Tokyo: I took in a homeless girl

He could see that the other party was still a little hesitant, and coupled with his hurried appearance, he probably just woke up and hadn't had time to tidy himself up.

However, this does not affect her appearance. On the contrary, this somewhat ignorant and clumsy look, coupled with her overly childish features and always sleepy eyes, gives people an inexplicable sense of cuteness.

"Wait a mininute."

Mine Shiori said while biting her lip.

Then she immediately got up and went back to the kitchen to prepare the fruit. She even took the fruit to the bathroom to wash it.

After seeing this scene, Sawayama Haruno just made a quick guess and roughly understood her intention. Maybe she wanted to free up some time in the bathroom to wash up?

Sure enough, the sound of running water from the bathroom continued.

Judging from the situation, Shiori's illness doesn't seem as serious as she thought. It's not even a fever. Maybe it's just a minor cold, dizziness or something like that.

His mood, which had been tense due to worry, finally relaxed. Sawayama Haruno was just about to put his hands behind his back and take the opportunity to relax his body.

However, he didn't know what his left hand touched when it reached behind him, and in an instant, a tingling feeling on his scalp spread throughout Sawayama Haruno's whole body.

The tingling sensation did not cause him much harm, but a startle was certainly inevitable.

Almost as if by reflex, Sawayama Haruno quickly withdrew his fingers.

"what?"

His brows furrowed instantly and he looked behind him.

Behind him was a small cabinet used to store books and sundries, and in the gap under the cabinet was something like a flashlight.

This is what my finger accidentally touched just now.

"This is."

Sawayama Haruno was stunned for a moment, then took out the thing with some hesitation.

It is black in color, rectangular in shape, and has two shiny silver "horns" on the top.

After observation by Sawayama Haruno, he concluded that these two "small horns" seemed to be used for conducting electricity? ?

"Anti-wolf flashlight?"

he muttered.

Although it was the first time I saw this thing, even if I hadn't eaten pork, I've seen pigs run, not to mention that I had just been electrocuted.

If you think about it carefully, it seems reasonable to have this thing. After all, Mine Shiori is a single woman, and it seems that she has to give tutoring to Ezaki Suguha in the evening.

It's reasonable for a girl like this to prepare an anti-wolf flashlight for herself, right?

"Ahh, Haruno!"

Mine Shiori, who had just come out of the bathroom, turned around and saw Sawayama Haruno holding the "punishment" prop she had used yesterday. She was stunned for a moment.

"Oh, Shiori, are you okay?"

Zeshan Haruno subconsciously looked at the other party, then raised the flashlight in his hand and said with a smile: "It's better to put things like this away carefully. I was accidentally electrocuted just now."

If his physical fitness had not been enhanced, he would have been electrocuted badly just now, he added in his heart.

"you you."

Mine Shiori's little hands holding the fruit kept shaking.

She trembled her petite body and said timidly: "That...that thing is only used for..."

"Self-defense, yes, it's something used for self-defense!" she explained in a panic.

".What else can it be used for?"

Sawayama Haruno was puzzled for a moment.

If it is not used for self-defense, then is it used to satisfy some curious hobbies?

How is that possible? Shiori looks like a good girl.

When she found out that she and Mana had had intimate relations in the past, she looked as if all her three views had been shocked.

It is definitely impossible for someone like Mine Shiori to have strange habits like Mana.

Sawayama Haruno turned off the anti-wolf flashlight and put it back on the table, and reminded her: "Shiori, you'd better be careful and try not to hurt yourself by mistake."

"I, I know."

Seeing that Haruno Sawayama finally put it down, Shiori Mine felt relieved.

Taishe is dead, woo

It was her first time using that thing, and she didn't expect that she would be almost discovered by Sawayama Haruno the first time she used it. Fortunately, the other party had a relatively normal mind and didn't think of its other uses.

“It’s a blessing in disguise”

Mine Shiori thought with some trepidation.

It was not until now that she noticed that the feeling of social doom from nearly being discovered seemed to have given her a great stimulation.

The most intuitive manifestation is that her top inexplicably moved forward a little.

The strange feeling of the swollen area touching the fabric made her body go weak uncontrollably.

But Zeshan Haruno was in front of her again.

No, Shiori.

I have to suppress these distracting thoughts quickly, otherwise Haruno will easily find out that I am actually a vulgar girl.

Must, hurry up.

Chapter 84: End of Volume Summary

The first volume, Golden Week, pretty much ends here.

What a ghost!

It will be on sale tomorrow at noon, it’s exciting!!

Ahem, back to the topic, the first volume is indeed coming to an end, because the volume will be automatically changed when it is put on the shelf, so it has to end even if you want to.

However, I think it is just right to change the volume at this time. It is a daily text, and changing the volume does not mean changing the map or something, so it will not affect subsequent reading.

The reason why it is called "Golden Week" is because the first volume mainly talks about some things that happened during the Golden Week. Of course, not all of them have been told, and there are still some foreshadowings that have not been revealed, but they have basically been retracted.

So let’s review what noteworthy things happened during the Golden Week.

First of all, Haruno took Mana out for a trip at this time.

Combined with a conversation message revealed in the article, it is not difficult to see here that both Haruno's family and Mana's family actually knew about the relationship between the two and expressed their support for it.

If I didn't support it, I wouldn't let the two of them go traveling to Atami, right?

Secondly, the opportunity that allowed Mana to discover Maki's autism during the Golden Week was due to the death of Shiori Mine's family. This part may seem a bit abrupt and inexplicable.

But if you put yourself in the shoes of what happened at that time, you will find that it should be reasonable, right?

After all, Mana was completely focused on Haruno at the time, wanting to stick with them all day long, and even calling them to chat at night. How could she notice Maki's change of mentality under such circumstances?

Of course, I discovered this after being frightened by what happened to Mine Shiori and feeling the need to talk to my sister.

The rhythm of this plot is quite controversial. Many people think that it is too abrupt and say that the male protagonist should be raped by other women.

Let’s put aside for now how far-fetched it would be to write it like this, and just talk about what happens to the plot later?

If Mana could really let other women sleep with the male protagonist casually, would the male protagonist still be able to continue the relationship after knowing that she only wanted to have sex with him?

Personally, I don’t think so, and you don’t even know who the woman who slept with you is.

Furthermore, the subsequent plot cannot be advanced well. Mana can let other women sleep with the male protagonist at will, so what about the other female protagonists? What about the other female protagonists who do not have a reverse NTR fetish?

Are you really just going to watch her let other people have sex with the male protagonist?

So, taking all factors into consideration, this plot point is actually pretty good. Of course, it’s not the best, but I don’t think it’s terribly written either. The current data is still improving, which proves my idea.

No matter how you look at it, this first volume is already a success. After all, Sanjiang has been included. If someone says that Sanjiang has no value and that being included cannot prove itself, then I have nothing to say, right?

In short, having written so far, I am very satisfied with what I have written. Although some of the plots may not be too good and there is not enough space to develop them to the fullest, the character writing is really okay, right?

I think I'm pretty good at writing characters, and I established the personalities of the four heroines in the first volume (I know you're going to complain about the male protagonists, but I really have no reference!)

The second most amazing thing is the various foreshadowings, because there is no unnecessary plot in the first volume.

Everything that appears is useful, and there are also many foreshadowings.

Especially some chapters that are often put in the dark room, there are too many foreshadowings. If you don’t believe it, go back and read it now, you will understand that many inner activities have actually explained part of the truth of the Golden Week incident.

Of course, because I buried the foreshadowing too deeply, many people did not notice it, but these foreshadowings are not the most important opportunities, so even if they are ignored, it will not affect the reading experience.

At most, when you see a familiar part later, you will have a feeling of sudden enlightenment.

In addition, almost all the foreshadowings have been retracted, and only a few of them are related to the second and third volumes.

Therefore, I think the handling of foreshadowing is still perfect.

Let’s talk about other plots. The first and most worth mentioning is, of course, the most important character in the first volume, the most lengthy story, and the most important soul character in the book, the well-deserved female lead, Maki Miyazawa.

Although many people say that they don't like Maki and think that Maki is willful and unreasonable, she still runs away from home even though she has a sister who cares about her so much.

But no matter what, the data in the background will not lie. The one who receives the most support, the most rewards, the most hearts, and the most comments is Maki Miyazawa.

This also makes me, the prototype of Miyazawa Maki, feel complicated. After Umino Ryoko, I have achieved such success again by writing myself.

The book begins with Maki Miyazawa meeting the male protagonist in a very rebellious state.

At that time, Miyazawa Maki's mentality was actually no different from that of a rebellious child. She was just thinking about how to defeat her sister and how to seduce the male protagonist, but she fell into it little by little in the process. Maybe the reason for her fall was not very obvious.

However, every time Miyazawa Maki thinks about something, she always emphasizes that "it's just to beat my sister, not for any other reason."

The reason why she has such psychological activities is entirely because of her personality, which is cold and arrogant, so in fact, she has fallen in love with the male protagonist unknowingly.

Although the emotional changes in this part are written very obscurely, fortunately they are not completely absent. It’s just that due to the length of the article, I can’t write about this kind of thing in too much detail.

Because everyone still likes to watch something exciting, I can only try my best to combine them, just like galgame.

Looking back at galgames, they are actually quite boring to play, but you can't say that the characters in them are uninteresting, right? So I think everything I have written so far is pretty good.

And there is actually some content about Miyazawa Maki's inner transformation and growth. Although it may be only about two or three thousand words, I still tried my best to perform to the best of my ability within this limited two or three thousand words.

This is the chapter where Miyazawa Maki shows her true abilities and goes out to work.

It’s not that I can’t spend more time and effort to write better about her growth and transformation process.

But I've suffered losses before. It's very difficult to achieve results by writing these things. You have to combine everything, including exciting ones and ones that make people feel the plot is good. Only by combining them can you blaze a new trail.

Fortunately, it was successful.

After talking about Miyazawa Maki, let’s talk about Mine Shiori.

Mine Shiori's psychological problems were revealed very early, mainly because of the shadow left by the Golden Week incident.

But before she met the male protagonist again, she had actually tried her best not to care about this matter, so this "blurred" matter would be hidden deeper and deeper, and would not be completely resolved until the later volumes.

As for the storyline with Shiori Mine, although it was a bit melodramatic, I think those were some of the times I performed my best.

The plot is also only 2,000 words, but I wrote out her twisted feelings. It can be said that I have brought my writing style and writing skills to the extreme. Generally speaking, if you want to create a very creepy plot, you have to use more words.

In short, the section "Dead Men Can't Laugh" should be the one I am most satisfied with, whether it is Mine Shiori's narration of the past or the description of other aspects.

Personally, I feel that it is very much in the style of Mr. Fujimoto, so I added a dead Agni emoticon at the end.

As for Miyazawa Mana's story, oh, it seems that this has been mentioned above, and I can't say anything about the parts that have not been mentioned, because Mana's story will actually be revealed in the subsequent chapters.

In the first volume, she is not the most important one, but just a related character, the introduction that connects the two.

As for Suguha Ezaki, there is not much to say. After all, there are very few plots about her, and what I say now will only give you a spoiler feeling.

All in all, the first volume was a pretty perfect landing.

Everything will wait until noon the next day to start the second volume.

Chapter 84 Haruno Enlightened

Mine Shiori bit her lip and moved to the closet with a very grim expression. Then, while Sawayama Haruno looked confused, she took out a very thin coat from the closet and put it on.

"Shiori, is it cold?"