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Kobayashi Hui was curious, "Since it is a question of outline, why doesn't the gardener write an outline?"

"Restriction, the outline will limit my creation." Xiazhiqiu Shiyu has already seen his own problem, "If I am forced to write an outline, I feel that the story has been completed, and everything is in my head It happened, so I’m not interested in writing it.”

Megumi Kobayashi recalled Kasumigaoka's creative state. When writing the script of "White Album", Kasumigaoka Shiwa really raised his head and bowed his mind.

Benizaka Zhuyin spread out his palms, "So you ran after me, and in the end you just spun around in my palm. I am the outline of life and the cage of your creation. The closer you are to me, the more restrictions you have."

The architect-style author is like a train, running on the rails, with a stable speed and state.

The gardener-style author is drag racing, fast is really fast, and rollover is also really ruthless, with a high upper limit and a lower lower limit.

Benizaka Zhuyin believes that Kasumigaoka Shiyu has the potential to surpass her, after all, drag racing can take off when it encounters a suitable road.

As a result, Kasumigaoka Shiwa ran onto the railroad track in order to catch up with Benizaka Zhuyin.

"Besides, you are still 'emotional flow' rather than 'logic flow'." Benizaka Zhuyin sighed, "It's even worse."

Kobayashi Hui didn't understand and looked directly at Kobayashi Kongqing.

"Emotional flow means that the details and descriptions serve the emotions of the characters, focusing on the disclosure, transformation and expression of emotions. The logical flow focuses on the development of the story and the rationality of actions." Kobayashi Kongqing added, "The former emotions drive actions, are easy to empathize, and are effective. It is good for character creation, but the narrative rhythm and logic are prone to problems; the latter plot promotes action, the plot unfolds smoothly, and the rhythm is clear, but the characters will be somewhat flat and become tools to promote the development of the plot.”

Megumi Kobayashi recalled the delicate emotions and complex characters in Kasumigaoka Shiwa's works, and realized that Kasumigaoka Shiwa was indeed an author of emotional flow.

But what's wrong with that?

"The emotional flow of a short story is just right, but if it's a long story..." Benizaka Zhuyin's eyes were cold, "The weakness of the logic of the story will become more obvious after the length of the story, and the emotional problem will be even greater. The enemy in the story There can be many, but there are only so many emotional dilemmas. The enemy can fight repeatedly, but repeated emotional problems are disgusting."

Chapter 595 Invulnerable

The protagonist overcomes his cowardly self and summons up courage to defeat the enemy.

Sounds like a good story.

But after stretching the length, it becomes the protagonist cowardly, courageous, cowardly, courageous, cowardly, courageous, cowardly, courageous...

Have you mustered up the courage?

If you want to avoid this kind of repetition, you need to change your mood.

The protagonist is cowardly, takes courage, the protagonist is sad, recovers to be happy, the protagonist is angry, calms down, the protagonist is greedy, becomes generous...

This new problem appeared again.

A cowardly, crying nose from time to time, bad tempered and greedy protagonist, how to describe the opening?

Not just the beginning of the problem.

After the length is lengthened, with the unfolding of the world view and events, logic flow authors are becoming more and more popular.

In contrast, authors who are not good at worldview and emotional flow of events will become more and more powerless.

Emotional changes are gradually drying up, and plot problems are gradually becoming prominent.

It's fine for Kasumigaoka Shiyu to write a game plot, or a unit story with one protagonist in each volume.

But once she worked hard in the direction of Benizaka Akane and imitated her to write long light novels, things began to be irreversible.

The gardener-like state itself is unstable and needs to be revised repeatedly, and the emotional flow is simply a disaster.

The more you write, the smaller the advantage, the bigger the problem, the more you have to change, the more you change, the more you write, the smaller the advantage, the bigger the problem...

Endless loop.

"If Shiyu is emotional flow..." Ying Lili guessed habitually, "Then you are logical flow?"

"It's not." Benizaka Zhuyin smiled, "When I promote the plot, it is a logical flow, and when I shape the characters, it is an emotional flow, switching on demand and seamlessly connecting."

Yinglili, who is so arrogant, can't bear the proud look of Benizaka Zhuyin at all.

But if you don't like it, you can't refute it.

Benizaka Akane really did it.

Eirari finally understood why Akane Benizaka was so annoying in the industry.

This guy belongs to the type that the higher the level, the more he knows how powerful she is.

When I first saw her, I felt that I could do it even if I worked hard.

After working hard to improve herself, she found that Benizaka Akane was still better than herself.

It seems to be almost there, but if you work harder, you should be able to catch up.

The result is that the process is repeated over and over again.

Until I couldn't improve, I still felt close to her.

But the difference is that I know much worse.

Eriri looked at the manuscript of the manga completed by Akane Benizaka.

To be honest, if Kasumigaoka Shiwa wrote it and Eiriri adapted it, this kind of manga could also be completed by Eiriri.

As an original painter, she can use more delicate brushwork to express more information hidden in the painting.

But is that much information really needed?

For example, at the moment when the door was just opened, Ying Lili was able to use more room details to show everything about her parents' past.

The more carefully the reader looks, the more frightening the truth can be discovered from the clues.

But Akane Benizaka uses almost rough lines to present a very impactful picture, and you will be shocked just by looking at it.

These two methods have their own advantages and disadvantages, but in this manga, Benizaka Akane's expression method is obviously better.

This is what is scary about Akane Benizaka.

Just right.

She can present the most suitable emotions in the most suitable position in the most suitable way.

In terms of painting skills, Benizaka Zhuyin is not as good as Ying Lili, in terms of emotional rendering, she is not as good as Kasumigaoka Shiwa, in terms of making money, she is not as good as Kobayashi Kongqing, and in terms of communication, she is not as good as Kobayashi Kei.

But on the other hand, except for their own specialties, the four of them were crushed by Benizaka Zhuyin in other aspects.

Balanced abilities and proper application have given birth to a monster that is almost invulnerable except for its physical condition.

Yinglili has no interest in how this monster was born.

What she wants to know is... what Kasumigaoka Shiwa can do to surpass this monster.

"So..." Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu understood her own problem, but became more at a loss, "What should I do?"

"It's simple," Benizaka Zhuyin patted his chest, "Just learn from me."

"Learn from you?" Xiazhiqiu Shiyu was puzzled, "Didn't you say that I am not suitable to learn your method?"

"You know what I should do if you ask me?" Benizaka Zhuyin rolled her eyes, "If you want to walk your own path, of course you have to figure out your own way, follow my way of thinking, what's the difference from imitating me yourself."

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's expression froze.

"By the way," Hongsaka Zhuyin tilted her head, "Is Lan Lan at home? I haven't visited her for a while. Have you been practicing drawing recently?"

"Lan Lan has gone to grandma's house." Xiao Linhui replied, "I will go to grandma's house to live in a few days."

"When it comes to painting, I will draw some occasionally." Kobayashi Kongqing added, "I heard from Ke Ke that when I was doing handicrafts with her, Lan Lan would occasionally draw some interesting things."

"Prepare some marker pens at home, and try not to use soft ones. For children, the requirements for control are too high. Now it is mainly about expressing ideas." Hongsaka Zhuyin asked, fearing that Kobayashi Kongqing and Kobayashi Hui would be delayed Xiao Linlan's growth.

Eiriri looked at Kasumigaoka Shiwa with some concern.

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu was too quiet.

For a moment, Ying Lili seemed to see the shadow of Kobayashi Megumi in Xiazhiqiu Shiwa.

Hongsaka Zhuyin and Xiao Lin couple chatted about Xiao Linlan.

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu was clearly present, but it seemed that he would disappear from this scene at any moment.

Disappeared from Yinglili's eyes.

"I understand." Kasumigaoka Shiyu bowed to Benizaka Zhuyin again, turned and left.

Ying Lili followed subconsciously.

"Let's go, let's go." Benizaka Zhuyin waved his hand, "You are Kasumi Yingri, right?"

Kobayashi Kongqing and Kobayashi Hui left after saying goodbye, and the studio became quiet again.

It was too quiet.

Benizaka Zhuyin subconsciously wanted to find some wine to drink, but suddenly remembered that most of her wine had been confiscated by Kobayashi Kongqing.

The rest were also strictly controlled by Machida Sonoko.

After all, she had a cerebral infarction, and she no longer has the physical condition to drink wantonly.

If you don't drink, don't drink it.

Benizaka Akane picked up the pen and continued the previous creation.

"I heard that Xiaoshi and the others have come?" Machida Sonoko, who was away from work, returned, and waited until Benizaka Zhuyin's creation was suspended and began to rest before opening her mouth.

Hongsaka Zhuyin took a big sip of water, and if she didn't know her bold look, she would think she was drinking wine, "Yes."

"For what you told me before, about the predicament?"

"That's right..." Benizaka Akane leaned on her chin, "I thought she would come earlier."

"What's the result?" Sonoko Machida asked with concern, "What's the result?"

Chapter 596

"She's already like this," Benizaka Akane muttered, "What else can there be?"

"You are here again." Machida Sonoko pulled the chair and sat down, complaining angrily, "At the beginning you thought that Xiaoshi had grown up and there was no room for further development, so you still ran all the way to disturb others Gathering, sorting out opinions overnight to guide her?"

Benizaka Akane's contempt for Kasumigaoka Shiwa is something Machida Sonoko has never been able to accept.

But the follow-up actions of Akane Akatsuki made Machida Sonoko feel that although Akane Akatsuka said that, Akane Akatsuka did not really despise Shiwa Kasumigaoka, but was guiding her very carefully.

As a result, Akane Benizaka started to say such things again.

"I now also think that I was right." Benizaka Akane pointed out, "Back then she had indeed grown up."

"Why do you say that?"

"Because she was the same as me back then."

"Huh?" Machida Sonoko couldn't believe it, "You mean, she in high school is the same as you in college?"

"Otherwise? I was still a simple fan in high school." Benizaka Akane recalled the state of Kasumigaoka Shiwa back then, "At that time, she had formed her own unique style, and her writing was highly recognizable, which is rare. "

Sonoko Machida, who was an editor, has a deep understanding of this.

As an editor, she can guide authors on how to write popular topics, how to avoid red lines, and how to arrange plots.

But only style, there is really no way.

The works of Dahuo have many similar advantages, and the authors of Dahuo must have their own unique style.

There is no problem with Kasumigaoka Shiwa's basic ability, and she has her own style, which is the same as that of Benizaka Akane back then.

Therefore, in Benizaka Zhuyin's view, Kasumigaoka Shiyu has grown to the limit, and the rest is to persist in creating, waiting for a flash of inspiration to perform beyond the level and write shocking works.

Or live out the rest of your life on a level and stable basis.

Sonoko Machida raised her eyebrows, "You mean, you grew up and completed it in college?"

"Of course not." Benizaka Zhuyin said, "The growth of light novels has come to an end, I can still draw manga, the growth of manga has come to an end, I can still make games, the growth of games has come to an end, I can still participate in animation Production, after a few samples, I have a new understanding of light novels, and then repeat this process. The rich experience in the process provides more materials for my creation-this is my growth path after leaving university. You want her to start right out of high school?"

"Of course I don't want to!" Machida Sonoko flatly refused, and then she reacted, "She doesn't have this opportunity either, after all, she can only write novels."

"So I can only simulate the cruelty of the workplace and artificially increase her experience," Benizaka Akane pointed to herself, "I will play the role with all my heart."

"Ah, yes, yes, you did the right thing." Sonoko Machida responded perfunctorily, her mind was full of Kasumigaoka Shiwa's matter, "What about now?"

"Now, the problem is even bigger." Benizaka Zhuyin sighed, "Because..."

-

"Because of us?" Kobayashi asked curiously, "How?"

Kobayashi Kongqing opened a bottle of bozi soda and handed it to his wife, "In the final analysis, writing is a simple simulation of life, and this kind of simulation requires reference materials. Only with enough experience can you create excellent works. Even if you don't have enough experience , at least have enough insight. The best example of this is..."

"Sister Zhu Yin." Xiao Linhui answered, "The experience at the beginning made her start to accumulate money and contacts in a vengeful manner, and she insisted on creating while collecting talented people. During this process, she must have encountered many difficulties and experienced a lot. , so there is enough material to support her to complete the creation."

"But my sister has been working with Ying Lili since she graduated from high school. Until now, you have solved her communication problems in life, and I have solved her business communication problems." Kobayashi Kongqing concluded, "As a result, her experience has been serious. insufficient."