How did she know I was planning to run away...Oh, right, it's the destiny.

Tianming is a colleague of my stinky dad and mom, so it’s no surprise that he knows my background.

"Let me introduce myself first. My name is Cocolia, and I'm a member of the Anti-Entropy Organization."

"As for why I want you to come and meet me, the reason is very simple."

"Ms. Kiana, I don't want you to get hurt because of your kindness."

"that......"

Listening to Cocolia's seemingly gentle words, Kiana felt like she was about to get goosebumps.

"Who...are you?"

"Don't want me to get hurt... Do I know you?"

This feeling is very strange.

She was right in saying that she cared about me, but my intuition told me...

This smell is the smell of lies!

On the other side of the communicator, Cocolia said calmly.

"Of course you don't know me, but I know your mother...or rather, I know Cecilia Shaniate."

"In that incident fourteen years ago, she saved me from being attacked by a beast."

"And your father, Siegfried, is actually a close friend of some of the elders of our organization."

"I don't want you to get hurt, whether it's because of your mother or your father."

"Please believe me, I really sent someone to protect you. I really have no ill will towards the daughter of my savior."

Kokolia's words were sincere.

And fourteen years ago was indeed the time when Kiana's mother Cecilia died in battle.

At that time, Cecilia saved a lot of people in the second collapse, so there was actually nothing wrong with what Cocolia said.

But at this moment, Kiana felt that Cocolia must not have told her the truth.

She has no evidence.

But the Kaslana clan's intuition told her that if she listened to her at this time, she would be doomed.

"Okay then, since you said you know the stinky dad, that's perfect."

"Cocolia...I'll call you that."

"Aunt Cocolia, since Mother Cecilia is your savior, then I believe that you would not refuse a small request from the daughter of your savior at this time."

Kiana, who took off her mask to breathe, spoke to Cocolia on the other end of the communicator.

"As Siegfried Kaslana's daughter, I want to contact the stinky dad."

"This request shouldn't be too much, right?"

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Let’s continue tomorrow. I’m going to sleep first.

There are five more chapters today. By the way, let me say a few words about the original plot setting.

I saw in the comments that some people thought I made random changes that made the plot very confusing...

Okay, now let’s write a short essay on why we do this.

First, let me explain why we want to modify some of the original plots.

As we all know, the game's plot begins more than two years after the third collapse, and the actual situation of the third collapse, the only official plot given is the early comic Escape from the Sky chapter.

So what is the general content of the chapter "Escape from the Sky"?

The Big Three were preparing to escape from Changkong City, which had already exploded in Honkai. Kiana was seriously injured by Honkai Beast. After seeing this, Mei's suppressed Herrscher personality awakened.

On the other hand, a group of senior officials in the Council of Destiny discussed and concluded that the third collapse would require an S-class Valkyrie to suppress it, and at the same time, the Far East Branch needed to send a Valkyrie to buy time.

Then Theresa said that she should trust Major Himeko and asked everyone to calm down first.

In the end, Himeko and Hyperion were almost beaten to death by the Herrscher of Lightning, and Kiana tore off the wings of the Herrscher of Lightning after her outburst.

A few days later, Himeko returned to the Far East branch. Theresa was disgusted by Himeko's disorderly behavior, so the three great families entered the school.

It seems like a normal plot...

——Bullshit.

I know that if I say there are problems with miHoYo's plot, I will definitely be criticized, and there will definitely be people who say that you can't criticize miHoYo if you do this, as criticizing it will only ruin your business.

But the plot problems will not disappear just because I stop criticizing them, they exist objectively.

The early Honkai Impact 3rd plots were visibly unreliable and perfunctory, but the new plots have been carefully crafted and look much better. I think anyone who pays attention to the plot can feel that.

As for the issues in the Escape from the Sky chapter, let's analyze them one by one.

According to later settings, Cocolia was the driving force behind the third collapse. Then why didn't she show up in the Escape from the Sky arc?

So I included the story of Cocolia in this book.

After all, according to the original book, it is unlikely that Cocolia would have made all these things happen and then watched the cooked duck fly away.

It is even more impossible for her to be cowardly. She dares to send a bunch of Titans to attack the Herrscher. Would she be cowardly?

Then she had to be there.

Then we continue to the next part, Cocolia is causing trouble, and the Chicken Coop and Lobster duo can't possibly know nothing, after all, Ryuma has gone in.

They can't be at the forefront of this matter. At this time, Anti-Entropy must find a way to stop Cocolia from putting the blame on themselves, so they can only let Sieg fly out.

It was not surprising that Siegfried appeared in Changkong City. The daughter of his old friend Ryoma was targeted, and his own second daughter was also in danger. With his personality, could he stay there at this time?

Continue following this.

In the original novel, Theresa said that we should trust Major Himeko, but after looking at the second collapse, we know that this is bullshit.

Theresa brought the Key of God to fight against Sirin who had just awakened her power. The final result was that Sirin beat Theresa to the brink of death not long after.

At that time, Lao Yang's words made it clear that Siegfried must take Theresa away immediately, otherwise Theresa's life would be in danger.

The S-class Valkyrie + Key of God was knocked down by the Herrscher of the Void in a few moves, and an A brought the Nexus system and Hyperion over. Anyone with a little bit of brains knew that this was courting death.

In addition, Otto himself must know about the third collapse. As a person with a very high IQ, he might leave the Conquest Gem and the Herrscher there and give them to Anti-Entropy?

This is obviously impossible.

Referring to the Moon Shadow chapter, I actually think the plot of the Moon Shadow chapter is not as reasonable as the later ones, but at least part of the plot is normal.

After Otto learned that Cocolia was about to bring out the Herrscher of Death, he immediately asked Yulandel to prepare for battle.

At that time, Fu Hua was still near K423, so it can be said that this wave was a double insurance.

Then it would be normal for him to have a normal IQ and send enough people to Changkong City.

The fact that Rita was upgraded to S-level was my second creation, so there's nothing much to say about it. However, she is a genius, so it's not a big problem for her to become S-level a few months to a year earlier.

By the way, anyone who has watched the Escape from the Sky knows that the Escape from the Sky itself does not have much plot, and there are a lot of blank spaces.

There are a lot of blank spaces, and I think it should not be a problem for me to fill in these spaces as the author... Well, not the author, but as a secondary writer who wants to make some money, it should not be a problem for me to fill in the blanks in the plot according to my own understanding, right?

Or do you think it would be better if I wrote an original Changkong City plot where [Theresa allowed her old friend Himeko to be killed by the Herrscher], [Otto, a shrewd man, was not prepared to ensure the conquest of the Gems and the return of K423 to Destiny], [Cocolia, the behind-the-scenes pusher, did nothing and watched Raiden Mei being captured by Destiny], [The Lobster and Chicken Coop duo turned a blind eye to Cocolia's disregard for human life], and [Siegfried knew that his friend's daughter and his own daughter were in danger and did nothing]?

It is true that fan fiction should respect the original work, but it is impossible to write fan fiction completely based on the original work.

What’s more, this is an early original work with a lot of loopholes.

To put it bluntly, if I really wrote it according to the Escape from the Sky chapter, it would be disrespectful to the subsequent plots and settings.

Since when has it become problematic to write fan fiction that adds its own plot based on speculations from the original work?

There is one more thing that needs to be made clear.

This book is a fan fiction, so some changes in settings and plots are inevitable.

If there is any inconsistency in the settings, I apologize in advance.

But there is one thing I want to say, even if it offends people.

Things turned out like this, of course, because I don't understand the settings comprehensively enough, but even if you ask miHoYo's copywriter to sort out all the settings, he won't be able to figure them out.

Here are a few simple questions.

1. Are the four great gems the four fragments of the Herrscher of the Void or are they independent cores?

2. Was Kallen's father Francis Kaslana dead or alive before Kallen's death?

3. Was the third collapse in 2014, 2010 or 2011?

4. Was Kiana two years old or older when Siegfried defected from his destiny?

5. In the main storyline, is the head of the Apocalis family Otto or Theresa?

6. Was the Oath of Judah made by Otto or by the previous civilization?

7. Did Siegfried touch the buttocks of all the Valkyries in Hyperion?

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The answer time is as follows

1. Are the four great gems the four fragments of the Herrscher of the Void or are they independent cores?

The answer is both.

The only difference is that in the early part of the main storyline it is clearly stated that the four gems are the four fragments of the Herrscher of the Void [there is even a saying that she cannot use her full power because she only has one-fourth of the core], and then in the comics it is changed to each being an independent gem core.

2. Was Kallen's father Francis Kaslana dead or alive before Kallen's death?

The answer is both.

The only difference is that in the Destiny Database in the Sakura Memories arc, Kallen explicitly mentioned that when she was captured and executed, "it was useless, Dad had already made the decision", clearly indicating that Francis was alive at the time.

In the Purple Iris chapter, it is clearly mentioned that Francis launched the Judgment of Heavenly Fire and died together with the Honkai Beast when Otto and Kallen were young.

Of course, there will definitely be people who say that the database can be modified at will.

The question is why Otto would modify the database to show Francis was still alive and also make the decision to let Kallen die.

It is clearly mentioned in the plot that Otto regarded Francis as a god. He had respect for Francis himself, so there was no reason for him to discredit his father-in-law after five hundred years.

So in fact, the two exist at the same time and then conflict.

3. Was the third collapse in 2014, 2010 or 2011?

The answer is that both have existed.

The official timeline is that when the game started in 2016, it was two years after the third collapse, so normally it would have been 2014.

However, the Japanese official book of Honkai Impact 3 mentions the time of the third Honkai outbreak in 2010/2011.

Yes, you read that right, this book alone shows two different times of the third collapse.

So these times all exist.

4. Was Kiana two years old or older when Siegfried defected from his destiny?

The main storyline mentioned that Siegfried ran away with his men in 06, but the Japanese official book also mentioned that Siegfried left when his daughter was two years old.

5. In the main storyline, is the head of the Apocalis family Otto or Theresa?

It is still a formal book.

The official book mentions that Otto is the head of the family, and the main storyline says that Theresa is the head of the family.

6. Was the Oath of Judah made by Otto or by the previous civilization?

The comics clearly mention that the Oath of Judah was made by Otto to Kallen, and then it later became the Key to the God of the Former Civilization.

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