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Chapter 128 "The Dragon King was furious and immediately ordered one hundred thousand soldiers...to take care of the business together???"

[Good guy, commanding a hundred thousand soldiers, are you so passionate? 】

[Don’t tell me, although this article is nonsense, it’s quite enjoyable to listen to. It’s just pitiful for this Dragon King who sacrificed his life and blood while guarding the border, but his family has to suffer such humiliation! 】

[Indeed, if I were him, the ashes of my enemy Tai Nai would have to be thrown out, and all the earthworms in the house would have to be cut into two pieces lengthwise! 】

[Stop arguing and listen to the script first. The Dragon King is going home for revenge soon. 】

[Hey, shit, why don’t you talk about it anymore? Revenge is coming soon, thank you for not being too close to home and read it quickly! ! ! 】

Although the Blue Star online novel market is equally prosperous, it does not have themes like Return of the God of War.

This thing is a piece of cake, but I have to say, it's pretty good.

Unfortunately, for some reason, netizens were listening with gusto, fantasizing about the return of the Dragon King and his domineering revenge, when Xie Feiyun suddenly stopped reading.

Everyone was immediately unhappy.

Read, Lao Deng, you should keep reading!

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"Why is there only a short paragraph in the manuscript? What's the follow-up plot?"

It’s not that Xie Feiyun didn’t want to continue reading, the main reason was that Lu Bai gave him the manuscript. When the Dragon King was about to take revenge and rescue his wife, an urgent call came from the border and it stopped abruptly. There was no follow-up at all.

"I've conceived part of it, but haven't written it yet. How does Teacher Xie think the plot should develop next?" Lu Bai asked with a smile.

Come again?

A flash of thought flashed across Lao Xie's face, and he rolled his eyes. Instead of speaking in a hurry, he looked at Lu Bai and asked, "First tell me what kind of effect you want to highlight in the subsequent plot arrangement, and then I will help you analyze it."

He has been engaged in the creation of online articles for a long time, and has his own unique way of controlling the market. Although this so-called dragon king's revenge theme sounds a bit awkward, Xie Feiyun feels that it is very suitable for those who are not highly educated. sink market appetite.

If you really write it down, maybe it will become popular.

So even though he had just been disgusted by Lu Bai's CEO Xu Liya Urea, he was still willing to continue the conversation. Of course, in order to prevent this guy from making trouble again, Lao Xie showed a wary look and added:

"Let's talk first. If the plot you arrange in the end is still as outrageous and inconsistent with common sense as before, I'm going to curse you for using such a good subject for nothing!"

"No, no, don't worry, Teacher Xie." Lu Bai touched the tip of his nose harmlessly and said with a smile: "As for what effect you want to highlight, I don't know. Why don't you give me some help, Teacher Xie?" ?”

Xie Feiyun knew in his heart that you are a half-baked guy, and he probably stumbled upon this subject through blind speculation. He pondered for a moment, waved his hand indifferently, and said:

"I can't talk about giving advice, but I can help you analyze it. First of all, the novel pays most attention to the ups and downs of the plot, and there must be a reversal."

"Secondly, your theme is the return of the Dragon King. Pretending is the main theme and the fun part. Judging from your previous plots, the protagonist's identity as the Dragon King should not be known to his family, otherwise he would not be bullied, so , the following plot must satisfy the key points of exposing the identity, saving the wife, and dealing with the villain.”

"Doesn't this dragon king have one hundred thousand soldiers under his command? This is a very good setting. It would be best if the one hundred thousand soldiers can be used in the next plot. Think about it and see if you have any ideas?"

In order to have a reversal, you have to expose your identity, pretend to save your wife, and use your 100,000 soldiers...

Lu Bai held his chin and began to think. Soon, his eyes lit up and he patted his thigh: "Yes!"

He actually came up with an idea so quickly. Could it be that this guy really has some talent for writing online articles? Lao Xie glanced at Lu Bai in surprise, hesitated for three seconds, and asked suspiciously: "How do you plan to arrange the plot? Tell me and I will help you find the problem?"

Yes, yes, tell me the next plot!

The audience was curious.

I couldn’t help but post a barrage urging:

[That’s right, Mr. Lu, how do you plan to arrange the plot? Tell us quickly and let us all listen. 】

[Come on, come on, let’s bet on whether the Dragon King will avenge his wife. I’ll bet five leg hairs, the kind born from birth. Old Thief Lu will definitely let the Dragon King kill the person who killed his wife. Kill them all! 】

[What’s the point of betting on such a small thing? Do you know if you take a chance and turn your bicycle into a motorcycle? I bet ten chicken feathers that Old Thief Lu will not only ask the Dragon King to kill all his enemies, but also ask him to go to the brothel where his wife is and start a killing spree! 】

[Have you forgotten that in the previous plot, the Dragon King was about to kill all his enemies and rescue his wife, but suddenly urgent news came from the border to call him back? 】

[Fuck, I understand, come on, I’ll bet a hundred chicken feathers, and if I lose, I’ll show it live to everyone! I bet that Old Thief Lu will let the Dragon King return to his hometown, lead his 100,000 soldiers to fight back, and directly fill the army. This must be the case, otherwise Old Thief Lu will arrange this urgent news completely meaningless! 】

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"First, according to Teacher Xie, there must be a contrast, so the Dragon King can't take action now. After receiving the urgent call, he thought again and again, and finally chose to bite the bullet and return to the border." Lu Bai's eyes shone with a confident light, and he spoke seriously , told his plot arrangement.

"Yes, this can also show the protagonist's loyalty and loyalty when he temporarily puts aside his personal hatred for the sake of frontier affairs. The image of the Dragon King, a powerful but unparalleled loyalty, will immediately appear on the paper!"

Xie Feiyun cast an appreciative look at Lu Bai.

"Then he returned to his hometown again, and after resolving the battle that broke out on the border, the Dragon King returned to his hometown and found that his wife refused to learn how to seduce customers and attract business. She could not receive any customers at Yihongyuan and was often beaten severely by the madam. It was a miserable life.”

"Hmm, this design is not bad. After all, she is the wife of the protagonist. It is better to design a plot where she is not substantially insulted by others, otherwise it will become a very fatal poisonous point."

Xie Feiyun was about to remind Lu Bai that the plot of the Dragon King's wife being sold to a brothel would be a very serious poison and wanted him to change it. Unexpectedly, Lu Bai discovered it. Although the patch was average, he was a newcomer after all. It’s already great to have this awareness.

He immediately nodded with satisfaction, looking at Lu Bai with undisguised surprise in his eyes.

This guy does have some writing acumen, and he can get it done with just a few clicks!

In the live broadcast room.

The audience also breathed a long sigh of relief. If the Dragon King's wife was really raped in that kind of place, even if they got revenge and rescued her in the end, they would inevitably feel a little resentful in their hearts.

It's much better now.

Just when everyone was relieved and couldn't help but wonder about the next plot direction in anticipation.

Lu Bai once again spoke about the subsequent plot arrangements:

"Seeing how miserable his wife was, the Dragon King was heartbroken and furious. He immediately threw out the Dragon King's order and ordered a hundred thousand soldiers on the border to immediately turn their guns and attack their hometown..."

"Take care of my wife's business together!"

"As soon as the Dragon King's order came out, the whole country was shocked. In just a few months, my wife went from the bleak situation of being a nobody to becoming the number one technician with the best business in the entire Yihong Courtyard and even the entire empire. People in the world said that she had killed 100,000 people. !!!"

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