Rock girl comes to me!

"How is it?" Xiangzi turned around and asked.

"It looks good!" Lu Yi gave a thumbs up.

"What about mine?!" Nagasaki Suyo hurried over without even pulling up her skirt.

The meaty legs look good.

"It looks good too." Lu Yi said with a smile.

They went out together. Although they were from different schools, they shared a common route. When they reached the Ring entrance, they were stopped by senior Rinrinko.

"You're all well-known figures in Ring now. How about taking a picture and leaving it at the door before you go to school? Just like Roselia and RAS did." Senior Lin Linzi said with a smile, "Lu Yi can't run away either. Let's take a picture together. I'll help you take the picture!"

Anyway, we came out early, so there is still plenty of time.

"I agree!" Miao Meng said quickly.

If you can delay going to school a little, it’s better to delay it a little. Why do universities still have classes at nine o’clock in the morning? This is simply inhumane!

"Sorry, Lu Yi, I stepped on your foot." Shoko Toyokawa adjusted her position in front of the camera and accidentally stepped on Lu Yi's shoes.

"I'll just stand next to Lu Yi." Nagasaki Suyo also smiled.

"Huh? It's the lamp, right?" Shiina Riki frowned.

"Look at the camera first, Li Xi, otherwise the photo will be ugly." Hachiman Kailing said, with Chuhua and Mana standing next to her. They were very experienced in taking photos.

Miao Meng was still a little sleepy, so she sat on the chair at the edge, resting her elbows on the table and supporting her chin, pretending to be Sleeping Beauty.

Takamatsu Touma and Wakaba Mutsuki are looking at the camera.

Yao Le Nai looked at Su Shi and Li Xi who were arguing with each other, and suddenly the corner of his mouth curled up with interest. He rushed over and said, "I want to stand next to Lu Yi too."

Everyone was startled when Le Nai rushed over. The formation was immediately in disarray. Everyone had a look of surprise and smiles on their faces.

"Crack!"

Senior Linlinzi filmed the scene in front of her and chuckled at the chaotic scene: "This kind of noisy appearance is the Lu Yi and others I know."

"Let's enlarge this photo and put it next to the Ring counter."

“The most conspicuous position.”

The girls in the photo couldn't help but glance at Lu Yi, and Lu Yi looked at them with happy and loving smiles.

Toyokawa Shoko said, "After taking the pictures we should go to school."

She turned around to look at Lu Yi and said with a smile: "In the future...please give me more advice!"

"Please give me your guidance for the rest of my life." Lu Yi looked at each of them and replied with a smile.

What follows is not just their second year of high school, but their entire lives.

(End of the book)

*****

The relationships between Aine, Hailing, Meowen, and Mana are all in place, and the final climax is a natural progression, but it will definitely be blocked if it is written, and it is not easy to release free chapters to make up for it, otherwise the book will be ruined. In the end, the readers have worked hard to follow the book for half a year.

Final remarks

Brothers, start rating the characters in this book from 1 to 5. I want to know what the readers like about the characters in this book so that I can know how to design better characters in the future.

1. Lu Yi

2. Shoko Toyokawa

3. Nagasaki Suyo

4. Shiina Tatsuki

5. Takamatsu lamp

6.Chihaya Aine

7. Kaname Lenai (Who are you?)

8. Triangle Chuhua

9. Wakaba Mutsu

10. Meow Dream

11. Hachiman Kairei

12. Sumita Mana

In fact, as the protagonist of this book, Lu Yi is at a disadvantage, because I wrote him as a tool and didn't portray him in much detail. Most of the time, everyone sees him making jokes and playing with memes. This is because what I wanted to write about most were the girls in Mygo's worldview. I portrayed the beautiful girls first and then let Lu Yi come to rescue and intervene. I feel a bit sorry for him in this respect.

But it’s not entirely a good portrayal of a beautiful girl.

For example, the cat character with the least plot—it’s not that I don’t want to write about it, or that I hate cats, but I really can’t write about the character of cats. Don’t say you don’t know what she’s thinking, I don’t know either! Who knows what a cat would think after becoming a human?

Also, there are relatively few later plots of Mu-chan and Deng, which is also because I don’t know how to grasp their characters. I don’t quite understand why Takamatsu Deng is so lonely, and I find it difficult to write how Wakaba Mu can break people’s defense with just one sentence.

It's entirely because of my writing skills. I need to read more literary classics to learn in this area. However, this kind of influence takes five to ten years. I don't know if I will still be writing books in ten years. But for now, I will learn slowly first.

Then review the book.

You should be able to see that the structure of this book is a simple structure of traveling through time and then conquering one person each time. Each girl who travels through time is allocated 100,000 words of plot. Facts have proved that this is indeed no problem, but the mistake is that I gave up this structure after 800,000 words. I thought it would be better to focus on the Bang Bang world, but this actually made the readers' expectations unclear.

As for the outline, emotional progression, character development, and plot progression, there are many shortcomings. The next book must definitely address these issues. The problems are too serious.

You all know that when I launched this book, I said it was a spur-of-the-moment decision. Actually, my mindset at the time was this: write two chapters to satisfy myself! Wait until someone posts about it? Then write another chapter! There are still people posting about it. So many people?

When I posted the book, I hadn't even read other Mygo fan fiction. It was purely a whim.

After all, Mygo is mainly about the Mygo band. Mujica's character is less portrayed, and people like the donut lady Junda Mana have no character image at all, so I used the simplest method - labeling.

I labeled Ms. Mana as a serious person; I labeled Chuhua as a good brother and a womanizer; Miaomeng was designed to be a greedy person... and then I slowly portrayed their family backgrounds and gradually made them come alive, but my writing was still not good enough.

Of course, the most important thing about having a harem is the approval of the girl's parents, so I used a tricky method here. Mana's father is a feudal maniac who doesn't care about having a harem; Su Shi's mother is a single mother who doesn't care as long as she loves Su Shi; Li Xi's parents are both idiots, and the sister is a hungry married woman who wants to steal her sister's boyfriend; not to mention Miao Meng and Xiangzi, both their parents are gone.

In short, I would like to thank all the readers for their care over the past six months. The next book should be published in a month, and I will design the outline carefully this time.

Everyone is very enthusiastic about the pure love IF line. I'll see which one I have more inspiration for - I definitely have one for Xiangzi, and I'll think about the others slowly. Everyone, please post here the IF lines you want to see or other epilogues you want to see (I really don't have a Lu Yi Liuzi line, so don't be so enthusiastic, I'm a little sweaty).

By the way, I will change the status of this book to completed first. Then you can read the extra chapters for free. Just enjoy reading it.

Extra: Xiangzi Line 01

The students of Haicheng University looked at the several well-dressed young homeless people at the school gate with strange eyes - their clothes were straight as if they were going to a wedding, they were young and energetic, with sunny smiles, but their eyes were shining as if they had escaped from the famine in Africa.

"Godfathers, you saved me from the heavy tank this time. I will repay you in my next life." Liuzi looked at the school emblem of Haicheng University. His eyes gradually lit up and his lips trembled. He almost thought that his life was over.

Lu Yi kicked him on the butt and took a sip of Coke with a trembling face. He said in fear, "Singapore, a local capitalist country, is so rude. I almost couldn't get out of the customs."

If the principal had not helped, he and others would have been caned in public by the Singapore police.

I'm about to participate in my first National Music Conference, so I'll just win the first prize to thank my old school.

Beijing team?

What kind of thing is this from the market? I bought it in seconds!

That cold and arrogant female captain from Beijing, don’t think you’re great just because you have big breasts. Let me show you how good Haicheng is!

"I went home to take a shower. I'm all dirty after running away for a week. If I join the Beggar Gang, I can become an eight-bag elder." Lu Yi is a local and doesn't live in the dormitory with these outsiders.

He has a family.

"Lu Yi, haven't you been drawing blind boxes before? The points I have accumulated from the trendy toy club allow me to draw thirty, and I'm giving them all to you. There are a lot of two-dimensional figures in the blind boxes, and they are all high-quality." Liuzi said to Lu Yi.

"Why are there so many 2D characters?" Lu Yi frowned and waved his hand, "Don't mess with those stupid ones!"

I just want to beat up Mai-senpai.

It doesn’t mean I’m a two-dimensional person.

Lu Yi returned home and opened the door to find it quiet. The note on the table was the one his mother left for him when she came back. She would be away on business for a while.

"Everyone's busy, it's better to be busy..."

Lu Yi sighed, walked into the bathroom and took a refreshing shower. He turned from a Beggar Gang disciple back into an 18-year-old sunny and handsome boy, and then... started to be a gambler!

Draw a blind box.

"The probability of getting a figure of Senior Mai is 0.02. First come first served. Isn't this forcing money to spend money..." Lu Yi pondered, but looking at Senior Mai's big and white bunny girl costume on the screen, he couldn't help but start the lottery. After all, he had thirty draws given by Liuzi.

Ten consecutive.

Ten consecutive.

Ten consecutive.

send.

"Let's go to the rooftop to draw a lottery." Lu Yi stretched and was about to go to the rooftop to get some fresh air when he suddenly found that he could draw another lottery point.

Actually, I don’t care whether you give me this lottery ticket or not.

I am the kind of man who is so rich that he can only do ten consecutive games, but I am in a good mood today, so I will give it another try.

Click to draw!

The screen lit up with golden light.

The golden light represents the rarest figure, which means... Bunny Girl Mai-senpai!

Lu Yi remained calm but his heart was beating fast. The golden light slowly disappeared, revealing the picture. His face looked a little strange.

The figure I got was not Mai-senpai’s.

"The figurine of Toyokawa Shoko?" Lu Yi looked at the figurine in the photo. Toyokawa Shoko was wearing Tsuki no Mori clothes and had blue hair, and she was smiling brightly, as if the future was bright.

Lu Yi knew that this was a character from the recently released Mygo, and he... did know a thing or two about this two-dimensional animation.

Of course, he is not a fan of the second dimension.

"If I can't draw Senior Mai, it's okay to draw Teacher Daxiang. They are both beautiful girls..." Lu Yi thought about it.

A few days later, the express delivery arrived. Lu Yi opened the package and placed the lifelike figurine of Toyokawa Shoko on the headboard of his bed. When he went to bed at night, it was as if Toyokawa Shoko was looking at him and smiling.

The angle at which Lu Yi lay down was just right for him to see the sky-blue panties under the skirt of the Toyokawa Shoko figure.

He fell asleep.

Then disappeared into the room.

…………

Shoko Toyokawa walked with heavy steps and stopped at the red light on the sidewalk. She kept looking down at her clean student leather shoes. Water droplets dripped heavily on the shoes. She wiped the corners of her eyes in panic, and when she looked up for a moment, she found that it was raining in the lead-gray sky, and the rain was heavy and continuous.

Today, Shoko Toyokawa was fired from her part-time job at a family restaurant.

Three months after leaving the Toyokawa family, Crychic disbanded and her fourth part-time job ended.

All the skills she had learned in the Toyokawa family were useless in real society.

After leaving the Toyokawa family, she realized that the gravity of reality was very heavy.

Sometimes Shoko Toyokawa dreams of her first time going to a karaoke bar. At that time, she was surprised by the drink machine she saw for the first time, but now she has mastered frying chicken nuggets, frying pork chops, and serving drinks in large, medium and small cups... more skillfully than anyone else.

Besides washing dishes, she has broken too many dishes.

Because she was careful not to let her hands come into contact with too much detergent to avoid getting her fingers numb, it was only natural that she was fired.

The green light on the opposite sidewalk came on.

Toyokawa Shoko walked along, lowering her head and muttering softly, "Let's go to the customer service company for an interview tomorrow. That way, we won't run into anyone else."

She saw Nagasaki Suyo coming to the family restaurant to have dinner with her classmates yesterday, and Toyokawa Shoko quickly pulled up her mask and hid in the kitchen.

Then, 1000 yen was deducted from my salary because I was not at my post.

The rain was getting heavier and heavier, and it was freezing cold on her body. Shoko Toyokawa covered her head with her hands and started jogging home. It was not because she didn't want to hide from the rain nearby, but because the clothes at home were hanging on the window, and if she didn't go back, they would get wet. She didn't have many decent clothes.

When Shoko Toyokawa ran back to her old apartment, her body was soaked. The raindrops flowed down her skirt and hit the rusty iron stairs, making a crisp sound. She took out the key and was about to open the door when she suddenly found that the door was already ajar.

Is it dad?

No…the door should be wide open if he comes back.

"Thief?" Shoko Toyokawa took a step back nervously.