How can there be such a strong superpower?

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"Etc., etc……"

"Wait a minute, idiot."

A few minutes later.

inside the room.

Lin Ying sat on Chen Lusi's thigh, gently swinging her round and beautiful snow-white long legs, blushing slightly as she said, "I don't object...but you have to make one thing clear first."

"Yes, I think I need to confirm it too."

Lin Wan sat on Chen Lusi's other thigh, her beautiful and well-proportioned legs pressed against her sister's snow-white long legs. Although she was a little shy, she unexpectedly stood aside from her sister.

Chen Lusi pulled the two of them into his arms and asked in confusion, "...What?"

The two sisters looked at each other, then raised their heads together, facing Chen Lusi with their beautiful faces like flawless jade, and asked at the same time: "Will you...stay with us forever?"

"..."

Chen Lusi was stunned for a moment, then replied softly, "Of course."

“…What an idiot.”

When Lin Ying heard the exact answer, she pursed her rosy red lips, slowly closed her peach blossom eyes, and leaned forward slightly.

Lin Wan's pretty face was slightly flushed as she also leaned forward, her wet eyes slowly closing.

The breeze blew up a corner of the curtain slightly.

At the same time, the leaves of the camphor tree outside the yard were also blown down.

The leaves are falling.

Time seems to have gone back to the past.

"Sister! I want to be Chen Lusi's wife too!"

"Don't give it to you!"

"I'm going to be one!"

"I don't want to be your boss."

"Woo-I want it!"

"I do not want!"

"Woo——"

Lin Wan was rejected again and again, and she started crying, with her sobs rising and falling.

Lin Ying turned her head away and didn't look at her sister, her delicate and pretty face full of stubbornness.

Chen Lusi stood in front of the two men, not knowing what to say and feeling at a loss.

The two sisters froze.

Chen Lusi was silent for a moment, and found that the two sisters had no signs of reconciliation. He gritted his teeth, and then imitated what he had done before. He stretched out his hands and hugged the two of them stiffly, and whispered: "Why don't we just be together..."

The two pretty little girls didn't resist and hugged Chen Lusi, but they turned their heads away and didn't look at each other.

However, the younger Lin Wan has stopped crying.

At this moment, a breeze blew, slightly lifting the fallen leaves on the ground and blowing up the hair of the two people.

"Let's do it together!"

The little boy put his arms around the two little girls and continued, "Stop arguing..."

And perhaps his words worked.

Lin Ying finally turned around, looked at Chen Lusi, and whispered: "...but I am the genuine one."

the other side.

Lin Wan also turned around and whispered, "...Don't lie."

pat.

yard.

The fallen leaves in the air fell to the ground, making a slight sound.

The slightly raised curtains then fell.

"Liar."

inside the room.

The clothes of the three people were placed aside.

Lin Wan lay on her back, slowly lowering her curvy and well-proportioned legs, then looked at Chen Lusi with a blushing face and whispered, "Lusi is lying... I just like him."

the other side.

The warbler's round, snow-white legs are put together and slightly bent, shining charmingly under the light.

Her face was also flushed, and she whispered, "Indeed, it's a lie."

"..."

Chen Lusi looked at the two sisters who were leaning against each other and holding hands. He bent down slightly, held their beautiful faces like flawless jade, and admitted, "Yes, I like them."

"Finally admitted it... hmmm."

Upon hearing this, Lin Ying immediately let out a short and cute cry and wanted to say something else, but couldn't.

Soon, Lin Wan couldn't say anything.

The breeze blew again, blowing up a corner of the curtain.

At the same time, the fallen leaves in the yard were rolled up again.

The fallen leaves float up in the wind.

And this long summer is finally coming to an end.

【End of text】

Finish this testimonial

I screwed up.

This is my only thought after finishing the book...

Especially in the later stages, the protagonist's fighting power can no longer be suppressed, and he can only rely on emotions to advance the plot.

So first of all, I want to apologize to everyone.

I'm sorry... I'm so sorry.

When I reviewed the entire book these past two days, I discovered that the foundation was unstable from the very beginning.

The character of Xia Panqiu was set up too extreme at the beginning.

At first, I actually thought there was no problem, so I wrote according to the idea I had at the beginning. But after I actually wrote it and saw the feedback, I realized that it was really stupid. I had to forcibly reverse the direction of the plot development and let characters like Lin Ying appear earlier.

But what's so awkward about Xia Panqiu's role? And the characters like Lin Ying and Ji Xin appeared too early. The stage set at the beginning was no longer important as Xia Panqiu's character was no longer important...

This leads to a series of problems. After all the characters have no stage, the whole book becomes a one-man show of the protagonist, and the one-man show can only rely on emotions to advance the plot, and emotions advancing the plot will cause the combat effectiveness to collapse, and after the combat effectiveness collapses... it is discovered that the plot can only be advanced by relying on emotions.

Direct dead loop.

This isn't the scariest part. The scariest part is that, because the story relies entirely on emotions, the plot moves forward too quickly, and there's no way to write any emotional lines for the female characters...

The subsequent updates are so slow... because I want to solve this problem.

But in the end, I found that there was no solution.

So I took a quick and decisive approach and used a swimsuit appearance to make an explanation.

Chen Lusi gave the answer.

But I don’t dare to write any further... because if I continue, it will be content that cannot be broadcast.

In the end, the four of them were in the same room, and there was Tang Yu, the optimist who bravely charged forward. The result was actually not difficult to guess.

of course.

Ultimately, it's because I'm not capable enough. I can only write some bland hints, and I can't control it at all...

I'm so sorry.

In fact, the updates have been slow during this period, and I chose to end it here, mainly because I don’t know how to string together the next ideas.

The anxiety of not updating every day is so strong... I find that I really can't go on like this.

Because this will only lead to an endless cycle - I don't know how to string the remaining ideas together, I can't update, I'm very anxious, I write first, and when I'm done I don't know how to string them together, I can't update, I'm even more anxious...

Therefore, I wrote the chapter of origin with Chen Lusi becoming the guardian god, which could completely serve as the ending.

As for those ideas that cannot be strung together due to anxiety and inflated fighting spirit, they can only be supplemented by extra chapters.

Of course, please allow me to rest for two or three days. Because of anxiety, my brain is like a mess... I have been putting off writing the final remarks.

I apologize first!

Feel sorry!

……

I read the whole book these days.

I found that there were quite a few problems and learned a lot of lessons.

Of course, there are also satisfying aspects.

But overall, it was far from what I expected.

It can only be said to be barely complete.

Just like what I said in my remarks when the game was first released... I hit my head hard against a wall and it's bleeding.

But since I've already crashed into something, there's nothing I can do. I can only wipe the blood off my forehead and mark this wall. I hope I can look carefully next time and not bump into it again...

But even so, I still can’t bear to leave.

The feeling at the end is always the same.

what……

As for the next book... forget it, let’s not talk about the next book.

I'd better regain some confidence first.

It will be retrieved quickly, probably in two months.

If I search slowly, it will take only two and a half months...

Then.

At last.

More than a year of serialization.

Thank you so much for your support.

If you want to read the extra chapter, read it. If you don’t want to read it, just ignore it.