How to raise a passer-by wife

It would be too strange if this were not the case.

Otherwise it would be too long anyway.

Thinking of this, I slowly turned the doorknob and pushed the door open.

The turbulent stench hit his face, like a vicious curse hitting his nasal cavity, forcing pure dirty malice into his brain.

Under the sunlight outside the window, the two corpses were quite close.

Mom strangled Dad's neck with an electric wire, and Dad's hands strangled Mom's neck tightly.

The rotting corpses seemed to be dancing together.

"Ha..." I laughed out loud, "Hahahahahaha..."

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"No more?" Kobayashi flipped through the manuscript, and the rest was blank, "What's next?"

"I haven't drawn it yet." Hongsaka Zhuyin replied, "I've drawn it here for the time being, but the story is finished. Do you want to read it?"

"Forget it." Xiao Linhui shook his head, "I'd better wait for the manga."

Megumi Kobayashi, who has watched Akane Benizaka's new work, has a deeper understanding of Kasumigaoka Shiwa's exchange with HASHIMA yesterday.

The protagonist walked towards the room step by step, and the accumulated emotions burst out when he saw the terrifying and beautiful picture, forming a kind of creepy trembling, and the spiritual shock stimulated the body changes at the same time, creating a hearty feeling. dripping.

"I said..." Kobayashi Kongqing sighed, "You really drew this story."

When Kobayashi Kongqing accompanied Benizaka Akane to Hokkaido to collect materials, because Kobayashi always said that he would lock Benizaka Akane in the basement, Benizaka Akane had the idea of ​​writing a story about an adult woman being imprisoned by a junior high school student.

Because it felt a little bad, I changed it to an adult male cartoonist imprisoned by JK.

Kobayashi Kongqing was curious, "Didn't you want to write JK at the beginning? How did you become JS?"

"I finished it a long time ago, but I didn't publish it because I was not satisfied." Benizaka Akane replied, "Later, I got inspiration from you and revised it to finish it."

It is not a matter of revision at all. The previous light-hearted story that was somewhat sweet and funny has now completely turned into a heavy story that discusses the harm of the original family and the way children are educated.

"So far, I'm satisfied, let's not talk about this." Benizaka Zhuyin looked at Kasumigaoka Shiyu, "So what is your purpose for coming?"

Chapter 593 Funny Characters

"Let's see if the unrestrained guy in Yuanzi's mouth has gotten worse." Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu folded his hands on his chest, his eyes drooping slightly, "It seems that it will be soon."

"That's such a pity..." Benizaka Akane leaned on her chin and stared at Kasumigaoka Shiyu with interest, "Some people must be very unwilling to fall down before being defeated. Woolen cloth."

"I'm not unwilling!" Ying Lili stuck out her tongue, "If I didn't care about your health, I could easily defeat you now!"

"Oh?" Benizaka Zhuyin looked away, "Is Mr. Kashiwagi so considerate?"

"Who... who cares about you!"

"Who said you are considerate of me." Hongsaka Zhuyin laughed, "I mean, I was targeting Teacher Xia just now, but you spoke up for justice. Are you so afraid that she will be hit?"

Ying Lili blushed, "You! I...she..."

Complete failure... Kobayashi Kongqing sighed.

Eirisaki and Kasumigaoka Shiwa can still go back and forth, but they have no ability to resist against Benizaka Zhuyin.

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu suddenly said, "You are right."

"What's right!" Ying Lili frowned, "What's wrong!"

"Although I don't want to admit it, but..." Xiazhiqiu Shiyu paused, "You were right when you reprimanded me."

"The reprimand at the beginning..." Benizaka Zhuyin looked at Ying Lili, "What do you think?"

"I......"

Good guy, with pursuit.

"Thank you for your teaching back then." Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu lowered her arms and bowed seriously, "Thank you very much."

"Wait a minute." Benizaka Zhuyin took out her phone, "One more time."

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu: "...wishful thinking."

"Tch..." Benizaka Akane retracted the phone in disappointment, "What happened?"

"I......"

As soon as Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu spoke, she was interrupted by Benizaka Zhuyin.

Benizaka Zhuyin waved her hand to signal Kasumigaoka Shiyu to shut up, and pointed at Kobayashi Kongqing, "Say it."

As a creator, Benizaka Akane is too aware of the creator's faults.

Things that can be clearly explained in two or three sentences, but they have to be mixed with a lot of personal emotions, and the filling is stinky and long.

If it is for the purpose of setting off the atmosphere, mobilizing emotions, and depicting emotional changes to lead to subsequent content, this situation is understandable.

But Akane Benizaka doesn't want to listen to emotions now, she just wants to know what happened.

So the rational thinking Kobayashi Kongqing is a better narrator than the party Kasumigaoka Shiwa.

Kobayashi Kongqing briefly described what happened.

To put it simply, Kasumigaoka Shiwa realized the gap with Benizaka Akane in the process of guiding HASHIMA to go to sea.

Just like Boshima Chuhai no longer aimed at Eriri, but wanted to work hard to improve himself, Kasumigaoka Shiwa also let go of her initial obsession and faced up to her current predicament.

And decided to ask Benizaka Akane for advice.

There is no shame in asking for advice from someone you want to excel.

Kobayashi Kongqing also wanted to surpass his father, which did not prevent him from asking his father for advice.

Obviously it is to reach a higher peak, but it is really shameful to keep looking at the fellows in front of you, holding on to boring obsessions.

In order to better communicate with Akane Benizaka, Kasumigaoka Shiu asks Megumi Kobayashi to go with her.

Past experience made Kasumigaoka Shiyu firmly believe that as long as Kobayashi Megumi is present, the situation will not be too bad.

Xiao Lin Hui came together, and Xiao Lin Kongqing would naturally come too.

In the process of communication, being friendly is not enough, careful logic and calm thinking are also needed to advance the speed.

Then Ying Lili will also come.

she......

Come and come.

Then just after they came to Benizaka Akane's studio, Benizaka Akane gave them a taste of "Girls Are Not Perfect" that they were painting recently.

And then it's now.

After Benizaka Zhuyin listened carefully, she quickly analyzed Kasumigaoka Shiyu's mental journey.

Then came the conclusion.

Benizaka Zhuyin carefully looked at Kasumigaoka Shiyu's face, "Call me mom."

Ying Lili: "Huh?"

"Seeing that the children I brought up are all so old, and the major events in my life have not yet been settled, let alone children, I don't even have close friends of the opposite sex. The old woman who realizes that she is about to die finally can't control herself and has nowhere to rest. Motherhood..." Kasumigaoka Shiyu's voice was cold, "Have you started to recognize children everywhere?"

Xiao Linhui was taken aback when he heard that.

As expected of Xiazhiqiu Shiyu, she could speak such sharp words fluently in such a short period of time.

Kobayashi Kongqing: "..." Benizaka Zhuyin seemed to have awakened some serious habit.

Fortunately, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu didn't admit it.

Otherwise, Xiao Linlan's godmother would still be her godmother.

No, it seems to be messed up long ago.

Xiao Linlan's godmother is also Xiaolin Kongqing's niece.

"I didn't understand that person's good intentions until I was faced with the same situation." Benizaka Zhuyin explained, "This is the so-called ignoring the kindness of parents if you don't raise children. Now that you know my kindness, you can do it." Call me mom."

"Wow~ It turns out that this still requires qualifications." Kasumigaoka Shiyu's excellent reading has no emotion, it's all skills, "I'm so happy."

Kobayashi Kongqing reminded, "Let's talk about business, let's talk about business."

"When you see the sea, you see yourself?" Benizaka Zhuyin played with the phone, "It's not right."

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu admitted, "There are still some differences."

"That's right. The reaction to going out to sea is much stronger than yours at the beginning. It took her a few minutes to realize what you have been doing for several years." Benizaka Zhuyin chuckled, "You are far behind her."

Kasumigaoka Shiyu bent her fingers and grasped her arm tightly.

Unable to refute.

What Benizaka Akane said was true.

"That's not right!" Ying Lili frowned, "The reason why Chuhai can react so quickly is because Shiyu used two attitudes to guide her before and after, so Chuhai can react so quickly!"

It was originally an impulsive rebuttal, but after she uttered it, Ying Lili's thinking became clearer and clearer.

"Even if there is a gap between Shi Yu and Chu Hai, it is not as big as you said!" Ying Lili's brows gradually stretched, "As a creator, there is indeed a gap between Shi Yu and Chu Hai, but as a guide, Shi Yu has already surpassed you!"

Kasumigaoka Shiwa stared blankly at Eiriri.

This speechless little girl who was often teased by her said something she couldn't think of when she had nothing to say.

"Ah, this feeling..." Kobayashi Megumi and Kobayashi Kongqing gathered together and bit each other's ears, "Is it like the character in the team who is usually only funny, playing a decisive role when the situation is desperate? ?”

"So..." Kobayashi Kongqing nodded, "It's exactly the same."

Chapter 594

"Look," Benizaka Zhuyin spread her hands in the direction of Eriri, but her eyes were on Kasumigaoka Shiyu, "Idiots understand."

"???" Ying Lili: "You're an idiot!"

"It's a good thing to recognize your own shortcomings, but it's not a good thing to not see your own strengths." Benizaka Akane pointed out sharply, "Because of the similarity in personality, you subconsciously worked hard in my direction, wanting to complete your promise to me. Beyond. As a result, the eyes are fixed on me, even you can't see yourself. But I am completely different from you...at least creatively."

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu murmured, "Different?"

"I won't mention manga, let's just talk about light novels." Since Kasumigaoka Shiwa has understood the attitude of Benizaka Zhuyin many years ago, there is no need for Benizaka Zhuyin to communicate with her with that attitude. It is not very effective and efficient Still low, "There are two types of writers—the gardener style and the architect style. What exactly are they..." Benizaka Zhuyin thought for a while, then silently looked at Kobayashi Kongqing.

Kobayashi Kongqing searched for memories, "Architect writers will plan everything. They have a very precise outline, clearly marking what they want to do every step of the way; gardener writers plant seeds and wait for them to grow freely."

Speaking of this, Kobayashi Kongqing understood what the difference Benizaka Akane was talking about.

"You are like a gardener." Benizaka Akane pointed at Kasumigaoka Shiwa, "You will start to create a story because of interesting scenes and characters, without relying on an outline, and gradually explore the story itself during the writing process. Just like a gardener sowing seeds , Waiting for the seeds to germinate and grow. In order to achieve the final desired effect, you will repeatedly revise and make major revisions to the work.”

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu compared his own situation, "Then you are an architect?"

Benizaka Zhuyin sneered, "Before I graduated from university, I was also a gardener."

Benizaka Akane's debut work "The Cardinal of Gotanda" sold only three volumes within half a year, and sold the first 100 million copies in the history of the niche publishing house Liushengsha. In a blink of an eye, it was decided to make an animation .

But because the publisher and the author have neither money nor connections, animation has been used to fill the gaps in the airing schedule from the beginning, so it has become a dung.

And due to the failure of the animation, fans of the original work also abandoned the original work.

The seed dies before it germinates.

Since then, Benizaka Akane no longer acted on wishful thinking, but carefully planned every step of her actions to gradually achieve her goal and avoid the same situation from happening again.

And this change in behavior pattern is also reflected in her creation, which makes her change from a gardener style to an architect style.

Kobayashi Megumi poked Kobayashi Kongqing lightly, "What are the specific characteristics of the architect style?"

"The architect-style writer will plan the main plot of the story in advance, and focus on solving the main points in the outline during the writing process. Everything is under the author's control, so revisions will be relatively less."

"Is it just the difference in the number of revisions?" Kobayashi speculated, "It should be more than that?"

Kobayashi Kongqing explained, "It's not different, but very different. Gardener-style authors have far more waste manuscripts than architect-style authors. They will revise their works repeatedly, and even reinvent everything. In the process, There will be new ideas, and then the newly written content will be overthrown and repeated until satisfied. In contrast, as long as the outline is confirmed in the architect style, the rest are minor changes, which generally do not affect the whole."

That's why Akane Benizaka can create various works with high intensity for a long time.

This is also one of the reasons why Kobayashi Kongqing and Benizaka Zhuyin got along so well.

It is impossible for Kobayashi Kongqing to control everything.

And Akane Benizaka can create works one after another that are completely under her control, and in those works, she can control everything.

"Are you an architect?" Ying Lili looked at Hongsaka Zhuyin strangely, "No, didn't you make a big change to the story of "Girls Are Not Very Good?"

"It's not so much a big change, it's more like a rewrite." Benizaka Akane corrected, "It's two different stories completed according to two different outlines."