Second dimension superman life

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When Jinmu Chitose saw that the gun in her hand had carvings on it, she began to look forward to her own gift. She quickly opened the gift box and saw her own gift.

"Wow, it's rose gold, the pattern is awesome! And this unique attack head and this special feel - my portrait is on the handguard after all, awesome!"

Nishiki Chitsugu couldn't let go of this gift.

Seeing this, Chu He handed three small transformable folding knives to the two girls. This exquisitely crafted and expensive weapon was deeply loved by Nishiki Chitsugu.

"It's a folding knife in normal use, but you can slide the handle to transform it into a jab by pressing a button. It's so cool!"

Nishiki Chitsuka took one of the daggers, and the other two belonged to Inoue Takina. It happened that she had some experience in boxing techniques, so she was able to use the two daggers with ease.

Seeing that they were both very happy, Chu He slid his big hand up the girl's calf with more ease, but was stopped by Inoue Takina halfway through.

Inoue Takina put down the gun, her face slightly red, and muttered: "It would be impolite to go any further. I'm not wearing boxers today. I'm very shy."

It was the first time that Nishiki Chitsuka saw Inoue Takina behaving so shyly. When she saw Chuhe's big hands only wandering on her legs, she inexplicably felt an impulse in her heart.

"Chuhe, my legs are no worse than hers, Takina. I'm so happy today. I'll show you that again later."

"that?"

Jinmu Qianshu also put her jade feet into Chuhe's hands, her face a little red, and said: "It's just a split, didn't you like watching it before? This time you are allowed to touch it."

Chapter 142 Everyone in MYGO

While Chu He was getting along well with the two beautiful girls in the coffee shop, on the other side, in RING's rehearsal room.

The members of the MYGO band are still in the process of getting used to each other.

Nagasaki Motoyo did not do anything secretly. Instead, she practiced her bass skills diligently, making it impossible for Shiina Riki to find fault with her.

But the problems of MYGO band still exist.

That is, as a new guitarist, even though Chihaya Aine practiced diligently every night, her technical level had not yet reached the level where she could perform on stage!

Although Takamatsu Teru, the lead singer, still couldn't help but be afraid to sing loudly on the stage, Nagasaki Motoyo knew that this was only temporary.

Once Shiina Tatsuki suddenly started singing the song of Kasuga Kage, Takamatsu Tomori would definitely sing it as usual and win the love of many audiences.

The problem is that Nagasaki Motoyo herself doesn't want to actually play Kasuga Shadow.

It would be fine if Toyokawa Shoko didn't come to watch the live performance, but if Chuhe didn't stop Toyokawa Shoko, and she and Xiaomu really came to the scene, she would definitely be defeated and run to the street crying to call Sanjiao Chuhua, right?

The woman in Sanjiao Chuhua is also a hidden heavyweight.

If possible, Nagasaki Suyo hopes that Toyokawa Shoko can form the Galaxy Battleship band later. That Mikado Hatsuka is obviously a substitute for Takamatsu Tomori found by Toyokawa Shoko. It's too dangerous!

Oh, that's also about Yao Le Nai, why didn't she come to the rehearsal room to practice today? Didn't I add her contact information to Li Xi's phone?

"Maomao must not have been looking at her phone again." Shiina Riki said, "And Suyo, your bass playing has improved recently, very good. Now all we need is Aine's guitar accompaniment."

"You actually know how to praise people?"

While Chihaya Aine and Takamatsu Tomo were not here yet, Nagasaki Motoyo also started chatting with Shiina Tateki - she still didn't talk about Takamatsu Tomo's problems at all, it was like she was just supporting Tomo.

Shiina Riki said: "Of course I can compliment people."

"It's just that Aine's level is too poor. She still can't play a complete song. Can she really succeed in the performance next month if she continues like this?"

Taking into account Chihaya Aine's technical level, Shiina Ryuki had deliberately lowered the difficulty when arranging the music, but it still didn't work. The pink-haired girl was a complete newcomer, and she couldn't keep up when the music tempo became faster.

If Chihaya Aine still hasn't made much progress by the end of this month, she might have to ask Hachiman Kairin to come over for help.

"Oh, by the way, Su Shi, the wallpaper you changed earlier--"

During the chat, Shiina Tatsuki mentioned the new mobile phone wallpaper that Nagasaki Motoyo had changed two days ago. Although it was only used for a short day before being replaced with other pictures, Shiina Tatsuki still saw it by accident.

"Will Xiaomu continue to play in the band?"

In that picture, Shiina Tatsuki saw the long light green hair and the delicate doll-like face at a glance. As an old teammate of Wakaba Mutsu, Shiina Tatsuki also missed him a little.

Nagasaki Suyo shook her head slightly and said, "She can play, but Xiaomu's style is different from ours. I'm afraid that the next time we see her, she will be in another band."

"Of course, Xiaomu and I still keep in touch at school, and she misses everyone back then."

"You miss Xiangzi, right? They were childhood sweethearts."

"Lixi, this has nothing to do with Xiangzi, right?"

Nagasaki Suyo knew that she was unhappy about the disbandment of the previous band, but Xiaoxiang had no choice. Given her family situation at the time, she simply couldn't play in a band. I forgave her!

dong dong dong~

At this moment, the sound of running was suddenly heard in the corridor outside the door. The next moment, the door was opened, and Chihaya Aine walked in with Takamatsu Deng behind her.

As soon as they entered the door, Chihaya Aine said to the two of them:

"Hey, sister Su Shi, guess who I met? It's someone you know!"

"acquaintance?"

Nagasaki Suyo was a little surprised and asked, "Who is it?"

Chihaya Aine said, "It's Nishiki Chizuka-san and Inoue Takina-san. They transferred to our class today! They are both beautiful girls!"

"Oh, them."

Nagasaki Suyo was not surprised this time.

She had seen the chats of her group members before and knew that the two Licorices would transfer schools, but she didn't know that they would transfer today.

The last time those two were chatting, Nishiki Chitsuka was still struggling over whether to go to Hanasakigawa or Hanaoka. Now it seems like they've gone to Hanaoka, which is good too.

Chihaya Aine tried again:

"And there's more! I also saw a handsome guy! His name is Chu He, he looks to be around 20 years old, and he looks very rich!"

"You met Chu He?!"

Upon hearing this, Nagasaki Suyo immediately put down her bass, ran quickly to her and Takamatsu Deng, and reached out to check both of them to see if there was anything wrong.

"Huh? What, what happened?"

"Su Shi?"

Neither of them understood why Nagasaki Suyo did this.

Seeing that they were all fine, Nagasaki Suyo was relieved and said, "Although that man named Chuhe is handsome and rich, he is actually a scumbag. Aine and Deng, you must be careful in the future."

As she said this, Chuhe, who was enjoying the ear licking massage by Inoue Takina and Nishiki Chizuka in the distance, felt unhappy - are you framing me?

Forgot my super hearing, didn't you?

Nagasaki Suyo said again: "That guy is sometimes domineering and sometimes gentle. He is a guy that is hard to judge. It is best not to get close to him, okay?"

Gao Songdeng said: "Huh? Is that so?"

Chihaya Aine said, "Why do you sound jealous? That man is Su Shi's friend, right? Deng reminded me before, Su Shi must have stared at the photo with him, right?"

Nagasaki Suyo looked embarrassed and said defensively:

"I'm not jealous!"

"The past is the past, and the present is the present. Chu He is a playboy. Just because he is my friend doesn't stop him from touching girls. Everyone should be careful."

"what?"

Shiina Riki crossed his legs and said, "If you really hate him, why not call the police? You look like you're afraid your boyfriend will be taken away from you, Sushi."

"I can't tell, you actually care about that man, right?"

"Lixi!"

Nagasaki Motoyo turned around and glared at her, but was immediately glared back by Shiina Riki.

Nagasaki Suyo warned: "I'm saying this for everyone's sake. It's useless to call the police on that man. You can't even imagine his power!"

"Really? But he seems quite kind to me." Chihaya Aine said, "He even asked the driver to pick up his girlfriend. I also want to be able to go home without having to walk~"

Gao Songdeng, who was standing by, also interrupted:

"Well, although he didn't say anything, he doesn't seem like a bad person."

Okay, then you guys decide.

Nagasaki Suyo gave up trying to persuade him. No matter how much she tried, the result would be the same. Her current behavior would only delay some time.

The girl thought to herself, when he catches you in the future you will know you are wrong!

Chapter 143: Joyful Heart

The next morning, Chu He had just finished breakfast when he received an email from Wu Geng Liuli.

The email contained an outline of her newly written light novel and a 1-word text. At the end of the email, there was also a smiling cat emoticon.

Thanks to Chu He's kind guidance in the past few days, Gogen Ruri also learned a lot. Although the outline she wrote this time is still as childish as before, the long settings and some rare definitions of terms in the main text are gone.

Chu He was very satisfied with this.

Well, he who listens to advice is a good kid. He is much better than the newcomer who came to ask me how to modify the content of the novel before traveling through time, but insisted on not changing it after listening to the suggestions, felt that what he wrote was very reasonable, and said that he didn't understand him at all.

This time, Black Cat wrote a story about traveling to another world, which is a common theme in the light novel world. The protagonist is a new white-collar worker who has just graduated from college and started working. He is summoned by the king of another world and forms a team of brave men to fight the devil.

Unlike the general time-travel plots, in the story setting of Black Cat this time, the major human kingdoms are still in the medieval slave system, exploiting the lower-class people in order to allow themselves to live a luxurious life of aristocracy.

Although the demon forces attacked major countries, they were also gradually saving the people of the other world from dire straits by popularizing education, abolishing slavery, and using magic to improve productivity.

The kingdom's power initially appeared great and glorious, but in fact it only wanted to use the power of the heroes to defeat the Demon King and seize the Demon King's army's legacy.

Of course, it is still a harem story. The protagonist will instigate a legal loli female mage, a savage big-breasted church saint, and accept an elf archer to reach an agreement with the Demon King's army, put on a show for the kingdom, and then get the reward for free.

This setting is very good. Chu He has a feeling that this is the biggest selling point that will make the novel very popular. Although there are some shadows of his current novel "The Villain Brave" in it, it has not reached the level of plagiarism. At most, it is just following the trend. Since the little black cat is his disciple, this should not lead to her being burned.

This time, Black Cat only briefly mentioned two paragraphs as a summary of the protagonist's journey to another world in the first 500 words of the main text. The rest of the settings are obviously prepared to be slowly revealed in the plot, and the most basic sense of anticipation is also achieved.

Although this time there are only 1 words of text, the reading experience is much better.

Chu He understood that the three golden rules and the basics of raising expectations that he taught Black Cat last time had been learned. Although they were not integrated well with the experience of the light novel, the story this time was indeed more interesting.

Gokou Ruri is indeed a person of some talent. If the follow-up to this book is good, and the theme of the other world has a wide audience, then it is possible that her light novel sales will exceed those of Kasumigaoka Utaha in the future.

Chu He began to edit his reply in the email.

Chu He: [This story is very interesting. It seems that you have learned the basic experience. I am very happy. You can continue to write. After you finish writing a volume of plot, you can submit it to the Undying River. I don’t think you will be rejected this time. ]

Chu He: [If there is anything else that needs to be revised, it is that the summoned protagonist's memories of his life before the time travel are still a bit long. The protagonist's life before the time travel took up 5 words in the first 3 words, which is unnecessary.]

Chu He: [If possible, try to write the content before the protagonist's time travel in about 300 words or less than 500 words. When shaping the protagonist later, write some of his stories and experiences before the time travel into the plot separately. This will have a better effect. Of course, this is just a personal suggestion. If you think it is better to write longer, you can also keep some of the content as appropriate. The editor will have a more professional opinion later. Come on, I am optimistic about you. ]

Chu He: [But Black Cat, you are still a junior high school student, so you should study harder and not focus all your attention on writing light novels. When you go to high school or college, as you gain life experience and knowledge, your writing skills will gradually improve. So don't worry, I will always be with you.]

This time, Chu He summarized some of his creative experiences that he had not mentioned before and the parts that were suitable for use in light novels. He then sent them to Gogen Ruri and attached many words of praise, which would be beneficial to her subsequent creations.

He put all the contents in an email and sent it to Gokou Ruri.

On the other side, in a private house in Chiba City, Chiba Prefecture.

Wu Geng Liuli was very excited when she saw the guidance and creative experience that Chu He sent her, as well as the words of praise that were completely different from last time.

The feeling of having your creations recognized by others, or by your favorite authors, is really——

awesome!