AI copywriting?All copied wrong!
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"Then it's the same student. The first calculation question has no process, only the answer and a sentence - this question is too simple. I saw the answer as soon as I read the question, just like I saw the end of my simple life at a glance.
“When I came up with the third calculation question, I was told that there were four solutions to this question, and then I actually used the four solutions and figured out the correct answer—but the standard answer only has three solutions!
"The final question, the process was densely written, and all the blank spaces were taken up. Just when I thought he was finally going to figure it out, he came up with the last sentence - I am sure that I have discovered a wonderful proof method, but it is a pity that there is no blank space here. The space is too small to write..."
Chinese teacher Li Suyi: "When I and other teachers were correcting papers, a classmate's composition really amazed me. The title of the composition was 'Teenagers' Own Space', and what he wrote was——
"There are two trees in front of my house, one is a jujube tree, and the other is a jujube tree... Then he gave a long speech that was incomprehensible, and the two teachers directly gave him low marks.
"It's funny, isn't it? But there was a teacher who gave a high score, and the score difference was so big that he attracted the group leader. After looking carefully, he thought for a long time, and suddenly he was amazed -
"This is to make the readers think that there are many things outside the door, but then they find that there are only jujube trees. The gap reflects the loneliness and monotony of their own space, as well as the helplessness and numbness they feel about it.
“The following article is long and unintelligible, and it uses nonsense words over and over again. It even more vaguely explains that young people, when they lack their own space, cannot even grow spiritually, become shriveled and deprived, and become walking dead...
"And the sentence at the end, 'There is a strange light in the fish's eyes', is the finishing touch - the eyes are the windows to the soul. I see the light in the fish's eyes. Is it really from the fish's eyes and not from my eyes?"
“The team leader was very impressed with this essay.
“And then scored low.
"Why? Because it's too negative."
The classmates in the class laughed happily at first, and they all laughed so hard that they were out of breath.
But then I gradually stopped laughing.
It wasn’t because I laughed so hard that I laughed myself to death, nor did I faint from laughing, nor did I laugh until my jaw was dislocated and I could only cry out in pain... (Although some people did laugh until their jaw was dislocated.)
It was because they gradually realized that something was wrong with this classmate.
It's not like he, or she, can't come up with the right answer.
But knowing the correct answer, and then playing tricks to amuse the teacher and classmates?
Who is this classmate and why does he/she do this?
Li Suyi hasn’t finished speaking yet:
"Besides, this is an 'excellent' classmate. There is a reading comprehension section for "The Emperor's New Clothes" that asks you what other phenomena of the 'Emperor's New Clothes' type are known in real life. He is like this Answered——
"Some students actually hate certain teachers and scold them every day until they lose their mother. But when they see the teacher, they will still say 'Hello, teacher' respectfully."
"Don't worry, you are quite right. You can say that you are very good at observing the people and things around you. But another reading comprehension question asked 'Why did the child at the end of the story point out that the emperor was not wearing clothes?' His answer was -
“Because the child received money from foreign forces (New ○ Yui).
"... Maybe you are right, but there are standard answers for the reading comprehension test, and the answers will definitely not be so dark and realistic."
Speaking of this, Li Suyi spread her hands:
"If this student thought wrong and answered wrongly, forget it. But I can be sure that this student did not answer wrongly. He must know the correct answer and did it on purpose.
"Is my guess right, classmate Tang Ping?"
"???!!" The whole class looked at Tang Ping.
The whole room was filled with surprise and uproar, almost shaking the entire floor.
The "certain classmate" who co-wrote this outrageous article is you!
Chapter 26 Their Cinderella
……
Just when Tang Ping was being lectured on test papers by teachers from various subjects every day, they would get angry or make random comments.
Readers from all over the city have also come into contact with the 67th issue of "The Dove of Peace" and "Cinderella", which is regarded as the main fairy tale.
A female junior high school student with two braids and big, thick acetate glasses silently came to the bookstore after school and bought a fairy tale magazine with the breakfast money she saved.
He Lili doesn't like reading fairy tales, so she bought this magazine for her younger brother who is still in kindergarten.
She also doesn't like her younger brother. Ever since her parents divorced and the court ruled that the child should be given to her father, who remarried and gave birth to a younger brother, her status in the new family has been very low.
Her father was an older generation who favored sons over daughters. After giving birth to his younger brother, he doted on him. However, he not only ignored her, the eldest daughter, for a long time, but even turned a blind eye to her stepmother's sometimes deliberate attempts to make things difficult for her.
Under the connivance of his father and the difficulty of his stepmother, his ignorant brother had been influenced by her since he was a child. He followed her example and learned to bully her.
Pulling her hair, punching her, stepping on her head while she sleeps, jumping around with joy...
Then because she accidentally stepped on the wrong side and fell down, she suffered pain and cried loudly, which caused her father to feel pain and itching for him, and her mother to scold her angrily.
Many times, He Lili felt that life was just like this.
The world is not good.
Never want to come again.
But after thinking about it, after standing on the edge of the balcony for a long time, after using a fruit knife to make gestures on my wrist for a long time, after secretly taking a lot of medicine to hold myself up until I vomited...
After all, life goes on as usual.
At night, He Lili opened a fairy tale magazine beside her brother's bed and read each story according to the script.
Every time before my younger brother finished listening, he would complain that it was boring and unpleasant, and he would toss and turn and couldn't sleep.
Of course.
Because she had long heard her neighbors complain that the fairy tale "The Dove of Peace" was really boring.
The stepmother finally couldn't help scolding her, picked up the magazine, and first scolded her for buying this book, and then turned to an article she hadn't told yet, and told her brother as passionately as possible.
Unexpectedly, my brother showed great interest when listening to this story.
He slowly and sweetly fell asleep in his stepmother's soft voice.
He Lili was not interested in listening to the story at all, but the sound would not pass over her ears just because she was not interested.
While she was studying, she heard the story, and the pen in her hand stopped unconsciously, her expression was dazed, and her mind was drawn into the other side of the story.
"Cinderella"
In this story, the protagonist is a girl like her, living a miserable life in a remarried family.
But because of her parents' magical relics, she finally got rid of her stepmother's family and lived a happy life with the prince.
Although the younger brother had fallen asleep, the stepmother still read the whole story tenderly, just in case the story was not finished and he suddenly opened his eyes and woke up.
After confirming that she would not wake up easily, her stepmother breathed a sigh of relief and looked at He Lili who was stunned in the living room, her expression turned cold.
She walked out of the bedroom quietly, threw the magazine in front of He Lili, and said sternly:
"Next time, don't buy this kind of junk. Buy "Fairy Tale Empire" instead of "Fairy Tale King"."
He Lili did not answer, but stared blankly at the "Dove of Peace" on the table, still unable to leave the story.
There was a sudden sharp pain in my ear.
"Did you hear me!"
The sharp voice of my stepmother was close to my ears.
"I heard it!" He Lili replied timidly, but her stepmother was still upset and pinched her ears twice more before letting go and leaving to take a shower.
My father, who was watching TV on the sofa, turned a deaf ear.
He didn't even glance away.
Ignoring the pain in her ears that seemed to be torn apart, He Lili picked up the magazine and hurriedly turned to a page of "Cinderella". This was a story that she deliberately ignored because it was a fairy tale.
She devoured first the condensed children's version and then the full adult version.
Unknowingly, tears were streaming down my face.
When the last word of the complete adult version was read to her, she scanned the last few lines with blank eyes.
Although I don’t quite understand why the ending of the story is different from the simplified children’s version, I feel a different kind of satisfaction in my heart, mixed with emptiness and loss.
It's like she followed the girl in the story who was scorned as Cinderella and did what she wanted to do but didn't dare or couldn't do.
It was night, and He Lili couldn't sleep all night.
She lay on the floor, staring at the wall with her eyes open, looking at the quartz clock clicking in the darkness, and listening to the noisy wind blowing through the gap in the incompletely closed window outside the balcony.
What comes to mind repeatedly are still two versions of "Cinderella".
Cinderella in the fairy tale meets her prince who helps her and saves her.
Then my prince...
Where is it?
My prince……
Will you come to rescue me?
The sobs that covered my mouth were drowned in the whistling wind and the ringing of bells.
But two more lines of clear tears flowed from the red and swollen eyes in the dark, leaving a pool of deep scratches on the waist pillow that was used as a pillow.
……
In this huge city, she is not the only one suffering from insomnia.
A newlywed couple who was actively preparing for pregnancy started telling stories to their ten-week-old baby from prenatal care, telling classic fairy tales one after another and fairy tale magazines one after another.
After hearing the recommendation from someone in the mom group, I bought the 67th issue of "The Dove of Peace" and read "Cinderella·Children's Edition" to my children. After reading the adult edition, they leaned on the bedside and stared blankly.
"The child's father..."
The newlywed mother was in tears and slowly grasped the newlywed father's thick arm:
"If one day we have a conflict and it becomes so serious that we are going to get divorced...
"We all at least for the sake of our children, at least wait until she is 18 years old and goes to college...
"How about another divorce...?"
……
High-rise residential building, on the balcony.
Chen Xiao, who had closed the balcony window and was smoking a cigarette alone, looked blankly at the bustling city below him, but his mind couldn't help but wander to that fairy tale again.
It has been more than ten days since he first read "Cinderella", but every time he sees his baby daughter who is as cute as an angel, he always thinks of it uncontrollably.
It's obviously just a fairy tale, but like a bottle of 96-proof vodka, it has great staying power.
"bang, bang"
There was two knocks on the windowpane.
"Dad, why do you smoke again?"
A little girl with braids looked up to her father on the balcony with an innocent face, but with great dissatisfaction.
Chen Xiao quickly put out his cigarette and turned around with a smile:
"I won't smoke anymore. Dad won't smoke anymore."
"Dad can't smoke. Mom said, smoking is bad for the lungs." The little girl clapped her fingers, making a milky sound, and said every word seriously.
Chapter 27 Public opinion...won?
"Yeah, Beibei is right. It's Dad's fault. Dad stopped smoking."
Chen Xiao bowed his head sincerely and admitted his mistake.
The daughter, whose nickname is Beibei, nodded like a grown-up:
"This is right, you must be healthy..."
She turned around and walked back to the sofa, refusing her mother's support. She kicked her two fleshy short legs and climbed up on the sofa to sit down alone. Then she took a cloth from her mother's arms. I caressed the cat while carefully reading a fairy tale magazine by myself.
When I encounter a pronunciation or word that I don’t know, I just ask the mother next to me. After asking, I politely say “Thank you, Mom.”
And the fairy tale magazine she held in one hand was nothing else.
It's the latest issue...
"Fairytale Empire".
It is embarrassing to say that Chen Xiao is obviously working in a fairy tale magazine, but he almost never showed his daughter "The Dove of Peace" that he worked on.
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