College entrance examination full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 46 Materials and Non-materials
(Tianjin Volume 2004)

composition test questions
Read the text below, according to what the article says.

The carpenter who selected the materials came to the mountain. When he saw a pile of strangely shaped roots, he thought they were useless materials, so he shook his head and left. Soon, a root carving artist also came here. Take them home and carve them.The roots are transformed into exquisite root carving works of art.

This material will make people have many associations. Please combine your real life and write an article on the topic of "materials and non-materials".

[Notice]

①The written content must be within the scope of the topic. The materials quoted in the test questions may or may not be used by candidates in the article. ② Make up your own mind. ③The style is optional. ④The topic is self-made. ⑤ Not less than 800 words. ⑥No plagiarism.

Question Analysis
The composition proposition of the Tianjin paper has inherited the proposition ideas and methods of the national paper examination questions in recent years, and has certain similarities with the 2003 "emotional closeness and cognition of things" - both require two factors relationship to write articles. The topic of "materials and non-materials" is easy to remind people of Mr. Zhu Guangqian's discussion about three kinds of people's different attitudes (practical, scientific and aesthetic) towards the same tree.This kind of topic mainly examines the thinking quality of students: there is a dialectical relationship between the usefulness and uselessness of a thing.The purpose of the proposition is to guide the candidates to understand themselves correctly and to think about their life orientation from another perspective.Whether a person or an object is "material" or "non-material", the results are different when judged by different standards.A "poor student" in the eyes of a teacher will become an Olympic champion in the future, and a high-achieving student with excellent character and learning will become a murderer and embezzler in the future.The standard for people to judge material and non-material is whether it is useful or useless, but the standard is not the only one, and it should be measured in many ways.

Writing Ideas Tips
This topic is suitable for writing an argumentative essay style.Candidates should draw up the outline of the whole article when conceiving, be good at seeing the big from the small, win with points, analyze in depth, and pay attention to the combination of examples and comparisons.The writing can be conceived from the following three aspects: [-]. Candidates can associate with the real society. All walks of life have different standards for the required "materials". "Standards" and "angles" determine whether the object of judgment is "materials" or "materials". "Non-material".[-]. "Useful" and "useless" are the conditions for judging "material" and "non-material", and "material and non-material" are determined by people's subjective needs and the objective needs of society.[-]. "Material" and "non-material" are not absolute, and the two can often be transformed into each other.

Full score sample essay
i am sandalwood
(Candidate No. [-] in Tianjin)

When he saw me, his eyes lit up and he was as excited as a groom.I thought I had finally found my Bole, and I really wanted to say to him: "Treasure me, I am real sandalwood, a small piece is worth a fortune!" But he looked at me and said, "Hey, I finally found it. It is a good material for making furniture!"

God, I despise him!He doesn't know what is "material" and what is "non-material".I was discovered by a mediocre person.Oops!
I was still chopped down and loaded into a car.In his yard I was sawn, planed, and ground.Every piece of Linmu Feiyangyang exudes a delicate fragrance, but he just sneezes!
I am very sad.Now I am used to calling him a mediocre.I found that human beings are really stupid, they only have money in their eyes, but they can't find the real valuable treasures.I also saw an ugly rock outside his house. It was really ugly with pits on his body, but I knew that it was a meteorite, a fragment of a star in the sky hundreds of years ago.He, that meteorite—cries softly every day, but is always scolded by mediocre people, scolding him for being incompetent, occupying land, and being so heavy.

I don't cry, I just mourn for human beings.When my branches were thrown into the ditch and my torso was split into chair legs and planks, all I knew was that I was done.Such a hundred-year-old sandalwood tree—I was finally wasted and squandered by a mediocre person.

I became a chair, a board, a door, and a crutch for the old man... and so many years passed, and I saw all the foolishness of this man and his friends.They built the city wall bricks from the Western Han Dynasty into a pigsty, and fed the pigs with paulownia seeds that could be squeezed into oil; I saw those foreigners showing secretive smiles... not only that, but they didn't let go of their own children. I saw that mediocre youngest son was clever and quick-witted, and could carve stones into flying horses, but he was always caught by him. Dad slapped him and scolded him: "It's not a good thing! It's still playing, not working!" His so-called "working" is to load hematite for foreigners!
OMG, I've seen enough!The one who is not good enough is himself!Every morsel of really good material turned into scrap the moment he got his hands on it.Is it possible to wake up, mediocre?

My piece of sandalwood is also old.When the little guy in the United States, the 1.6-meter basketball player, went from being incompetent to a star galloping the court; When students are educated to be the "best number one", I only see the opposite process, including myself! ...

Time flies, mediocrity is gone.Today, human beings have finally opened their eyes; I was washed and polished and placed in an exhibition cabinet; the meteorite has entered the planetarium; the iron ore has been protected.But it's too late. "I am sandalwood!" I have called for a lifetime, and even the son of a mediocre man is now mediocre.Alas!
Materials, non-materials, may vary from person to person!Quit it!Quit it!

score review
Candidates carefully selected the fable genre, and in the tone of No. 1, through narrating the experience of "sandalwood", skillfully used a lot of materials, and put their own feelings, thoughts and deep understanding in it, arousing people's interest in "sandalwood". Thinking about the value connotation of materials and non-materials, with a clear theme and flashes of aura.It is especially worth mentioning that the image of "sandalwood" created by the young author with anthropomorphic techniques is ready to emerge, with profound meaning.

Inkblots and Famous Paintings

(Candidate No. [-] in Tianjin)

Zhang Daqian, a famous painter in my country, is highly respected in the painting circle and has a long-standing reputation.He is especially good at landscape painting.His landscapes are as famous as Qi Baishi's shrimp and Xu Beihong's horse, not only well-known in China, but also famous overseas, and also enjoys a high reputation in the international art circle.

On this day, Secretary Qian, his wife, son, daughter-in-law and five-year-old grandson paid a special visit to Zhang Daqian, a master of landscape painting. They not only asked him for a landscape painting, but also let their little grandson experience the cultural atmosphere of the master.Unfortunately, Zhang Daqian had something to do, so he arranged Secretary Qian's family of five to wait in the study.

Secretary Qian couldn't bear the loneliness, so he got up and paced in the study.Looking around at the lifelike and lifelike landscape paintings, he couldn't help but be overwhelmed by the master's artistic charm, and he couldn't help but sigh in admiration.Suddenly, Secretary Qian saw an unfinished work in front of Zhang Daqian's desk, which immediately aroused his interest, and hurriedly invited his son and grandson to come and read the master's masterpiece.Secretary Qian stroked his beard, nodded his head and said, "Sure enough, it is written by a master. It deserves its reputation. Look! This majestic and vigorous writing, this vigorous and powerful finishing, is beyond the reach of ordinary people!"

The son saw that there was nothing but a bowl of ink in front of him, and he couldn't understand what he was hearing, but he still echoed: "Yes! This vague, half-real, half-illusioned brushwork shows the profound skills of the old artist, and it also symbolizes Looking at the magnificent mountains and rivers of the great motherland, isn’t this just the master’s incomparable love and affectionate eulogy for the motherland? Containing emotions in the scenery, expressing emotions through the scenery, high! It’s really high!”

The daughter-in-law of Secretary Qian led the little grandson, not to be outdone, interjected: "In my opinion, isn't this unpredictable ink blot just the usual method of Western surreal abstraction? The master boldly combined Western painting realism with Chinese painting. Combining traditional landscape paintings, extracting the essence, eliminating the dross, and integrating the very different cultures of the East and the West, is the sublimation of the old artist in art and has gained another new life. Son, do you think Mom is right?"

The little grandson glanced at the "famous painting" with disdain, and said childishly: "What famous painting, isn't it just a little ink? I will too."

"Shut up!" Secretary Qian snapped, "Don't talk nonsense, children who don't understand!" Zhang Daqian came back at this time, and he said with a smile on his face: "I heard all your conversations, but it was indeed my piece of cake!" Ink blots are not famous paintings at all!"

Secretary Qian's family was speechless and looked at each other in embarrassment.

In fact, the distinction between material and non-material, ink marks and famous paintings depends on the intelligent brain, not blind superstition and flattery.Rather than being a condescending artist, it is more practical to be a carpenter honestly.

score review
Through a fictitious story, the examinee told people the story of ordinary people's blind worship of famous masters, and expounded the truth that "the identification of talent and non-talent depends on the brain of wisdom, not blind superstition and flattery".The article is simple and popular, and the ending of the story is sobering.

(End of this chapter)