Fairy, I really am a villain!

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However, it is not to say that it is a wolf in sheep's clothing. In this volume, there are still a lot of foreshadowing, such as the three nodes of the pleasure boat, delivering the sword, and testing the soul, the massacre in the secret realm, etc.

What would happen if the male protagonist didn’t know the plot?

What will happen to the male protagonist if he fails the soul test?

What would have happened to the male protagonist if he hadn't clung to Fang Qingxiao?

To know what happens next, please wait for the next chapter...Well, he will become the title of the book.

It is precisely because the author has written so much about "what he wants to express" and considered too little about "what the readers want to see" that the readers are unhappy with the reading.

I'm sorry to get up again.

I will correct this problem in the new volume, and the male protagonist's stubborn personality has also been changed, so the viewing experience should be much better.

The second problem is thinking too much.

For example, in Shen's case, he thought that after all, she was the woman his buddy liked, and she was a disciple of a big sect, the Fang family's influence was in the Divine Capital, and the male protagonist didn't care, so he didn't do anything...he should have slapped her.

Dai was the same, thinking that after all, they were at the ferry, and there were so many people watching, and he was a disciple of a big sect, so it would be difficult to take action... He should just arrange for Shadow Servant to chop him off with a knife, and everything else would be fine.

But if we chop him off with a knife, the Mingyue Sword Sect will not sit idly by. Wouldn't the pace of the negotiations be too slow?

...

Let's talk about the next plot arrangement.

There are many things I want to write about, such as going through the main plot and pointing out the title of the book;

For example, the male protagonist no longer plays with dogs, but starts to plan, live, and travel the world;

For example, if you ask a silly girl to do something awkward, it must be very interesting to see her being clumsy, shy, and trying to be tough.

For example, the sister who has always been straightforward finally realized her own twisted emotions and was unwilling to face it, but had to accept the fact that her brother had a girlfriend;

For example, using those characters as their perspective, it writes about how the Tianyu Sect was corrupted, the demon ship of the Dingjun Wang family, the power of the Maitreya Sect, etc., points out several forces, and reveals the plans of the world's top leaders... and so on.

To be honest, I was stuck at the beginning of the second volume for a long time.

It’s not that I have nothing to write, it’s that there is too much and I don’t know what to write.

What the author wants to write is one thing, and how to package it into what the readers want to read is another.

I have to sort these things out and think them over. I can't make the same mistake I made in the first volume.

Oh, writing novels is really difficult.

And recently I don’t dare to read comments anymore, because being scolded too much affects my writing ideas...

Anyway, I would like to thank the book friends who have read this far. Let’s see you in the second volume.

Chapter 71 Young Man, Wait a Mind

The roasted fish has a crispy texture and a brown crust, while the fish meat inside is fresh, delicate and tasty. It is paired with mushrooms, coriander, chili oil and other ingredients. The flavors fill your mouth with distinct layers when you take a bite.

"Tsk tsk, I really regret not bringing the silly girl along." Fang Xiwen grabbed a grilled fish and ate it while walking, his mouth full of oil. He even burped after eating so much.

It can only be said that Zhoushan City is worthy of being a major canal city. On the one hand, as a distribution center on both sides of the canal, it gathers delicious spices from all over the world, even leather shoes are delicious;

On the other hand, all kinds of fresh river fish are killed and cooked on the spot, which makes them most authentic.

He left Yiling from Jingshui City, went north along the river, turned to Yangzhou, passed Longzhou, and arrived at Zhoushan City at the southwest border of Jiangzhou, intending to stay here for a while.

This place is under the jurisdiction of the Dajiang Gang. The people here are simple and honest, and have a strong martial spirit. I saw three competitions before I even walked two streets. There were heroes fighting each other, and it was a very exciting fight.

The shop owners were used to this, so they just opened the door, moved a stool and sat down.

Fang Xiwen was wearing a black suit, with a long sword on his waist and a tall figure. He looked very good, but he looked like a fool while eating while walking. Seeing this, many thieves became eager to make a move and followed him.

Seeing his purse shaking, he felt uneasy. He stole the money with his skillful hands, but his palms felt burning with pain, as if he had been beaten with a rattan stick by the teacher in the school.

The bulging purse was extremely light to the touch. When I opened it, it was full of cotton. There was not a single copper coin in it!

A few people looked up and saw that stupid goose took out another purse, shrugged and put it on his waist. They were furious, angry and scared.

Seeing this, Fang Xiwen, whose evil taste was satisfied, walked into a restaurant, sat down in the lobby, and casually called out the operation panel.

[The spiritual realm resonance is weak, and the entry conditions are not met yet]

"It still doesn't work. Does that mean there's not enough time..."

"Hey, Young Master Fang!"

As soon as we sat down, the enthusiastic old man Li greeted us at the counter, "Still the same old things?"

"No, just give me a bowl of water chestnut porridge," Fang Xiwen raised the bamboo stick in his hand and smiled, "Let's go to the grilled fish restaurant you recommended. It tastes really good."

"Haha, I told you, Old Li, to be too talkative. Look, this kid is not even patronizing your business!"

An idle man pointed at him, slapped the table and laughed.

This young man Fang has been here for some time. He is handsome, speaks well, and is very open and friendly. In just a few days, he became familiar with these regular customers.

"Hey, you don't understand this," Old Li brought a bowl of porridge from the counter, and his simple smile also looked "sinister", "That's opened by my brother-in-law!

This is called keeping the wealth within the family."

"Good for you."

"Let's not talk about this. What do you think about my niece's matter?" Seeing that there were not many visitors, Old Li, wearing a towel, simply sat down opposite him. "She's pretty and kind, why don't you two meet her?"

Before Fang Xiwen could say anything, the idler in the lobby started teasing again, "I think I understand. It's ok that you targeted this guy's money, but now you don't even let him go!"

"No, Lao Li, I've been eating here for half a year, how come I haven't heard that you have a beautiful niece?"

"Old Wu, why don't you take a piss and look at yourself? Don't you have any idea of what you look like?"

After he finished speaking, there was another round of laughter in the hall. Old Li stiffened his neck and laughed and cursed twice, then served two more dishes of side dishes considerately, "Don't listen to their nonsense, I really think you two are a good match."

"Thank you, I have a girlfriend." Fang Xiwen waved his hand and buried his head in drinking porridge.

He wandered around Zhoushan City for nearly half a month. On the one hand, he took some secret treasures along the way and let some of his gains settle; on the other hand, he was studying this "spiritual resonance".

After the relationship of "Bi Luo Sword Immortal's Contract" deepened, the operation panel added the option of finding the entrance to the spiritual realm, and the nearest one was in Jiangzhou.

As he stayed there longer, the resonance of the spiritual realm changed from "weak" to "relatively weak". Perhaps after a while, the conditions would be met.

Zhou Shancheng happened to be full of martial virtues, so he would not have trouble finding opponents here. This period of time was just right for him to hone his combat skills and study the formations.

"Really gone?"

"See you, see you."

Seeing that he was not convinced, Old Li turned around to greet the guests, and he looked like he had not given up yet.

Seeing this, Fang Xiwen could only sigh helplessly. He had no idea of starting a family. He originally liked this store very much, but it seemed that he had to change to another one.

He finished the last mouthful of water chestnut porridge, wiped his mouth, and put the copper coin on the table. Suddenly, his heart trembled, and the internal energy in his body began to move strangely.

This is also one of the special features of the Book of Astonishing World. Its sensitivity becomes sharper in popular places.

Fang Xiwen reached out and touched it, and the silver nails in his arms emitted tiny traces of red light. He narrowed his eyes, waved towards the lobby, and rushed out suddenly.

...

Located on the same street as Lao Li’s shop, in the inner room of a large house at the end of the street.

"I'm going to beat you to death, you bitch!"

Inside the house, there was a man holding a long whip with barbs in his hand. He raised the whip high and whipped hard over and over again, and the shadow was cast into distorted shapes on the wall.

"My husband, my husband, please stop hitting me...Ah! Ah!"

A series of shrill screams rang out, and the woman huddled in the corner, holding a child tightly in her arms, with blood dripping from her back.

Hearing these noises, the man's face turned red due to the alcohol, and his eyes were filled with sadistic pleasure.

"You are mine, I can beat you however I want!"

The more she shrank, the closer the man pressed forward, whipping her harder and harder without decreasing his force. It seemed as if he was really going to whip the woman to death.

The weak woman clearly had the chance to escape, but for the sake of the child in her arms, she still protected it with her back, and her screams became even more mournful.

Suddenly, a voice as melodious as an oriole sounded from the beam, clear and pleasant:

"Jiang Junhua, the second son of the second branch of the Jiang family, married four times, and the longest marriage lasted only two years before he died. The neighbors all said that you were unlucky in marriage, but they didn't know that they were all beaten to death."

"Who, who's there!"

Hearing this, the man stopped the whip in his hand, and with a surge of alcohol in his breath, he started yelling towards the sky.

"Not only did he abuse his wife and children, he also hid the kidnapped good women in the inner courtyard's side rooms. A loser like you can't do such a thing. You really have a good father."

The man spoke in a brisk voice, and his tone seemed sarcastic.

Seeing this, Jiang Junhua caught a glimpse of a dark shadow and lashed out with the whip in his hand, but it missed with a snap.

"Fuck you! Who do you think you are? Get out here!" He pointed at the beam and cursed.

"Okay."

Boom!

Following this cheerful response, something indeed rolled down.

The man was stunned. Where did the ball come from?

It didn't look very elastic, but when he saw the object clearly, his doubts were finally resolved.

Oh, it turned out to be a human head...

It is a head with a dignified face and gray hair on the temples.

Jiang Junhua sobered up instantly, and the bloody head stared at him with wide eyes. It was his father who died with his eyes open!

"Dad, what's wrong with you, Dad!!"