You could use ten episodes to wipe out the Stormmark family, and then use the remaining time to take down the final boss, Boca. Wouldn't that be perfect? Although this kind of plot direction can only be described as ordinary and mediocre, it's still better than the later explosion and plane crash, right?
Alternatively, you could continue with your own ideas, having Saki and Rango team up to take down Boca, and then having Rango become the final boss, leading to a head-on confrontation between the Stormmark family and the main characters. Even if the ending isn't particularly outstanding or excellent, the strong foundation laid in the early episodes would ensure a smooth conclusion, guaranteeing a minimum rating of 8 points, with 8.5 being quite normal. A slightly higher rating of 8.8 or even 9 points would be a possibility, and it might even be able to rival Saber.
The result was amazing in the early stages, steady improvement in the mid-stages, but then it seemed to suffer from procrastination in the later stages, refusing to advance the main plot. It's not that the Lazia storyline couldn't be filmed, but filming one or two episodes would be fine. It took two episodes to film the story of Lazia and the Battle of the Boundaries, and that's not all. The mantis monster that appeared wasn't the real culprit, and in the end, they kept trying to pin the culprit on Grotta. If you really wanted a storyline like this, you should have just decided it from the beginning, and there wouldn't have been so many complications.
But no, it wasn't decided until the very last moment. Even viewers were skeptical about whether Grotta was really the one who killed Lazia's brother. In short, the later stages of Gabe felt like the writers were just improvising, without any prior planning, writing whatever came to mind. But wasn't Gabe filmed several months in advance? Could it be that the early and middle stages really took that long?
Not to mention the later plot twist: Rango kidnapped tens of thousands of people to turn them into ingredients for his dark snacks, and you, incredibly, were able to happily eat those snacks at such a crucial moment, creating a scene where eating the snacks felt like being in an amusement park...
To be honest, if Gabe hadn't been so exceptionally good in the early stages, with virtually no problems and all the characters being intelligent, and if you had given him a super powerful boost like the fox in the early stages, would Gabe still have gotten a 7 out of 10 by the end?
Let's go sit at the same table as 01.
The most outrageous thing is that Nierub used several boxes of human materials as a bargaining chip in order to make Shengzhen the head of the Stormmark family.
So this is still useless?
So how much material was actually used?
We're just saying, if you put this kind of plot in the Heisei era, the Heisei big brothers would probably tear your Stoma family and Ikari to pieces, believe it or not.
In Kuuga, Godai's anger after learning from the news that dozens of people had been killed by the Grongi was almost palpable.
Shinji, the little angel, even paid the price of his own life to protect the people.
Then there was Ryuga from the dog, the brother-in-law of the veteran driver, and so on.
If they knew that your story was like this, they would probably be truly heartbroken and want to die.
After all, the nature of these things is completely different. The explosive works of Extreme Fox, 01, and Levi's are a matter of values. Gabe is awesome. He captured tens of thousands of people and instantly refined them. Why are you dawdling and not saving people?
How should I put it? It feels like Gabe's early and later episodes were written by completely different screenwriters.
It's really speechless.
After criticizing so many issues with the original version, what I really want to say is, what's wrong with a smooth landing sometimes? Don't go for all those fancy gimmicks; the audience might feel a little disappointed, but look at Leavis next door—guess what?
A smooth landing is truly a pipe dream!
In short, the character of Margan in this episode seemed quite convincing, but unexpectedly, he was killed off in one episode, which surprised and excited the audience.
This shows that the Knights' Club isn't planning to slow down Gabu's progress!
That's how it should be!
I don't expect to create that same sense of anticipation in each episode of Exyder, like the finale is just around the corner. Just tell a good story and keep the audience entertained—that's enough. Audiences are often very easily satisfied.
(P.S.: It feels like a smooth landing for the Knights is really a pipe dream now. Zzz had another amazing start and took off immediately, but... oh well, whatever, if we don't pop the champagne now, will we be unable to pop it when we crash?)
According to information released by Knights Club, the upcoming storyline will be related to Sajin, Gabu's final form.
This made the audience even more excited, and they couldn't wait for the next week to start.
And amidst this atmosphere of anticipation, a week later, episode thirty-three premiered:
……
The episode begins with a recap of the previous episode, then focuses on You Che's handsome figure before abruptly pausing.
When the lights came on again, the first sound was the rolling of wheels on the ground, along with various shouts and calls from many people around.
You Che slowly raised his eyes, seeing only a pure white ceiling and rows of chandeliers passing by...
What's wrong with me?
You Che was confused, and then began to recall.
Soon, You Che remembered.
He fell into a coma.
After defeating Magnum, Yu Che stylishly deactivated his transformation. But the instant he deactivated, everything went black before his eyes, and he collapsed to the ground.
Didn't I take medicine? Why did I just faint this time? I didn't even have time to react?
Afterwards, Yu Che lay on the hospital bed and asked Az in his mind. Az quickly handed over the data he had collected to Yu Che.
Shengzhen and the others also learned the specifics of the situation from the doctor:
Simply put: Yutsu's stamina bar was originally 100. If he used the Candy Trigger to deplete Cake King's Hōzō, then after the battle, Yutsu's stamina bar would drop to 30. He would feel weak, but it's nothing serious. He just needs to rest more.
However, after taking the medicine, the stamina bar showed a false reading of 50 points, appearing to be 80, but actually only 30. As long as you don't continue using Cake King's Hungry Treasure during this period, there won't be any problems.
However, since Yu Che used Cake King's Bread for a short period of time, the fact that he hasn't been exhausted to death can only mean that the medicine is indeed effective, or that Yu Che has divine power within him, which is keeping him alive.
You Che was speechless after hearing this. So this medicine is the kind that should only be taken as a last resort?
I'm speechless. Can't you just give me a cheat code?!
Yu Che immediately started complaining, and Knight's Den, upon hearing Yu Che's words, didn't say anything more and directly displayed the Popularity Shop in front of Yu Che.
The meaning is obvious: Stop thinking about your damn black and white god all the time. You have so much popularity, why don't you buy all the powerful items in my shop?
See this Hundred-Saturation Bottle? You can take it home with just 100 million popularity points!
You're not short of money, why do you have to be so frugal?
Yu Che: "..."
So, you were waiting for me here?
Anyway, I definitely won't spend any money. As for fighting...
Yu Che glanced at Sheng Zhen, who looked worried outside the ward, and chuckled.
This guy is the real protagonist, bearing the heaviest burden...
He should be the one carrying it!
Chapter 475 Genius's Worries...
You Che was admitted to the hospital...
No, it's more like he's back in the hospital. How should I put it? From the audience's perspective, this might be the screenwriter trying to create a meme.
However, from a realistic point of view, it is actually quite unreasonable.
How can a human body possibly withstand such torment?!
In the battle against Rango, was Yuche's body really able to withstand it?
Putting aside the fact that Cake King Hōzō was involved, Yūtsu's body was already at its limit when he fought Rángo.
After all, it's just a human body.
In their subsequent encounters with Boca Juniors, they were thoroughly thrashed.
Boca's attack was too powerful; that laser attack was practically like a weapon from his imagination. Youche really wanted to curse him out.
Moreover, Boca's defense is exceptionally strong. If Boca hadn't been unwilling to fight Yuche with all his might, Yuche might have been brutally beaten.
What happened to Yuche when he faced Boca Juniors?
First, his shoulder blades were pierced several times, his abdomen was ripped open, and then his shield, which he had gathered with all his energy, was shattered by Boca's single blow...
Is this an attack that humans can withstand?
(Yuteru: I am Kamen Rider!)
Let's take a look at Gabe's other guys: Lazia, Sugar Man, Trip-Trip, Half Sugar Man, Saki, Hybrid Sugar Man...
Theoretically speaking, each of them possessed a physique far superior to You Che's.
But what about the result?
Lazia and Bandou had their Dao hearts shattered by Boca's single blow. If Boca hadn't targeted these two unlucky guys directly, they probably would have had a complete mental breakdown.
All I can say is that the enemy is powerful, but not so powerful that it's impossible to look them in the eye...
Damn it, I really want to ask you, screenwriter, if you gave Boca Juniors a special favor!
Well, anyway, the best news is that Yu Che's body can hold up.
As for drug use...
That can only be used as a lifesaver.
Anyway, judging from You Che's expression, Sheng Zhen and the others knew that You Che probably wouldn't be able to help in the short term.
This made the three of them feel somewhat uncomfortable.
"I'll go find my great-uncle..."
Saki spoke to Lazia and Bandou.
To Shengzhen's surprise, Lazia and Bandou both said at the same time, "I'm going too!"
Shengzhen looked puzzled: Wait, what are you two doing there?
……
The scene shifts, and Uncle Dent looks at the three people in front of him with a bewildered expression: "So, the three of you came here together because you wanted to..."
Lazia immediately removed her human disguise, transforming into a jellyfish monster, and then urgently said to her uncle, "Grandpa! No matter what it takes, please make us stronger!"
Even if it costs me everything!
As Lazia was about to pluck his jellyfish tentacles, Saki and Banto quickly stepped in to stop him, and for a moment it looked like the group was wrestling.
Uncle Dent was even more bewildered: "Uh, put that aside for now. What I want to know is, what's wrong with you all? Why do you seem to have been through something traumatic?"
Upon hearing his uncle's words, the three of them slowly stopped moving.
Shengzhen sighed helplessly and said, "The thing is..."
Soon, Shengzhen began to recount the whole story.
Uncle understood. It turned out that You Che's body couldn't take it anymore and he had been hospitalized. Seeing that they had lost one of their important combat forces, they immediately wanted to strengthen him.
Well, to be honest, the choices made by the three of them, including Ikuma, were actually quite correct.
If Yuche is injured, what if Boca Juniors launch an attack during this time?
The threat from the Stromak family had barely been eliminated when Boca took over their mantle and continued capturing humans...
Who the hell can withstand this? Humans are truly unlucky; the people here are practically being used as blood bags by Boca, getting whatever they want from them.
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