AI copywriting?All copied wrong!

Li Suyi's eyes suddenly became sharp.

The little boy looked at his father in shock.

After a while.

The son howled like a slaughtering pig and revealed his biological father:

"Dad is cheating!"

……

Chickens and dogs jump.

The earth is shaking and the mountains are shaking.

After a while of fighting.

Li Suyi looked at the older one who was obediently kneeling on the keyboard and the younger one who was reluctant to stand.

Helplessly sighed.

There is an older child, a middle child, and a younger child.She is the only mature person.

Teaching and educating people is very stressful.

She said:

"The story just now said that people who lie will have their noses grow longer.

“When people lie, they will unconsciously feel itchy noses and can’t help but touch them because a chemical called catecholamines is released, causing nasal cells to swell.

“The author is most likely inspired by this idea to create the monkey puppet protagonist whose nose will grow longer when he lies.

"So, two gentlemen, can you honestly tell me whether you lied or not?"

Gu Jia lowered his head: "..."

The son faced the wall: "..."

Your silence is deafening.

"Don't want to say it? Then continue to kneel and stand and reflect."

Li Suyi glanced at the two father and son, got up and went to the bathroom to wash up.

By the way, I sent a message to Tang Ping:

"What's the sequel to "Pinocchio"?Can you let me read it first? 』

Chapter 155 "Pinocchio" Readers' Speculations ([-] words)

Li Suyi activated the skill: [Teacher’s Privilege]

Tang Ping played his card: [Everyone is equal]

I had just learned history about the Wei and Jin Dynasties, and then I went to the Southern and Northern Dynasties: "I fell down and died. I have signed a contract with the magazine. They specifically told me that I must keep the manuscript strictly confidential and no one can leak it." 』

This is the truth.

Windmill Rider Magazine did tell him, "Because it is a long story, please do not reveal the rest of the story in advance."

but.

Tang Ping looked at several acquaintances on the list who came over to ask for "advance on-demand", with a smirk on his lips.

Do you want it?

If you want it, just ask me.

Hey, it's useless to beg. If I don't give it, I won't give it to you. I'm so anxious for you!

Miscellaneous fish, miscellaneous fish~

I just learned the history of Wei and Jin Dynasties, and then I looked at the Southern and Northern Dynasties: "But if Teacher Li wants to know the follow-up, I can give you free spoilers." 』

Yu Hu Bing Xin: "... Then forget it." 』

Can you die from spoilers or something?

I don’t want it to be spoiled by the author!

Yuhu Bingxin: "The writing is good, the ups and downs of the plot are very reasonable, and the little monkey protagonist has a natural and childish flavor. Come on, come on!" 』

I have just learned about the history of Wei and Jin Dynasties, and I am waiting for the Southern and Northern Dynasties: "Is there a baby smell?" (Element Perception.jpg)』

Yu Hu Bing Xin: "?What's the meaning? 』

As soon as I learned the history of the Wei and Jin Dynasties, I waited for the Southern and Northern Dynasties and said, "Ah, it's nothing."Have you watched Mr. Li's "The Little Mermaid"? 』

Yu Hu Bing Xin: "Not yet, let's wait and see after taking a shower."I'm going to take a shower first and see what story you wrote. 』

I just learned the history of Wei and Jin Dynasties, and then I went to the Southern and Northern Dynasties: "Okay, okay, goodbye, teacher~"

End the conversation with Li Suyi.

Tang Ping minimized the chat software and continued browsing the fairy tale forum.

Some people have read "The Little Mermaid", some have read "Pinocchio", and some have read both.

Those who have watched "Pinocchio" generally find it "short", and some people speculate on the development of the story in a conspiracy theory based on existing information.

Needless to say, some readers with two brushes actually guessed something:

"This is a long fairy tale. The protagonist, a monkey puppet, was born in the mountains. He doesn't have a name yet, but according to the title of the story, we can tell that it is called "Pinocchio".

"Given the innocent state in which it first appeared, it must not have given this name by itself, and as we all know, names are one of the proofs of a person.

"A lot of people think that Pinocchio will have a rough and tumble fight with the vicious old man at the end of the first episode. Otherwise, we wouldn't be able to create the tension so far.

"But I feel that whether it is due to the unpredictable nature of "caring" writing or purely from the perspective of story logic, Pinocchio and the old man will not fight.

"The reason is very simple. In the previous article, the villagers all saw Pinocchio's kindness to humans, but only the hunter drove him away. Is the old man a hunter?Obviously not!

"The reason why the old man came in so fiercely with a knife and ax was simply because he was surprised that a thief had entered the house, and he was being careful to defend himself.

"And a monkey puppet that secretly eats bread (I really want to complain, are you worried that a monkey puppet with mushrooms growing on its body needs to eat bread to survive?) Is there any danger?"

"Obviously not.

"So in the second episode, it is most likely that the old man took in Pinocchio, gave him the name "Pinocchio", and tried to integrate him into the village.

"Some people say that since a name is a symbol of a person, shouldn't it be until the end of the story when the monkey puppet becomes a human that he finally gets the name "Pinocchio"?

"This idea is logically reasonable, but this is a fairy tale. In order to facilitate readers' understanding, to create a sufficient sense of intimacy and involvement, and to sell IP and peripherals in the future, a protagonist's name is indispensable.

“Only by giving the name of the protagonist as early as possible, to the readers, he will be more than just a monkey puppet, but an independent individual and a warm fairy tale protagonist.

"Do not believe?Can you please explain why the issue comes with a Pinocchio action figure keychain?

"Not to mention that in ancient times, in feudalism and backwardness, children were named by their fathers.The old man adopted the monkey puppet and it resembled his stepfather, so it was normal to give it a name. 』

The author of the analysis and speculation was posted paragraph by paragraph, from the first floor to the first floor.

As a result, they will be questioned from time to time, and then they will provide explanations for the questioned points.

Tang Ping looked at it and sighed in his heart, this netizen named "Rabbit Cat Thieving Cat" can do it.

However, due to the insufficient amount of information in the first chapter, it is impossible to predict the characters that will appear in the later chapters, which is slightly wrong.

Continuing to scroll down, he was suddenly stunned.

"Of course, here, out of caution, I have to consider another possibility based on the actual situation——

"In a remote mountain village where lumberjacks live, the villagers are illiterate and can't come up with a decent name.They want to name their children, but they always find a gentleman with a bit of ink in his belly and ask for help.

"So it's not impossible that the old man didn't name the monkey puppet, but found a gentleman.

"Under normal circumstances, what kind of gentleman with ink would appear in a remote village?

"The teacher, and the fortune teller.

"If it's the former, the plot of "Monkey Puppet Seeking School" will start and learn from the teacher.Humans can be considered individuals only after they have undergone systematic cultural inheritance and learning. Otherwise, they are no different from animals. This is a saying, and I think it is very possible.

"If it's the latter, the plot of "The Monkey Puppet Asks for Advice" will begin and follow him around the world.

"No matter what it is, one thing must be certain. If the second chapter really tells the story of the monkey puppet being adopted by the old man and gradually gaining recognition from the village, then it must have left home immediately after gaining recognition.

"Why?Because there is no goal!There is no point in continuing to stay in the village.

"The village in the mountains is too small, but the world outside the mountains is vast.If Pinocchio wants to become a human, he must go out to gain experience.

"I personally have serious doubts. Just like in the cover, its nose has become infinitely long since it came out of the mountain to see the world. 』

Tang Ping was stunned.

Ah this.

You have thought of it all, so what else should I write?

Oh, that's not right either. Although it is partially consistent, the overall deviation is not small.

"Although I have some speculations about the subsequent plot, it is too far away from the first episode and may be too inaccurate, so I won't show off.

"It must be stated that even if the subsequent plot developments written by the author "Guan Ai" are as I guessed, it does not mean how powerful I am.

"The big framework is there. As long as you are willing to delve into it, you can always guess something."But as a writer, what you do is to work carefully within a large framework.

"At most I can figure out the general development of the plot, just like seeing a model on the table. By identifying it, I know whether it is a model aircraft, a mecha, a mecha, or a two-dimensional figure."

“But I don’t know which movie, animation peripheral or original IP, which company designed it, and which factory manufactured it.

"My hope at the moment is that if the author "Guan Ai" sees my analysis, I hope that he will not have the emotion of going against the readers. I deliberately did not write like this. If it is really right, I will change the article... (laughing and crying.jpg ). 』

Below the post, they are all "inserting eyes", "sit back and watch the birth of the prophet", "@ Tang's Onion News, sir, this-way (Sir, please come this way)" "Original, please analyze "The Little Mermaid""... class reply.

Tang Ping squatted on the toilet and touched his chin.

Ok……

Why is the stubble like a leek? The more you shave it, the thicker and faster it grows.

By the way, can hair removal cream be used for shaving?

He minimized the fairy tale forum and opened the social software.

Edit a new message:

Down syndrome onion news:

"Spoiler alert: The second chapter of "Pinocchio" mainly tells the story of Pinocchio. After Pinocchio integrated into the village, a group of people suddenly came. They wore a pair of unilateral glasses that could detect combat effectiveness and laughed at the villagers, "The combat effectiveness is only 5. "The scum" brutally massacred the village. 』

"Pinocchio, who had just returned from collecting fresh fruits, saw this miserable situation and the fresh fruits fell to the ground.Just when the village massacrer laughed at it that its "combat power is less than 5", it ran wild and lost control, howling in grief and pulling off its nose, turning into a ten-foot-long giant ape. In everyone's single-sided glasses, the combat power detected continued to rise. , finally exceeded the detection limit and broke into pieces! 』

"The ten-foot-long giant ape looked up to the sky and roared, waving its long nose that also grew in size and turned into a wooden stick, and attacked the shocked people in the massacre——"

"If you want to know what happens next, please listen to the breakdown next time! 』

The test was correct, Tang Ping nodded.

issue!

Soon.

The number of comments is increasing rapidly.

"? 』

"What the hell?" ? 』

"You can't be serious, can you...?" 』

"Family members, don't panic, this account is not forwarding fake news. Although this looks very real, it must also be fake. 』

"You'd better just write it for fun, otherwise...wait a minute, why do you feel that this kind of development is actually more interesting?" 』

"But the fairy tale is called "Pinocchio", not "Pinocchio"! 』

"@Down's Onion News, yesterday I saw a person whose back looked like yours. I chased him with joy, but he was not you. I dragged him out of the sack in despair. 』

"To the "Guan Ai" teacher: Please prepare the manuscript in advance, store it close to your body, and check whether it is still there every half an hour.I came to touch your body and write with you. 』

"@ Tang's Onion News, your pen name was typed incorrectly. "Guan Ai" became "Guan Yuan". 』

"Wrong edition, collect it. If "Care" becomes famous in the future, this edition will be valuable. 』

"@Down's Onion News, can you explain "The Little Mermaid" and why you wrote such a heroine? 』