This is true whether it's email, Line, or mobile phone number.
Then...how does she send it to Kitahara Isha?
"Add it yourself?"
Kitahara Ixia naturally saw the embarrassing situation of Kasumigaoka Utaha.
After scoffing.
He opened the Line addition page and let Kasumigaoka Utaha add his Line herself.
"it is good!"
Kasumigaoka Utaha's eyes lit up.
The next moment, she quickly added Kitahara Isha's Line.
Looking at the extra Line friends on the phone, Kasumigaoka Utaha raised the corners of her mouth slightly.
She always felt that her biggest gain this time might not be having Kitahara Isha help her read the manuscript.
Instead...I added Kitahara Ixia's Line.
"I'll send it to you right away!"
After adding Kitahara Isha and modifying the notes.
Utaha Kasumigaoka sent her final volume of "Love Metronome" to Isaka Kitahara.
After successfully receiving the final volume of "Love Metronome" sent by Kasumigaoka Utaha.
Kitahara Ixia read through it quickly.
As for writing style, there is no need to worry about Kasumigaoka Utaha's writing style.
Besides, since Kasumigaoka Utaha dared to show it to herself, it couldn't be that bad.
What he cares more about is the plot.
Also, is there room for improvement in the descriptions of some scenes?
"How about it?"
After seeing that it was not much different from what I saw in Beiyuan Yixia.
Kasumigaoka Utaha leaned over and whispered in Kitahara Isha's ear.
"not bad!"
Kitahara Isha nodded slightly.
“But it could be better here.”
“Although the characters and scenes are well-developed, they lack narration or words that are memorable and reminiscent.”
“You could try adding some.”
Kitahara Ixia pointed to a certain paragraph and offered some improvements.
As for the way of speaking, it is just like what Kasumigaoka Utaha did, whispering in the other person's ear.
This scene seemed a little intimate to Furuno Furuhashi and Tsumugi Kotobuki who were unaware of the situation.
Even in Kato Megumi's opinion, it was a little too close.
"it is good!"
"I see!"
Kasumigaoka Utaha didn't notice the strange looks around her.
At the beginning, when Kitahara Isha spoke in her ear, the heat from his breath made her ears slightly red.
There was also a slight blush on her face, making her look a little shy and unnatural.
However, under the guidance of Kitahara Isha, she was so happy that she didn't care about these things.
"Thank you for your guidance, Junior Kitahara!"
"I'll send it to you after I've revised it."
Kasumigaoka Utaha said with a smile.
"Just show it to Machida after you've made the changes. Why are you showing it to me?"
Kitahara Ixia was somewhat speechless.
He originally wanted to say editor, but in order not to reveal anything, he simply changed it to Machida Sonoko's last name.
"Let me see if you are suitable for me, Junior Brother Beiyuan!"
"If it's not good enough, then change it."
"As for that old woman, she may not have as good vision as Junior Beiyuan." Qi
Kasumigaoka Utaha Road.
There was a hint of coquettishness in her words that she herself did not notice.
In the face of Kasumigaoka Utaha's "coquettishness", Kitahara Ixia rolled her eyes.)
He didn't think that Kasumigaoka Utaha was cute in this state.
Because, Kasumigaoka Utaha is not really acting like a spoiled child.
But... he's taking advantage of others.
I saw Kitahara Isha gave me a blank look and didn't seem to agree.
Kasumigaoka Utaha's smiling face immediately turned into a 'sad' look.
"Brother Kitahara, you won't refuse, right?"
"Last time, you took advantage of me so much that you saw me naked."
Kasumigaoka Utaha spoke in a gloomy tone.
What she was referring to was, of course, the last time she changed her clothes while in a trance and forgot that Kitahara Isha was present.
Thinking about what happened last time, she still blushed a little.
That was probably the most shameful and embarrassing moment in my life.
I have always been conservative, but I was actually...
Chapter 208: The Difference Between Swimsuits and Underwear
"boom--"
Kasumigaoka Utaha's shocking words immediately caused an uproar in the entire light music department classroom.
The next moment, the table in front of Kato Megumi and others became unstable and shook violently.
The table in front of Akiyama Mio was knocked forward and hit the ground because of her overreaction.
Such a reaction is not due to indignation caused by some kind of sentiment.
It's simply because Akiyama Mio is a shy person.
After hearing such a hot topic, she felt ashamed and angry at Kasumigaoka Utaha's "shamelessness".
However, compared to Kasumigaoka Utaha, the person she is more dissatisfied with might be Kitahara Ika.
Because Kitahara Ixia actually did this to Kasumigaoka Utaha.
This is too much!
So, they were deceived by the behavior of Kitahara Isha?
Akiyama Mio couldn't help but think of this.
"No, shameless!"
"Senior Kitahara, how could you, could you..."
Akiyama Mio blushed, pointed at Kitahara Isha and shouted.
She directly "scolded" Kitahara Isha for his bad behavior.
"Hey Hey hey--"
"Why are you shouting so loudly?"
Facing Akiyama Mio's loud scolding.
Kitahara Ixia glared directly at Akiyama Mio.
"Hug, sorry!"
Being glared at by Kitahara Isha.
Akiyama Mio immediately shrank her neck in fear.
Then, she hurriedly picked up the fallen table in front of her.
After straightening the table that had fallen to the ground.
She looked like a good child and sat up straight.
She didn't even dare look at Kitahara Isha, for fear of being glared at by Kitahara Isha again.
Seeing this scene, everyone was speechless.
You were the one who shouted the loudest just now, and you are also the most cowardly one now.
After scaring Akiyama Mio into submission.
Then, Kitahara Ixia glared at the culprit, Kasumigaoka Utaha, who was beside him.
This glance was obviously because of Kasumigaoka Utaha's nonsense.
Although this is true, why does it sound different when it comes from Kasumigaoka Utaha's mouth?
It was as if he had really done something to Kasumigaoka Utaha.
This is a huge injustice.
"Don't get me wrong, okay~"
"It's just because..."
"Last time, the button of her clothes broke, and I helped her sew it."
"After she took the clothes, she was distracted and changed them in front of me."
I saw Kato Megumi and Furuhashi Fumino looking at me with suspicion.
Kitahara Isha shook his head helplessly and explained the situation last time.
"Although I did see her body, I didn't see anything I shouldn't have seen."
"It's just the feeling of looking at other girls' swimsuits."
Beiyuan Yixia Road.
"I see."
Kato Megumi nodded.
After listening to Kitahara Isha's explanation, she understood what had happened.
She had no doubt about this.
On the contrary, Fumino Furuhashi who was standing aside still had doubts in his eyes.
After all, what Kasumigaoka Utaha said just now was really ambiguous, which made people wonder what exactly happened.
Akiyama Mio and a few others had similar thoughts.
"Even so, there is a difference between underwear and swimwear."
Akiyama Mio muttered.
She didn't dare to express her doubts.
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