When the day comes when she truly wins the Classic Triple Crown, she also wants to lie on the ground like she did today, enjoying the cheers of all the spectators in the stadium.

It will be soon... In just three months, we will be able to set foot on that battlefield!

"Howdy~!"

Just as Stardust Illusion was enjoying this moment of tranquility, the sky above was suddenly mostly blocked by two round shadows.

She looked intently, and just happened to see the Big Tree Express that had just been competing with her.

At this moment, she was standing above my head, looking down at me with a smile and saying hello through the two pieces of fat that were in the way.

"Stardust Illusion, I lost this match to you." The older sister said it very casually and simply admitted her defeat.

"It's amazing that he could actually perform such a powerful kick. It really makes people stunned."

The Tree Express gave a relieved smile to the runner who defeated him and gave a thumbs up with his right hand.

"It was just a lucky break." Stardust Illusion replied a little embarrassedly.

Compared to her crazy attitude on the court where she is almost willing to gamble her life with her opponent, she is not so arrogant in normal times. Sometimes she even feels annoyed when she thinks back to when she was too arrogant during the game.

At this moment, she felt a little sorry for what she had said just now, so she took the initiative to speak:

"Let's play together again in the future. By then, I will challenge you in your full state."

"This match speaks for itself, Stardust Illusion. Even if we have to fight again in the future, I will be the challenger."

Big Tree Express smiled and shook his head, then looked around:

"Besides, I'm about to retire. If we still want to fight, let's save it for the Dream Cup. Then I will challenge you again in my prime."

"I'll leave the communication and competition with the French team to you. It seems we are far from mature enough... See you next time!"

After saying that, Dashu Express waved his hand, turned around and walked back to his team's rest area.

The medical staff nearby quickly came over and massaged Stardust Illusion and Miura Bourbon to relax their muscles, and cleaned the wound on the tip of her tongue.

At the same time, Toyama Hiruzen peeled bananas for the two horse girls and handed them over with functional drinks to help them recover their body functions.

Stardust Illusion, who was chewing the banana flesh, suddenly remembered what the Tree Express had just said, and quickly swallowed it and asked:

"Toyama, is our team really going to exchange and learn with the French? What if we get embarrassed?"

"It's embarrassing so be it." Toyama Feihong shrugged his shoulders with a relaxed attitude, looking indifferent.

"Anyway, there are only two rookie horse girls on our team. It's normal that we can't compare to the French powerhouse, right? Anyway, I'm not afraid of losing face."

"The most important thing for you now is to communicate and compete with various opponents and strengthen your learning experience - especially you, Stardust Illusion."

"You are a natural fighter. I will do everything I can to increase your competition volume. Be prepared!"

"Hahaha, Team Draco has successfully won the right to communicate. We have become the Neon team and can immediately communicate with the French team~!"

Thinking of this, Toyama Feihong couldn't help but laugh like a devil.

"...!?"

Qi Qiu, who was standing nearby, was originally checking whether all the contestants had any hidden injuries. When he heard their conversation, he was immediately petrified and froze in place, unable to move.

Stardust Illusion won, which meant that this guy would lead the team to exchange with the French exchange student team...

Thinking of this, Qi Cao's eyes went dark.

It's over, completely over, everything is over!

The glory of the Japanese horse racing girl world, the glory of Central Tresin Academy... will all be destroyed by this guy Toyama Scarlet!!!

Let me talk about the most important thing first. It will be on the shelves tomorrow, and it is expected to be a w-word update. I ask everyone to support and subscribe. This is really important to me. Thank you!

Then tell me your thoughts.

First of all, the reason why this book was born is a sentence: playing Uma Musume (not

Actually, I watched Uma Musume.

01 Most readers should have read that book. It is indeed good. After reading it, I felt like Senior Mai was crawling on me. I want to read some similar works.

After searching for a long time, I really can't find any horse racing articles with this kind of feeling. What should I do?

What else can I do? I can use traditional arts. If I can’t find them, I can just write them myself…

So this book actually has a lot of imitation meanings to the 01 book. I don’t know if you can see it, for example, it also debuted with Dibao and was written about the competition. But it ultimately remains in the category of imitation and not to the point of reference.

Regarding this horse racing girl's novel, I would rather call it a passionate sports novel. In the final analysis, it is actually about superpower running. This is because I have particularly loved reading this kind of sports and passionate comics and animations since junior high school.

So actually this desire is also reflected in the book, writing about horse girls, cooperation with teammates, coaches and trainers formulating tactics, teaching the protagonist, etc. These are actually writing styles that only appear in sports. After all, racing itself is an individual sport, which is different from team sports.

This competition may seem a bit slow, mainly for two reasons. The first is that as mentioned before, I was imitating the 2 book. Those who have read it know how detailed the competition is. I probably still failed to grasp the essence of the book. I will definitely improve it next time.

The second reason is a bit embarrassing to talk about. In fact, someone told me that the book should be put on the shelves at the climax, and the chapter should not be put after the climax, so the plot may have been delayed intentionally or unintentionally.

But I really didn't mean to water down the story. When I noticed that the plot was dragging, I immediately revised and deleted some parts. Originally, the competition might have lasted several more chapters.

Amazon also wants to show the characteristics of the back-chasing method. In the end, there are three people competing. I wrote a few chapters and thought about it until Wednesday, so I deleted a lot of content and updated 6000 in one go to ensure that I can finish watching this competition before putting it on the shelves.

Even if I admit my mistake, I shouldn't let this kind of reason affect my writing pace.

I finally finished writing this game before putting it on the shelves, although everyone says that only by putting it on the shelves at the climax can the average first-time subscription be higher... But forget it, I won't do that. It's true that the updates are not many and it has been stopping for a long time, which is torturing the readers.

Anyway, the next step is the first winner's stage. I'm not very good at writing songs and dances, so I wrote it based on the feeling of another anime I watched. It felt a bit crazy (

Not sure about the effectiveness?

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Let’s talk about a few characters that are not in the original work.

First of all, the protagonist. The original idea of ​​creating this horse girl was: I wanted to write a race with Kamen Rider Toma, but then I felt that the evolution chain of the Courage Dragon didn't quite fit the theme of running, so I started to think outside the box - dragon, speed - acceleration, dragon - damn acceleration sync! Come out! Meteor Dragon! ()

Then there are the attributes, which are actually quite easy to identify. The foot quality comes from the heavy artillery, the distance adaptation and field adaptation come from the little chestnut hat, and the growth comes from the two pumps.

As mentioned before, the character of Toyama Scarlet is taken from the Toyama trainer in the history of Miura Bourbon. Many people may know that Kitakuro trained on the slope three times a day when he was 2 years old, which was a devilish level.

But most people may not know that in the 90s, the intensity of the training given by Toyama trainer to Miura Bourbon was 4 slope trainings a day.

During the training, even other people felt that trainer Toyama was simply torturing the racehorses. Then he was convinced and thought, why not reduce it to three times a day?

After Bourbon finished running three times, she took the initiative to go over and start the fourth practice. This is also the biggest reason why she is called a cyber horse.

Then what is the specific effect of the training?

Bourbon, a recognized short-distance horse, was trained to adapt to middle and long distances, and even almost won the Triple Crown. You can imagine how outrageous this person's training is.

It’s an old habit of mine to keep mumbling, please forgive me, that’s about it.

I don’t know how this book will perform, I can only say that I hope to get a lot of support. Anyway, I will just work hard on writing it!

Oh, there is one more thing, purely a personal request, that...can you...if you have time...please...like the tag? If you think this book is well written...the tag now has 6 likes and 11 dislikes QAQ, it looks so depressing, please have pity on me

Oh, by the way, I decided not to open the bounty program, for fear that I would be embarrassed if I couldn't add a chapter after opening it (

Finally, I would like to recommend a few books that I am currently reading.

1. "You want to name me today, Miss Ma-Musume?"

A story about a horse racing girl who specializes in emotions. It is weird and twisted. It is worth reading.

The protagonist is the rental girlfriend of the mysterious horse racing girl, a female copper cake hand, who can win the heart of the horse girl as easily as taking something from a bag

I have confirmed through the look in my eyes that I cannot learn how to write emotions (

2. Uma Musume, bring a little undefeated triple crown shock to the world

Personally, I think this book should be called Bringing a Little Invincible Triple Crown Shock to the World.

Do you think the invincible triple crown shock is a definite article + noun? In fact, it is "invincible", "big shock", "triple crown horse", three nouns (

In general, is it a race to play the role of a horse girl? Why is the emperor abused again? The hedgehog cat is the designated opponent, right? I can't bear to read too many articles like this (

3. "Stay away from Tresen, and I will finally live a peaceful life!"

There is really no weirder horse racing girl stories, only weirder ones. People and ghosts can come and run a few steps, what about Sky Comet Dragon, Pegasus, Gundam, and now Kira Yoshikage has come. At present, it seems that it should also be a competition-type horse racing girl story

The one who was abused was the emperor (sad

I will recommend two more personal XP articles to support niche topics.

1. Pretty Cure

Guang Meiwen, the current theme is Melody Pretty Cure, and it seems to be following the original process and the plot content, so I look forward to the follow-up.

Actually, I also thought about writing a Melody Light Beauty x Girls Opera, but I gave up because it was not good enough.

2. What? I am Kamen Rider in the World of Pretty Cure

A fan fiction of Kamen Rider EA + Healing Pretty Cure.

Both are my favorite works, especially the healing one He Jia. If you like it, you can take a look. The content is very good so far, but the name of the protagonist is a bit... you know, it feels like a dream returned to more than ten years ago.

Chapter 50: Quack! I don't want the horse girl to lose her teeth!

[The stage setting of the winner's stage comes from the Umamusume book in 01. After all, stage settings are just for the convenience of plot development. Please don't take it too seriously. It will only appear on the winner's stage.]

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When I came to my senses, I was already standing in the center of the stage.

Faintly, a beam of pure white light shone diagonally from above her head, illuminating the stardust illusion and allowing her to see the snow-white T under her feet.

This is... the center of the stage?

Stardust Illusion recognized this logo. It was the T-shaped logo that allowed people to identify the center of the stage, but... why was he standing here?

Looking down at herself, Stardust Illusion suddenly discovered that she was wearing a red, white and black performance costume that she had never seen before.

Her right shoulder was decorated with a dragon-head-shaped shoulder guard, and she used its teeth to fix a light green shawl behind her back.

In the end what happened?

Stardust Illusion seemed to have not yet come to her senses, and she felt a chill in her lower body - that was because this was the first time she wore a short skirt.

She quickly looked around, only to find that there was no one else on the stage except herself.

A second ray of pure white light shone over, intersecting with the first ray, completely enveloping the stardust illusion in this brilliance.

Ah, I remembered it.

Now it's... winner's stage time.

As his memory came back to life, Stardust Illusion's mind flashed back to his previous memories:

"Winner's Stage! Isn't this just a training match? It's not even a formal match!?"

She looked at the Toyama Crimson Trainer in front of her with surprise, unable to believe that the other party had just said such a horrifying fact.

If I win this competition, I will be able to perform on the winners' stage, and it will be a solo performance?!

Why hasn’t anyone told me this!!!

"A training match is a training match, that's right." Toyama Feihong smiled like a weasel that stole a chicken, slyly and complacently:

"But - the winner's stage is also a part of the training. Is there any problem? As far as I know, Stardust Illusion, you have never been on the winner's stage since your debut, right? Then today is your first time."

"Ah, my legs hurt because I ran too hard just now. It might be a strain. Trainer, let's go to the hospital together. We can talk about the winner's stage next time!"

Stardust Illusion quickly squatted down on the spot, covering his leg and screaming in pain.

Unfortunately, Toyama Feihong didn't seem to care at all. She just stood there with her hands on her hips, as if admiring her performance.

"What are you doing? You're not my trainer, so why don't you care about the health of the horse girl?"

"Are you making me laugh, physical monster Stardust Illusion?" Toyama Feihong rolled his eyes and ignored her pretentious accusation.

As the trainer of the horse girl in front of her, she now knows better than anyone how outrageous Stardust Illusion's monstrous physique is. Not to mention injuries, even muscle fatigue has never lasted for more than 4 hours on her.

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