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Because of this, when these people find that what they write is criticized or even attacked by others, they will feel a huge psychological gap and often give up this industry in the end.

Chu He didn't want Wu Geng Liuli to be hurt, so he considered the choice of words for a long time.

From a light novel perspective, it is hard not to get sleepy with the stories she wrote. The plots are so boring, and there are so many meaningless nouns and notes.

How can readers have the patience to read all the characters with so many settings? You can't really rely on the illustrators' exquisite illustrations to sell the books, right? That would be like toilet paper.

Although what I write is also toilet paper to some extent, it is at least toilet paper with patterns, and many readers are willing to buy it!

What you wrote is just a bunch of crap. No matter how beautiful the illustrations are, not many people will read it. Moreover, the style is a bit gloomy and full of middle school student style. It is really at the bottom of the list of novels about traveling to another world.

It seems that Black Cat is really the same as in the anime, with a great talent for games, but her level of light novel writing is completely poor. No wonder the sister-con toilet paper written by Kousaka Kirino was published and even made into an animation, but she could only watch from the side.

Looking at Miss Gogen Ruri, who was sitting across the table and looking up at him cautiously, expecting to get affirmation, Chu He sighed in his heart.

He remembered that this black cat really liked writing novels. If he wanted to help her, he would have to say something offensive. He hoped she could accept it.

"Ms. Black Cat——"

Chu He lowered his voice and tried his best to appear serious.

"Yes, it is!"

Seeing Chu He's serious face, Wu Geng Liuli immediately sat up straight, swallowed lightly, clenched her fists nervously, pursed her lips and held her breath.

"You can write so many words. I can see your efforts." Chu He first affirmed Black Cat's efforts, which would make her feel better, and then said:

"But from the perspective of a light novel, I'm afraid it's not ready for publication yet."

"Yes, yes..."

Wu Geng Liuli's expectant face immediately drooped, and she felt a little bad. She whispered, "Sure enough, it is like this."

Although both of them were criticisms, Mr. Chu He's words were really gentle.

This book is actually very bad. I knew this result a long time ago, but I just couldn't accept it, so I came to ask for your opinion.

The girl held the hem of her skirt tightly with both hands, lowered her head and dared not look at Chu He's expression, and said intermittently: "In fact, before I gave it to you, Mr. Chu He, for advice, I had already submitted it to Dengeki Bunko."

"But the editor only read it for a few minutes and rejected it. He also scolded me and said that what I wrote was rubbish and that some parts were suspected of plagiarism. So I was unwilling to give up and showed it to you with a glimmer of hope."

"It turns out that the professionals' opinions were correct. I just couldn't accept that people didn't like what I wrote. Really, I was just acting like a child!"

Gogen Ruri sighed, stood up and bowed to the man, then reached out to take back the draft and said, "I'm sorry, Mr. Chuhe, for letting you read these things. Maybe I'm really not suitable for writing light novels. See you next time."

The girl felt very ashamed to have her favorite author point out her shortcomings. She just wanted to leave here quickly and go home to calm down, otherwise she was afraid she would cry.

However, she reached out twice but failed to pull the draft back. She looked up at Chu He and found that he had already grabbed her wrist.

Chu He said: "Whether someone is suitable for writing light novels cannot be determined after just one or two times."

"Ms. Gogen Ruri, geniuses are few and far between. Most authors are just ordinary people. Not many people can become famous with just one book. You don't have to feel frustrated because of a temporary failure."

Chu He used a little force to push the girl back to her original position, and asked the waiter for two glasses of juice before continuing:

"The editor-in-chief of a website on the other side of the ocean once said that a capable or talented author will fail once or twice at most, but can quickly rise to prominence with a little guidance. Only a person who has no talent and ability will never become a great person even if he is given 007-style guidance—"

"Gogeng Ruri, I believe in my own judgment. You are actually a talented person, but you are still young and inexperienced, so you haven't been able to change your mindset to write an interesting story. I can guide you and I will definitely make your next book outstanding. What do you think?"

Gokou Ruri is not even a high school student now, so it is normal for her to write a light novel like this. In fact, many high school graduates or college students are not much better than Gokou Ruri when they first start writing novels.

Hearing Chu He say this, Wu Geng Liuli raised her head in surprise.

"You, what do you mean?"

Chapter 118: Holy Land Pilgrimage Planetarium

Chu He would never ignore a character like Gogen Ruri, whom he had liked very much before he traveled through time.

Since Kuroneko wants to write a light novel and I have some ideas about this, why can't I guide her and help her move towards her dream?

So Chu He sent out an invitation:

"Become my disciple, I will definitely teach you a lot of things."

Even if Black Cat really couldn't write an interesting story in the end, what would happen? He had already acquired the Fuzugawa Library and became the boss. As long as the content was better than the current draft, he could still publish it for Gogen Ruri!

"Okay, okay!"

Gogen Ruri didn't expect Chu He to make this request. After she came to her senses, she was immediately ecstatic!

She immediately held Chu He's hand and said loudly:

"Please guide me, teacher!"

"Very good. Waiter, please bring two more drinks and a red velvet cake, thank you." Chu He was very satisfied with the girl's attitude. He turned around and asked for some food and drinks, ready to chat with the girl in detail.

Since he had already accepted Wu Geng Liuli as his disciple, Chu He taught her some writing experience in this coffee shop.

Gogen Ruri took out paper and pen and began to listen carefully.

The conversation between the two people was not loud, and they were sitting near the window, so they did not disturb the business of the coffee shop which already had few customers.

Time flies by.

What Chu He is talking about now are all relatively basic knowledge. Wu Geng Liuli has heard some of the content before, but she didn't understand why she should do that at that time. What Chu He has to do today is to solve her mentality problem.

There are 80 billion people in this world. Even if you pick one out of a hundred, there are still many talented people. It’s just that the number of people who can reach the level of genius is relatively small.

Gokou Ruri has some talent in writing, but she has not reached the level of a genius. However, this is enough. Even Kasumigaoka Utaha's talent is only slightly stronger than Gokou Ruri's.

If we really want to talk about writing geniuses, it has to be Miss Kani Nayuta, or Senjumura Masaru who is still in elementary school, and Miss Yamada Fairy who we have not yet met.

Those people have truly reached the genius level, and the sales of their famous works in the future are dozens or even hundreds of times more than that of Kasumigaoka Utaha!

Oh, Karina Yuta has now written a book called “Silver Season”. I wonder where Miss Shirakawa Kyo, a female college student in the same world of “It Would Be Nice If I Had a Little Sister” is now?

Chu He is also quite interested in Miss Shirakawa Jing, who has both good looks and a good figure. If there is a chance, he would like to catch her and make friends with her.

Okay, let’s leave this matter to those Licorices who are going to college!

Let them make friends with Shirakawa Kyo first, and then I'll take the opportunity to make an appearance, and then call Korina and Nayuta along, and after a few times, won't the relationship be established?

Well, but now...

Looking at Miss Black Cat, who had already written two full pages of draft paper with a pen and was suffering from indigestion and brain overload, Chu He temporarily stopped this impromptu lecture.

Looking at the two empty plates on the table, Chu He thought that dinner could be postponed for a while, so he invited, "Black Cat, we have been sitting here for more than an hour, do you want to go out for a walk?"

"Want to go shopping? Sure."

Gogen Ruri's butt was a little tired after sitting on the chair for so long. Now her brain was filled with new knowledge, which she couldn't digest for the time being. She decided to go out with Teacher Chuhe to get some fresh air.

She remembered that Teacher Chu He seemed to live in Tokyo, and this time he came all the way to see her. Now thinking about it, it was really impolite. As a seeker of advice, she should have gone to Tokyo to meet him.

After carrying the bag out and waiting for the man to check out, Gogen Ruri stood at the door and asked, "Teacher, is there any place you want to go shopping later? I can show you around."

"Ah, but it's a bit late at this time, so I probably can't go too far. My house has curfew at night, and I have to be back before 7pm."

Because her parents like to go to Tokyo to queue up to buy two-dimensional peripheral products, Gokou Ruri's curfew time has been extended a little.

Chu He stroked the girl's black hair and said with a smile, "You don't have to use honorifics to me. Since there is a curfew at Little Black Cat's house, I'll take you back later."

He just thought of a good place where he could effectively empty his mind and make people feel very relaxed. It must be very suitable for the little black cat.

"Black Cat, do you want to go to the planetarium together?"

"A planetarium? In Chiba City..."

Ruri Gokou doesn’t go out shopping very often on weekdays. She is not as familiar with her hometown Chiba as she is with Akihabara in Tokyo!

Due to her family's financial reasons, apart from going out to attend various comic exhibitions or buying two-dimensional products such as light novels and comics, she only has some simple odd jobs.

So when she heard Chu He asking about the planetarium, she really couldn't remember where there was a planetarium in Chiba.

Chu He raised his hand and waved to the female driver of a car on the side of the road that was disguised as a taxi by the Licorices, and called the girl who was secretly protecting Gogen Ruri over.

"Driver, let's go to the Planetarium Manten in Toshima-ku, Tokyo."

This is the place where Gao Song Deng often appears in the mygo world. Chu He has always wanted to accompany a few beautiful girls to visit the holy land, and this time he finally has the chance.

"Okay, ahem, please sit down, guests?" This Licorice almost said the commander, but fortunately she had received professional training and changed her words in time.

And Gogen Ruri said with some doubt: "Teacher Chuhe, if we go to Tokyo now, we might not be able to return home in time, right?"

The train hadn’t stopped yet at around 7 o’clock, but if I stayed in Tokyo for too long, I would definitely not be able to go back before the curfew.

"Oh, don't worry about this guest." Licorice said, "I'm going to Tokyo to meet a friend. I'll be back to Chiba after dinner. If you want to go to the planetarium, I can pick you up in the evening and take you back to Chiba. It's free."

Is there such a coincidence?

Wu Geng Liuli was a little confused, but Chu He said, "How can I let you worry so much? But we do have to consider sending her home. I'll pay for it. Miss driver, please help take care of her."

"Haha, no problem, no problem. I think you two are meant to be friends, so let's just be friends. If you need anything in the future, call me. I'll give you 8% off on taxi fares."

Having said that, this Licorice handed the phone to Chu He, indicating that he should save her and Gogen Ruri's contact information in it.

This was of course performed for the little black cat. Now all the Licorices have Chuhe's contact information. Handing the phone to Chuhe was just to prevent Gogen Ruri from seeing Chuhe's Line account in advance.

The school has arranged for Licorice to protect Gokou Ruri, but outside of school, it is the driver sister and two other girls who are responsible for her safety.

Before the little black cat could react, Chu He pretended to have exchanged Line numbers with the driver, then held up his phone and looked into Gogen Ruri's eyes.

"This...thank you so much, driver sister."

Gokou Ruri accepted the friend request from this Licorice.

Chapter 119 Want a Bonus!

On the way to Tokyo, Chuhe and Licorice cooperated with each other and soon she became familiar with Gokou Ruri, so that if they accidentally ran into each other on the street in the future, she would not be regarded as a stalker.

After about 40 minutes, the group arrived at the entrance of the planetarium [Mantian].

"Then I'll be leaving first. See you later, Mr. Chuhe and little sister Black Cat." After saying this, the twenty-year-old Licorice with short red hair drove away.

Gokou Ruri was in a good mood. She didn't expect that she could meet such a friendly older sister when she went out. So she said with emotion: "She, this older sister is really lively."

"Well, I think she's pretty nice too, but now let's go buy the tickets."

"Okay, then I'll trouble you."

After saying that, the two of them walked into the planetarium together.

Facing Gogen Ruri, Chu He rarely maintained his restraint. He did not hold the girl's hand, but walked in front to lead the way. By the way, he took a few photos of the scenes in the museum with his mobile phone and sent them to the chat group.

Taking photos is part of the pilgrimage to the holy land and it is a must to taste.

After Chu He took two selfies, he turned to look at the girl behind him and asked:

"Oh, little black cat, do you want to take a picture together?"

"Eh? Is that okay?"

Gokou Ruri agreed to take a photo with her favorite light novel author on the spot and said with a smile, "Okay, then let's take a photo in front of the mural in the corridor."

After saying that, the girl pulled Chu He's sleeve and walked to a relatively open place on the side, and posed next to Chu He. Chu He also adjusted the shooting angle of his mobile phone, and the camera's clicking sound was heard from the phone.

After the shooting was completed, Chu He sent the photos to Gogen Ruri's line.

Then, he sent the photo to the chat group with a message attached.

Chu He: [I went to the planetarium with Miss Black Cat this afternoon. I had a lot of fun.]

The chat group, which was originally quite quiet, immediately had a series of messages popping up as this message and picture appeared.

In the chat group:

Kasumigaoka Utaha: [Again, attacking innocent girls? ]