There are also tasks that we complete but in a confused manner.
[Ancient Survey Diary], [The Return of the Rebellious Son], etc.
Eberhard and Parsifal are the core of the old Mondstadt era. You can go to MiGame and search for the guy called "kazami風见"; he has a detailed summary.
There may not be many players who know about the Dark Alley series. I was excited at first and thought it was a great success. Later, I realized that not many people knew about it. My writing is not good, so readers have a poor sense of immersion and are confused.
This is because I didn't think it through enough.
Originally, the "scene" of the second volume was not about the old Mondstadt. By then, the more familiar characters, such as Rosaria, Joel, and Amber, would have more roles, so it would not be so miserable to follow along.
But I like the stories that happened in Old Mondstadt, such as The Alley Thief, The Gladiator, The Rebel Son of West Wind, The Witch Lady, The Sword Band... In my eyes, their stories are like the shining stars of humanity.
This is why the name of the second volume is "The Time of Shining", and the name of the Wings of Wind obtained by Lin Ye is also this.
The first star is named [War Maniac], which means the courage to not fear the devil. Courage is the first step to challenge.
The second star is named "Sing High", which symbolizes freedom and resistance. It means being aware of oppression and having the courage to resist. No matter when, we should sing for freedom.
When designing the outline for the second volume, the author had this picture in mind:
The Badminton Festival, the Knights’ Crusade against the Dragon outside the city, and the Sword Band’s Assassination of Nobles inside the city, is full of epic and tragic moments.
The old gladiator and the young lion cub Vanessa fought in the arena.
The rebellious son of the West Wind staged a scene in which no one survived on the Dragon's Back Snow Mountain. After returning home, he staged "a magnificent rebellion against my father" and "Arthas of Frostmourne sent his father away" and other sudden massacres of his relatives in the palace at dusk.
There is also Lin Ye who rebels against the system and would rather be trapped in the memory vein world than not stick to his principles.
and many more.
There are many more.
But the subscription makes the author feel a little sad, and I don't have the habit of writing detailed outlines. The outline of a volume is composed of several events, probably something happens here, something happens there, and these are the main lines, and I want to connect them together when writing.
This results in the foreshadowing and preparation not being done properly, the overall framework is not clear enough, and the emotions cannot be aroused when the film is about to start.
The author has a deep understanding of this, hmm.
In the old Mondstadt, the plot is different from the original one. At least the little boy, Susan, and the sword band are all dead.
Lin Ye awakened at the end. I took too long to write the previous parts. Plus, the follow-up subscriptions during that period had a huge impact on me, so I even took a leave of absence.
After asking for leave, if it is delayed any further, it will have to be sent, so the plot pace speeds up, and the people who died in fate are also saved by Lin Ye.
Do you know what the author is afraid of?
That's what I think is good, follow-up is bad.
This really makes me doubt, and I have an illusion that something is wrong with the world. I doubt whether I am suitable for writing novels. Really, I am afraid that I will be too self-satisfied and write stories that are laughable.
Regarding the ending of Miss Witch, after Lin Ye and Sorolla parted, the author mentioned later that Miss Witch still had a role to play. Well, wasn’t there one in the last chapter? I didn’t forget it.
The chapter [When the Shine Shines] was supposed to be the climax of the plot, but I was very dissatisfied with the writing because the plot had been modified, which resulted in me being unable to get into the mood while writing it. In fact, the meeting between Lin Ye and Eberhardt should have been a little more exciting.
Anyway, I have finished writing the second volume.
About the subsequent story, Volume 3.
Originally, it was the Inazuma chapter, and they had already thought out how Hayashino would go to Inazuma. It was about Hayashino having a decisive battle with Eberhardt, entering the turbulence, and arriving at a place somewhere in Inazuma through the earth veins.
In this way, I was far away from the characters that everyone was familiar with, and I was afraid that I would get bored, so Lin Ye stayed in Mondstadt.
The data tells me that I can't do the story with hidden plots and unpopular characters. I comfort myself by saying that it is unpopular, but in the final analysis, it is still not well written.
When I thought back on the plot later, I found that I could have written it better, and that it should have been written like this, etc. But after I wrote it and uploaded it for everyone to see, what's the point of making changes?
The performance of this book was pretty good in the beginning, but it has become so terrible now. I am worthy of being a newcomer, so self-deprecating.
In the third volume, the focus is on daily life, Mondstadt and Liyue. I am trying to make the daily life interesting and brief so that people won't feel tired. I came up with a few ideas.
Interesting, this is what I want to achieve. On this basis, I want everyone to have a very comfortable and relaxing reading experience.
As for the hidden plot like Old Mondstadt, I won't touch it before I am included. Should I write the main plot of the game so that everyone can feel more involved?
Regarding the word count of the finished book, it is the first book after all, so it should be at least one million words. You can trust the readers on this point. I have guaranteed this in the previous chapters.
Let me tell you about my thoughts after finishing the second volume.
very tired.
Want to give up.
I feel like my grades are hopeless.
Let’s see what the third volume is like.
Ok.
The following is the list of rewards, thank you.
A meat-eating Yang costs 200 starting coins.
Qingwu QW100 starting coins.
Rimuru-Tempest 100 starting coins.
Book friend 20171017154657892 starting coins.
Hongci 10000 Qidian coins (rewarded on the day I took leave, a little unexpected, thank you)
Gu Pi 100 starting coins.
Wine Dream Sleeping 100 Starting Coins.
Chapter 268 Shocked! The True Lord actually lied to Xiao Shenhe...
The experience in Old Mondstadt had a great impact on Lin Ye. One of the aftereffects was that he became much lazier, probably due to the fatigue after the passion.
Fatigue often comes after overwork.
However, this brought some changes to Lin Ye's temperament.
Lin Ye has a strong subjective initiative. He does not do things blindly or follow the crowd. He has his own principles and attitude towards life, but these are integrated into his habits. He will not talk about them in his words, deeds, and actions.
People who are not familiar with the forest and the wild and have not had much contact with it may remember two points.
The first point is Lin Ye’s appearance. After all, he inherited the good looks of Lin Xiaofeng and Mu Xiaojin, which makes it hard for people to forget him.
As for the second point, it is Lin Ye's humor and occasional funny things. Some people appreciate it, but some people inevitably find it frivolous.
Now Lin Ye looks lazy, and with his good looks, he makes people feel that he is a mature and steady young man when they first meet him.
If Lin Ye knew about this, he would definitely not agree, as he thought it was old-fashioned.
It's not a big problem. After recuperating for a period of time and getting along with some interesting people, Lin Ye's depressed mood will naturally disappear.
According to Sucrose, it would take about a month to complete the production of the doll. It was originally planned to take two weeks. However, the blooming of the earth flower indirectly led to the failure of Sucrose's research. In addition to the splash of alchemical materials, the progress was reversed and many steps needed to be redone.
Fortunately, Sandang is a patient person. Researchers and scholars are generally people who can endure loneliness and worry, because they often face a large amount of boring and repetitive content.
Lin Ye calculated the time and thought that if he continued to stay in Mondstadt for another month, it would not be too late to return to Liyue, and it would be more than enough to catch the Lantern Festival.
A week has passed since Lin Ye defeated Eberhardt. During this week, Lin Ye traveled between the Knights Order and the Inn to deal with the subsequent turmoil.
Finally, Qin and Lin Ye agreed to award Lin Ye the highest honor for a foreigner - [Honorary Knight], and also reward him with one million Mora.
The notice was issued the day before yesterday, and its content was about the reason for the collective coma in Mondstadt. These days, the bards and drunkards in the tavern have exaggerated the truth of the matter and made it more and more outrageous. It is almost becoming a weird story in Mondstadt.
Lin Ye doesn't like to show up in public. After the notice was issued, he stayed at the hotel. His daily routine was to stay in Shen He's room and read books with her.
In the evening, it was time for dinner.
Shen He helped me buy it a few days ago.
Lin Ye plans to go out today, and his enthusiasm for caressing the Mond people in the city has subsided a lot.
To be on the safe side, I disguised myself, wore a mask, and went out with Shen He.
Shen He wondered why Lin Ye wore a mask?
Lin Ye explained that he was afraid of being recognized. Given the enthusiasm of the Mond people, they would definitely ask him all kinds of questions, and then he would not be able to have three weeks of leisure.
Shen He nodded.
She imagined being surrounded.
Very uncomfortable.
The place to eat is the Deer Hunter Restaurant.
The atmosphere in Mondstadt in the evening is very comfortable, with a cool evening breeze. Groups of people are walking along the streets. The streets illuminated by street lamps are not as lively as during the day, but are a bit more quiet.
People's voices seem to become distant, and only the breath of people around me can be felt.
If Lin Ye had not been to Old Mondstadt, he would have been accustomed to these scenes, but now he felt at ease.
Lin Ye came to the "Deer Hunter" restaurant. There were many people queuing up, and Lin Ye listened attentively to some people's conversation.
As expected, the "Knight of Glory" was mentioned. They were curious about what the Liyue man named Lin Ye looked like. Was he as tall and mighty as the Grand Commander, or as mysterious and handsome as the Night Elf hero?
It seems that not many people know me?
Lin Ye felt relieved.
Ordered a table of dishes.
Huo Huo Bolognese, Manor Toasted Waffles, Dui Gao Gao, Du Du Lian Seafood Soup... two servings of mint jelly, and a few skewers of wild mushroom and chicken.
After enjoying dinner, Lin Ye ate very cleanly without wasting any food. He looked at Shen He. Well, Shen He's appetite did not need help dealing with leftovers.
After dinner, Lin Ye suggested taking a walk.
This walk was not like the one in Liyue Harbor.
Lin Ye's thoughts were simple, he just wanted to take a walk. What Shen He needed to integrate into was Liyue Harbor, not Mondstadt, and Lin Ye was not very familiar with Mondstadt.
Lin Ye and Shen He came to the Highland Square where the bards often performed.
This time, it seemed that a very powerful bard came, and a group of people gathered together.
Lin Ye became interested, and he and Shen He walked forward to the front row, and were surprised to see that it was someone he knew.
Wendy plays ordinary strings and sings ancient legends. These are stories for the audience and past events for Wendy.
After finishing a few poems, Wendy took out a hat like a magician.
Most people put some Mora in their hats.
"That's all for tonight. I'm going to go taste the delicious dandelion wine. See you tomorrow, everyone. Welcome to listen to the song of the wind." Wendy held her hat in one hand and bowed gracefully.
After clapping and cheering, the crowd gradually dispersed.
Wendy stood there counting Mora with a happy smile on her face.
Lin Ye looked at Wendy and said nothing.
After waiting for a while, Wendy looked up and pretended to be surprised.
"Oh my, you two, why haven't you left yet? Are you obsessed with my poetry? Hey."
"In the [Memory Leyline World], it was you who helped me, Wendy."
"Oh? You are Lin Ye."
"Yes. This is Shen He, my friend."
"I heard the old man mention you two... This is not the place to talk. How about we go somewhere else and chat slowly?"
"How about the angel's gift?" Lin Ye said with a smile.
"That really hits the spot." Wendy also laughed.
So, the three of them came to Angel's Gift. The bartender was Charles and Uncle Lu was not there.
"What do you three want?" Charles asked.
"Dandelion wine!" Wendy said first.
"I'll have a dandelion bar too. I've been in Mondstadt for a long time but haven't tried it yet." Lin Ye said.
"The alcohol content of dandelion wine is not high, Shenhe, do you want to try it?" Lin Ye asked Shenhe.
"…As for wine, I have tasted it when I was a child. During a gathering of immortals, Master Lishui Dieshan came to see Master and brought a jar of wine. During the banquet, Master Lishui Dieshan let me taste it."
"Master Liuyun Jiefeng didn't stop it?" Lin Ye asked in surprise.
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