College entrance examination full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 47 Self-knowledge and expectations of others (1)
(2004 Chongqing Roll)

composition test questions
A mountaineering team participated in the climbing of Mount Everest. At an altitude of 8000 meters, he was exhausted and stopped.Later, when he talked about this experience, everyone felt sorry for him, why not persist?Climb a little higher and grit your teeth again! "No. I know best that 8000 meters above sea level is the highest point of my mountaineering career, and I have no regrets at all," he said.In this material, the mountaineering team's self-awareness is inconsistent with "everyone's" expectations of him.In real life, self-awareness sometimes coincides with other people's expectations, and sometimes it does not.Consistency and inconsistency are worthy of our consideration.Please write an article on the topic "Self-knowledge and Others' Expectations".

[Notice]

① The reference materials in the test questions may or may not be used by candidates in the article. ② Make up your own mind. ③The style is optional. ④The topic is self-made. ⑤ Not less than 800 words. ⑥No plagiarism.

Question Analysis
This is a speculative topic composition question.The purpose of the proposition is to guide students to establish a correct outlook on life and values, and to develop a healthy and progressive attitude.From the perspective of the topic itself, self-knowledge includes the understanding of one's own abilities and conditions, and expectations for life; the expectations of others refer to others' expectations of my achievements in a certain matter or in the overall trajectory of life.As the title says, self-awareness is sometimes consistent with other people's expectations, and sometimes it is inconsistent.Regardless of consistency or inconsistency, we need to find the reason before we can master this variable by ourselves. The unity of "self-knowledge" and "others' expectations" is the cornerstone of career success; in the face of others' high or low expectations, we must stick to ourselves in order to "go to glory"; changes in time and environment will also change "self-knowledge" and others' expectations".

Writing Ideas Tips
In the stories provided by the materials, the perceptions of the mountaineering team members are correct and objective, while the expectations of others are subjective and well-intentioned.The climbers were not overwhelmed by the vanity brought about by the expectations of others, correctly recognized their own abilities, and avoided potential dangers, which is commendable.Of course, sometimes, the expectations of others can also promote their own growth. Candidates should start from grasping the relationship between the two to conceive the article, so as to think about this topic dialectically.

Full score sample essay
The season of chrysanthemums

(a candidate from Chongqing)

When the refreshing autumn wind blows the sky higher, when a strange child sees off the last geese flying south, when the green leaves on the branches change to orange, when a little bit of sourness has set on the branches, it is time for the fragrance of chrysanthemums .

Kiku no Dan

"Kang Dang, Bang Dang..." Did you hear the crisp sound of iron striking?The breeze is blowing, the strong muscles exude the breath of life, and the raging fire cultivates noble sentiments.Ji Kang, the hero of this era, a generation of talented people, is living the life of a blacksmith here. Just like anyone else, you have high expectations for him, but do you dare to persuade him to become an official?Have you forgotten the "Letter of Breaking Friendship with Shan Juyuan"?Those sonorous words have declared to everyone his disdain for official career, let him be himself, and let the "Seven Sages of the Bamboo Grove" live forever in the life of "Singing in the Yexia", "Drinking in the Bamboo Forest", "Qushui Liushang", " In the life of "picking chrysanthemums in Nanshan", don't let the mundane smell cover the faint fragrance of chrysanthemums.

Chrysanthemum pride

Can you still remember that Zhuangzi who ignored the status of Chu State and still decided to "tail on the way"?This "heart is like clear autumn water", and his body is like an untied boat. He has world-wide talents, but he has never succumbed to the powerful and powerful, and has lived a poor life all his life. Do you also want to persuade him to enter the world and expect him Can do great things for the motherland, the society, and the common people.Yes, everyone hopes so.However, Zhuangzi thinks he is a tree, a tree that protects the moon of the soul. If you insist on pulling him up and planting him in the dirty social soil, he will wither and die immediately, so let him be a tree forever. Tree, he will have a proud chrysanthemum to accompany him.

Chrysanthemum

"Strengthen the mountain and the world is overwhelming, the time is not good, the time is not dying, the time is not dying, there is nothing to do, what is the concubine Yu concubine." Facing the torrential river, facing the elders of the villagers on the other side, a generation of overlords can't help but wet their clothes with tears. The river water has taken other people's surnames, and the beauty committed suicide in her arms. Should she escape by boat and regroup, or join the Wujiang River, "Death is also a ghost hero"?If you were by King Xiang's side, would you advise him to "keep the green hills there, and you won't be afraid of running out of firewood"?The elders in Jiangdong also expect King Xiang to endure humiliation, maybe history will be rewritten for this, but King Xiang finally chose to die by throwing himself into the river. He thinks that he should die with dignity. He thinks that is his true hero, the life of a chrysanthemum The form withers, but the fragrance of the flowers lasts forever.

Perhaps this is the true meaning of life, no matter what other people expect, if you think it is right, you will unremittingly pursue, pursue freedom, pursue nobility, pursue the dignity of life, pursue the true qualities of a hero, put aside the expectations of others, put aside the dissuasion of others, and pursue yourself advances in understanding.

When the crisp sound of hammering iron comes from afar, when the ancient roc spreads its wings and is about to fly, and when the surging Wujiang River roars to the sky, it is the season of the fragrance of chrysanthemums again.

score review
This article selects Ji Kang, Zhuangzi and Xiang Yu, three historical figures with great personalities, symbolizes their character with noble chrysanthemums, and embodies the relationship between the self-knowledge of the characters and the expectations of others in vivid language.At the beginning of the article, it showed a far-reaching picture, rich in imagination, full of text and emotion, and fascinating.The two paragraphs at the end sublimate the theme, echoing back and forth, and the writing is natural and smooth.

classic case
Ji Kang, Zhuangzi, Xiang Yu

I'm a "rat" who wants to die

(a candidate from Chongqing)

These days, I have been anxious about how I should die. My body is extremely unwell, but I didn’t go to the hospital because a fortune teller told me a few years ago that I will die this year. There are hundreds of days and nights.

After careful consideration, I still chose to go to the street and be beaten to death.

These years, I have been ashamed of human beings, and brought the food that people exchanged with blood and sweat into my black hole and gentle township. I have more than a dozen villas, and each of them has "Xiaomi". I am afraid of light, and I dare not leave On the street, "rats go to the street, everyone shouts and beats", well, now I finally realize my mistake, and I will use my death to make amends to people!It also serves as a punishment for the later "rat".

An hour, two hours passed, but no one shouted or beat me, and no one even looked at me. I walked slowly, waiting for death to come.

I blocked a beautiful young lady, I wanted him to yell and let those "heroes save the beauty" people beat me to death, I put my arms around her waist and said, "I want to moles you!"

Not only did the lady not shout, but she gave me a wink and said: "Look at your style, you are either a rich man or a high official, I will be with you."

The words that sounded sweet in the past sounded so harsh today, I left her and ran away, I think this is what she expected!
I ran away, and she kept asking "how much is the phone number"...

An old woman walked towards me. I think she is old and has rich social experience, so she must be able to recognize me as a "rat".

But she passed me by calmly, and I quickly grabbed her sleeve and said, "Don't you recognize that I'm a mouse?"

"What does it matter to me that you are a 'mouse'? There are a lot of people on the street now! Don't bother me, I still have to go shopping." She flicked her sleeves, and flew away like a lot younger. .

Weird!Weird!Am I wrong, or do they expect something else?

Suddenly, my eyes lit up, yes!The police have guns, like peanuts, as long as they fly over.

I came to a policeman and said: "Comrade policeman, I am a 'rat', shoot me to death with a gun!"

When the policeman saw me, he stood at attention with a "snap" and said, "Hi, Chief!"

"I'm not the director, I'm a mouse."

"You are the bureau chief. Two years ago, you had dinner with our Bureau Wang."

"Your king is also a mouse."

"Why are you mice? If you are mice, then we are the sons and grandsons of mice. In the future, please talk to Wang Bureau for me. My name is 'Shangguan' and my phone number is 5188."

I walked slowly on the street, feeling extremely confused. What happened to this society?How come my understanding is so different from their expectations?

I looked up to the sky and sighed, "Who will kill this mouse that just wants to die!"

score review
This article is novel in conception and unique in perspective. The article adopts the form of a fairy tale, with the mouse as the subject of "self-knowledge", which shows the dislocation of people's expectations, satirizes people's inversion of right and wrong, and regards abnormality as normal. , thought-provoking.

Alone
(a candidate from Chongqing)

Last night the westerly wind withered the green trees, I went up to the tall building alone, looking at the end of the world.

--Inscription

I used to think that the lives of ancient literati would be simple and clear, and the times gave them simple expectations: enter the prime minister, leave the general, and seal their wives and sons.However, who?Do you want to put aside those worldly expectations, go up to the tall building alone, and choose another path for your life?

[-]. Li Bai

Is it the yellow sand all over the sky, the singer riding a donkey and singing while the north wind blows geese?Is it fishing at sea with the neon as the line and the rainbow as the hook?Is it a traveler who visits the green mountains and rivers, sings and walks?In the era of fireworks in March, people expected you to sing praises, to please the emperor in exchange for high officials and rich salary; but you, you have to go up to the tall building alone, in court you want Gao Lishi to take off his boots and grind ink, and in the wild you want to release white deer on the green cliff between.

So you are doomed to be lonely, "raise your glass to invite the bright moon, and make three people with each other", but you are proud, "bells, drums, and jade are not expensive, I hope I won't wake up after being drunk."

And when we look back at the Tang Dynasty, it is not the emperor who stands in the middle of the prosperous Tang Dynasty, but you!

When the wine enters the bosom, seven points turn into moonlight, and the remaining three points whistle into sword energy, and when you spit out your mouth, you will be half of the prosperous Tang Dynasty.

[-]. Su Dongpo
Is it a jackdaw that picks up all the cold branches and refuses to live there?Is it to raise a glass to invite the drinker of the bright moon?Is it an idiot who has gone through ten years of life and death?
In that era of "gathering stars", people's expectation of you is to keep a low profile and play with words, but you have to go to the tall buildings alone. Your light hurts those eyes who are used to the dark night. You are destined to bear the officialdom and the literary world Sewage splashed together.

And I only see your green bamboo branches, the straw shoes on your feet, your back wet by the rain, your calm and free smile, and only the autumn wind and green water in your eyes.

You stick to yourself, so as to reach the height that future generations will always look up to.

[-]. Xin Qiji
Is it the wanderer in the south of the Yangtze River in the sound of Duan Hong?Do you hate the ancients for not knowing you as a madman?Is it a sad bird that does not cry clear tears and long cry blood?

In that age of advocating pleasure, what people expect of you is to recite flowers and enjoy the moon, to show off your poetry, but you have to go up to the tall building alone, "Look at Wu hook, and shoot all over the rails."

On one side is "the setting sun is setting, misty rain is heartbroken", on the other side is "fragrant cars and BMWs are all over the road", and you insist on being a Yiren in a dimly lit place.

(End of this chapter)