Then he handed the tablet to Yuexia, pointing out her typos and incoherent sentences, and Yuexia also made the revisions.
The foundation of writing style begins with correcting punctuation and spelling errors. Once the text is smooth and error-free, you can take your writing to the next level.
Nian Lun was not a literature major, and to be honest, she really wanted Guanxing to make the changes - after all, she was the one who truly understood these things.
But what Guanxing meant was probably 'You are just the right person to teach her'.
You have to know that Nian Lun is not perfect and there are typos easily. If there are any, I can only pray that the examiner will show mercy.
So, in order to not teach Yuexia the wrong way, Nian Lun could only try his best to use all his life's learning in writing. Try to be a good teacher!
As for the advanced writing skills in the future, leave it to Guanxing.
"By the way, how long is this story supposed to be? And are there any other stories coming after this?" After helping Yuexia sort out the text, Nian Lun was curious about the subsequent plans. "We have short, medium, and long novels now. If there is a sequel, we should decide on this one first, then decide on the subsequent developments."
Upon hearing this, Yuexia put her hand on her chin and pondered for a while, then asked solemnly, "Is there such a thing as a novel that will never be finished?"
"Yes, there are. For example, this book, 'The School Prince's Close-Combat Aide,' is a long novel that's been serialized for over 12 years and was still being updated until yesterday—it's now almost million words." Nian Lun searched the term on Baidu, and his mouth twitched as he read the data. "But I don't want to finish it because there are so many stories I want to write. That's understandable."
"Twenty-three million words..." He counted on his fingers under the moonlight, his eyes seemed to be spinning in circles.
"A document of your length would take 2,300 days to write." Nian Lun very tactfully closed the entry.
“It doesn’t feel that long, so let’s work towards this goal!”
Looking at Yuexia who was full of energy, Nian Lun was stunned.
You should know that the scattered writings of Yuexia can be counted as having taken three days in total. So if we calculate based on the number of 19 words in three days, Yuexia would have taken days to write - that's years.
This is close to the length of a young person's lifetime.
But Nian Lun changed his mind and felt that having such enthusiasm might not be a bad thing.
"Come on! We'll wait for you to treat us to a meal with your royalties."
"And money for our clothes." Guanxing suddenly joined the conversation, as if he was sure that Yuexia would get the royalties.
"Yes, I will try my best...Zzzz"
Then, while cheering herself up, Yuexia slid precariously onto Nian Lun's body.
Looking at the time on the tablet, Nian Lun suddenly realized that it was almost noon. Normally, Yuexia was a night owl and should have gone to bed by now.
"Please don't worry about it, she really needs to rest."
Guanxing covered the moon with a quilt, which made Nian Lun smile like an aunt.
"Mr. Nian Lun, your expression is so disgusting..." Guanxing looked disgusted.
"Don't say that. I'm just smiling for the beauty of the world!"
As Nian Lun spoke, he gave a big smile.
Plastic sisterhood is not plastic after all!
...
This time, Guanxing didn’t use as many ingredients as in Eight Treasure Porridge, but just cooked a bowl of pumpkin millet porridge.
After all, Nian Lun had just fainted from spicy food all night, so it would not be appropriate for him to eat anything else.
"I always feel that the ingredients you prepare for Guanxing are really comprehensive." Nian Lun finished the porridge with just the right sweetness in a few bites, and began to sigh that Guanxing's preparations are always thorough.
"I'm just used to a bland diet, using food to nourish my body."
While watching the stars, he always spoke calmly, as if everything was taken for granted.
Yuexia and I feel like we are at two extremes, but we get along surprisingly well.
It's really hard to describe.
"What are your plans for today?" Guanxing skillfully put away the dishes and chopsticks in front of Nian Lun, not giving Nian Lun any chance to react.
Nian Lun didn't expect that people would be fighting for the job of washing dishes these days, so he started to pack up his itinerary for today.
I unexpectedly had a good rest last night, and this morning I helped Yuexia revise her novel a little. Surprisingly, I'm still on track to completing my goal.
Then the real business left was to find a place to rent and rent a piano from Lexing.
There's no need to rush renting a house. Anyway, I shouldn't have to commute every day before the competition, so I'll just finish other things first.
Nian Lun navigated the way while answering Guan Xing's question: "We're going to a Lehang restaurant east of Canghai City. We'll probably be home around the same time as yesterday. If you're hungry, you don't have to wait."
Unexpectedly, Guanxing suddenly popped up and said, "I'll go with you too."
"Yes, yes..."
I haven’t seen Guanxing go out since the clothes-buying incident. To be honest, Nianlun was worried that she would be suffocated at home.
But since they had decided to go out together, Nian Lun thought for a moment and asked, "Do you prefer to scan the code when buying things or pay with cash?"
"If I have a choice, cash. I'm not used to machines like 'cell phones'. But why do you ask?"
"You'll find out later."
Although there is no problem in operating the stargazing tablet, she does not expect to use it for a long time.
Nian Lun could understand, so he found the bank card and put it in his bag.
Looking at the shoulder bag placed on the shoe cabinet, Nian Lun was really impressed by Guanxing. It seemed that everything in the house was in order. He was curious about how she did it.
Of course, if Nian Lun planned his actions in advance, he would naturally achieve similar results.
But you have to know that Guanxing is in charge of three people in this family. It is not difficult to make plans for himself, but if you add another person, it will be difficult to compare.
Just as Nian Lun was marveling at her strong ability to stargaze, she had already finished her housework and came to Nian Lun in the sailor suit that Nian Lun had bought for her before.
Nian Lun's eyes lit up, it seemed to be more attractive than the day he tried on clothes!
The tie faintly reveals a flat belly, the skirt is just the right amount, and the white tights are a very tricky absolute area. Finally, paired with two simple ponytails and a slightly flushed cheeks, Nian Lun really exclaimed that the money was well spent!
You know, changing clothes for a beautiful girl is indeed a great thing in life.
Perhaps she felt Nian Lun's gaze, so she pouted.
"lecher."
"Yes, yes, I am the Lecher. But I wonder if Mr. Stargazer has ever heard that the Lecher wants to have five children with his ugly wife?"
"..."
Guanxing didn't answer, and no one knew what he was thinking.
But in the end, he still went out, pulling Nian Lun's clothes.
"Who wants to have five children with you—"
Nian Lun seemed to be able to hear a faint sound in the air.
However, the originally light sound was dispersed by the sound of the door closing and could no longer be heard.
On the way, Nian Lun carefully recalled the voice, but the voice that was so close yet so distant was really hard to grasp.
What did you say?
...
Chapter 37: Stargazing Round
Shopping, a word that makes women cheer and men feel depressed.
The shopping street is an ocean that belongs exclusively to women. Once they arrive here, they can let themselves go and even walk in a creative way.
Behind them follow men who have transformed into modern knights, with shopping bags hanging all over their bodies and even their necks, and they are also facing the danger of having their wallets drained.
but--
This did not happen to Nian Lun and Guan Xing.
Guanxing's sailor suit fits her slender figure, with a pink and blue belt tied around her waist and white tights outlining her long legs, making her a typical urban girl.
However, Nian Lun did not forget to take care of himself.
He looked more sunny than when he applied for the job. His neatly groomed hair was waxed to make it fluffy and more textured, which further highlighted his delicate face.
The formal shirt was replaced with a white T-shirt, and the suit pants were naturally replaced with gray-blue jeans. The two of them looked like college lovers going out on a date.
Passersby's eyes were clearly focused on them, and one could even hear their whispers.
"If that girl hadn't looked so unapproachable, I would have wanted to kneel down and yell 'brother-in-law'."
"Come on, if it's a younger sister, can she hold someone's hand? It's just the cutest height difference!"
"Wow, look at that little princess, she's so happy. If I had a prince like that to watch over me while I went shopping, I'd say yes right then and there if he confessed his love to me!"
"Don't be such a fangirl. You should know that besides the prince, there's also Tang Monk riding a white horse!"
...
Unlike watching the stars under the moon, you don’t care what others say when watching the stars.
As for Nian Lun...the whispered discussion couldn't be heard clearly for the time being.
Nian Lun struggled all the way and couldn't remember what the faint words said when he went out to watch the stars, so he simply gave up.
After more than half an hour's drive, Nian Lun and Guan Xing arrived at their previous destination. Although Guan Xing occasionally looked around for something that interested him, he never had the desire to go into any store.
This made Nian Lun wonder whether the previous online posts about women liking shopping were false.
"Is the musical instrument store you mentioned nearby?" Looking at the increasingly sparse population, Guanxing asked in confusion.
Nian Lun nodded. "Yes, it's located east of Canghai City. The navigation is almost consistent with my memory."
"What kind of musical instrument do you want to rent?"
"Piano," Nian Lun said simply, "Because the company arranged for me to participate in a music competition, we need to prepare to rent a piano and a tuner."
Guanxing nodded slightly, thought for a moment, and then asked, "Do you know the instrument called 'Guqin'?"
Nian Lun chuckled and said, "Of course. Although I've covered more Western repertoire, I also know some classical music. I really like the sounds of the erhu and guqin. It's a pity that I haven't mastered them all, otherwise these classical instruments would still need someone to inherit them."
Guanxing stopped and his eyes were wandering.
Nian Lun felt that this was the first time he needed to organize his thoughts while stargazing.
She didn't know how to express herself.
Guanxing really wants to help Nian Lun's career, but she also wants to respect Nian Lun's choice.
After all, he had never sought help from others in his previous creations, but had done everything himself. Given his initiative, it wouldn't be difficult for him to just find some musical partners.
Seeing that Guanxing seemed to be hesitant to speak, Nian Lun very considerately stopped and waited.
But sensing Guanxing's changing mood, he asked softly, "What's wrong?"
Seeing Nian Lun's worried face, Guanxing shook his head, thinking that he was being too picky.
Wouldn't it be fine if she just continued doing what she always did?
"Nothing. Let's continue on our journey."
Guanxing's expression returned to normal, and the two continued on their way.
But before he took two steps, Nian Lun hesitated for a moment before continuing to ask, "Are you really okay? Do you want to rest for a while?"
"I won't lie to you."
Looking at the stargazing sapphire eyes, they were filled with determination.
Nian Lun was stunned for a moment before nodding to show that he understood.
"Then let's go somewhere first."
Having said this, Nian Lun led Guanxing into an automatic door.
Guan Xing looked around the room. There were several machines placed side by side with the words "ATM" written on them. Nian Lun took out a card and started operating the machine.
Although Guanxing was curious about what these things were, the camera above her head told her not to act rashly.
After the card was "eaten" by the machine, Guanxing saw Nian Lun tapping something on it, and finally there was another "clattering" sound.
"This is?"
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