Under one person: I will add money to become a layman, working from 9 to 5

"Damn fat man...you are in trouble." Bai Shixue looked like she wanted to see a good show.

"I..." Zanglong coughed lightly: "Why should I be miserable? What I just said is worthy of Zhou Fengliu. I want to watch him play every day!"

Hidden Dragon withdrew a line of dialogue and fired a rainbow fart backhand.

This is not cowardice.

This is from the heart.

"You changed your tune so quickly!" Bai Shixue greeted Zhang Chulan and the others: "Come on, is Zhang Chulan interested in making some money?"

"Money?" Hearing this word, Zhou Fengliu became interested. He vaguely remembered that there seemed to be a handicap in the plot of the original Luotian Dajiao where you could place bets.

"What?" Zhang Chulan asked.

"Hey." Bai Shixue shook the tablet in his hand, which contained information on the participants and odds of each competition venue.

"This is Fatty's website that specializes in collecting information about strangers. I made a handicap for this conference on it. You can suppress whoever you think will win. You can also suppress yourself."

After listening to Bai Shixue's introduction, Zhang Chulan took a look and found that his odds were frighteningly high, while Zhou Fengliu's odds were one to one.

"Holy shit, the odds between me and Brother Liu are so ridiculous?" Zhang Chulan said that the gap was a bit big.

"There's nothing you can do about it, your performance in the first game was too explosive." Zanglong interjected: "No one is optimistic about you now."

"What's the maximum profit you can make from this handicap?" Zhou Fengliu asked the question at this time.

"Well... the upper limit of a few million shouldn't be a problem. If it's more, it won't be a problem. After all, it's just a small fight between juniors..." Bai Shixue said that the game was too small to withstand the stud.

"That's right." Zhou Fengliu nodded when he heard this, and then looked at Zhang Chulan beside him.

Ok.

I don’t know if this is considered income from work?

Zhou Fengliu wanted to give Zhang Chulan a try. After all, he knew the plot of the original work, so he was basically unbiased.

"Brother Liu, when you look at me like this... I have an ominous feeling." Zhang Chulan couldn't help but swallowed when he saw Zhou Fengliu staring at him.

"It's okay, it's okay." Zhou Feng showed a "nuclear" smile.

...

"Please assemble the winning teams!"

"Please assemble the winning teams!"

Not long after, everyone heard the announcement and gathered in the open space where the morning draw was held. After a round of eliminations, the originally many contestants were reduced to thirty-two.

The setting sun was still shining, and I saw the old Heavenly Master standing on a high platform. There was a wooden table beside him, and the red box for drawing lots on it was particularly conspicuous. Just now, everyone took turns to come forward and draw the lots.

"Thank you for your hard work. So far, the first round of competition has been completed. There are thirty-two winners."

The old Heavenly Master stood with his hands behind his back and glanced at the people in the audience. When he saw that everyone had notes in their hands, he continued:

"The next competition will be conducted on a one-on-one basis. The name on the slip of paper you drew will be your opponent in the next match."

Listening to Master Tian's introduction to the rules of the competition, Zhou Fengliu glanced at the note in his hand, and three large characters were vaguely visible on it.

Fengshayan.

What a coincidence.

Zhou Fengliu glanced at the crowd and spotted Feng Shayan's figure in the distance.

Swallow...Since we have met, it means that this is fate...

While he looked at Feng Shayan, Feng Shayan seemed to know her opponent in the next match and cast her eyes over.

The two looked at each other, and Feng Shayan looked a little bitter.

hemp eggs.

Her crow-mouthed brother really got it right!

...

"Brother Liu, who is your next opponent?"

At this moment, the crow-mouthed brother Feng Xingtong came to Zhou Fengling. He first glanced at the note in Zhou Fengling's hand. When he saw that it was his elder sister, he made a "puff" sound.

"Sorry... I really didn't mean it." Feng Xingtong saw his elder sister walking this way, and he tried hard to hold back his laughter.

but...

He had no professional training, and he was not the two laughing policemen. He really couldn't help it.

"You're laughing so hard...that's really bad."

"What?" Zhang Chulan and Feng Baobao also came up. After seeing the note in Zhou Fengliu's hand, Zhang Chulan was silent for a second.

"Smile, what's so funny?" Feng Shayan came over and scolded Feng Xingtong.

"Sister...do you remember what you said, what should I do if I meet my eldest brother?" Feng Xingtong first asked the question, and then answered it himself:

"Well...this is great, we really met."

"We'll just bump into each other." Zhou Fengliu shrugged: "Brothers, can I still make things difficult for your sister?"

Zhou Fengliu said that he would definitely stop his efforts. After all, Feng Shayan in front of him was his "loved relative and friend", "good friend" and "good landlord" who drank and talked happily.

"Speaking of it... I don't seem to have learned your methods." Feng Shayan said after thinking about it.

"You want to try?"

"Learn from me." Feng Shayan felt that although the points of drawing lots were somewhat memorized, this should also be an opportunity to learn.

"No, no, you should die if you try." Feng Xingtong stood up and corrected his elder sister.

"Feng Xingtong, you're on a narrow road." Feng Shayan heard the sound and looked at her brother: "You smile like this, aren't you afraid that you will meet him in the end?"

Hearing this, the smile on Feng Xingtong's face froze instantly. He swallowed, then withdrew the topic and turned to look at Zhang Chulan beside him:

"Brother Chu Lan, who is your next opponent?"

...

Ps: To be honest, I read the comments in the last chapter and they are indeed very reasonable. Readers who are familiar with Lao Meng should also know that I am really bad at writing emotional dramas.

Whether it is a fan work or an original work, I always feel that emotional drama is something that is difficult for the author to handle.

The emotional scene seems very simple, but in fact it is difficult to grasp the degree.

If the relationship is handled too quickly, the protagonist looks like a bulldozer; if the relationship is handled slowly, it feels like the reader is being hung up on.

It's overly written, off-putting, and very crooked. There are few details and it fails to highlight the character's image, and there's no sense of immersion.

To put it bluntly, they are unable to grasp the sense of proportion, so many authors will choose the path of no heroine.

Lao Meng has written several books, big and small. He has been avoiding depicting emotional scenes in his previous books because the emotional scenes were poorly written. But when he first started writing this book, he wanted to give it a try.

At the moment the effect seems not very good. Tonight I have been thinking about what the core of the love story is. Later I thought about the process of a man and a woman falling in love, and I seemed to have some understanding.

The most exciting period of falling in love is the ambiguous period, when both parties are pulling and testing each other, and moving forward bit by bit. This period is the most interesting compared to the period after falling in love.

same.

I now feel that the same applies to writing emotional dramas. Whether it is a male protagonist, a female protagonist, or a female supporting character, launching a dog-licking attack from the beginning will greatly reduce the sense of substitution and arouse everyone's disgust.

I think what’s not great about Xia He’s writing is that the setting is very average, the emotional handling is also rough, and because of the protagonist’s character, the interaction with Xia He is extremely weak... and he becomes a Poison point.

I also realized this problem later on. I had no way to pull back, so I could only use my strengths and avoid weaknesses, make full use of my good writing, and reduce the portrayal of emotional scenes.

As for the follow-up emotional drama of this book, I still want to try it tentatively. While using my strengths and avoiding weaknesses to satisfy everyone's desire to see a "rich layman" type of protagonist, I also try to make everyone feel comfortable and learn to improve their emotions. The writing method of the play is a practice for Lao Meng to write other books in the future. I also hope that everyone can understand an author's desire to make progress and give him a certain tolerance. (I want to make progress so much, woo woo woo)

As for the core tone of this book, you can rest assured that it will not change. The protagonist's character will be unified both in the front and back, and there will be no sense of separation.

Having said so much, I am also very grateful for everyone’s support and encouragement.

In order to thank everyone, I will send you three updates today (one update in the morning and two updates after six o'clock in the evening)

Again, ask for everything, ask for small gifts, the cute new author begs for everything. (Please)

Chapter 56 Paid content! Eat melons! Zhang Lingyu has to tell the past! (Second update)

Feng Xingtong knows how to avoid emergencies.

He said that if he really encounters Zhou Fengliu next time, then he will have the same attitude as his sister, then fine!

Just give up.

No need to hesitate.

Feng Shayan didn't see Zhou Fengliu's competition, but he watched it all. He felt uncomfortable even just watching it, let alone being slapped on the face for a while.

"Me?" Zhang Chulan was stunned for a moment when he was called, and then said the name written on his note.

"Shan Shitong."

"Ah, Green Talisman God Shan Shitong." Feng Xingtong nodded upon hearing this, then patted Zhang Chulan on the shoulder: "Brother Chu Lan is lucky, he is fighting elites."

"In the first match, Shan Shitong's three opponents didn't even hold on for two minutes before they knelt down. Their family's ancestral secret technique of talismans specializes in sealing other people's energy, and it doesn't require a lot of preparations. They are hard to guard against in the battle. One fight. Not a word."

"this..."

Listening to Feng Xingtong's introduction, Zhang Chulan's heart felt cold. At this moment, he wanted to change opponents with Zhou Fengliu. He was very difficult to deal with when he heard this.

"Look... does that person look like a master?" Feng Xingtong pointed at Zhang Chulan. It happened that the other person was also looking for Zhang Chulan, so the two of them noticed each other.

"Eh? He seems to be targeting you." Feng Xingtong said: "Brother Chu Lan, don't be afraid, stick your chest up, raise your head and stick your butt out, we can't fall first because of our momentum."

"Haha...haha." Zhang Chulan's smile was a little stiff.

Feng Baobao, who had been silent for a long time, first looked at the guy named Shan Shitong, and then looked at Zhang Chulan. At this time, a bold plan was born in her mind.

...

"Yexing, Jiyun, it's getting late today, you should take everyone to the arranged rooms." After the drawing of lots, Zhang Lingyu spoke to the two disciples of Tianshi Mansion.

"Okay, little uncle."

Hearing the commotion, Zhang Chulan noticed Zhang Lingyu. As someone who had some relationship with the Tianshi Mansion, he felt that he should get closer to this direct disciple of the Tianshi.

After all, the last time Zhang Lingyu informed him of his qualifications to be the successor to the Heavenly Master, there was some unpleasantness.

"Hey, little master uncle, today's game was still so sharp." Zhang Chulan also called Zhang Lingyu little master uncle.

"..." Zhang Lingyu turned her head slightly when she heard someone calling her, and was silent for a second after seeing that it was Zhang Chulan:

"No Bilian, Zhang Chulan, who is your junior uncle?" After he finished speaking, he tilted his head very arrogantly, turned around and left, without giving Zhang Chulan any face.

"..." Zhang Chulan was a little embarrassed at this time.

It happened that Zhou Fengliu came back from going to the toilet and saw Zhang Lingyu passing by. He thought of what he had told the Heavenly Master in the afternoon about what happened to Zhang Lingyu in the past, so he opened his mouth and prepared to tell Zhang Lingyu:

"Ayu."

"Get lost." Zhang Lingyu didn't even give Zhou Fengliu a chance to speak and left directly.

"..." Zhou Fengliu looked at Zhang Lingyu's leaving figure and sighed silently.

Anxious.

Definitely anxious.

He found that there were too many people and they even refused to talk to him.

Tsk tsk.

"Brother Liu, I didn't expect...you..." Zhang Chulan felt a little better when she saw that Zhou Fengliu was also rejected.

"Don't worry about him, that guy is just an arrogant person..." This is how Zhou Fengliu evaluated Zhang Lingyu.

"Hey, Brother Liu, in this family's territory, is it really okay to talk about Junior Master Uncle?" Zhang Chulan said while looking at Ji Yun and Ye Xing.

"The poor Taoist karma cloud."

"Pindao Jiyun, little brother Zhang Chulan, brother Zhou Fengliu, we meet again." Jiyun said with cupped fists.

"Forehead..."

Zhou Fengliu raised his eyebrows when he heard this: "Have we seen them before?"

"Of course I have seen it. When my junior uncle took us down the mountain to find brother Chu Lan...Brother Fengliu was later present and started fighting with our junior uncle..."

Listening to what Ji Yun said, Zhou Fengliu suddenly thought of the two of them. He didn't pay attention at the time, thinking that Zhang Lingyu was leading passers-by A and B, but he didn't expect that they would bump into each other later.