College entrance examination full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 19 Unexpected and Reasonable (1)
(2005 National Volume 1)

composition test questions
Read the text below, according to what the article says.

Once, people asked the Danish physicist Professor Bohr: "You have created a first-class physics school, what's the secret?" Unexpectedly, Bohr replied: "Because I am not afraid of showing my stupidity in front of the students." Listen Everyone was surprised and puzzled by this answer.

[Notice]

Bohr's answer was indeed unexpected, but it made sense after careful consideration.In life, we often encounter similar situations. Please use "unexpected and reasonable" as the topic, make up your own ideas, choose your own style, draw up your own title, and write an article of no less than 800 words.Written content must be within the scope of the topic.

Question Analysis
This is a relational topic composition.However, it is very rare in Chinese college entrance examination composition propositions to directly draw materials from foreign countries.In the past, things that occasionally involved foreign countries often had to be processed technically. However, the reality of globalization may gradually break this habitual taboo.The topic "unexpected and reasonable" is unexpected and naturally extraordinary, but it is reasonable and full of speculation.Faced with this topic, if you want to write this composition well, you must pay attention to reviewing the questions, and accurately grasp the relationship between "unexpected" and "reasonable" based on the materials.The philosophical principle of the unity of opposites between chance and inevitability can be used to analyze the "unexpected and reasonable" life phenomena, and the provided materials can be used to further cite similar examples to start discussions.You can also jump out of the material and talk about "unexpected and reasonable" with another example.Within the scope of this topic, it is possible to write about human feelings and facts, as long as the result of the matter can be unexpected and the process can be reasonable.

Writing Ideas Tips
Candidates need to pay attention to the sentence "Bohr's answer is indeed unexpected, but it is reasonable to think about it" in the question stem when reviewing the questions. But it is inevitable.Candidates should discover the essence through the phenomenon, and they should not just stop at the superficial phenomenon when composing, but continue to dig out the inevitable connection behind the phenomenon.There are all kinds of wonders in the world. Some things in the world are originally complementary and have many internal connections. Some accidental things that seem to be "unexpected" are often "reasonable" inevitable results behind them.

Full score sample essay
My Heart is Flying
(a candidate from Henan)

The snail said: "The eagle spreads its wings and can climb to the top of the pyramid, while my heart flies, and I can also climb to the top of the pyramid."

Xiaoxi said: "The raindrops can squeeze through the white clouds and land, and my heart is flying, and I also have the grace of flying to the top of the clouds and overlooking the mountains and rivers."

Green Leaf said: "The safflower is dazzling and outstanding, everyone is full of praise, and my heart is flying, and I will be willing to work silently for the ladder of others and win praise."

Perhaps, the vigor of the eagle, the lightness of the raindrops, and the beauty of the safflower are all in your mind, and there is no doubt about it.However, although snails, streams and green leaves are small, they can also achieve great surprises, and who can deny their authenticity?

Looking at the long river of history, how many surprises happened within reason?

Xiang Yu and Liu Bang can be described as a generation of heroes, Xiang Yu is upright and self-confident, and Liu Bang is cunning and witty.At the Hongmen Banquet, Xiang Zhuang danced a sword for Xiang Yu to stab Peigong, which could have helped King Xiang achieve a great cause for a generation. However, King Xiang returned to the mountain because of his upright reputation, so that King Xiang was defeated in Wujiang in the future.It is reasonable to assassinate Duke Pei at the Hongmen Banquet, but King Xiang is willing to protect his future rival, which is unexpected.However, reason and reason are subjective concepts of human beings after all, and unexpected events are not uncommon in history.

John once heard that a small island in Africa was rich in gold mines, and many people went to pan for gold.This is a good way to get rich. Friends also persuaded John to go to pan for gold, but John refused.In the end, everyone who went to pan for gold returned empty-handed, but John returned with a lot of wealth.What has actually happened?It turned out that there were no gold mines on that small island, so all the gold diggers returned disappointed, but to go to the small island, one had to cross a piece of sea, so a boat had to be transported. John just let his heart fly over the sea , seized the opportunity and made a fortune in shipbuilding.

Reasonably, it is a gentle breeze, but unexpectedly, it is a bunch of flowers in the wilderness.The breeze can bring coolness to people, and the flowers can also give people fragrance.Only by flying with my heart can I overcome the barriers of reason and capture the real surprise; only by flying with my heart can I fly beyond the narrowness of thinking, let reason and expectation join hands, and shine with dazzling brilliance.

Let us spread the wings of our hearts!May my heart fly, go through the reasonable and the unexpected, to embrace the emptiness of the fish flying in the shallow bottom, to embrace the freedom of butterflies dancing in the flowers, to embrace the boldness of wild geese traveling in the blue sky!

My Heart is Flying.Miracles are everywhere!
score review
The whole article uses beautiful words and brilliant writing, reflecting the author's superb ability to control language.Especially the extensive use of parallelism and symmetrical sentences, the sentences are beautiful and majestic; the use of personification and contrast makes the writing lively and deep.

see the world with a smile
(A candidate from Anhui)

The frowning sigh, the startled long sigh, the countless question marks and exclamation marks——it was unexpected.

The sudden realization, the knowing smile, the relief after deep thinking--it is reasonable.

The natural wind blows through the ears, the clear spring flows through the feet, and nature silently enlightens us with unexpected and reasonable interesting relationships.

"Withered pine hanging upside down against the cliff", have you ever marveled at the incredibleness of mountain pine?Look at the strong branches that show the unexpectedness of life. Even though there is snow on the green pine, it still points to the sky.Because its roots are more tenacious than the branches, they penetrate deeply into the rock crevices and absorb the essence of Mother Earth. Don’t doubt it. When a mountain pine seed falls into the rock crevices, it is destined to experience difficult baptisms. It is reasonable.

Bing Xin once said: "People are always amazed by the beauty of flowers, but they don't know what kind of baptism of blood and tears those seeds have experienced."

Indeed, when the broad avenue full of flowers stretches forward, there must be thorns and blood behind it; When you climb to the top of the mountain and marvel at the emerald green mountains, you must have paid the sweat and hardship of climbing.

It is natural to say that there must be an inevitable reason behind every surprise, which is the truth with a knowing smile.

The tide of society is surging, and there are many similarities on the coast of history and reality.

The discovery of the periodic law of elements originated from a dream of Mendeleev, and the discovery of the benzene ring also came from a nap. This is indeed somewhat unexpected, but if the two scientists did not devote themselves to research and deep thinking, how could there be an epiphany after waking up from a dream? Woolen cloth?
In the early Qing Dynasty, the emperors and ministers had been dreaming of the heavenly kingdom. The Western strong ships and guns stunned the rulers of the Qing Dynasty. Does it make sense?

The women's doubles champions at the Olympic Games were the little-known Li Na and Sun Tiantian, who were dubbed "Greek mythology" by the western media, but didn't the hard training of the two give a reasonable reason for their victory?
Reason is the arrow of reason, which breaks through the gauze of surprise and gives the soul a sobering kiss.

Looking at the world through the unexpected, it turns out that there are so many reasons, it has been so in the past, and it will be the same in the present and the future-seeing the world with a smile.

score review
The article fits the meaning of the topic, with substantial content, rich materials, clear links, natural transitions, vivid and thorough reasoning, and a prominent center.The language is meaningful and the writing is brilliant.

classic case
Mendeleev, the emperor's ministers in the early Qing Dynasty, Li Na and Sun Tiantian

Front and back of the moon
(A candidate from Anhui)

A cloud drifts across the sky, sometimes cloudy, sometimes clear, but day is still day after all.

distributing boats
Facing the high and powerful positions, colleagues are full of ambition; facing the houses with carved beams and paintings, the colleagues are swaying; facing the graceful women, the colleagues are fascinated; scrambling.But you hung the crown and left, wandering around the five lakes in a small boat.

"We have worked hard to share the misfortune with the king. After 20 years of painstaking efforts, we have destroyed Wu Fuguo and exchanged beautiful rivers and mountains. Now that we have achieved success and career, it is time to enjoy the glory and wealth. How can the general be so worthless and famous? "The language is incomprehensible, the same is incomprehensible, the Xishi is incomprehensible, the soldiers are incomprehensible, the common people are incomprehensible, and Goujian is incomprehensible.

You smile lightly.That smile contains that Gou Jian is a human being who can share adversity, difficulties and peace; that smile contains that birds are exhausted, household bows are hidden, cunning rabbits are dead, and lackeys are cooked; Containing high meritorious deeds, the masters of the earthquake all perish.

You left, unexpectedly walked into hermitage; you left, honored as a sage within reason.Fan Li, the wisdom of a wise man will make you as blessed as the sea, and live as long as the sky.

Shi Sheng Breakthrough
A tall building fell, and a boat capsized in the middle of the Yangtze River. Sima Qian was heartbroken.The iron chains put the head on, the shackles were added to the feet, the knife was sharpened ferociously, the wolf rolled up his sleeves, and there was a scream, ghosts and gods wept, and the world was angry.

The tears are gone, the teeth are broken, I thought you would kill yourself with a knife; your body is disabled and your heart is blunt, I thought you would kill yourself by drinking medicine; friends abandoned, relatives divorced, I thought you would go to hell in sorrow.But you survived, as strong as a mountain, with a will like iron, in that era when believers could be killed but not humiliated, in that era when fame and integrity were valued as much as fate.

When King Wen played "The Book of Changes", you remembered his father's dying instructions; when Zhong Nier wrote "Spring and Autumn", you remembered the hardships of a talented man; Binjiao, the art of war is revised, you think of the fragrance of flowers from the bitter cold; Han Fei imprisoned Qin and wrote "Say Difficulty" and "Lonely Anger", you think of the unfinished heroism.

So he was allowed to slander, so he was ridiculed by the township party, so he was criticized by words and pens, so the "Historical Records" was cast, so the history flowed, so you were tall beyond expectations, so you were immortal in reason.

Life can’t be flat and wide. Occasional misfortune is just the ladder of progress for genius. After the storm, the sky and water with gulls flying and fish swimming will be in front of you. The moon of Mid-Autumn Festival can’t see the year as bright as water forever. Occasionally dim, just It is the face behind the mirror. If there is something lacking, life will be like a cloud of green mountains.

score review
The article has lofty intentions. Candidates stand at the height of history and review the famous figures Fan Li and Sima Qian in history with a critical eye, thus dialectically explaining the relationship between the unexpected and the reasonable.The theme is clear, closely related to the topic, the story quotes are appropriate, and the comments are in-depth, which highlights the young author's dialectical thinking ability and ability to grasp the materials.

inescapable proposition
(A candidate from Anhui)

(End of this chapter)