's chat box to take a look.

Hopefully this story…

It must have been voted for her.

……

School, classroom.

Tang Ping was very sad. His ten consecutive days of stable fishing time - pretending to be upset and squatting in the toilet between classes - was cut off today.

Because he offended his class teacher in the morning, his old class teacher suddenly appeared during the class break and caught him running away holding a tissue as usual.

"You have a tummy problem? It's okay. Just go ahead and put it in your trouser pocket and I'll wash it with your hands."

The head teacher said coldly.