Tresen Red Line Domination
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"call!"
Suddenly, a strong wind blew up, and broken branches that were blown into the air from outside the Tokyo Racecourse fell towards Ming Wang like a blanket.
Conclusion, Part I
The third volume has ended, and as mentioned in the previous chapters, the fourth volume will be the final volume.
In the previous three volumes, Zhong Ming, as a protagonist, did not have much personal story. On the contrary, his story was squeezed too much by Oguruma, New Glory, and Fujimasa March in the Mingwang team. In the following fourth volume, my goal is to make Zhong Ming more vivid and to write clearly about his experiences and dreams.
I have a lot to say and I don’t know where to start, so I’ll just start from the beginning.
My original intention for writing this book was naturally because I like Uma Musume, but I did not start with the two animations of Uma Musume. Instead, I used the spin-off manga "Ashige's Cinderella" as an insertion point, because I personally feel that the spin-off manga moved me more, so I wrote this book.
To my shame, I have never played Uma Musume game. I have only downloaded the game and drawn the initial cards, so there are many mistakes in the settings of the competition. I am also unfamiliar with some of the Uma Musume. I am looking for information while writing, hoping that there will not be too big a deviation from the original settings. Of course, I am not a fundamentalist. I think one of the purposes of writing fan fiction is to write about aspects that are different from the original, but that is when the author is familiar with the settings and characters of the original work. If you know nothing about it, then you might as well not write it.
I have a superficial and personal opinion on fan fiction - when reading a fan fiction, if you replace the fan fiction characters with other people, such as the ruffian protagonist of an urban novel or the funny protagonist of a fantasy novel, and if you feel that they can be completely replaced and there is no sense of disobedience, then this fan fiction cannot be called fan fiction. Fan fiction is a product based on the original work and extended, and it is not called fan fiction if you make up a character with the same name and surname out of thin air and put it into your own work. Of course, my idea may be a bit old-fashioned and does not fit the current situation, so don't pay too much attention to it.
Let's get back to the topic. The book "The Red Line Domination of Tresen" has taken the first step to dominate Japan through three volumes and more than one million words. This has taken half a year in reality. After spanning a million words, it finally defeated Tamamo Cross, and the next era will be a world of heroes competing for hegemony.
Let’s first talk about the three horse girls of the Mingwang team.
Ogurume, the protagonist of the manga I started writing out of creative impulse after reading "Ashige's Cinderella", I actually feel it is difficult to grasp the description of her. It is very challenging for me to show her silly yet serious look, and there is no good enough scale now, but in the final volume I want to portray her in a little more depth. In the end... Ogurume is so cute.
New Glory, this character also exists in the comic spin-off, but I reshaped it. In fact, I am somewhat satisfied with this character. Although I can't be too proud, at least I can say that it is somewhat vivid, right?
Conclusion, Part II
Fujimasa March, actually I didn't want her to join the Ming Wang team at the beginning, but at the end of the first volume, my head suddenly twitched. I always felt that when someone like Shibasaki had a better choice in the team, it was hard not to let Fujimasa March and Zhong Ming go to the central office together. Later, I was glad that I wrote this plot. The scene of Fujimasa March and Shibasaki saying goodbye on the platform was actually a classic farewell in Japanese morning dramas. If there was no mother-like role like Fujimasa March, Zhong Ming and the other two might have a mess of life in the central office. Oguruma would lie down to sleep with wet hair, let mushrooms grow on the quilt, and the brand new brilliance would be a fat pig after drinking Coke.
And the last one is Zhong Ming, also known as Ming Wang. One thing I was particularly careful about when portraying Ming Wang was to use the simplest words possible to describe Ming Wang. Don't use metaphors or personifications to describe her appearance, just simple outlines will suffice. You can even regard her as a landscape. The purpose is to make her and Zhong Ming appear to be the same person in the readers' minds, rather than twins. Otherwise, the readers would seem to have a wrong sense of immersion.
Actually, we can almost end here, but I will say a little more about what I like about the third volume, such as Uma Musume.
My favorite horse girls in the third volume are Holy King Halo and New Radiance.
Actually, I wanted to describe her in a more awkward way in "Holy King's Halo" and make the chapter longer, but later I found that it wouldn't work this way. If I continued writing, "Holy King's Halo" would take Zhong Ming away, and the rest of the chapter would become a pure romance novel. What about the other horse girls... well, nothing.
Needless to say, this race of Japan Derby was a race in which she overcame her inner cowardice. With the encouragement of Zhong Ming, she bravely faced the GI horse racing girls who were much stronger than her. In order to highlight Japan Derby's despair for her, I specially described the scene in which she ran to the Osugi Park crying before the race, and used the rain to set off her emotions, and let Zhong Ming encourage her again; and the second intentional setting off was her action of vomiting due to nervousness just before the race. This action was not long, but it also showed her inner confusion and panic. There is no need to say more about other pre-race comments and comparisons with other horse racing girls' remarks.
In the next volume, the foreshadowing laid in the previous volumes can also be picked up. For example, the foreign horse racing girls are finally coming, and it’s the Japan Cup... What is their attitude towards Zhong Ming, and what kind of conflict will there be with the horse racing girls from Japan Central Tresen? These are all points worth looking forward to.
Finally, there is a piece of sad news, of course, for me - I had planned to take a day off after finishing the third volume. After all, I have only missed two updates in the past six months, once because I was too hungry and once because my eyes were too dry. But today it will be recommended on the big bookshelf, and I can’t just skip it. I can only postpone it until next week. Here is a preview.
Finally, hand over all your votes!
Just because I didn’t say it doesn’t mean I don’t need it, damn it!
Well, the next time I will say something so long will probably be when I finish. I wish all my readers good morning, good afternoon, and good night.
Feeling unwell, take a day off
My stomach is a little rumbling, and I thought I could finish writing but I was always distracted, so I might as well postpone it. I said before that I would take a day off, so I was planning to continue updating, but since this has happened, I might as well take a break. I think I have been on full attendance for quite a long time, so it's a good time to take a break (laughs). I will update twice a day, so the chapter will be updated at 6pm tomorrow. After the Kasamatsu Special and the Eclipse Race, overseas horse girls will gradually come to Japan, and I really want to write about it (happy).
Chapter 652: Facing Danger with a SmiletChttps://contentxs.pysmei.com/BookFiles/Html/651303/3968285/.htmlq~ ?pt#?Ming Wang narrowed her eyes and looked at the broken branches and leaves that were swept towards her. It was not an unexpected accident to compete on a typhoon day. There were green belts around the Tokyo Racecourse, but those fragile branches that were trimmed every week could not withstand the huge wind force of the typhoon. They would be broken by the wind in an instant and swept into the air, and at this time they began to fall.
"sieve!"
The sharp broken branches were accelerated by the typhoon and shot down at Ming Wang in an overwhelming manner. The speed was so fast that the spectators and commentators were completely unable to react. The horse girls at the back hesitated and slowed down to run to the edge of the track. This was not an obstacle race where they had to jump over hurdles. They just needed to avoid them!
Ming Wang looked at the natural sharp weapon that was flying towards her, scarlet lightning flashing in her dark eyes. She did not slow down, but turned her head slightly to watch the sharp broken branches brushing against her cheek at a very small distance. Then she looked at the countless broken branches flying from behind, speeding up and dodging them continuously. Her confident posture was like dancing on the track, shocking and stunned all the spectators who were watching this scene.
The strong wind seemed to be congratulating her, the heavy rain was just her accompaniment and the broken branches all over the sky were just her poor dance partners with shallow skills. However, her dancing posture covered up all these shortcomings as she moved her body like the most confident and gorgeous dancer in the world.
"Wow!"
Ming Wang dodged the broken branches and looked up to find that the last thing that was blown was a branch with leaves on it, blowing towards her like a palm-leaf fan. She had just avoided the broken branch and her posture was unstable. She moved her eyes and slapped the ground with both hands to prop up her body. She jumped over the broken branches with a front flip. Her soft and slender waist passed through the air to form a bright and beautiful crescent moon, which was engraved in the pupils of all the audience.
"boom!"
Ming Wang put his feet back firmly on the track. After stabilizing his body, he raised his head and accelerated with his feet to continue sprinting forward.
The Amazon behind was stunned, her jaw wide open to the point where it could hit the track. After the wind and rain poured into her mouth, she coughed hard several times before she came to her senses, muttering, "Are she and I really the same species? Why is it that even though we are both horse racing girls, I feel like she is looking at me like an ordinary person?"
Ming Wang's actions just now took less than ten seconds in total. Not only did he completely avoid the broken branches that were so dense that it looked like a perverted barrage game, but his movements were also neat and beautiful. He even had enough energy to do a front flip at the end to avoid the leaves that were sweeping towards him.
If it was Ling Amazon himself, he would have perfectly caught all the attacks from the typhoon in the first wave of broken branches, and would have vomited three pounds of blood on the spot, rolled his eyes, and been carried to the infirmary, but Ming Wang was so relaxed that it seemed like he was playing long jump in elementary school.
The enthusiastic audience was stunned into silence for two seconds because of this amazing move, and then more enthusiastic shouts resounded throughout the Tokyo Racecourse. Even fans of Akitsu Teikoku and Yebumishukei cheered for Ming Wang. Even they had to admit that only Ming Wang, a horse girl who had been giving people constant surprises since she stepped into the center, could do this.
Fortunately, they stayed to watch the game, otherwise if they had missed this game, they would probably spend the rest of their lives with regret.
Ming Wang’s fans are, on the contrary, the calmest group among them.
"Ming Shen, finally bestowed upon her the blessing that belongs to her!"
"Mom, mom, mom!"
"The spirit bomb has finally been condensed!"
"In the second year of the Ming Wang calendar, the great Ming Wang finally began to challenge the mighty power of nature. Please cheer for the birth of the Ming Shen!"
"..."
Uh...it's only relative to the previous reactions of Ming Wang fans.
In the eyes of ordinary people, they are still shockingly abnormal, as can be seen from the Amazon fans around them who are so scared that they shrink their feet and move their buttocks to avoid them.
Although Ming Wang's series of actions were very exciting, she was the only one who was disturbed by the broken branches in this section of the track. Akitsu Emperor and others behind her were not affected at all. It can be said that it was only an obstacle for the pioneers, and it was this obstacle that actually shortened the distance between Ming Wang and the horse girls behind her.
"Hehe, horse racing competition is not gymnastics. Only those who reach the finish line can be considered the winner." Ling Amazon caught up from behind and laughed at Ming Wang. She finally got used to the strong wind and caught up with Ming Wang, although it was also thanks to the fact that Ming Wang was blocked for a while just now.
Ming Wang was not surprised that he was caught up. He just counted silently in his mind as he looked at the horse girls who were catching up with him: one, three, six horse girls... As expected, they were all GI level, with excellent perseverance and endurance. It would be impossible to get rid of them easily.
After running through the first track, the second track was soon completed as well. The 1,600-meter NHK Mile Cup was officially halfway through. Normally, the winner could be seen at this time, but at this time, under the influence of the typhoon, anything was possible. Even Ming Wang only had an advantage of three horse lengths.
The rain hit her fair and calm face. Ming Wang was running in the front, only half the distance to the NHK Mile Cup championship. In the high-intensity running and the cold rain, she finally began to breathe heavily and sweat slightly on her forehead.
Unlike other horse girls, she had just been forced by the typhoon to move left and right involuntarily and even did a somersault, not to mention that she had run for a distance with Amazon against the strong wind at the beginning.
But it was still within expectations... Ming Wang thought, all he had to do next was run this last distance.
The two hundred thousand spectators on site and the nearly seven million online viewers in the live broadcast room were all closely watching the game at this moment, clenching their fists nervously, as the game might very well be decided in the next moment.
Ming Wang also thought so, lowering her body to prepare for the final sprint, while Akitsu Emperor and Ye Wenshehui, who were slightly behind her, also had a solemn expression and were ready for the sprint.
"Ugh... woooo!"
Ming Wang suddenly heard a surprised cry from Ling Amazon behind him. He turned around and found that she swayed because of the unstable footing on the muddy track. After all, she was not like the experienced GI horse racing girls like Akitsu Emperor who had experience in dealing with various tracks, so it was normal for accidents to happen. But the wind blew up again, blowing the rain like a curtain in the air and then blowing it away, as if an invisible hand was constantly kneading the huge rain curtain in the sky.
Ming Wang was about to continue running when he suddenly saw small branches being blown up and falling towards Ling Amazon, who was shaking and had no time to pay attention. She looked up and saw the overwhelming branches stabbing at her. She was stunned and had no time to react.
At this time, Ling Amazon found that her arm was grabbed by someone, and then a huge force came, no, it was a super strong force that directly pulled her whole body away. The broken branch flew directly backwards towards her original position and fell to an invisible place behind the track.
When Ling Amazon came to her senses, she saw Ming Wang's face wet by the rain. Seeing her eyes flashing with scarlet lightning from so close, Ling Amazon was so frightened that her body tensed up. Compared to being almost hit just now, seeing Ming Wang was even more terrifying.
"Be careful!"
Ming Wang glanced at her, left these words and continued to run forward. Ling Amazon didn't even have time to say thank you, she just looked at her back. In order to help her, Ming Wang's advantage of being first was gone, and now he was even one horse length behind Emperor Akitsu.
There was a tingling sensation in his fingers. Ming Wang turned his head and found that there were several small cuts on his fingers, and a few blood beads had condensed.
Ming Wang smiled and licked the blood off her finger wound with her tongue. The smell of rust stimulated her nerves, making her stare at the Akitsu Emperor and Ye Wenshehui in front of her.
Disadvantage?
That's not bad either.
Emperor Akitsu looked at King Ming behind her and immediately sprinted forward. King Ming would never fall behind again and she really admired King Ming's courage to save people, but now was the middle of the game and even if Emperor Akitsu wanted to applaud her, she could only do so after the game was over.
"right now,
It’s time to end the game!”
Emperor Qiujin sprinted forward. Not only her, but Ye Wenshehui also chose to sprint forward at this time. They had been left behind by Emperor Ming since the beginning of the game. Now was the only time when they could be faster than Emperor Ming, and the only time when they could win.
At this time, use all your strength!
This is my battle of revenge. There was a chill in the eyes of Emperor Qiujin.
I carry the name of the God of the West Wind, and I must not lose here. Ye Wenshehui also gritted his teeth.
But they were so focused on Ming Wang that they forgot about the other formidable opponent in the game.
Misako Akasaka quickly explained the situation into the microphone.
"Akitsu Tei and Yebumishekui surpassed Ming Wang. The two of them opened up a gap of one horse length with Ming Wang. This will be the closest step for them to Ming Wang in this game. It is also the game where Ming Wang is most likely to be defeated since his debut. Can they succeed...
"Hey, wooooah!"
Suddenly, a gust of wind three times stronger than the previous one blew up. Even though Akasaka Misato was sitting still, her chair was blown back by the wind. This strong wind came suddenly, but it was normal in a typhoon day. All the spectators in the stands held down the hoods of their raincoats and lowered their bodies, otherwise they would be blown crooked.
Akasaka Misato hurriedly shouted: "Typhoon 'Saddle' is getting closer to Tokyo, and the wind has increased several times. All spectators please be careful of falling objects. This change will definitely change the situation on the field. Sure enough, Akitsu Emperor and Ye Fumiki's sprint momentum was blocked, but the same is true for other horse girls. No... there is one horse girl who is not!"
"Kacha!"
At this moment, everyone seemed to hear the sound of lightning exploding, which did not occur in the sky, but on the field!
It was as if red flames appeared before the eyes of the spectators at the Tokyo Racecourse, evaporating the rain. They saw a dark horse girl walking alone on the track against the strong wind without any worries!
That is Ming Wang. pppsq~ t+Chapter 652 Dreams will come true soontChttps://contentxs.pysmei.com/BookFiles/Html/651303/3968286/.htmlq~ ?pt }"Ha..."
Ming Wang breathed while running, and mist came out of his mouth and nose in the cold air, which was quickly blown away by the wind and rain.
Her body temperature is very high now. If you touch her skin with your hand, you can feel the scorching heat. She had tested it with a thermometer before the game, and it was close to 40 degrees. According to common sense, this is a body temperature that can be sent to the hospital, but Ming Wang feels that her body and mind are extremely clear.
Ming Wang grinned, his sharp black eyes looked straight at the finish line, his knees bent, his feet planted on the ground, the fine horseshoes he bought from the horse racing girl's shop were under tremendous pressure at this moment, making a creaking sound but not deforming, allowing Ming Wang to sprint forward at an extremely fast initial speed.
She was so fast that only an agile figure could be seen, literally breaking through the rain curtain and knocking out a channel on the track. Before the rain even had time to fill up the gap, Ming Wang's figure had already sprinted forward.
She was racing against the wind.
This is the domain-level skill that Ming Wang can finally use after his control over this body increases.
[Red Lotus Fury]!
"Den!"
Ming Wang did not stop because of the stunned silence of the audience. On the contrary, she had not yet fully used this skill. She exhaled a breath of warm air in the rain, and her body accelerated forward twice, and then, three times...
After repeating it seven times, it finally reached its maximum speed, a terrifying speed that would scare away people.
……
Although he was in the Tresen dormitory when he saw Ming Wang being swept by the fallen branches and leaves, he still held his phone tightly and felt nervous for her. He was slightly relieved after seeing her successfully avoid it.
But after worrying, she couldn't help but feel confused. Why did King Ming still want to hold the competition in such weather?
Although GI competitions are rare, they can surely be postponed to a sunny day, right?
She looked at the calm face of Ming Wang on the screen, and for some reason she seemed to see Zhong Ming. Seeing her steps forward in the wind and rain, she couldn't help but touch her legs and whispered, "Come on."
The Emperor of the East China Sea, who was sitting on the ground outside the dormitory, leaned against the door panel and heard the voice of excellent quality. He turned around and gave a thumbs up to Mebai McQueen and the other two with a smile.
The three of them looked at each other and smiled.
……
"There's still a competition at this time, and King Ming is actually falling behind." Xin Xin Guanghui said in surprise while watching the competition on the screen. In her impression, although King Ming is usually invisible and intangible, he is also a super horse racer like her burden, who is strong enough to lift a tripod and run a horse on his arms. So he was extremely shocked when he saw her falling behind.
"It's a typhoon day after all. It's normal to have any accidents." Fujimasa Marching said, looking at the gloomy and windy weather outside the balcony, even the balcony door was creaking.
“Can Ming Wang still win?” New Glory couldn’t help but ask. After all, they were horse girls from the same team. If Ming Wang could win, it would be a good thing for Ming Wang’s team.
Moreover, the more powerful Ming Wang is, the higher the average strength of their team will be. Brand New Glory is also one of the Four Heavenly Kings of Ming Wang team, so naturally they cannot leave Ming Wang alone.
"Then let's cheer for her too." Xiao Limao also said. She looked at Ming Wangdao on the screen and said, "I don't know why, but I always feel very close to her."
"Eh? I think she's a little scary." Xin Xin Guanghui muttered, but the three of them still came together to cheer for Ming Wang. The wind and rain outside the window were blowing fiercely, but the room was cozy and warm.
As soon as they finished speaking, they saw Ming Wang accelerating and sprinting several times to overtake Akitsu Emperor and Ye Wenshehui. He was obviously faster than the wind in the increasingly strong wind!
……
“Ming Wang! Ming Wang has accelerated again. When this round of strong wind blocked Emperor Akitsu and Ye Wenshehui, Ming Wang was not affected at all. He surpassed the two horse girls in front of him and returned to the first place again!”
"Don't even think about running away!"
Emperor Qiujin gritted her teeth, looking at the figure of Ming Wang in front of her. She wanted to sprint but was blown hard by the strong wind and could not speed up any further. She reluctantly reached out to grab Ming Wang who was gradually moving away in front of her, but in the end, only cold raindrops were left in her hands.
Ye Wen Shehui also heaved a sigh of relief helplessly and wiped off the raindrops hanging on his eyelashes. Although he was unwilling to lose, he was competing with Ming Wang after all, and he had imagined this result. Moreover, in this kind of competition, even Ling Amazon could win, so it would not be surprising who won or lost.
"Try harder next time." Ye Wenshehui chuckled.
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