Daily life in Zongman: There's something wrong with their eyes

He just silently flipped through the light novel text printed out by the other party in front of him.

And Kasumigaoka Utaha seemed to have given up her previous idea.

She stood behind him, kneading his flesh gently with her small hands, remaining silent.

Her beautiful crimson eyes frequently stared at his handsome profile.

There was a hint of nervousness in his eyes, but more of it was a look of anticipation.

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Chapter 45: Kasumigaoka Utaha likes to jump on faces

There aren't many words, and it took about ten minutes.

Shirakawa turned the text in his hand to the last page.

After reading it, he glanced at her.

He handed it back to Kasumigaoka Utaha who remained silent at the back.

Seeing this, Kasumigaoka loosened his grip.

He took the paperback and sat on a chair half a meter away.

Before he could say anything, Kasumigaoka asked nonchalantly.

"So, how's my friend's light novel? Shirakawa-kun, tell us what you think."

"I can indeed review this light novel you wrote."

"But, Kasumigaoka, do you want to hear the truth or a lie?"

Shirakawa Shiki finished reading it in one breath and let out a sigh of relief, revealing a look of great interest.

"I already said it's not me anymore."

"Shirakawa-kun, please just say it directly. I will convey your words to my friend as appropriate." Kasumigaoka Utaha was a little embarrassed.

She was not yet the writer who had become accustomed to numerous readers' comments a year later.

Meeting this reader for the first time and having her work reviewed face to face made her feel quite uncomfortable.

If it were any other time, seeing Shirakawa Shiki like this, she would have already used her sharp tongue.

But now, she forced herself to hold back, because if the guy in front of her said that, what if he left in anger...

"Then just pretend it's not you, but your friend."

"Since you want to hear the truth, I'll be direct."

Shirakawa Shi looked at Kasumigaoka Utaha with amusement, who looked a little more immature now than before.

After a moment's silence, he said, "Your plot is a bit too simple, but the scenes and the descriptions of the encounters between the hero and heroine are very beautiful."

"But, Kasumigaoka-san, you've never been in love, right? You've never had a boyfriend, right?"

Kasumigaoka was stunned for a moment, then narrowed her eyes slightly.

Frankly admit it: "I really haven't talked about it."

"It's normal that they haven't dated before. You wrote the interaction between the hero and heroine in the film too beautifully."

"Then there's so much description of the heroine's mental activities, while the hero only gets a few lines. Isn't that a bit strange?"

"You don't seem to have much writing experience. Is this your first time writing a novel?"

"besides......"

Next, Kasumigaoka Utaha's expression kept changing as Shirakawa spoke.

Sometimes he looked happy, sometimes he frowned and thought, and sometimes he looked unhappy again.

Emotions have been fluctuating and fluctuating.

After a moment, wait for Shirakawa Shiki to finish speaking in one breath.

Kasumigaoka thought for a moment and then pursed her lips. "I know everything you said, but I really can't describe the protagonist's inner thoughts."

"Because a lot of times, I actually don't understand what boys are thinking. Many high school boys seem to have only those disgusting thoughts every day."

"As for the plot, it seems to be just like what Shirakawa-kun said. It can't be too smooth sailing. How about adding some setbacks for the hero and heroine? Let the readers have some emotional ups and downs."

"Anyway, thank you very much, Shirakawa-kun. You do have some truth in what you said."

Despite saying this, she was still a little unhappy in her heart.

Because of Shirakawa-style, that "domineering" attitude.

Pointing out the hard work she put into writing it the first time was like finding fault with her child, which made her feel a little unhappy.

Most importantly, the male protagonist's original painting was based on Shirakawa's face...

Who knew this person would be so disrespectful.

Shirakawa Shiki showed an expression that said, "This kid is really teachable."

He smiled softly and said, "I actually only know a little bit about this."

"However, this is indeed my feeling, and I have expressed it completely."

Kasumigaoka's beautiful round legs were intertwined, with her arms crossed over her chest and her teeth gnashing.

"Thank you very much for your cooperation. My friend will definitely be very happy to hear this!!"

"But even so, it doesn't stop you from being a pervert who sexually harasses a beautiful girl the first time you see her."

"Don't you think so, Shirakawa-kun?"

When she said this, she showed a half-smile.

She deliberately stretched out her legs, and her black stockings swayed in Baichuan's eyes.

"That was just me being brave enough to speak my mind. But, you seem pretty brave."

Seeing this, Shirakawa Shiki stretched out his hand in a flash.

Within a breath, he grabbed the pair of annoying objects and quietly felt the warmth coming from his palms.

He was very angry about these things and their behavior in front of him.

Instead of choosing to refuse, they even want to encourage the other party so that they can dance more happily.

Shirakawa Shiki's heart was surging with emotions, but his face remained expressionless and his expression was 'extremely serious'.

The sudden situation caused a hint of panic to flash across Kasumigaoka Utaha's beautiful eyes.

He quickly turned his body to the side and said angrily, "Shirakawa-kun, you are more than just brave enough to speak your mind."

"How dare you actually take action to demonstrate your perverted behavior? It seems you are completely unafraid of the criminal law."

"If you want to satisfy the desires in your heart through such actions."

"Well, with all due respect, I'm going to call the police."

Seeing this, Shirakawa Shiki originally just wanted to scare her.

He quickly let go of the object in his hand, patted his pants and stood up.

"But it's not that serious yet, Kasumigaoka Utaha, I'm going back to class first."

"Don't seduce boys like this next time. After all, other boys may not have my level of determination and may not be able to resist."

Hearing this, Kasumigaoka Utaha looked at the figure who unlocked the door and left the rooftop.

She secretly spat at this shameless guy.

What kind of woman does this guy Shirakawa Shiki think she is?

Do you think she is the kind of woman who seduces other boys casually?

How could she be so unrestrained...

Thinking of this, she felt the changes in her body just now.

The stimulation, like an electric current, made her squeeze her legs tighter.

She just felt a strange stimulation, which made her feel a little embarrassed.

After a few minutes, Kasumigaoka Utaha calmed down.

I reached out and picked up the light novel text on the chair, and his comments flashed through my mind.

After taking a few deep breaths, he smiled.

Readers?! Writing light novels is really great.

First reader? This feels surprisingly good.

Shirakawa-shiki...? I'm a bit curious.

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Chapter 43 has been revised, but it is not visible on the app.

Only the web version has been modified. Interested people can use the web version to check it out.

Chapter 46: Kasumigaoka Utaha is a little tangled (asking for data!)

The sky had cleared up in the afternoon, and the scorching sun had already evaporated the puddles of water on the ground.

The white clouds are scattered and wandering in layers.

The bald teacher with the strong hairstyle has just announced his disbandment.

Shirakawa Shiki was wearing a white sportswear and sitting under the shade of a tree.

His eyes unconsciously scanned the students that came into view.

And those classmates in his class were in groups of three or five.

There are also people sitting under the shade of trees and chatting.

Most of them are playing the sports they want to play.

Some boys and girls gathered together to chat.

Whether hitting a tennis ball or kicking a football, it does have a bit of the meaning of youthful enjoyment.

Not far away at this time, there were also third-grade students taking an activity class.

The eyes of these boys were looking in the direction of Shirakawa-shiki, their expressions filled with amusement and mockery.

One of them was a boy with blond hair and a slightly messy hairstyle.

He asked calmly, unconsciously slapping the basketball in his palm.

"How about trying to extinguish the arrogance of this junior, Shirakawa Shiki?"

"It's a rare opportunity to have the same class together."

Hearing this, one of the boys at the back said with some fear.

"Sakagami, this guy Shirakawa-shi is not easy to deal with, so why not just forget it."

The words fell.

The next moment, he was slapped by another boy with bronze skin and short hair: "Okita, what nonsense are you talking about?"

"Those rumors outside the school are all false. Besides, we didn't say we were going to fight that kid Shirakawa this time."

"Hahaha, you're right, Okita, what are you afraid of? As a senior, how could you be afraid of a mere junior?"

"We've been dubbed the 'Five Uncrowned Generals' by people all over the country."

Sakagami and the other boys burst into laughter when they saw him drooping his head.

"But...but...he's really not easy to mess with."